Comments on community poems by Augustus
- Shall I (Maryann kousarieh)
I like the bars on the face line. Hugs.
November 9th, 2016 22:55 - Hidden Ray (Taliac.)
Love the play with words and a nice message.
November 9th, 2016 22:45 - Born Country (Tony36)
Tony, I love the character, culture and values of country folk. You...
November 9th, 2016 22:44 - Another day (SilentLaugh)
This is very well written. It is sad. Hugs.
November 9th, 2016 22:40 - Lesson of the elections (Avigail)
so many layers of perception. Are we ready for \"new awareness\"? Nicely...
November 9th, 2016 22:38 - Proud Love (Phïlant)
That is something special.
November 9th, 2016 22:33 - Tick Tock (Gaz2486)
Clever. Nicely done.
November 9th, 2016 18:52 - Church of the overcomer (Quietstorm_Dru)
Sad that being spiritual or following the commandments is considered...
November 9th, 2016 18:50 - The Light Of Day (Abpoet18)
I used to do the blame game. Nice write.
November 9th, 2016 18:39 - To Ignite And Amaze (Kurt Philip Behm)
WOW!
November 9th, 2016 10:36 - Drowning Dolly (Gloomypoem)
It hurts when you are uncertain. Depressing. You captured those feelings.
November 9th, 2016 10:35 - A compliment (Christina8)
We all love to be appreciated. It is also extremely important in a...
November 9th, 2016 10:31 - Home is Where Your Heart Lives (Doll in Wonderland)
Those are nice feelings.
November 9th, 2016 10:29 - Companion Moon (Notapoet)
Great allegory.
November 9th, 2016 10:26 - Dear Grandpa (Gothic_Girl)
Sorry for your loss. I am sure your grandpa appreciates this.
November 9th, 2016 10:22 - It\'s always been you (WildMoonChild)
Like a Fairy tale where all lived happily ever after. Well done.
November 9th, 2016 10:21 - Wind Chimes (WriteBeLight)
You my dear are sooooo talented.
November 9th, 2016 10:18 - Softness. (Zwitterion)
Oh, that moment when your lover whispers in your ear and your knees...
November 9th, 2016 10:15 - Be all you can be (Nicolerobinson)
I love this! I use a little Pixie dust myself at times.
November 9th, 2016 10:12 - WHAT IF ~ TRUMP WINS ? (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Democracy is a fickle creature. Very well done.
November 9th, 2016 10:10 - Ride to the Clouds (LIGHT WARRIOR)
Raw. You never hold back. You are not afraid to say what you think and...
November 9th, 2016 10:00 - Still I do. (Voicesecho88)
Yes this is something to think about. The world is made up of mostly...
November 9th, 2016 03:46 - POTUS (Elchupacabra)
Succinctly done!
November 9th, 2016 03:43 - I am not afraid to tell (MThackerson)
Lots of folks have their head in the sand. What\'s real is real. Nicely...
November 9th, 2016 03:42 - Unsinking In Depth (Satishverma)
I take it that you are not inviting this person to stay. Provoking.
November 8th, 2016 23:11 - Beg me (Mylittleheart)
Nice way to describe that little snipit/moment in life.
November 8th, 2016 23:06 - On Patrol (Ternic73)
It is hard to think of anything more harrying then to be on patrol in a...
November 8th, 2016 23:04 - What is Righteousness? (Survivor48)
Something beautiful and difficult to achieve. Thanks for sharing.
November 8th, 2016 23:00 - We shall be free (Tony36)
Like the walk line. Well done.
November 8th, 2016 22:50 - A Flame en La Oscuridad (Larosamarchitada)
Interesante la combinación de ingles y español. Me gusta el concepto que...
November 8th, 2016 22:48 - Drought (Stephanie Showers)
It is so hard to live through droughts. Nicely done.
November 8th, 2016 22:36 - Do You (Kurt Philip Behm)
Lovely.
November 8th, 2016 11:45 - Number 5 Cheap Street. (Camille)
Poetic beauty for such a tragic story.
November 8th, 2016 11:43 - Flame #5 (Abpoet18)
A child\'s laugh is so special. Nice write.
November 8th, 2016 11:40 - Let Your Words Encourage (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Encouragement. Yes.
November 8th, 2016 11:36 - Friendship (Avigail)
Oh yes, attentive and respectful. Trust has been the hardest for me....
November 8th, 2016 11:35 - His eyes (Christina8)
I just love the dimples. What a lovely poem.
November 8th, 2016 10:18 - EARTH ANGEL ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
First thing comes to mind is the early 1950\'s hit 45 single by the...
November 8th, 2016 10:16 - Clowns with Frowns (WriteBeLight)
Growing up I thought the clown was a universally accepted figure. Only...
November 8th, 2016 10:08 - A child to sell (WildMoonChild)
Yes, the foster care system is a mess. Sometimes you wonder who are they...
November 8th, 2016 10:00 - Paint me a picture (Nicolerobinson)
Nice analogy.
November 8th, 2016 09:52 - Sobriety (Elphaba993)
Very descriptive and heartfelt. Hugs.
November 8th, 2016 09:47 - The Void (DrowningHeart696)
Well done.
November 8th, 2016 09:44 - War (Wolf2778)
Exacts it\'s toll, for sure. Nicely done.
November 8th, 2016 09:42 - There was once a guy, i thought wrong... i made mistakes. (Nicolerobinson)
Yes, we learn from our experiences. With luck we don\'t get seriously hurt...
November 7th, 2016 09:00 - Blessed with beauty, Cursed with poison (WildMoonChild)
I love the rhyme and the transition from a sense of troubled mind to that...
November 7th, 2016 08:53 - Toy soldier (BronyVinyl)
Very sweet. A toy on a serious mission. Nicely done.
November 7th, 2016 08:04 - Perfect (Nicolerobinson)
Don\'t you just love it when you look into someon\'e\'s eyes and they...
November 6th, 2016 13:17 - Salvations Regret (Kurt Philip Behm)
Sometimes we are so selfish we forget those choices and promises made to...
November 6th, 2016 12:53 - A moment of reflection (Quietstorm_Dru)
My spouse has helped me understand that anger is a healthy emotion...
November 6th, 2016 12:49 - Stop Distractions (Avigail)
I want a womb with a view, but now that I think about it, that defeats the...
November 6th, 2016 12:45 - Blacksmith Forge (Tony36)
Lord has a tough job with this sinner. Nicely done.
November 6th, 2016 12:40 - Pig Skin (WriteBeLight)
Now made of cowhide. I\'m crushed.
You must be a fan. Nicely done.
November 6th, 2016 12:38 - CHRISTMAS ~ A CELEBRATION OF THE BIRTH OF JESUS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
P.S. I\'m surprised that the stamp has not been banned in the US....
November 6th, 2016 11:22 - CHRISTMAS ~ A CELEBRATION OF THE BIRTH OF JESUS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
This is extremely well done.
November 6th, 2016 11:19 - In Justice (Voicesecho88)
I\'ve always been familiar with survivors guilt but this seems different....
November 6th, 2016 11:17 - Medley for a Bone Box (Lysistrata)
Wow. The mixing of a novel and Greek mythology and dance.I must admit I\'d...
November 6th, 2016 11:01 - Life\'s Letters (Ag91)
Yea, life is a bitch. Then you die. I liked the brevity and structure.
November 6th, 2016 10:40 - Passion Flower. (JohnThomas)
With all of life\'s difficulties, cruelties and injusticies we all can...
November 6th, 2016 10:22 - The day we met (WildMoonChild)
You did a fine job with the rhyme and meter. I\'m glad you got out alive....
November 6th, 2016 10:14 - The Second Time Around (Survivor48)
Instructive, yes. Boring, no. I was just reviewing goal setting for part...
November 6th, 2016 08:47 - Limbo (LIGHT WARRIOR)
Enjoyed especialy the wolf lines and part about brutality.
November 5th, 2016 21:20 - HOW SHALL I DESCRIBE MY LOVE ? A SONNET IN IAMBIC PENTAMETER (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Erotic. Careful, I am an old man. I am not sure my heart can take this....
November 5th, 2016 21:06 - Darkness inside me (Kitkat231997)
Welcome. It often helps to write about it. Sometimes we feel like a voice...
November 5th, 2016 20:59 - What are the odds (Quietstorm_Dru)
That is truly a special friendship. Well done.
November 5th, 2016 20:50 - What is Loneliness? (Sonicpoet)
Nicely done. I love the way the lines, phrases gave a visual shape to the...
November 5th, 2016 20:48 - The Second Time Around (Survivor48)
Great advice in poetic style.
November 5th, 2016 20:46 - Letters (Severus Alexander)
\"Everything has beauty but not everyone sees it\". I like this poem a...
November 5th, 2016 20:45 - The Friend In You (Keeara45)
Hard to do. If I have a hang nail the whole world knows. Nicely done and...
November 5th, 2016 20:39 - Comfort inn (Mylittleheart)
Short, sweet and heartfelt.
November 5th, 2016 20:36 - cHoicEs (Stephanie Showers)
Like the concept. Nicely done.
November 5th, 2016 20:35 - The River (Christina8)
Nice allegory .
November 5th, 2016 20:26 - First Light To Keep (Kurt Philip Behm)
Good advice. Nicely done.
November 5th, 2016 18:29 - flower for peace (Tony36)
If my mom was in a bad mood I\'d pick wild flowers for her. Thanks.
November 5th, 2016 18:25 - Social Suckerfish (WriteBeLight)
Yup. Got to be careful. Nicely done.
November 5th, 2016 18:22 - Set to rest And Piece (MThackerson)
Sometimes you feel it\'s harder on those left behind.
November 4th, 2016 19:36 - Again (Sonicpoet)
Sad. Nice write. Hugs.
November 4th, 2016 19:34 - That Girl (Stephanie Showers)
Wow!
November 4th, 2016 19:32 - Butterfly (Amariec_)
P.S. Welcome to My apoetic Side.
November 4th, 2016 14:43 - Butterfly (Amariec_)
If I am interpreting it correctly ( actually there is no right or wrong...
November 4th, 2016 14:42 - Letter (Magno1988)
Wow, what an interesting concept. What would my own heart say? Than you...
November 4th, 2016 14:38 - Are You Listening? (Kittiekite09)
Faith is a bitch at times. Sometimes asking God to help others can help....
November 4th, 2016 14:33 - Blinded by the Conflict (Survivor48)
Could we spread that message round the world.
November 4th, 2016 14:29 - It\'s Okay (Christina K)
Many of us have those ambivalent feelings. Nicely done.
November 4th, 2016 14:27 - Paradox? (CryingGame)
Run! Nicely done.
November 4th, 2016 14:26 - BONFIRE NIGHT ~ GREAT BRITISH TRADITION ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Cajuns living along the Mississippi River light fires on Christmas Eve...
November 4th, 2016 14:24 - to be on the same page (Avigail)
That one of my wife\'s favorite expressions. I tease her that some time we...
November 4th, 2016 14:17 - Search For The Positive (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Still searching.
November 4th, 2016 14:12 - Alone, In Search Of You (Kurt Philip Behm)
Lovely. Sounds like you lost someone very special.
November 4th, 2016 10:42 - Winter\'s Serenade (Melody)
Incredible. In my state we don\'t get snow.
November 4th, 2016 10:39 - Our love is beautiful (SilentLaugh)
I bet you both like that Kenny Rogers song, \" You are so Beautiful \"....
November 4th, 2016 10:29 - The Key (Christina8)
Well done. Often it is inherited and associated with depression. Avoid...
November 4th, 2016 10:26 - Clouds (WriteBeLight)
One of your best! Love it!
November 4th, 2016 09:34 - Comfort inn (Mylittleheart)
I love these moments. Hope you creat more of them for yourself and others.
November 4th, 2016 09:31 - Waste of space (Nicolerobinson)
This is a well crafted piece with clever patterns and rhyme. I love your...
November 4th, 2016 09:29 - Late night smoke (WildMoonChild)
This is when\'ll crafted free verse that puts the reader right there with...
November 4th, 2016 08:25 - The Garden\'s Colors Tend to Fade (John Snowdon)
I bet your garden is as beautiful as your poem. Love the subject and the...
November 1st, 2016 15:00 - The Outcast (Tony36)
Amazing how cruel kids can be. Well done.
November 1st, 2016 14:45 - I tend to write (MThackerson)
Dear tentative, I can feel your hurts of which you write so well. It is...
November 1st, 2016 09:00 - untitled (ShadedSorrow)
I love a little crazy. \"Normals\" are boring.
November 1st, 2016 08:52
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