Comments on community poems by Augustus
- This Heart Of Mine (Omgoli)
This congers up so many vivid scenarios in my mind but the one I settled...
November 28th, 2016 14:55 - Last Verse (Kurt Philip Behm)
Sad, powerful and sweet.
November 28th, 2016 14:47 - Come into the jungle (Tony36)
You are on to something here Tony. I\'m guessing that you are getting in...
November 28th, 2016 14:45 - Its gonna be a good night, alright (country song) (SilentLaugh)
Love country music and country values.
November 28th, 2016 14:40 - Just you (Nicolerobinson)
I like the \" don\'t hide behind your smile.\" line. Nicely done.
November 28th, 2016 14:34 - I LOVE TEDDY BEARS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I too still have a Teddy Bear from a former hospital stay. Nicely done.
November 28th, 2016 14:30 - LIVING A LIFE THAT MATTERS ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Since my diagnosis my wife and I have a saying ---do what really matters....
November 24th, 2016 10:29 - Gun Musings (The 2 A.M Writer)
Chilling.
November 22nd, 2016 22:26 - Have Wise Words To Give (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Especially life\'s beauty.
November 22nd, 2016 19:54 - The Gods in the sky (SorrowfullyHappy)
Welcome. Nice way to describe how you feel. I see the dove as a sign of...
November 22nd, 2016 19:53 - Fighting in Syria (Kellywatkins10)
Heart felt. Has been going on for thousands of years. Think we would have...
November 22nd, 2016 19:26 - Silent Night (Elegant_Style)
This is very special . Thanks for sharing.
November 22nd, 2016 19:11 - The Old Barber\'s Shop (Michael Champion)
Effective in telling a story. Nicely done.
November 22nd, 2016 19:06 - Age ain\'t nothing but a number (Quietstorm_Dru)
Love and making love makes us feel young again. Nicely done. P.S. I prefer...
November 22nd, 2016 18:55 - First Eternity (Yorke)
This can be interpreted in so many ways. I enjoyed it.
November 22nd, 2016 18:51 - When The Moon Moved over. (Kevin browne)
That is some kind of love when it moves planets. Nicely done.
November 22nd, 2016 18:33 - Burning (LIGHT WARRIOR)
This has an ethereal quality to it.
November 22nd, 2016 18:30 - TAKE ME HOME (Illia)
Beautifully done.
November 22nd, 2016 18:25 - Reawakening (Kurt Philip Behm)
I can relate to that especially when what needs be forgotten is some...
November 22nd, 2016 18:24 - Him. (Omgoli)
Scary. Sending positive enhancing thoughts.
November 22nd, 2016 15:17 - Eternal Summer (Andetl04)
To feel droopy with death all around you is pretty sad. Nicely done. Hugs.
November 22nd, 2016 15:11 - Inspiration lost...... (P.H.Rose)
Can relate to the need for sleep as you are so tired you cannot...
November 22nd, 2016 15:01 - I Am Fine without You (Christina K)
I can feel your strength and resolve.
November 22nd, 2016 14:52 - Our children (Christina8)
How refreshing. Appropriate for Thanksgiving.
November 22nd, 2016 14:49 - Sweet dreams are made of cheese (Aa Harvey)
Alright, I\'m a Brie lover. I can live with that. Good job.
November 22nd, 2016 14:44 - eyes sore (Aals)
I take it you\'ve fallen deeply in love. Interesting way of expressing.
November 22nd, 2016 14:36 - The condemned~ (Kira)
Wow! This is beautifully done. Yearning for salvation that only leads to...
November 22nd, 2016 10:26 - Imagination (Gothic_Girl)
Yes, if we can imagine it, then it is possible. Now on the beauty part, I...
November 22nd, 2016 09:16 - ZIP ~ ZIP ~ HURRAH (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Precious. Glad to here Willi is safe.
November 22nd, 2016 09:13 - Thankful Again (WriteBeLight)
This is the way it should be, that we all give thanks for what we have and...
November 22nd, 2016 09:10 - what to feel what to do (Kitkat231997)
Interesting, this is a person with no sense of self, looking for others to...
November 22nd, 2016 09:06 - Chase (LIGHT WARRIOR)
I like the rhyme in this one
November 21st, 2016 19:29 - Dad....... (P.H.Rose)
Never thought of a baby as a bag of skin and bones. Nicely done.
November 21st, 2016 19:25 - I LOVE TO DANCE (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Fred Astaire was phenomenal. I met my wife out Cajun dancing in anew...
November 21st, 2016 17:03 - just can\'t sleep (Avigail)
Haven\'t had in a long time. Used to be a regular event. Good advice.
November 21st, 2016 16:59 - BITCH (Tony36)
I feel your pain man. That hurt bad. Nicely done.
November 21st, 2016 16:55 - Mama (Abu Aeesh)
Beautiful tribute.
November 21st, 2016 16:53 - Drowning (Azura Nightsong)
Very well done. Your message is clear and well written. Sorry you are...
November 21st, 2016 16:51 - Twinkle, Twinkle (TyKy)
Yup. It turned out to be a very good thing. Enjoyed.
November 21st, 2016 16:46 - The Sea Of Life (Desertchick75)
This is exceptional. Some where in your heritage you must have sea...
November 21st, 2016 16:41 - Man In The Mirror. (Kevin browne)
Lots of interesting thoughts.
November 21st, 2016 12:03 - The Cloak Of Forgiveness (Kurt Philip Behm)
Some stuff we do is unpardonable. I have a tough time just forgiving...
November 21st, 2016 12:00 - Charity starters (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
I just love this, the message, the writing. My favorite line was giving...
November 21st, 2016 11:56 - I love you, i despise you (Nicolerobinson)
Mixed up feelings. Love is complicated.
November 21st, 2016 11:52 - Croaky Karaoke (WriteBeLight)
Working class slobs don\'t drink white wine. Otherwise great! I did piano...
November 21st, 2016 11:49 - Becoming Stronger by Determination (Survivor48)
Enthusiam, perseverance, goal setting-----hard to go wrong with those.
November 20th, 2016 11:57 - The Fire Of Your Love (Kurt Philip Behm)
Have you been bitten by the love bug? Nicely done.
November 20th, 2016 11:51 - Don\'t Do Drugs (Tony36)
Very timely, Right now in the USA I believe it is the leading cause of...
November 20th, 2016 11:50 - A Romance With My Pants (WriteBeLight)
I believe everyone reading the poem could relate. Nicely done.
November 20th, 2016 11:48 - In a Forgotten Field in England (Carl Halling)
Interesting life of what I think is anti- hero as he never was really...
November 20th, 2016 11:40 - War (Desertchick75)
Fortunately I stayed stateside. I have buddies who still have night mares....
November 20th, 2016 10:44 - A B C and D\'s. (Kevin browne)
I\'m amazed at how much you got out of forgetting what you wanted to say.
November 20th, 2016 10:42 - HOW GREAT IS OUR GOD ! A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
We need the wise men to help fix the world.
November 20th, 2016 10:30 - When Eric Lost Shelly (Abpoet18)
Loosing a loved one is tough. Nice.
November 20th, 2016 00:25 - Self-portrait (Night_Owl)
Sound like a terrific person. Now who was it you were describing? Just...
November 20th, 2016 00:21 - mirror of the soul (Willyweed)
So true. Nicely done.
November 20th, 2016 00:18 - Burning Embers (TyKy)
Wow! You did that with an idea of your sister. That\'s hard to do.
November 19th, 2016 18:39 - Beyond The Self (Kurt Philip Behm)
Sometimes you remind me of Socrates with the questions. Love it.
November 19th, 2016 12:06 - The Wind (Christina8)
Serious and fun. Thanks.
November 19th, 2016 12:04 - Controlling Troubled Situations (Survivor48)
This is so beautifully written and thought out. \"A war on misery is...
November 19th, 2016 11:58 - American Soldier (Tony36)
Few realize the sacrifice. Nicely done.
November 19th, 2016 11:54 - Untitled-(Villanelle) (Azura Nightsong)
We all wish for the world to be a better place. This is a terrific poem....
November 19th, 2016 11:33 - Lipocytes For Sale (WriteBeLight)
My conclusion is that should there be famine or other catastrophe that...
November 19th, 2016 11:29 - DESOLATION THREE ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Glad there was a happy ending, I read that over 400 of these caves have...
November 19th, 2016 11:24 - Static (Ex nihilo)
Not sure what to make of this. What comes to mind is some sit and stare...
November 19th, 2016 10:55 - Hopeless wait (Opefolorunsho)
Interesting mix of biblical names with some historical perspective,...
November 19th, 2016 10:21 - Sanskrit Tapestry (LIGHT WARRIOR)
I like the analogy that once your name would have been changed you can lay...
November 19th, 2016 10:12 - huge reality (Avigail)
Those that did not choose the other options, perhaps they are the whiners,...
November 19th, 2016 09:06 - Life\'s Presence (EmmaR1)
Nicely done. I can relate,
November 18th, 2016 22:09 - Bullies (Tony36)
Interesting how they always pick on someone smaller or frailer.
November 18th, 2016 21:12 - Screeching Tires (Notapoet)
Can picture it clearly. Nicely done.
November 18th, 2016 21:09 - One Kiss (Kurt Philip Behm)
The first song I learned in 5th grade was \"I wonder who\'s kissing her...
November 18th, 2016 21:05 - Journey (Christina8)
Lucky guy
November 18th, 2016 21:01 - That country song (SilentLaugh)
Can I do the Texas 2 step to that?
November 18th, 2016 21:00 - You stole my heart (Stephanie Showers)
Aweeee. Purdy, purdy.
November 18th, 2016 20:53 - Breathing (Mylittleheart)
Hard to breath with a sucking chest wound. Sometimes fatal. Nice metaphor.
November 18th, 2016 20:46 - huge reality (Avigail)
With so much going on we have to choose. Some choose more wisely than...
November 18th, 2016 20:45 - The Perfect Chocolate Cake (Larosamarchitada)
Si espera a la perfección podrás esperar un largo tiempo. Buen trabajo.
November 18th, 2016 20:40 - Shop Until You Haunt (WriteBeLight)
What a neat poem about a unique place.
November 18th, 2016 16:39 - Danesfield House (Ex nihilo)
Strange events have taken place over the centuries. Very interesting.
November 18th, 2016 16:36 - DESOLATION TWO ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
No rug rats, ladies boudoir. Where do I sign on? Heh. Heh. Until tomorrow....
November 18th, 2016 16:08 - Repeat (Elphaba993)
the typical cutter often sends mixed signals and burns bridges behind...
November 18th, 2016 16:02 - Finally. Silence (Littlegoat23)
Hurts when the mind races uncontrollably. Well done.
November 17th, 2016 21:29 - Shadow by figure\'s in the darkness of the room (MThackerson)
Scary.
November 17th, 2016 20:05 - Clouds (Ex nihilo)
Feels like the demise of a noble race. Beautifully done.
November 17th, 2016 19:49 - Soul writting... (Phïlant)
I had hoped this was a story but sadly I believe it is true. One, you tell...
November 17th, 2016 19:28 - Now you see me (Nicolerobinson)
I\'d say you are not entirely happy with some folks. I like the knife
November 17th, 2016 19:20 - DESOLATION ONE ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
If this is Mithras from 100-400 AD it signifies one thing. If not I\'m...
November 17th, 2016 19:16 - That Girl (Sofii)
Anxiety is hard to deal with. Well done.
November 17th, 2016 18:57 - Lost at sea (P.H.Rose)
A lovely tribute. I can\'t imagine the angst of waiting even when it has a...
November 17th, 2016 18:54 - Wading Through Troubled Waters (John Snowdon)
Nicely done. Clear story.
November 17th, 2016 18:41 - S.O.S (Notapoet)
. . . _ _ _ . . . You expressed sad very well. Hugs.
November 17th, 2016 18:38 - Yourself (Tony36)
Conviction! Yes.
November 17th, 2016 18:31 - At Your Spirits Behest (Kurt Philip Behm)
Behest is such a beautiful word. I love the questions posed. Really...
November 17th, 2016 18:30 - hopes & dreams (Willyweed)
Could it be. Nice.
November 17th, 2016 18:25 - Robot (Yorke)
Thought provoking.
November 17th, 2016 18:23 - Hebrew Israelite Woman (FruitfulSpirit)
I love this poem. It is beautifully written and sends an important...
November 17th, 2016 18:19 - The What and The How (Avigail)
Sounds a little more complicated than my 1990\'s Day Timer Planner. Hugs.
November 17th, 2016 18:10 - Fragile. (Omgoli)
Wow! Love it!
November 17th, 2016 18:03 - With you (Stephanie Showers)
Yes, those were the days you felt warm fuzzies all over and you were...
November 17th, 2016 18:02
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