Comments on community poems by Augustus
- Daddy (Christina8)
P.S. I grew up saying \"Daddy\".
November 1st, 2016 08:48 - Daddy (Christina8)
That hurts. I have two sons and always wished for a daughter. I can\'t...
November 1st, 2016 08:47 - I\'m Not Unfriendly (WriteBeLight)
There is a lot of truth in what you convey. I find myself beating myself...
November 1st, 2016 08:43 - The Battle of Mind and Love (Scorchedwings)
This is such a lovely piece of work. Too bad in our world today many if...
November 1st, 2016 08:37 - Moth to Flame (Scorchedwings)
There are a number of things I like about this poem. First, I was amazed...
October 31st, 2016 18:54 - Love verses the Mind (Magno1988)
Well done. I agree with what others have said already.
October 31st, 2016 18:43 - The truth hurts (SilentLaugh)
Recently I came to grips with something truly despicable I had done in the...
October 31st, 2016 18:41 - Waiting (Christina K)
I want it all and I want it now, but you are absolutely right. Good read.
October 31st, 2016 18:37 - observation (Avigail)
I am sure when that entity clicks on your mind he / she does not yawn....
October 31st, 2016 18:35 - Captured (Stephanie Showers)
I like this. We are drawn by forces that at times defy description. I was...
October 31st, 2016 18:24 - The Wind (Kurt Philip Behm)
A vacuum. Neat!
October 31st, 2016 18:16 - Thoughts on love (Christina8)
I agree with hodgetiger, clever! And thoughtful, thoughts that go through...
October 31st, 2016 18:14 - Inspired by Franz Marc (Severus Alexander)
Love the Haiku. The first is my favorite. I did not know of Franz Mark. I...
October 31st, 2016 18:05 - The darkness cry\'s for help (MThackerson)
The \"darker\" side of a relationship. Nicely done.
October 31st, 2016 17:36 - HALLOWEEN ~ NEEWOLLAH (BRIAN & ANGELA)
When I was a kid Halloween was an excuse to light firecrackers. Hugs.
October 31st, 2016 15:52 - Mean Streak (WriteBeLight)
I did not see any thing wrong it\'s any of that. Heh, heh. Just teasing.
October 31st, 2016 15:46 - Acceptance (Liam Lawless)
True. Like the Norse mythology reference..
October 31st, 2016 15:42 - AUTUMN\'S CLOAK (Irishred)
Love it.
October 31st, 2016 12:07 - Slow Motion (LIGHT WARRIOR)
I sensed that though there were demons and villains there were wonderful ...
October 31st, 2016 12:06 - I Did Not Know. (Zwitterion)
Welcome. Great first poem.
October 31st, 2016 11:56 - Hurt (Jamesedwards)
Each line a different picture. Nice.
October 30th, 2016 10:25 - Suicide is NOT the Solution (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
I like God\'s sturdy rope.
October 30th, 2016 10:23 - Sense Of Humor (Augustus)
October 29th, 2016 21:52 - My senses (Christina8)
Neat.
October 29th, 2016 21:46 - All Wonder Returned (Kurt Philip Behm)
I wonder about that sort of stuff, how a writer from 300 years ago would...
October 29th, 2016 12:18 - woman (Tony36)
Stuck a boob in your face did she. Sounds like she deserves what she gets,...
October 29th, 2016 12:12 - Blue Jay (WriteBeLight)
Not only a glutton but a thief. A loud mouth. .....you poem very clever as...
October 29th, 2016 12:08 - Ghosts (Writemeasmile)
Writing sometimes helps with the frustration. Hugs.
October 29th, 2016 12:02 - Orient elephants (Habibi)
C\'est bon. Trés bon.
October 28th, 2016 16:26 - The House (Christina K)
I too get attached to things like houses. Maybe it\'s the memories as you...
October 28th, 2016 16:08 - ROCKIN\' CHAIR MY OL\' ROCKIN\' CHAIR ~ ACROSTIC (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Rockin your soul in the bosom of Abraham. As always, a pleasure.
October 28th, 2016 16:01 - Be An Inspiration (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Sometimes hard to stay positive when it\'s all bad news. We try.
October 28th, 2016 15:55 - The Jersey Devil (Moontigerntn)
Glad you can still write about it.
October 28th, 2016 14:27 - Some things aren\'t meant to have a label (Mkschnoe)
This poem fills me with all sorts of metaphorical senarios.
October 28th, 2016 14:22 - One More Tomorrow (Kurt Philip Behm)
I need a prayer about right now. This one is lovely.
October 28th, 2016 14:13 - Hope (Christina8)
Love it! As I was reading I remembered the reggae song by Johnny Nash, I...
October 28th, 2016 14:09 - Your Baby is Dead (Augustus)
October 28th, 2016 10:35 - Wellness on Demand, Demand Wellness (Avigail)
I always hated driving to Los Angeles when I lived in California, the air...
October 28th, 2016 10:31 - I Am Free (Tony36)
As I get closer to the end, \"each footstep\" is cherished more. Nicely...
October 28th, 2016 10:21 - Bad Mood (WriteBeLight)
I know the look. Nicely done.
October 28th, 2016 10:18 - Life On Hold (Jeff)
We all do stupid stuff. I was lucky and never got caught. At some time in...
October 28th, 2016 09:25 - Thoughts from a cereal bowl (Kaychee)
Very nice.
October 28th, 2016 09:17 - Autumn Day (R.l.cannon)
\"Slippery stones of sustenance\" Love it. Welcome, and thanks for...
October 28th, 2016 08:28 - Lost Within (Jeff)
I was thinking of Country. There is a song \"please release me, let me...
October 27th, 2016 16:41 - Lost Within (Jeff)
October 27th, 2016 16:39 - Human am I or Inhumane (Mkschnoe)
We know an awful lot about a lot of people but not the important stuff,...
October 27th, 2016 16:35 - I WANNA BREAK FREE ~ SONNET (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Martian? Or a Martin, purple Martin, the bird. We could fly away with...
October 27th, 2016 16:25 - Fractured (Stephanie Showers)
Ripped apart on the inside. That has to hurt. Will a hug and a glass of...
October 27th, 2016 16:13 - Guys arn\'t girls (SilentLaugh)
There are many well intentioned people out there that want us to believe...
October 27th, 2016 16:07 - To Friendship (Tony36)
I\'d have a beer with you any time. Here\'s to Tony.
October 27th, 2016 15:57 - The Thought (Christina K)
I like the dancing on my lips and cutting in like when another fella wants...
October 27th, 2016 15:54 - A poem for Luci (Severus Alexander)
What a lovely tribute. I could not find him in the above poets list.
October 27th, 2016 15:43 - Stars (Writemeasmile)
Neat allegory.
October 27th, 2016 15:33 - Just Because (Kurt Philip Behm)
Things just happen. I like it.
October 27th, 2016 14:32 - Effective or ineffective communication (Avigail)
Love this.
October 27th, 2016 14:29 - Un-Ring The Bell (WriteBeLight)
For whom does the bell toll today?
Nicely done.
October 27th, 2016 14:27 - Drowning in a famine (Carlosv1101)
Nicely done.
October 27th, 2016 12:24 - The Cave (Based on Plato\'s Allegory of the Cave) (Danielcortorreal)
Some of us cannot face reality. Often what we perceive of reality has all...
October 27th, 2016 11:34 - If only... (Thollin)
This is well crafted and speaks volumes. I have had a number of \"if...
October 27th, 2016 00:36 - not over (K.T Williams)
Sometimes we just can\'t find a way to move forward. Keep writing. Hugs.
October 27th, 2016 00:29 - To Hold (Doll in Wonderland)
This is lovely. :-)
October 26th, 2016 23:59 - The Black Market (Habibi)
Vivid metaphorical imagery. :)
October 26th, 2016 23:56 - Medicine. (IPsYcH0)
There\'s a cleansing freshness after a rain. Nicely done.
October 26th, 2016 23:49 - Money (BSmooth)
Like the stages line, especially.
October 26th, 2016 23:46 - Nihilistic Weirdo Of The Midwest Act. 1 (N.W.O.T.M) (The 2 A.M Writer)
This is so cool.
October 26th, 2016 23:44 - Nonsense (Christina K)
You tell em.
October 26th, 2016 23:41 - Lost (Night_Owl)
I hurts so much to learn the truth about someone we loved. They deserve to...
October 26th, 2016 17:42 - Detention (Christina8)
This is lovely.
October 26th, 2016 17:38 - Lady in White (Moontigerntn)
Oh! I love this. In New Orleans there are tales of a ghost of a woman in...
October 26th, 2016 17:35 - claustrophobic Mind (MThackerson)
Yes. I can relate. Some days are not productive. Then suddenly out of...
October 26th, 2016 17:30 - Bad Feng Shui (LIGHT WARRIOR)
I like the reference to Chinese Metaphysics. Invisible forces that bind...
October 26th, 2016 17:27 - Choices are made (SilentLaugh)
This reminds me of a relationship where one has or feels he has...
October 26th, 2016 16:55 - Wreckage (Stephanie Showers)
If there is any doubt, cast him out. At sea for this kind of disloyalty he...
October 26th, 2016 16:50 - Don\'t Judge Me (Tony36)
I have a son with some congenital bone problems. Thank God he is...
October 26th, 2016 16:44 - Young Wonder #4 (Abpoet18)
I like the spirits crumble line. Nicely done.
October 26th, 2016 16:22 - Together or not together, that is the question (Avigail)
Not no, but hell no. It\'s all about me! Naw, I\'m just messing with you....
October 26th, 2016 16:20 - Free Of Its Stain (Kurt Philip Behm)
One word. Incredible!
October 26th, 2016 16:15 - Stuck in the Mud (WriteBeLight)
I take it you are still dealing with the slacker. I hope this is not a...
October 26th, 2016 15:16 - Can\'t Stop (Felicityjones)
I like the dick line. Hugs.
October 26th, 2016 15:10 - My beautiful boy (Middlearth)
If indeed you have a child with Autism spectrum disorder this is such a...
October 26th, 2016 15:08 - A King\'s Lament (Danielcortorreal)
We used to have to pay a King\'s ransom for them. Enjoyed.
October 26th, 2016 14:47 - Soldiers pain (Wolf2778)
Fortunately I spent my Vietnam time at a training base. I was lucky....
October 26th, 2016 14:42 - To my first best friend. (Pierce_The_Ky)
I can sense the closeness and fondness. Hugs.
October 25th, 2016 18:57 - The Grail Land (Jyquan)
Actually says quite a bit. Thanks for sharing.
October 25th, 2016 18:55 - Transformation (FruitfulSpirit)
This is a well constructed story with vivid pictures that flow...
October 25th, 2016 18:53 - Roanoke (Moontigerntn)
425 years late we still don\'t know. Nicely done.
October 25th, 2016 18:47 - Everything Beautiful is You (Christina K)
Sounds like you are hopelessly in love. Nice.
October 25th, 2016 18:29 - Witch’s Spell (Grange_m)
Love it. Check out the fusion poem started by Kathyhall entitled...
October 25th, 2016 18:16 - Night Terrors (CDiazp01)
Well said.
October 25th, 2016 18:07 - Rescue me (Stephanie Showers)
You have your own Emotional EMT rescue service. Nicely done.
October 25th, 2016 18:05 - Raging river (SilentLaugh)
I like the corroding heart line. Category love? More like sad.
Nicely...
October 25th, 2016 18:00 - Why? (Whispered Shivers)
Can be hell living with an alcoholic / drug addict. Nicely done.
October 25th, 2016 17:56 - Create and connect to your inner home of silence (Avigail)
Yes, relaxing. Thanks.
October 25th, 2016 17:53 - young slave2 (Tony36)
Fortunately there is less of this than 150 years ago. I can\'t imagine...
October 25th, 2016 15:22 - The Illusionist (Mandolian)
A real charmer ( the illusionist )
October 25th, 2016 15:18 - Fear of Flying (WriteBeLight)
Surprising how common that is. Nicely done.
October 25th, 2016 11:00 - Have you been feeling (Yo_hommiecee)
Good advice in poetic style.
October 25th, 2016 10:56 - FOOD OF THE MONTH (BRIAN & ANGELA)
You have my mouth watering for mushy peas.
October 25th, 2016 10:54 - Bullet (Wolf2778)
\"Man I am\" loving this. In my day The Lone Ranger shot only silver...
October 25th, 2016 08:20 - SEARCHING (MisKylie)
Nicely done. Reads well.
October 25th, 2016 07:45
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