Comments on community poems by Augustus
- Inside and Out (Doll in Wonderland)
Your metaphors clearly tell a story of what we are thinking, feeling,...
October 24th, 2016 22:31 - Sleep (BronyVinyl)
Yes sad, but thoughtful.
October 24th, 2016 17:56 - Forever Here (Grange_m)
A poetic description of PTSD and depression. Often leads to suicide....
October 24th, 2016 17:47 - Need (Christina8)
Nicely done.
October 24th, 2016 17:44 - Clocks (The 2 A.M Writer)
Yea, \"stop the world, I want to get off\". Know the feeling.
October 24th, 2016 17:43 - dreams (Caroline-o)
I believe the recipient would be pleased. Reminds me of a song popularized...
October 24th, 2016 17:40 - The Slaves Cave (Jyquan)
We work hard all our lives for what? A hole in the ground? Got to be a...
October 24th, 2016 17:36 - You see your future differently now... (Nikita Orlov)
Many find it hard to be brave and optimistic in troubling times. But the...
October 24th, 2016 17:33 - The Tormentor becomes the Remedy pt.1 (NyelltheLyric)
A well crafted story of playing with someone\'s heart.
October 24th, 2016 17:29 - the bag (Avigail)
As a \"soon to disappear\" with lots of baggage I can relate. Enjoyed.
October 24th, 2016 17:18 - Harmony (Shahla Latifi)
A well crafted tribute to a theory difficult to achieve in this day and...
October 24th, 2016 17:13 - Just Lift Your Spirit Up (Brooklyn6timesplus)
I need to read this again as the going gets tougher.
October 24th, 2016 16:54 - Alchemy (LIGHT WARRIOR)
Nice tribute to this stranger, your protector. Love the psychedelic photo.
October 24th, 2016 16:53 - Climbing Trees ~ Stanza I (Severus Alexander)
As a child I spent much time in a tall wild cherry tree. Mostly when I was...
October 24th, 2016 16:36 - Mirror brothers (SilentLaugh)
Powerful !
October 24th, 2016 16:31 - Satan Can\'t Hold Me (Tony36)
I\'m still trying to get away. Nicely done.
October 24th, 2016 16:29 - WE ARE WHAT WE EAT (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Food for thought. Clever, as usual. Thanks.
October 24th, 2016 12:00 - Stress relived (MThackerson)
I had a horrible anger problem. Finally got it under control. Nice write.
October 24th, 2016 11:57 - Fun With A Hypochondriac (WriteBeLight)
P.S. I finally figured out what was causing the poor quality of my YouTube...
October 24th, 2016 11:55 - Fun With A Hypochondriac (WriteBeLight)
I had a mother in law like that at one time. Funny and sad at the same...
October 24th, 2016 11:51 - Memories Of Someone You Loved (Felicityjones)
I know the feeling. Nicely done.
October 24th, 2016 11:43 - Enchanted Dreams Of Trance (JordanRogers)
Enjoyed. Keep writing. And welcome.
October 24th, 2016 11:41 - A soilders goodbye (Wolf2778)
This is so beautifully done.
October 24th, 2016 11:40 - Not Your Lover (LynnBlackwell)
Graphic portrait of the turmoil of a purely sexual relationship. Nicely...
October 24th, 2016 11:36 - Rock Bottom (Elphaba993)
Hodgetiger said it best. The rawness. I am hoping this is not your real...
October 24th, 2016 11:24 - Twice Is Never Shy. (Kevin browne)
Some are unwilling/unable to learn from history. Wisdom is doomed in this...
October 23rd, 2016 17:56 - Play. (IPsYcH0)
Wow. Sick mother. I\'m almost afraid to say I like this. I believe you did...
October 23rd, 2016 17:40 - Psychopaths Are Pure But Invisible And Alone. (Samavetis)
I get the devoid of emotions part but not to undo evil protect the weak....
October 23rd, 2016 17:33 - ∞ Bullies ∞ (Dannie_51715)
Paints a very clear picture.
October 23rd, 2016 11:57 - Last This Long (Abpoet18)
Like the \"the dark will not isolate or harm us\" lines.
October 23rd, 2016 11:56 - Until tonight my love (Willyweed)
Nicely done WW. So nicely done that I\'m putting garlands of garlic on...
October 23rd, 2016 11:52 - Bowser Needs a Bath (WriteBeLight)
Cheers!
October 23rd, 2016 11:48 - Stress Poem, Love Poem (MThackerson)
Nice contrast.
October 23rd, 2016 11:44 - Transcendental Awareness (LIGHT WARRIOR)
Wow. Your relationships! Love the \"fluff that clandestinely hides\",...
October 23rd, 2016 11:41 - pain (Avigail)
I like the holistic approach. Inability to deal with simple pains have led...
October 23rd, 2016 11:24 - No Place To Hide (Kurt Philip Behm)
My mind at times is filled with crazy evil thoughts. As I age I sometimes...
October 23rd, 2016 11:20 - The Royals versus the Poet\'s Realm (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
SZW: I must apologize. I took one look at the bold, large, black print and...
October 23rd, 2016 08:31 - Moment in Time (Irishred)
I sometimes close my eyes to listen to a violin solo. At times tears flow....
October 22nd, 2016 17:10 - Have That Great Feeling (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Keep plugging along.
October 22nd, 2016 17:06 - The Great Sea (The 2 A.M Writer)
The sea is very heavy, especially the deeper you go. Plus you drown. Hugs....
October 22nd, 2016 17:04 - Listen To A Friend (Augustus)
Thanks a bunch.
October 22nd, 2016 16:57 - Listen To A Friend (Augustus)
Thanks.
October 22nd, 2016 16:56 - Dusk (Moontigerntn)
Please don\'t let
The sun set,
My blood get.
Nicely done.
October 22nd, 2016 12:43 - Penitentiary (CDiazp01)
Everywhere you go you burn the bridges behind you. Know the feeling.
October 22nd, 2016 11:59 - Stand Up For What You Believe In (Iamwoman)
Nicely done.
October 22nd, 2016 11:56 - \"a letter from Lucifer\" (Willyweed)
As I learned and as I grew,
You visited me more than a time or 2
Great...
October 22nd, 2016 11:54 - Lady of Business (Grange_m)
So graphic and so true. I have heard of women who put themselves through...
October 22nd, 2016 11:48 - SpiritMind over BodyMind (Avigail)
A local emergency room nurse swears they admit more mentally ill during...
October 22nd, 2016 11:40 - The Piano (WriteBeLight)
I can relate. For years and years I would try to learn both piano and...
October 22nd, 2016 11:33 - About A Father! (MThackerson)
Don\'t take it personal, they say. But it must be hard not to. Sorry for...
October 22nd, 2016 11:28 - open your mind (Tony36)
Ibid.
October 22nd, 2016 11:23 - Trapped (ShadedSorrow)
What a beautifully written struggle.
October 22nd, 2016 11:22 - Turning Me Back Around (Kurt Philip Behm)
Thank you to Laura. Nice.
October 22nd, 2016 11:20 - Black and White (Gloomypoem)
Neat.
October 22nd, 2016 11:15 - Check-Mate (LIGHT WARRIOR)
I have often had the ideas of wreaking some devastating havoc on those...
October 20th, 2016 14:23 - synergy and synchronicity and compatibility (Avigail)
I like the ability to improve one\'s perception and enhance your success.
October 20th, 2016 14:07 - Runny Nose (WriteBeLight)
I like the part about thinking and drinking.
October 20th, 2016 14:03 - All Kindled Lies Afire (Kurt Philip Behm)
Love the metaphors.
October 20th, 2016 14:02 - To Dance (Tony36)
Yea, shake it!
October 20th, 2016 13:55 - 21st Century Sodom (Danielcortorreal)
Truly enjoyed this piece.
October 20th, 2016 13:55 - Sense Of Humor (Augustus)
Thanks, I started with a list of all the horrible things that happen to...
October 18th, 2016 09:47 - Clowned About with You. (Kevin browne)
This sound like the speaker has had it with someone highly educated and...
October 17th, 2016 22:29 - OUTREACHED (Giantgentlebear)
Old tires are thrown out as are our old ideas. New ones can be fitted and...
October 17th, 2016 22:16 - The One Dearest To My Heart (K.T Williams)
Lovely tribute to your aging loved one.
October 17th, 2016 21:50 - Railroad (Abpoet18)
Thought about this a while.
October 17th, 2016 21:48 - When Your Lobster Tells You He\'s Moving On (Doll in Wonderland)
I remember the words of a Patsy Cline song, \"I fall to pieces, each time...
October 17th, 2016 09:04 - For All To Share (Kurt Philip Behm)
Editing is like pouring salt into an open wound. -------Bleeding can lead...
October 17th, 2016 08:47 - Red, White, Blue (Tony36)
One of your best. Personally I would have left out \"America\" at the end...
October 17th, 2016 08:27 - Snapshots (WriteBeLight)
Family is soooo important. We often forget how important when we are...
October 17th, 2016 08:15 - My poetess (Aa Harvey)
That you make peautiful poetry together. When someone accepts us with all...
October 17th, 2016 08:05 - Angels (BronyVinyl)
Where I live people don\'t speak of angels any more. Nicely done.
October 17th, 2016 07:43 - dreaming (Themacoroini)
That can be disheartening, especially when rejected. Hopefully not...
October 16th, 2016 16:09 - Halloween is Here (Iamwoman)
Well done.
October 16th, 2016 16:07 - You (SarahLouise)
Soooooo true. Also I am struck by this continuing theme today. I say that...
October 16th, 2016 16:04 - The Moment (Ddaca)
Love? Sounds like a whole lot of hurt. Nicely done. Another thought: there...
October 16th, 2016 15:54 - Carousel (Izzi Lynn)
Love the pictures that you painted.
October 16th, 2016 15:35 - Put It on Paper (Ternic73)
Yes, a great way to help organize your thoughts, and has a calming effect....
October 16th, 2016 15:31 - I\'m beautiful. (WolfbanesTyler)
I can imagine someone who in their mind\'s eye looks wanting, that a...
October 16th, 2016 13:02 - Inspiration. (Kevin browne)
Nice meter and message.
October 16th, 2016 11:07 - Insecurity (Felicityjones)
You did a wonderful job in describing the insecurity that so many...
October 16th, 2016 11:05 - Him (Kash13)
Enlightened by the Sun God. Thanks.
October 16th, 2016 10:55 - Don\'t take it personally (Avigail)
My initial reaction is the insignificance we feel in this grand scheme,...
October 16th, 2016 10:52 - Raw Honey. (JohnThomas)
Fascinating way to express what I sense is unrequited love.
October 16th, 2016 10:42 - Witnesses (Tony36)
A tribute to your faith.
October 16th, 2016 10:38 - MY LOVE FOR YOU ~ A TRIOLET (BRIAN & ANGELA)
At first I thought this is a little silly, then I realized some serious...
October 16th, 2016 10:36 - Darkness (BronyVinyl)
Can be consuming. Well done.
October 16th, 2016 10:29 - The Dark Scenery (Brooklyn6timesplus)
True.
October 15th, 2016 16:12 - Nightstorm (Moontigerntn)
Does St. Mary know that you were cavorting with Hecate? Heh, heh.
October 15th, 2016 16:10 - Worker Bees and Drones (WriteBeLight)
One of my pet peeves. Another is they Procreate----big time. Nicely done.
October 15th, 2016 11:52 - Do u know what time it is right now? (Kash13)
Love the concept and execution.
October 15th, 2016 11:47 - How is you augmented reality today? (Avigail)
I find it truly amazing that some neutron or particle (whatever electrical...
October 15th, 2016 10:10 - The Only Time (Kurt Philip Behm)
At times the delusions are more welcoming. Thanks.
October 15th, 2016 10:05 - The Illuminated of the Now (LIGHT WARRIOR)
I have heard of the relation between music and math. There is something...
October 15th, 2016 10:03 - Death (BronyVinyl)
I love the sense of urgency that you provide with short staccato phrases.
October 15th, 2016 09:45 - I am the Whale (Jessn1)
I can\'t fathom why in today\'s world anyone would kill a whale. Nicely...
October 15th, 2016 09:41 - Carpe Noctem (Mandolian)
Seize the night. This is beautifully written.
October 15th, 2016 09:30 - CHRISTMAS ~ ALPHABETICALLY (BRIAN & ANGELA)
You did not mention \"Happy Hollidays\", opportunities to sell, inundation...
October 15th, 2016 09:23 - Crushing Borderline Personality. (WolfbanesTyler)
\"Centipede in a corpse\"--love it. I am not quite sure if all DSM...
October 15th, 2016 09:17 - Hekate (Moontigerntn)
Enchanting! Spell binding. Nicely done.
October 14th, 2016 21:47 - OCEAN (Ternic73)
Nice
October 14th, 2016 21:42
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