Comments on community poems by Augustus
- Continue To Educate Yourself (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Alfred North Whitehead was a philosopher who said that our education never...
October 14th, 2016 21:40 - Girlfriend (Amal)
Nice tribute to heartfelt love.
October 14th, 2016 21:35 - The End of Hope (Stephanie Showers)
Hope has such a calming and steadying effect on our lives. Without it is...
October 14th, 2016 21:31 - Rejected (BrokenEyes)
Rejection hurts a lot. You try to laugh it off to avoid the pain. Hugs.
October 14th, 2016 21:27 - Moonlight thoughts (Elenasky)
Love is hidden. Is it real? Where is love, truth in this confusing world...
October 14th, 2016 21:24 - The Covenant (FruitfulSpirit)
Reads nicely. Love the camera metaphor. Nice tribute to your faith.
October 14th, 2016 21:13 - Be loving. It’s good for your health (Avigail)
It took me a long part of my life to realize that anger was a choice. Good...
October 14th, 2016 21:05 - Moments. (Kevin browne)
Wow. You made my day. Half of the poems I published were written in the...
October 14th, 2016 21:00 - Moments. (Kevin browne)
October 14th, 2016 20:48 - Dodge ball (Tony36)
I remember the game.
October 14th, 2016 08:23 - My Wait Begins Again (Kurt Philip Behm)
I like the cold metaphor. When you get the cold shoulder from a cold heart...
October 14th, 2016 08:22 - Egg On Your Face (WriteBeLight)
And my foot in my mouth. Thanks.
October 14th, 2016 08:16 - Your kind of love (Bella cortez)
It reminds me of chasing a bad boy. Not boy as in child, but not a nice...
October 14th, 2016 08:12 - BUBBLES ~ CHECK MY FUSION ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Lots of fun.
October 14th, 2016 08:05 - Moments. (Kevin browne)
\"Taste of no return\"--- when you see that on a lovers fave or hear it in...
October 14th, 2016 08:01 - Broken (BrokenEyes)
After being hurt it can be very hard to recover. Few of us stop to ask the...
October 13th, 2016 18:55 - BESIDE A SEASIDE ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Tragic.
October 13th, 2016 18:39 - Dark Necessities (Lysistrata)
I am not familiar with the writer or painter but now am intrigued.
October 13th, 2016 18:37 - Key to Success (WriteBeLight)
Amazing what an attorney can do for you these days. Huh, heh.
Bling is a...
October 13th, 2016 18:18 - True Blue (Flowernectar)
Lovely.
October 13th, 2016 18:07 - Growing Up. (Kevin browne)
That sums it up.
October 13th, 2016 18:03 - If People Were Ring Tones (WriteBeLight)
So clever with both story and the sounds that fit the personalities.
October 11th, 2016 08:44 - Fly (Tony36)
Nice feeling.
October 11th, 2016 08:41 - Stranger at My Window (Vanabba3)
Delightfully eerie. As the poem started out I thought the boy was being...
October 10th, 2016 21:39 - Tell Her That She Is Beautiful (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Every day in every way. I am so lucky to have her.
October 10th, 2016 18:57 - Always changing (SilentLaugh)
This is terrific. Thanks for sharing.
October 10th, 2016 18:47 - If Love... (Taylerdk21)
Nicely done.
October 10th, 2016 18:45 - Your Love (VhladTheGreat)
Up till almost the end of the poem the relationship reminds me of...
October 10th, 2016 16:03 - The Wind Whispers Forever (Kurt Philip Behm)
Beautifully done. As an old man with terminal cancer I can relate on a...
October 10th, 2016 15:29 - And so you shall remain (Stephanie Showers)
I take it you are not throwing a birthday party for this person.
October 10th, 2016 15:24 - Who decided who I was? (DD.)
Makes you wonder, sometime.
October 10th, 2016 15:18 - Few days after Mathew (Avigail)
My wife and I are spending a few days on the Mississippi coast. This is...
October 10th, 2016 15:07 - the unknown (Abbeycrews)
Tells a story.
October 10th, 2016 15:02 - The Beasts (Tony36)
Wow. Tony. Good one!
October 10th, 2016 14:59 - XO (Nero XO)
"Lie amongst unfulfilled wishes". I like it.
October 10th, 2016 09:11 - \"THINK; Know Truth, WRITE: Know Truth, READ; Know Truth\" imagined, theorized, partly written, and typed by: King B. Rite - The Poet/Psycopath Pxalm VIII: Voice Inside, Insane, Inhale J\'tu Orion Zathaniel R. - The Depicter/Narrator (King_B_Rite)
Wildly entertaining.
October 10th, 2016 09:07 - FORECAST ~ UNSETTLED (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Family takes the staleness out of life. Safe journey.
October 10th, 2016 08:47 - The Accused (Vanabba3)
I once thought about killing my first wife. I was so upset with myself I...
October 10th, 2016 08:44 - Be There For The Children (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Good advice, cleverly put.
October 9th, 2016 22:34 - A Chemical Reaction (Izzi Lynn)
A very personal poem. Thanks for the explanation. I liked the perfect...
October 9th, 2016 22:33 - The Complex Art of Change (SheWasTheSun)
The poem consistently reflects many aspects of change throughout. Nicely...
October 9th, 2016 22:25 - At sea (Whimsical_1)
That is a sinking feeling, no pun intended. Nice.
October 9th, 2016 22:18 - Conundrum (LIGHT WARRIOR)
The emotions, questions, promises to ourselves when the possibility of new...
October 9th, 2016 22:01 - The Secrets Held Within The Dark (Brittjane4)
Intriguing. Speaks of some self inflicted life changing event followed by...
October 9th, 2016 21:53 - Masquerade of Humility (Notapoet)
Showing the world the real you is difficult. I can relate. Thanks...
October 9th, 2016 21:32 - SUNDAY ~ A DAY OF REST ? (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I'm retired now so every day is Saturday save for Sunday. Thanks.
October 9th, 2016 09:37 - Alive (Tony36)
Lovely spiritual message for a Sunday morning.
October 9th, 2016 09:14 - Great Recipe (Poeta de Cabra)
Cleverly done. Reminds of something that happened on a kitchen counter...
October 9th, 2016 09:04 - Does it really matter (Opefolorunsho)
Yes, we treat gold and money better than we treat each other. Nicely done.
October 9th, 2016 09:00 - Lost Within (Jeff)
This would be great lyrics for a song.
October 9th, 2016 08:58 - PLASMANA, THE VAMPIRETTE (Summersounds68)
Neat story. Well written.
October 8th, 2016 22:22 - Vampire Toy (Moontigerntn)
Interesting, the poem is hypnotizing, like the person who is under a...
October 8th, 2016 22:19 - To Wear a Smile (Whimsical_1)
This is the life of a cutter. Interesting to cut on the chest. I love the...
October 8th, 2016 22:12 - A Heart To You I Bring. (Kevin browne)
The wonder of it all. Love is magical. Thanks for sharing.
October 8th, 2016 22:06 - 6 months (Zahc)
That is a vivid description of the shock, the silence, the frustration,...
October 8th, 2016 16:57 - Best For You (VhladTheGreat)
It is difficult to accept rejection so gracefully. Likely signifies real...
October 8th, 2016 16:35 - Always Find Ways To Improve (Brooklyn6timesplus)
I'm reaching man but it's gettin harder every day. Good positive read.
October 8th, 2016 16:27 - evolvement (Avigail)
I have to sneak up on myself to answer those type questions. There is a...
October 8th, 2016 14:21 - Women Are People Too (Iamwoman)
Nicely done.
October 8th, 2016 14:11 - Money (DD.)
Sorry your parents don't see your real value. From their standpoint it...
October 8th, 2016 14:09 - I never dreamed (Petec)
Hopelessly in love. Nice.
October 8th, 2016 08:56 - Alone Again (Jeff)
Nicely done.
October 8th, 2016 08:53 - Residue (Lucyring)
Nicely done. I can sense the longing to return.
October 8th, 2016 08:49 - I SCREAM FOR ICE CREAM (BRIAN & ANGELA)
On top apple pie.
October 8th, 2016 08:46 - How He Came To Be (Brittjane4)
We live and learn. Nicely done.
October 8th, 2016 08:40 - Dinner for Two and Death Would Like Tea (Vanabba3)
Remind me not to have tea a your place. Nicely done.
October 8th, 2016 08:38 - Honest Places. (Kevin browne)
Kevin, It was not a biblical reference. Louisiana USA, Mississippi,Alabama...
October 8th, 2016 07:18 - The Summer Pledge (GREENMAN42UK)
I'm in awe.
October 7th, 2016 22:38 - Marble Harvest (GREENMAN42UK)
My wife gets depressed for days whenever we visit a military cemetery....
October 7th, 2016 22:28 - A SUFFOLK EVENING (GREENMAN42UK)
Croaked admonishments. Love it!
October 7th, 2016 22:23 - The Little Boy (GREENMAN42UK)
This is very special!
October 7th, 2016 22:18 - Monster in My Closet (Vanabba3)
Your message came through clearly and by morning some one was going to...
October 7th, 2016 22:13 - Somewhere - by Doug MacGowan (Dougmacgowan)
Lovely.
October 7th, 2016 21:53 - THANK YOU FOR EVERYTHING (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Yes, always so positive. And, instructive.
October 7th, 2016 21:47 - after a hurricane night (Avigail)
Cheers. Take care.
October 7th, 2016 21:43 - This Is Not Another Love Song (Moontigerntn)
Probably feels better off your chest. Reminds me of something I heard...
October 7th, 2016 21:35 - The Outcast (Tony36)
Tony, Tony, Tony! My heart goes out to you man. Nice poetry.
October 7th, 2016 21:29 - alleviate (Stephanie Showers)
I think that when we read autobiographies written a thousand years ago,...
October 7th, 2016 21:24 - Honest Places. (Kevin browne)
As a young man I could drive from New Orleans to Florida and be able to...
October 7th, 2016 21:17 - Caged Dissonance (Augustus)
This is a coincidence. I just left a similar message on a poem you wrote....
October 7th, 2016 08:59 - Crisis (Whimsical_1)
I am no expert, but you poem reads effortlessly and beautifully. The...
October 7th, 2016 08:56 - Sympathy Card (WriteBeLight)
What a beautiful way to portray a dilemma many of us face, and all the...
October 7th, 2016 08:46 - A Nomad Known to the World (The New Cry Atlantic)
I believe you are describing a people pleaser, or at least that is the way...
October 7th, 2016 08:34 - Infidelity (Bookbag)
Some times life is strange and crazy. Thanks for sharing.
October 6th, 2016 21:31 - That Bridge Over Troubled Water. (Kevin browne)
Ain't that the truth!
October 6th, 2016 21:25 - Celestial Bodies (Notapoet)
Love can be so inspiring. "Super Nova" . Wow! Thanks.
October 6th, 2016 15:43 - hurricane (Avigail)
Just heard on the radio that there were a hundred deaths in Haiti. That...
October 6th, 2016 15:40 - Bridge Burning Down (Moontigerntn)
Burn baby. Burn!
October 6th, 2016 15:36 - Symbiotic Abound (Kurt Philip Behm)
Yes thoughts and feelings.
October 6th, 2016 15:34 - write (Tony36)
That might scare the heck out of some. Heh, heh.
October 6th, 2016 15:29 - Sand Dollar (WriteBeLight)
When you break them apart you have aa number of angels or doves for your...
October 6th, 2016 15:28 - I\'m Still In Love With You (Jeff)
Now a guy that likes Country music and writes like a song, what more could...
October 6th, 2016 15:22 - Octopus. (Kevin browne)
Fascinating creatures. They have inspired books and movies. Thanks.
October 5th, 2016 17:43 - BLACK HAZE (Stephanie Showers)
I bet you as tired of the platitudes from industry and government as I am....
October 5th, 2016 17:39 - All Faith Now Within (Kurt Philip Behm)
Oh Wow!
October 5th, 2016 17:34 - Mirror reflecting depression (Tinabean1212)
Reaching deeper is exactly what writing does. It is cathartic as well....
October 5th, 2016 17:28 - WHAT MAKES YOUR DAY ? (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Thanks for explaining the rhyme scheme. It has been > 50 years since I...
October 5th, 2016 17:17 - Happy Fear (Princesslay)
Nice portrait of trying to figure ourselves out, what we are about, what...
October 5th, 2016 09:14 - Seconds (WriteBeLight)
I think about the seconds in my life every time I use the microwave oven,...
October 5th, 2016 09:04 - Movement (Avigail)
This is so true for myself, especially of late. Thanks.
October 5th, 2016 07:48
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