Comments on community poems by Augustus

• Quintessence of freedom (Master Sora) It is almost like getting in touch with your inner child.
  September 13th, 2016 18:24
• Irony: Self-Destruct How to Watch Your Soul Die (More Medic) Diary of depression. Well done.
  September 13th, 2016 18:22
• Just A Thought (Jeff) Yes, embrace the hurt, pain and depression. Recognize these, feel them and...
  September 13th, 2016 18:17
• Mothers Milk (Just10) Your tribute to and description of innocence is so tender, yet profound....
  September 13th, 2016 18:11
• Non Awareness (Avigail) Your example of things that spread below our sensory radar wreaking havoc...
  September 13th, 2016 17:00
• Do you know what I wanted (Arevalolo) Ouch! Message received. Nice.
  September 13th, 2016 16:46
• He (FruitfulSpirit) Hallelujah! Hallelujah! Hal le a lu jah! Thanks.
  September 13th, 2016 16:43
• Do you even notice (Stephanie Showers) Lovely poem, but I did not get the suicide. I saw it as breaking a...
  September 13th, 2016 16:35
• The translucent bubble (Daniel dawes) Lovely.
  September 13th, 2016 16:26
• Blue Ribbon (Abpoet18) Lots of blue ribbons. Wishing you success.
  September 13th, 2016 16:25
• How to write a bad poem (Aa Harvey) You caught me. Darn! Enjoyed.
  September 13th, 2016 16:18
• The invitation. (Camille) "Continent to explore". This must be about Christopher Columbus or Marco...
  September 13th, 2016 16:15
• Breaking The Rules (Notapoet) Nice rhythmical flow.
  September 13th, 2016 16:07
• When I thought It Couldn\'t Get Any Worse (Petec) Been there. Yea, pain category.
  September 13th, 2016 16:05
• DECISIONS ~ DECISIONS ~ DECISIONS (BRIAN & ANGELA) For me I wanted someone with faith but not preachy. Has worked out well,...
  September 13th, 2016 16:01
• He is (Rebekahmoses) Keep soaring.
  September 13th, 2016 15:55
• Don\'t Breathe (Bookbag) I see it as finding and knowing yourself. You are not incomplete without...
  September 12th, 2016 21:42
• conflicting path (Caroline-o) Indecision sucks. I like wondering if 'certainty will spend the night.'
  September 12th, 2016 21:03
• Innocent (Lovedud) You've been played the sucker and you know it, and have yet to do anything...
  September 12th, 2016 20:56
• 6 Word Memoir (Lexy7448) I like the "touch melts", that weak kneed feeling, of a sensitive person....
  September 12th, 2016 20:40
• This is where I leave you (Stephanie Showers) Simply but elegantly stated.
  September 12th, 2016 20:30
• Forever and a Day (Moontigerntn) I am reminded of a song, "Our love is here to stay, not just a year, but...
  September 12th, 2016 20:27
• BARFLY (Giantgentlebear) I'm not sure I got the whole picture or not: Drinking one's self, drugging...
  September 12th, 2016 19:06
• A Poem with No Name (Ternic73) Tribute to fallen friend with some survivor guilt. Nicely done.
  September 12th, 2016 18:54
• 3 am (Quietstorm_Dru) A woman will do that. Moving! Thanks.
  September 12th, 2016 18:43
• I Found You (Jeff) You know I believe that tears of joy and pain actually are chemically...
  September 12th, 2016 18:41
• The Machine (Tony36) Power corrupts.
  September 12th, 2016 18:37
• Daydream (Ebbsmillz) Been there. It hurts. Nicely put.
  September 12th, 2016 18:32
• Anothers Wasted Dream (Kurt Philip Behm) Yea, like I made it. What's all the hype about. Deep inside was not what I...
  September 12th, 2016 18:29
• how do you turn 20% into 100%? (Avigail) Maybe it is a moot point to me. Things just came so easily, and I love...
  September 12th, 2016 18:22
• Jack Dog (Kerryjane) I loved the scruffy clothes, boots with holes and mud line. That was me in...
  September 12th, 2016 18:14
• Dry Bones (Abpoet18) I'm sensing you are on you knees talking to God or the universe, trying to...
  September 12th, 2016 18:08
• Scattered Mind (Master Sora) Enjoyed the alliteration.
  September 12th, 2016 17:52
• Dreaming of mercy (Reivax Camlost) Life is a struggle to stay afloat. Just before we fall asleep we meditate,...
  September 12th, 2016 17:48
• Thoughts Of You (Notapoet) Would love to be a recipient of such. Delicate, playful, pleasing and...
  September 12th, 2016 17:40
• FUSION POEMS ARE FUN ~ ACROSTIC (BRIAN & ANGELA) You're a kick in the head. Thanks for the invite.
  September 12th, 2016 16:09
• When We Met / Saying goodbye (Reivax Camlost) I guess it was the moment you look into someone's eyes and see devotion...
  September 12th, 2016 15:53
• When We Met / Saying goodbye (Reivax Camlost)
  September 12th, 2016 15:48
• Magical moments (Daniel dawes) Finding peace in the moment. It is beautiful when it happens. Very nice.
  September 12th, 2016 15:42
• Devil on my shoulder (Rebekahmoses) Nicely done. Writing has been a way for me to climb out of depression....
  September 12th, 2016 14:08
• Compression (Phoenixsky2020) "Faith is a bitch", I have heard, and especially so for those love lost....
  September 12th, 2016 13:50
• Imperfect Canvas (Onyxowl333) Gosh, this is good. Succinct but comprehensive. Alarming. Look forward to...
  September 12th, 2016 13:41
• Fragile perception and miscommunication (Avigail) This is a whole book of knowledge in a small space. I am very old and...
  September 11th, 2016 21:43
• If Only (Night_Owl) Your poem was full of imagery and powerful. No ridicule here, only...
  September 11th, 2016 21:28
• The Ladder (Onyxowl333) Can't say it any better than Briansodes.
  September 11th, 2016 21:14
• We Will Never Forget (Ternic73) Nice tribute.
  September 11th, 2016 21:10
• Turning Darkness To Light (Kurt Philip Behm) Honestly, I'd be lying, confused or in a fog if I told you that I did not...
  September 11th, 2016 21:07
• He/She. (Love poem, about a female or male.) (Pierce_The_Ky) People are so beautiful. Don't you just love looking and wish you could...
  September 11th, 2016 21:01
• Theatre of Darkness (Deadlyer) Neat. Painted a nice picture that was readily understood.
  September 11th, 2016 20:58
• Concerto De’ Amor (Notapoet) I like it.
  September 11th, 2016 20:56
• Summer (Lovedud) I think I got it. I'll tell you this much. I read it over and over 4...
  September 11th, 2016 20:53
• #153-Just Maybe (Mads) There's anger in sad. Nicely done.
  September 11th, 2016 20:46
• When We Met / Saying goodbye (Reivax Camlost) WOW! Out Of the park.
  September 11th, 2016 20:43
• Your Love O Lord (Tony36) Like the 'planets flying' and 'pur' into words.
  September 11th, 2016 09:19
• LIVING A GOOD LIFE (BRIAN & ANGELA) From an old Eagle Scout: Scouting brings back fond memories. Thanks for...
  September 11th, 2016 09:11
• Painful Memory (Jeff) Powerful. Reassured to see one of your replies today. Reads well.
  September 11th, 2016 09:06
• Metonymy (Augustus)
  September 11th, 2016 08:48
• Scars Upon My Body (Frances.Zacharias97) Deeply personal. Difficult to deal with. Nice job.
  September 10th, 2016 23:37
• Deaths Quota Flying High (Kurt Philip Behm) I take it many were not unhappy to see him go and the Raven took note....
  September 10th, 2016 20:43
• Earthquake (Izzi Lynn) You nailed it. If there are problems we can all decide to ignore them, sit...
  September 10th, 2016 20:27
• The theory of collective cells consciousness (Avigail) I take it you are aware of the science behind your proposition. For...
  September 10th, 2016 20:17
• The Evil In Us All (Jeff) Has a nice flow and rhythm. Very understandable. Portrays theme in depth...
  September 10th, 2016 19:14
• This world today (Quietstorm_Dru) Reminds me of Rap music. Consistent theme. Offers way to fix the problem...
  September 10th, 2016 19:08
• I Am Me Wholeheartedly (FruitfulSpirit) Could I be so confident. Enjoyed reading. (I am having a little bit of...
  September 10th, 2016 18:58
• The Hungry Id (Seeker) A serious read. I get a sense of spiraling deeper and deeper downward....
  September 10th, 2016 10:05
• coming Storm (Tony36) Painted a picture I could imagine.
  September 10th, 2016 08:19
• No Time For Transfiguration Today (Seeker) Sticks to a consistent theme Clever Easily read and...
  September 10th, 2016 08:15
• Love of My Life (Moontigerntn) I can relate. Nice.
  September 9th, 2016 20:15
• Therapy (Eli) Unrequited love? Wounded? Hope? Got me thinking. I enjoyed it. Oops, just...
  September 9th, 2016 20:09
• Us. (Pierce_The_Ky) Nice.
  September 9th, 2016 20:06
• Streets (Ternic73) I like the way you brought something to life that many of us ignore or...
  September 9th, 2016 20:04
• Life Is Full Of Lessons (Brooklyn6timesplus) Definitely brain food. Thanks.
  September 9th, 2016 19:59
• News experiment: (Avigail) I agree except I am eating Wheat Thins on a recliner and flip though it...
  September 9th, 2016 19:56
• Political Justice (Jondoe909) Caught my interest and share your pain. Thanks.
  September 9th, 2016 19:50
• Witches Brew (Notapoet) I enjoyed this a lot. My only comment is about the last line. The reader...
  September 9th, 2016 18:57
• Eternity (Lovedud) Wow!! Thoughts: Forever, eternally lonely? Eternally wounded, tortured? I...
  September 9th, 2016 18:41