Comments on community poems by Augustus
- Head in hands, heart in suitcase. (The Dyslexic Poet)
So unsettled it feels like crazy. Nice.
September 21st, 2016 18:48 - Hands (More Medic)
Enjoyed
September 21st, 2016 18:46 - Love Hurts But Don\'t Let It Kill You (SubliminalSolace)
Nice.
September 21st, 2016 18:43 - Despair And I (Emile Dubois)
That must have hurt a lot. Nice.
September 21st, 2016 18:40 - Sitting Alone (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Sounds remorseful. Nice.
September 21st, 2016 18:37 - The other day, i saw a bird (Avigail)
That is a full appreciation of the moment.
September 21st, 2016 18:35 - Hidden Pain (Jeff)
Wow!
September 21st, 2016 18:28 - Excuse Me For Speaking (Notapoet)
Some days you just can't win, no matter what you say. Nice.
September 21st, 2016 09:46 - MY P O E T I C SIDE ~ A Rhyming Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
My Muse is out to lunch today or so the sign says on his door. Thanks.
September 21st, 2016 09:41 - Binge Brain (WriteBeLight)
Delightful.
September 21st, 2016 09:37 - Rag Doll (Felicityjones)
There is so much hurt and pain here. Deep down, I see you are a...
September 21st, 2016 09:36 - Dual nature (Daniel dawes)
Some never find themselves or their potential. Enjoyed.
September 21st, 2016 09:30 - Systems and Parts (Avigail)
Groups of less than 150.
September 20th, 2016 10:44 - Untitled (DeathInGrey)
I don't know about you but I have flashbacks to horrible things I have...
September 20th, 2016 10:37 - Systems and Parts (Avigail)
Years ago some person told me that if you were a systems analyst you would...
September 20th, 2016 10:26 - Bite My Lip (WriteBeLight)
Very wise person. Oh, but it is so tempting, especially when you would...
September 20th, 2016 09:52 - Stare (SarahLouise)
They weren't raised right. Thanks for sharing.
September 20th, 2016 09:47 - Love Sick (Notapoet)
The love bug. A disease. Thanks.
September 20th, 2016 09:36 - Mirror me (The Dyslexic Poet)
We get enmeshed in relationships and loose our identity. Nice.
September 20th, 2016 09:34 - Loneliness (ShadedSorrow)
Hopefully, writing about it will help.
September 20th, 2016 09:28 - MECHANISED HARVEST (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Food for thought.
September 20th, 2016 08:17 - Stevenson Boulevard (Kassidyxxraelyn)
"The abyss where my joy goes to float". I am struggling to understand this...
September 20th, 2016 07:57 - Untrusted Love (John Lee)
Love as well as looking within can be a bitch at times. Thanks.
September 19th, 2016 23:06 - Free write 1 (Kingpoetic)
Getting your message across with just the right amount of violence, not...
September 19th, 2016 22:56 - #158-His Rival (Mads)
Heartfelt.
September 19th, 2016 22:46 - Oblivion. (0ddity)
As though you have all the ingredients for a perfect storm from which...
September 19th, 2016 22:44 - Mercy is a friend of mine (Reivax Camlost)
This is deep.
September 19th, 2016 22:39 - The Battle Between Night and Day (Megan07)
Lyrical rhyme
Clever
Tells a story
It's simplicity belies it's...
September 19th, 2016 22:34 - Writer In The Storm (Tony36)
Stormy weather.
September 19th, 2016 17:07 - Conditioning of the mind (Avigail)
I see your point. We need be very aware.
September 19th, 2016 17:05 - A N G E L OF P E A C E (BRIAN & ANGELA)
You invited me for a fusion poem. I am still unclear how that works. I am...
September 19th, 2016 12:09 - Conditioning of the mind (Avigail)
The first thought I have is brainwashing, filling our minds with whatever...
September 19th, 2016 11:57 - Spirits Unite (Notapoet)
Nicely done.
September 19th, 2016 11:50 - Inside (ShadedSorrow)
Sounds like you don't get invited out much and if I saw you coming down...
September 19th, 2016 11:48 - Simply being (Daniel dawes)
Sometimes it is hard to live in the moment and have no need to try to...
September 19th, 2016 11:38 - A N G E L OF P E A C E (BRIAN & ANGELA)
There are cultures different than ours that sadly don't have these same...
September 19th, 2016 11:33 - Leak (A.b)
Medically it reminds me of congestive heart failure. Emotionally, a broken...
September 18th, 2016 21:17 - Accepting ...? (Justme)
I read it as just going through the motions without true commitment and...
September 18th, 2016 19:02 - Cremated Ashes Into Glass (Emile Dubois)
"For a long time I have been at war with the grave." From one of the...
September 18th, 2016 18:50 - Preface (Severus Alexander)
What is that magic that makes us want more? Is it the same thing that...
September 18th, 2016 14:19 - Sowing the seed of love (Notapoet)
You are on to something here. I don't know the rhetoric name for this way...
September 18th, 2016 12:31 - Bottle of Emotions (Night_Owl)
It's fine. I like quiet and reserved. Nice read
September 18th, 2016 12:22 - WE ARE ALL INTERDEPENDENT (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Unfortunate that the para olimpics does not get much attention. I agree...
September 18th, 2016 12:19 - Less than a second. (The Dyslexic Poet)
A lot happens in such a short period of time in that glance, that later it...
September 18th, 2016 10:58 - Distant lovers (King.Jade808)
That it May Be. Thanks for sharing.
September 18th, 2016 08:56 - Perception Of Reality (Jondoe909)
Follow the money. Thanks.
September 18th, 2016 08:53 - Cross of My Savior (Tony36)
keeping the faith. Thanks.
September 18th, 2016 08:51 - Barricades (ShadedSorrow)
Even though we know it is wrong we keep repeating. Thanks.
September 18th, 2016 08:50 - Acceptance (Glitterbrook73)
I have wasted so much time in my life holding grudges. Nicely done.
September 18th, 2016 08:14 - Beautiful Agony (Mcook1221)
Good to get it off your chest, so to speak. Nice
September 18th, 2016 08:08 - Currents Of Unfairness (Shahla Latifi)
There are so many places in the world where women are mistreated, not...
September 17th, 2016 11:49 - I\'m here (King.Jade808)
I can see the young you in this concisely written piece, full of...
September 17th, 2016 11:43 - Darkness Falls #2 (Abpoet18)
Lots of pain and hurt.
September 17th, 2016 11:35 - Spirits are passing in the sky (Avigail)
Sometimes it is easier for my spiritual side to believe more in the Great...
September 17th, 2016 11:32 - The Last (Tony36)
Like the end of the world.
September 17th, 2016 11:27 - Love At First Sight (Notapoet)
Great to be something special in the eyes of another.
September 17th, 2016 11:22 - Goodbye Papa (John Lee)
Brought tears to my eyes.
September 17th, 2016 11:19 - THE RAINBOW OF LOVE (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Oh yea, light blue under the sky in a meadow of tall green grass. Try it....
September 17th, 2016 10:48 - Letting go (The Dyslexic Poet)
I took this from a different angle not love of man/woman but for mankind...
September 17th, 2016 10:42 - Sensitive and Fragile Hearts (DamilareBizBoss)
Yes we can still be friends, and give our hearts a chance to heal before...
September 17th, 2016 10:35 - Second Best (Grange_m)
And last to be picked for the softball team. Liked it a lot.
September 17th, 2016 10:31 - Roadkill (Emile Dubois)
Our experiences, society and new culture can make us feel that way, left...
September 17th, 2016 09:39 - She (Noel)
Lots of torment. I'm left very sad.
September 16th, 2016 21:17 - Sated (Jeff)
Isn't it great to be noticed by someone whom you believe is special? Just...
September 16th, 2016 15:43 - Im Tired (ShadedSorrow)
Nice.
September 16th, 2016 15:39 - Visions Of Brightness (Brooklyn6timesplus)
P.S. I just listened to your recording. Nice voice.
Question: I...
September 16th, 2016 12:28 - Visions Of Brightness (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Great advice. Clear. Concise. Thanks for sharing.
September 16th, 2016 12:09 - every one and you (Avigail)
Was so tempting to give folks a piece of my mine on Facebook. Fortunately...
September 16th, 2016 12:05 - Unrequited #05 (untitled) (Justsomegeeze)
Nice.
September 16th, 2016 11:48 - All i want to do is treat you right (Quietstorm_Dru)
Was not quite sure if this was a step father relation ship or adult/adult....
September 16th, 2016 11:45 - A Fait Accompli (Kurt Philip Behm)
Power of the pen is what came to mind. Enjoyed.
September 16th, 2016 11:42 - Slave To The Blackness (Notapoet)
Beautifully done.
P.S. I'm jealous !
September 16th, 2016 11:40 - YOU\'LL NEVER WALK ALONE (BRIAN & ANGELA)
One of my favorite songs. Just looked it up on YouTube . Surprised the #...
September 16th, 2016 11:36 - The Ice Queen\'s Lover (The Dyslexic Poet)
Another terrific poem I enjoyed reading. I love the 'sweetness now bitter...
September 16th, 2016 11:14 - Love doesnt here nor does it dwell there (FruitfulSpirit)
Lots of tension.
September 16th, 2016 11:06 - Money Maker (DamilareBizBoss)
Money does not bring happiness but it sure makes life a whole lot easier....
September 15th, 2016 19:54 - Losing Myself (Noel)
Stained glass indeed is fragile. I like the 'plethora of shards'. A lot of...
September 15th, 2016 19:46 - What about her? (Learly)
Very enhancing manner to describe yourself
September 15th, 2016 19:41 - Unheard (Stephanie Showers)
Reads nicely.
September 15th, 2016 12:23 - The hunter (Tony36)
Action thriller.
September 15th, 2016 12:20 - Your Souls Release (Kurt Philip Behm)
Seems to describe poetry.
September 15th, 2016 12:17 - Fading. (Camille)
Wow!
September 15th, 2016 12:15 - let\'s explore the soft resources of your being (Avigail)
This is so meaningful to me as I am on an anti hormone medication that has...
September 15th, 2016 08:25 - Gone Forever (Felicityjones)
My wife teases me when I attribute human emotions to our pets.
September 15th, 2016 08:12 - Once we used to talk (Notapoet)
Here is a 'digital' high five.
September 15th, 2016 08:09 - GOD IS MY PACE SETTER (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A few years back a friend lost his father shortly after mine had died....
September 15th, 2016 08:02 - The Night Storms On Through (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Thumbs up!
September 14th, 2016 22:02 - Worthless you (Ameliewho)
Sorry you had to witness. Tell me about the syrup like whisper. Syrup...
September 14th, 2016 21:59 - She\'s strong. (Melissa walls)
Nice tribute
September 14th, 2016 21:55 - Terror At KFC (Tony36)
Playful with serious message.
September 14th, 2016 13:30 - Innocence (Semicolon01)
Nice rhythm. Lots of pain. Ouch!
September 14th, 2016 13:27 - Gift, of life so sweet (Reivax Camlost)
Nice word arrangement
September 14th, 2016 13:22 - The desparation that comes from longing to belong (Emile Dubois)
I take it you didn't drink the Kool-aid. Thanks.
September 14th, 2016 13:11 - I WILL NOT (Stephanie Showers)
Clear thought that you are a force to be reckoned with. I'm 77 and was...
September 14th, 2016 13:07 - Time once lost (Daniel dawes)
I see it as getting in touch with the inner child
September 14th, 2016 12:53 - coherence , beer and potato chips (Avigail)
How you want to be is none of my business. Love your surprises.
September 14th, 2016 11:31 - Darkness Above (Notapoet)
Flows well for me until "not very fun."
September 14th, 2016 11:22 - BEST POEMS ARE PALINDROMES ARE POEMS BEST (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Maybe it was the scotch last night, or lack of sleep, or my inability to...
September 14th, 2016 11:04 - Face (Lovedud)
There is such a longing for something that you know in the end will never...
September 13th, 2016 18:39 - Silently Pray (Ternic73)
I can't imagine what it must be like to be a soldier in a war zone. Your...
September 13th, 2016 18:29
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