Comments on community poems by Augustus
- Ten Paciencia Arbolito (Larosamarchitada)
Me encanta la metáfora. Es una buena lección para los niños que crecen.
November 17th, 2016 17:57 - Rain Happens (WriteBeLight)
We need some in Louisiana now. Very nice.
November 17th, 2016 17:41 - Cathartic Caress (Jngray)
Passionate!
November 16th, 2016 18:20 - Kind Of (NoLongerATeen)
Welcome. I like the style.
November 16th, 2016 18:15 - Early morning thoughts (Omgoli)
Writing is cathartic and that should help. But that aside, you have a way...
November 16th, 2016 18:12 - White Cross (Yorke)
The poppy has had a tradition in medicine, war and politics for centuries....
November 16th, 2016 18:07 - Where Are You (Tony36)
Yea, at least talk to me. Tell me something. Nice.
November 16th, 2016 17:25 - Overwhelmed Behaviors (Survivor48)
Overwhelm is tough to deal with. Nicely done.
November 16th, 2016 17:23 - The World Will Now Blossom. (Kevin browne)
What comes to my mind is life was most enjoyable when we were struggling....
November 16th, 2016 17:21 - Stone cottage (Willyweed)
Nice job. I bet you can travel there in your mind, sit near a window and...
November 16th, 2016 17:14 - Somewhere in your heart? (Stephanie Showers)
Oh, I hope there is more than a glimmer. This is so clever.
November 16th, 2016 17:08 - Sledding (Christina8)
This is precious.
November 16th, 2016 17:06 - So High (SilentLaugh)
I can see you in the stars man. Nice.
November 16th, 2016 17:04 - C O M M U N I T Y (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I always enjoyed working on teams.Nicely done.
November 16th, 2016 17:01 - When The Fates Allow (Kurt Philip Behm)
And man do you write!
November 16th, 2016 16:59 - I had a life (Aa Harvey)
Well written, thought provoking, powerful yet sweet and gentle.
November 16th, 2016 14:50 - Will Bender (LIGHT WARRIOR)
P.S. I have heard of giving some one the bird but wishing on them enough...
November 16th, 2016 14:42 - Will Bender (LIGHT WARRIOR)
House cleaning time. There are times where we have to draw the line....
November 16th, 2016 14:37 - My first new day (P.H.Rose)
It\'t hard not to smile around babies, toddlers and kids. Hugs.
November 16th, 2016 13:54 - Paranoid (WriteBeLight)
I tried singing your words in rhythm to the blues music. In my mind BB...
November 16th, 2016 13:51 - Safe and Sound (Voicesecho88)
Wow. You are so right. You can be moved with love toward someone yet both...
November 16th, 2016 13:39 - Only Few (Abu Aeesh)
There are some things in life that only a few are able to achieve, taking...
November 16th, 2016 13:32 - Wearing All Red (Tables4two)
Armageddon ? Nicely done.
November 16th, 2016 13:28 - Sadness (Goldandmilky)
Welcome. Nicely done. I bet you bring joy wherever you go.
November 16th, 2016 13:27 - Outside of my box (Brandi.writes)
Sad. Well,written. Hugs.
November 15th, 2016 23:06 - Fearing (Jngray)
Interesting intense secretive sensations. Got my attention.
November 15th, 2016 23:04 - Rock Bottom (Mminarik00)
Sad and lovely.
November 15th, 2016 22:58 - Stars (EmmaR1)
Nice thoughts.
November 15th, 2016 22:56 - Friends. (Kevin browne)
Sounds like a life long friendship. Cheers.
November 15th, 2016 21:24 - Country living memories (Tony36)
Country is good people. Well done.
November 15th, 2016 21:17 - Hello lonely (Stephanie Showers)
Nicely done.
November 15th, 2016 21:15 - It takes 21 days to break an addiction (Omgoli)
I hope that writing offers you some catharsis. I am sending warm positive...
November 15th, 2016 21:12 - Hopeless hope (SilentLaugh)
Sad and fearful. Loosing someone special.
November 15th, 2016 21:07 - \"In a dream\" (Willyweed)
Love the midieval theme.
November 15th, 2016 21:03 - One Bark Away (Augustus)
November 15th, 2016 20:51 - The world as it should be.. (P.H.Rose)
Very nicely done.
November 15th, 2016 20:40 - Borrow & Steal (Kurt Philip Behm)
Neat.
November 15th, 2016 20:25 - emotional flowchart (Avigail)
Oh yes, stop and allow yourself to feel your emotions, get a better...
November 15th, 2016 20:04 - Sad Is (Harriet Rose)
Family dynamics are complicated and confusing. Hugs.
November 15th, 2016 20:00 - Roses are red (Nicolerobinson)
Heartfelt.
November 15th, 2016 19:56 - Super Silvery Satellite (WriteBeLight)
I remember you. You rolled down the window and flashed me years ago....
November 15th, 2016 19:54 - I LOVE YOU HONEY ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I bet Honey is proud. P.S. Gave my first try at a sonnet today. Will...
November 15th, 2016 19:50 - Depression (Dannie_51715)
What a neat story! Hugs.
November 14th, 2016 21:21 - I\'m Sorry (Felicityjones)
Ain\'t nuthin sorry bout your poem sister. Nicely done.
November 14th, 2016 21:19 - VOID IN A TIN BORROWED FROM THE 1890S (Giantgentlebear)
Has a Salvadore Dali surrealism about it. Enjoyed.
November 14th, 2016 21:12 - Trapped (EmmaR1)
We are too punitive to others that make human mistakes. Thanks for
November 14th, 2016 20:56 - A day of whites. (P.H.Rose)
My wife went through something similar, cancerous but caught early.
Very...
November 14th, 2016 19:25 - Inside voices (Jennas)
Auditory hallucinations can be difficult. Nicely done.
November 14th, 2016 19:22 - Speak (JustABird)
Conversation is an important part of love making. Nicely done.
November 14th, 2016 19:20 - Transition (Christina8)
Yes and docs today recommend light of a certain wave length to help...
November 14th, 2016 19:17 - The Aborted Child (Tony36)
Willful abortion is difficult to reconcile. I can hear in the poem the...
November 14th, 2016 19:12 - A shell of a woman.. (The Dyslexic Poet)
Delightful description of a lover\'s passion.
November 14th, 2016 19:09 - Drone (Kieran Garnett)
Beautifully done.
November 14th, 2016 19:03 - Start Over (Stephanie Showers)
I love the contrast between the \"powerful emotions\" with which the poem...
November 14th, 2016 19:01 - Crossing Over—Turned Around (Kurt Philip Behm)
I can imagine a burning comet. Also interesting that the \"crossing\"...
November 14th, 2016 18:55 - Love Blossom (Notapoet)
This is almost erotic. I love it!
November 14th, 2016 18:47 - Smarty Pants (WriteBeLight)
Some folks I know have arms and legs simply to carry their heads around....
November 14th, 2016 18:27 - W O M A N ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Personally I think this is flagrant pandering to the ladies. And, i wish I...
November 14th, 2016 18:23 - Your fault (Nicolerobinson)
Beated me to the man I claimed was mine??? Nicely done.
November 14th, 2016 18:16 - To Create With Your Heart (Kurt Philip Behm)
Speaking your own truth does risk rejection but othwise we are not honest....
November 12th, 2016 18:59 - vitality containers (Avigail)
Now I understand how you are so vivacious.
November 12th, 2016 18:46 - You Judge Me (Tony36)
Nicely done.
November 12th, 2016 18:42 - Frolick (Christina8)
So neat that you both have a flaming desire. Nicely done.
November 12th, 2016 18:39 - The Blueberry and the Grasshopper (WriteBeLight)
I grew up with them, so were not scary but I can understand as they are...
November 12th, 2016 18:35 - Continue To Push Yourself (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Im pushing.
November 11th, 2016 13:21 - I Lost It (Christina K)
Broke can be fixed. Hang in there. Nicely done.
November 11th, 2016 12:51 - 4 words (Walkingmess)
I agree that you can get and keep yourself in a rut with depression and...
November 11th, 2016 12:46 - The Pencil of Life (Survivor48)
Have used lots of erasers, write out and liquid paper in my time. I wish I...
November 11th, 2016 12:39 - On The Hood Of The Car (Abpoet18)
Sad. Hugs.
November 11th, 2016 12:33 - What\'s The Point (EmmaR1)
Your points are well taken. Sometimes we take 2 steps forward and 3 back....
November 11th, 2016 12:29 - To Whom You Pray (Kurt Philip Behm)
I take it you are not one of those hell fire and brimstone preachers. Hey,...
November 11th, 2016 12:23 - REMEMBRANCE DAY ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
It is almost 11 as I am reading. Great read.
November 11th, 2016 12:20 - Blind spots of perception (Avigail)
Too often we stay in our rutty comfort zone. Neat.
November 11th, 2016 12:18 - Veterans: Doughboys Past and Present (WriteBeLight)
Dittos. Outstanding.
November 11th, 2016 12:15 - For leonard, (JohnThomas)
Sad that at a late age was robbed of his savings and life\'s work. Nice...
November 11th, 2016 12:00 - For leonard, (JohnThomas)
Sad that at a late age was robbed of his savings and life\'s work. Nice...
November 11th, 2016 12:00 - Life\'s journey (Gaz2486)
Lovely.
November 11th, 2016 11:53 - Losing you (Rosepetals09)
Love the imagery.
November 11th, 2016 11:51 - Honey, He\'s Nothing (SheWasTheSun)
Words from the wise. Very nicely done.
November 10th, 2016 22:11 - This Thing That Life Exists. (Kevin browne)
New ideas, worldly wisdom and love. Yea, that\'ll work.
November 10th, 2016 22:09 - your words (Mylittleheart)
Nicely written.
November 10th, 2016 22:05 - Kenyonna Lebue (Quietstorm_Dru)
I like,the keeper of my thoughts line.
November 10th, 2016 21:56 - Falling Star (LIGHT WARRIOR)
This has an underlying sweetness and sadness to it.
November 10th, 2016 21:52 - Wrong (SilentLaugh)
Interesting because the Ninja can cleverly disguise their feelings so you...
November 10th, 2016 21:45 - Friendship (Christina8)
Poetic way of describing a bad day and reaching out. Sending warm fuzzies....
November 10th, 2016 21:39 - Innocence Bleeding (Kurt Philip Behm)
This is deep. I think I under stand as I explore the \"deep warm...
November 10th, 2016 21:35 - Be Minded (Avigail)
Interesting that the timing and rhythm are important. Thanks.
November 10th, 2016 21:28 - Maternally Yours (Notapoet)
Yes, moms understand. Well done.
November 10th, 2016 21:18 - Accept (Tony36)
IrrItating when people want to do that.
November 10th, 2016 21:15 - Lead me down the garden path. (JohnThomas)
Childhood dreams are a nice place to retreat to.
November 10th, 2016 21:13 - Carpel Tunnel (WriteBeLight)
In you brain these little jewels lodge,
For fuel, renewal your hearts...
November 10th, 2016 19:44 - The chair (Maryann kousarieh)
Sad well written piece.
November 10th, 2016 19:27 - TAKE ME TO YOUR LEADER ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Funny. Take care.
November 10th, 2016 19:26 - Addiction (Gaz2486)
Addictions are hard to break. Glade you included gambling.
November 10th, 2016 19:24 - Triangle of Love (Taliac.)
Clever write.
November 10th, 2016 19:22 - Girl in Hiding (BlueiBlondie)
Eating disorders are very difficult to treat and can end in death if you...
November 10th, 2016 10:33 - Undead Right (The 2 A.M Writer)
I heard something interesting the other day, that dinosaurs ruled the...
November 9th, 2016 23:19 - Undead Right (The 2 A.M Writer)
I heard something interesting the other day, that dinosaurs ruled the...
November 9th, 2016 23:19 - you (Katelynhintz)
Welcome. Nicely done.
November 9th, 2016 23:10 - The Smile (Christina K)
Don\'t mess with us old farts. This is so precious.
November 9th, 2016 23:06
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