Comments on community poems by jerrypat



  • Eyes (Dolphine29) I see this poem as a progression of life. The eyes which are supposed to...
    January 10th, 2011 22:53
  • Starlight (Dbremner) The stars are missing Tomorrow's another day For light of our...
    January 10th, 2011 22:48
  • Balance (StormyDay) Constant battle lines drawn each and every day. Shall we fire from this...
    January 10th, 2011 22:46
  • Broken-hearted Musings..... (Cheeky Missy) There is more than just a few lines of angst within this poem, Cheeky....
    January 10th, 2011 22:42
  • Graduation Day (CMS) This is a tender piece of work. I know some of my teachers, by the time I...
    January 7th, 2011 21:39
  • Snowflakes' Touch (Cheeky Missy) Bill is smiling. It has been years since I have been involved with snow...
    January 7th, 2011 06:31
  • Shades Of Red (Dbremner) A lot of expressive stanza's here. Love equated with the environment is...
    January 7th, 2011 06:27
  • I'll Look My Age, I Think (Cheeky Missy) Doesn't mean I can't comment on YOUR poetry. I liked your realism in...
    January 6th, 2011 23:13
  • Sometimes (Lezyl legaspi) I'm a first timer also. Nice to meet you. I liked your poem. It chased the...
    January 6th, 2011 22:09
  • Out Of My Mind (Zwinkele) new here. First read and comment. I always feel funny about "rating"...
    January 6th, 2011 22:05