Comments received on poems by Gary Edward Geraci



Don’t Read GQ!
onepauly said:

nice try.


April 28th, 2018 09:06

Promethean Neopelagian
orchidee said:

Also, a standing through Communion (if able - our service book says), can be reverential. But in another ways it conveys impatience I think. Are we all waiting to run out the door at the end, and not bothering to sit down and wait a while?

April 24th, 2018 03:41

Promethean Neopelagian
orchidee said:

Doh! I\'ve come acrossa few people - so busy genuflecting, bowing, crossing themselves, they look like they\'re doing some mime show or something. They will be all worn out before the service has hardly started. Maybe it\'s their physical exercise for the day!
Sat next to someone one day in church. he went into over-drive with the above things!
I\'ve never really felt led to cross myself, so I suppose I\'m not going to start now. Can be meaningful, but folk are not more super-spiritual if they do it.

April 24th, 2018 03:39

Promethean Neopelagian
Nicholas Browning said:

The world keeps spinning. Until the fire comes.

April 23rd, 2018 22:46

Promethean Neopelagian
onepauly said:

all we can do is push forward. it keeps going on no matter what.

April 23rd, 2018 22:00

The Triolet Within
dusk arising said:

Such a shame christians kill and maim each other with their weapons of destruction. Brotherly love indeed!

April 21st, 2018 12:38

The Triolet Within
orchidee said:

\'Tis true. Not only with us, but within us. A person can\'t get any closer than that!

April 21st, 2018 10:20

The Triolet Within
Laura🌻 said:

Gary,
A beautiful writing!
Thank you for sharing!

~Laura~

April 21st, 2018 09:01

Transpersonal Temporalities
orchidee said:

Are you watching telly? There\'s not a lot on 99% of the time. You going to try watching some paint dry too?! lol.

April 19th, 2018 02:05

Pantoum of The Maid of Orléans (La Pucelle d’Orléans)
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

If it\'s against any tyranny really then I\'m with u with your powerful poem of support for your coalition. Atleast the poem is awesomely worded. Liked the mention of the Joan of arc. Kudos.

Nice to read from u again, glad to say hi and Pleez do review, give your thoughts as to my newest poem too.

April 17th, 2018 09:33

Pantoum of The Maid of Orléans (La Pucelle d’Orléans)
orchidee said:

A good write as a poem Gary. I\'m treading carefully with commenting on the them of it though. Erm, in fact I\'ve not made any personal comment on it at all really. But of course this monstrous evil cannot be condoned.

April 14th, 2018 13:57

Regarding Mankind...
onepauly said:

something always

April 12th, 2018 03:26

Regarding Mankind...
orchidee said:

A fine write Gary.

April 12th, 2018 01:43

Sweetest Smile
orchidee said:

A fine write Gary.

April 8th, 2018 01:37

Have Pity on Us
Gary Edward Geraci said:

There’s a spark of God’s image (and it follows for us Trinitarian Christians, of Jesus Christ) in every human being that has ever walked the face of this earth; whether openly admited or not. I read in a similar article how Rev. Graham consulted with JPII regarding the many Catholics whom would attend his Crusades; how to speak to them regarding his famous “altar calls.” It all worked out for the better I think and what followed is more like what Jesus Christ prays for in John 17. My wife and I loved watching the portrayal of the young Rev. Graham meeting the young Queen Elizabeth in the Netflix original series: The Crown.

April 7th, 2018 08:32

Have Pity on Us
orchidee said:

A fine write Gary. I know what you mean. The next Sunday is sometimes called Low Sunday - people disappear from church after Easter. well, some anyway!
Arrggh, a bit of an ominous name for a Sunday - pews deserted?! If ya have pews, that is.

April 1st, 2018 08:05

The Cult of the Old
orchidee said:

A fine write Gary. yet the new is far better! Do they still put out Gideon Bibles these days - in the drawers or on tables in hotel rooms? I have one which had its 48th anniversary recently! Given New Testament in school days. It got lost, then found again!

April 1st, 2018 02:09

The Cult of the Old
Laura🌻 said:

Gary,
A beautiful relatable write!
I’d also like to wish you and your family a happy and reflective Holy Saturday!
Thank you for sharing!

~Laura~

March 31st, 2018 15:17

Inferno Cafe
Laura🌻 said:

Seeing Lucas’ smile,
melts my heart!
Thank you for sharing, Gary!

~Laura~

March 17th, 2018 09:26

Inferno Cafe
orchidee said:

We might \'rubbish\' ourselves, and even \'rubbish\' God, if we fall into some temptation of :\'God\'s let you down now\' or \'I am worthless\' etc.
Our chile con queso wouldn\'t be worth dipping into apart from Christ. We\'re made \'good enough\' in Him, thankfully.

March 17th, 2018 02:56

Inferno Cafe
orchidee said:

A fine write Gary, thoughtfully linking the themes. You know me - no transubstantiation, but the Communion still having the same value and worth.
On a lighter note - what rhymes with transub.......?!

March 17th, 2018 02:54

“To Speak of Joy That Is in Marriage”
orchidee said:

A fine write Gary. You know, I expect, I would adjust it - to maybe a plaque from an Archbishop (Church of England / Protestant)?

March 10th, 2018 12:39

Social Media Platforms for the Abstract and Beautiful
Gary Edward Geraci said:

Thank you Orchidee. How would we survive without our Tweets and Texts?

March 5th, 2018 14:17

Dying
poelove said:

The age of faith will be the golden age truly what need for hope if one has faith? only to hope that others find faith....I have enjoyed your poetry Gary and invite you to read a poem of mine called Deeding Calvary\' not necessarily for my own vanity but mostly because I think you might enjoy the biblical aspect as you have obviously studied..PEACE

March 5th, 2018 07:49

Fake Bananas
poelove said:

Nothing new under the sun..All is vanity. in the age of online access and short attention span why be surprised that everyone thinks they have an original thought with mostly angst driven drivel and their need to be recognized. All while not commenting on other sight poetry...people-- commenting on poetry is one a good way to absorb learn the craft...

March 5th, 2018 07:37

Parsed Bits and Bytes
poelove said:

wonderful words\"
Parsed bits and Bytes
loved it

March 5th, 2018 07:03

I Begin
poelove said:

the greatest story tell what He has done ...Begin I to read

March 5th, 2018 07:00

Raised
poelove said:

I really enjoyed this powerful poem. Indeed a poem of love. My own favorite poems are derived from my religious studies they seem to offer(for myself) a sense of otherworldly peace through my own understanding

March 5th, 2018 06:57

Social Media Platforms for the Abstract and Beautiful
orchidee said:

A gr8 wright Gary. Oops I been texting too much! lol.

March 5th, 2018 02:59

Raised
orchidee said:

A fine write Gary. Though I differ, having always been at churches where the host is not seen as transubstantiated. In my hymn-poems on this theme I often point out that it\'s symbolic, for me anyway (my Protestant leaning).

March 3rd, 2018 13:36



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