Comments on community poems by jerrypat
- Eyes (Dolphine29)
I see this poem as a progression of life. The eyes which are supposed to...
January 10th, 2011 22:53
- Starlight (Dbremner)
The stars are missing
Tomorrow's another day
For light of our...
January 10th, 2011 22:48
- Balance (StormyDay)
Constant battle lines drawn each and every day. Shall we fire from this...
January 10th, 2011 22:46
- Broken-hearted Musings..... (Cheeky Missy)
There is more than just a few lines of angst within this poem, Cheeky....
January 10th, 2011 22:42
- Graduation Day (CMS)
This is a tender piece of work. I know some of my teachers, by the time I...
January 7th, 2011 21:39
- Snowflakes' Touch (Cheeky Missy)
Bill is smiling.
It has been years since I have been involved with snow...
January 7th, 2011 06:31
- Shades Of Red (Dbremner)
A lot of expressive stanza's here.
Love equated with the environment is...
January 7th, 2011 06:27
- I'll Look My Age, I Think (Cheeky Missy)
Doesn't mean I can't comment on YOUR poetry.
I liked your realism in...
January 6th, 2011 23:13
- Sometimes (Lezyl legaspi)
I'm a first timer also. Nice to meet you. I liked your poem. It chased the...
January 6th, 2011 22:09
- Out Of My Mind (Zwinkele)
new here. First read and comment. I always feel funny about "rating"...
January 6th, 2011 22:05