Comments on community poems by Augustus
- “Purgatory” (Nodine40)
We are human and make mistakes. Hopefully we learn from them and...
September 27th, 2016 08:00 - G I R L OF MY D R E A M S (BRIAN & ANGELA)
"Brewers Droop", how clever! I admit I had to look up in Wikipedia about...
September 27th, 2016 07:53 - What Others See (Jayhawk51)
That is a tough battle. Keep up the fight and continue to write.
September 26th, 2016 20:34 - In the Hour of the Northern Mockingbird (Moontigerntn)
Yes, they sing borrowed songs.
I like this.
September 26th, 2016 20:27 - Let Your Words (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Tony36 said it better than I can.
September 26th, 2016 20:11 - Lost Friends (0ddity)
Like the crumb and numb line. Nice.
September 26th, 2016 20:10 - Jack-in-the-box. (Kevin browne)
Beware of false prophets.
Nicely done
September 26th, 2016 20:02 - A Waste (Jeff)
Not a waste with this poetry.
September 26th, 2016 19:53 - Medallion (LIGHT WARRIOR)
"Colors blended into my soul"
Nice line.
September 26th, 2016 18:58 - The moon is watching your sinful actions. (Samreen Chowdhury)
Such contrast: irresistible bliss and beauty to violent broken pieces....
September 26th, 2016 18:48 - I am..... (Camille)
You are one with the universe. Very nice.
September 26th, 2016 18:38 - Reflection (Nodine40)
A nice metaphor for how you felt and then feeling now.
September 26th, 2016 18:36 - A Dozen Roses (Tony36)
The object of this affection is very lucky.
September 26th, 2016 18:29 - 2016 (Doublelife1026)
Sometimes reality sucks. I remember as a child having so much pure...
September 26th, 2016 16:38 - Don\'t ! (Ses)
I like the not being able to move with the lead shoes. Welcome. Part of...
September 26th, 2016 16:32 - Glad (Abpoet18)
I read it as renouncing one way of life for a more virtuous one. Grabbed...
September 26th, 2016 16:27 - He cares for you (Nana Hayes)
Lovely message.
September 26th, 2016 16:19 - The man that had no skin (Avigail)
Mind--heart--spirit-->Universe.
Thanks for sharing.
September 26th, 2016 16:16 - Wishes Still To Pray (Kurt Philip Behm)
From me a pending desire
That you continue to inspire
Thanks for
September 26th, 2016 16:04 - Who would ever think i could feel this way? (Quietstorm_Dru)
I would say you are smitten. Nice.
September 26th, 2016 15:49 - Lost (ShadedSorrow)
When love is lost it is heart wrenching. Nice.
September 26th, 2016 15:46 - The princess Bride (Notapoet)
Like the surprise ending, from knight in shining armor to worse nightmare....
September 26th, 2016 15:44 - \"I Don\'t Do Love\" (Ominouspickle)
Sweet
September 26th, 2016 15:40 - A terrible lie (Daniel dawes)
So true.
September 26th, 2016 15:39 - Once upon a time (Aa Harvey)
It reminds me of oral history passed down through generations.
September 26th, 2016 15:38 - EAT WELL ~ LIVE LONG ~ A Rhyming Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Right on. Looks like you had fun with this one.
September 26th, 2016 15:34 - Avalon (Moontigerntn)
I bid thee safe journey Mistress of magic.
September 25th, 2016 21:15 - Distance (WALBERTO DIAZ)
Exploring feelings where many dare not go. Thanks for sharing.
September 25th, 2016 21:02 - Windows of your soul (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Heartfelt.
September 25th, 2016 15:49 - Burning embers (Notapoet)
They know this all too well in California . Nice.
September 25th, 2016 15:47 - Doubt (0ddity)
Wow.!
September 25th, 2016 15:44 - Lovers and friends (Quietstorm_Dru)
Love is not a passing fancy. Nice.
September 25th, 2016 15:41 - Life\'s Roller Coaster (Anthony Lawrence)
You said a lot in 6 short lines.
September 25th, 2016 15:38 - The Thread (Kurt Philip Behm)
What's that they say, "you are what you eat". Does the same hold true for...
September 25th, 2016 15:35 - I Wish (Jeff)
Jeff, you heartbreaker! Broken promises! All kidding aside, this is neat.
September 25th, 2016 15:29 - The Season of Our Love (Doll in Wonderland)
Charged with love.
September 25th, 2016 09:15 - Apple Orchard (Shahla Latifi)
Delightful.
September 25th, 2016 09:12 - I love growing spirals. (Avigail)
Wow! What can I say.
They're in our DNA.
September 25th, 2016 09:10 - Me to Myself (Rjhontz)
True
September 25th, 2016 09:04 - WALKING WITH YOUR GUARDIAN ANGEL (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A concept I welcomed as a child. I struggle with it now. Would I be so...
September 25th, 2016 08:55 - I am. (Untoldpain)
Love the contrast.
September 25th, 2016 08:46 - What keeps me going (Exoxooverdose)
All of the emotions that come with idolatry. What a neat concept to write...
September 25th, 2016 08:45 - Take That Risk (Brooklyn6timesplus)
All we need to do is reach a little higher. Nice.
September 24th, 2016 14:41 - Day Dream (Notapoet)
Touching the heartstrings. Nice.
September 24th, 2016 14:39 - Your Secret Admirer (FruitfulSpirit)
Admiring your poem.
September 24th, 2016 14:37 - Love, Not Hate. Peace, Not War (MrWilliams8717)
I've been thinking about this recently and realized that mankind has been...
September 24th, 2016 14:34 - worlds (Avigail)
May then we create or help to create our own hereafter?
September 24th, 2016 14:30 - Give Me Another Dose Pt.1 (Abpoet18)
I'll take another dose of your poetry anytime.
September 24th, 2016 14:25 - The Future Writhes (Kurt Philip Behm)
I agree. What happened to truth? "Truth is beauty". There is little hope...
September 24th, 2016 10:32 - Consumed (ShadedSorrow)
Hugs. Take care.
September 24th, 2016 10:25 - Exiting The High Road (WriteBeLight)
You tell 'em sister!
September 24th, 2016 10:22 - Float (LIGHT WARRIOR)
Enjoyed
September 24th, 2016 10:18 - Joy (Untoldpain)
Could children the world over be so welcomed into the world. Nice.
September 24th, 2016 09:39 - Freaking Out (Satishverma)
I would love if you would share your thoughts on crafting this poem. I am...
September 24th, 2016 09:34 - Where Do I Fit? (SonnyD)
All we can do is make decisions and learn from our mistakes. But I hear...
September 23rd, 2016 21:59 - Oh what to do (Mirrorman7)
Disagreement and argument ain't all bad. Nice write.
September 23rd, 2016 21:49 - A Million and One Hearts (Moontigerntn)
When that many hearts break it is like a thunder clap--- a rich...
September 23rd, 2016 21:46 - Left Me Falling (Felicityjones)
Glad that is in your past.
With hope this won't last.
Don't allow this...
September 23rd, 2016 21:37 - Always Encourage Others (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Guidance and encouragement ---powerful.
September 23rd, 2016 21:32 - Imagining. (Becboo3112)
When much younger I remember my knees weakening when this young woman...
September 23rd, 2016 21:28 - Daily Struggles (Jeff)
Another out of the park. Reading out loud initially I thought "demons I...
September 23rd, 2016 19:18 - Appreciation and gratefulness (Avigail)
Thanksgiving is next month. ----just teasing. Actually, my wife and I...
September 23rd, 2016 19:10 - The Dream (Tony36)
Used to have milk wars with my farm buddies as a youngster, aiming a teat...
September 23rd, 2016 18:44 - This Is A Quiet Solitary War (Augustus)
Just10: what a lovely response. I am touched. For a few days this poem...
September 23rd, 2016 11:31 - On My Own Terms (Kurt Philip Behm)
A rhythmic rhyme with substance. Leaves the reader puzzled and troubled.
September 23rd, 2016 11:24 - In Memory of a Man (KDymond)
Beauty in contrast.
September 23rd, 2016 11:18 - Ticking bomb (0ddity)
Healing takes a long time. Take care. Enjoyed.
September 23rd, 2016 11:16 - Masks (Randi)
Chameleon. Been one my whole life. It is totally dishonest to yourself and...
September 23rd, 2016 11:12 - Digging In (Ternic73)
Follow the money.
Nice
September 23rd, 2016 11:09 - Proofread Before Sending (WriteBeLight)
Oh yes. Mine alternates between Spanish and English, so I have to be real...
September 23rd, 2016 08:27 - The dawning of the day (Reivax Camlost)
Light, darkness and color. Nicely done.
September 23rd, 2016 08:24 - It was me (Untoldpain)
A very special friend. Nicely done.
September 23rd, 2016 08:20 - My Simple Thank You (Rosethebrokenhearted)
Music can be very moving. You illustrate that on a level that elevates...
September 23rd, 2016 08:17 - Three seconds (TElliott)
Yes, very sad. Take care.
September 23rd, 2016 08:06 - Justice (Bay Wright)
Nicely done.
September 23rd, 2016 08:04 - Don\'t Rush (Ungodly79)
Nice
September 23rd, 2016 07:54 - A WEEKNESS FOR LOVE (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Sick puppy days.
September 23rd, 2016 07:52 - Pragmatic analogies (Avigail)
Analogy: learning something cool every day and Avigail's poetry.
September 22nd, 2016 22:06 - Bullied.. (The Dyslexic Poet)
Some neat metaphors.
September 22nd, 2016 21:54 - Your Burdens (SheWasTheSun)
I can interpret this several ways. It could represent looking in a mirror...
September 22nd, 2016 21:50 - A candle in the night, a warming fire (Reivax Camlost)
You are lighting more than candles with this excellent poem.
September 22nd, 2016 21:38 - Search For A Hero. (Kevin browne)
Heart felt. Enjoyed.
September 22nd, 2016 21:35 - Family (TheEndoftheWorld79)
Nice tribute
September 22nd, 2016 21:33 - Chill Pill (Jemina)
September 22nd, 2016 15:57 - Chill Pill (Jemina)
"Cloud as my skateboard" Neat!
September 22nd, 2016 15:57 - Can i have your heart? (Quietstorm_Dru)
After that I don't believe a girl could say no.
September 22nd, 2016 15:54 - Endless wonder (0ddity)
I like this. Can you shed a little light on "spark a clip"?
September 22nd, 2016 15:52 - A Mothers loss.. (AlitaOpal)
Few are aware how important it is for a mom to see and hold her baby, even...
September 22nd, 2016 15:48 - You (Poetryfornow)
I liked the line about the world's spin. Thanks.
September 22nd, 2016 15:38 - The Fighter 2 (Tony36)
Tough woman. Lucky to be alive. Thanks for sharing.
September 22nd, 2016 15:33 - Single tree (Daniel dawes)
I wonder about stuff like that at times. Man lives for 50-100 years and...
September 22nd, 2016 15:29 - To Live Or To Die (Kurt Philip Behm)
And every poem
Words that inspire.
Thanks for sharing.
September 22nd, 2016 15:22 - Gone; Lost; Free (DeathInGrey)
Sometimes, more than the heart can take.
September 22nd, 2016 15:12 - Doubt Gave Me Power (Felicityjones)
Truly a force to be reckoned with.
September 22nd, 2016 10:09 - Say What\'s On Your Mind (Abpoet18)
I like the line about learning from everything. Many of us don't learn....
September 22nd, 2016 10:06 - Art Reflecting Life (Notapoet)
An unscheduled showing = flashback. Nicely done.
September 22nd, 2016 10:02 - Even Keeled (WriteBeLight)
What a message and presentation. Serves as how to parent effectively and...
September 22nd, 2016 09:59 - C O A S T A L E R O S I O N in Great Britain. (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I live in Louisiana USA. Been dealing with it for years. Problem here is...
September 22nd, 2016 09:46 - True Lies II (Jeff)
All that from that little bird. Nice job.
September 22nd, 2016 09:42 - Storm Within (DeathInGrey)
A lot of hurt. "At the end of the storm is a golden sky."
September 21st, 2016 18:52
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