Comments received on poems by Gary Edward Geraci



Three Times Fallen
orchidee said:

A \'lovely\' write in a way Gary. Well, in the sense that we benefit from Christ\'s Passion. The Presentaion of Christ in the Temple/Candelmas is Feb 2nd. Do you observe it in R.C. Church? The aged Simeon said to Mary then \'And a sword will pierce your own soul also\' - the suffering she would experience, as here.
Meanwhile - them wooden pews will catch alight one day, with all those candles! Candlelight Services are hazardous too.


January 26th, 2019 12:39

High Face Crimes
orchidee said:

A fine write Gary. I\'m sure it didn\'t mean going to extremes - \'If one smites you on the right cheek, offer him the left cheek also\' but Christ didn\'t add \'And let him give you a good beating too!\' doh!

January 26th, 2019 03:37

The Cold Hard Truth
orchidee said:

A fine write Gary.

January 23rd, 2019 11:32

Anaphora
Fay Slimm. said:

Clever haiku and so very true. Thanks for posting it Gary.

January 23rd, 2019 04:07

Anaphora
orchidee said:

A fine write Gary, as I try to unravel it. I lost the plot, and ended up with stone jars - amphora! lol.

January 23rd, 2019 03:02

Anaphora
kevin browne said:

The holy spirit in prayer to bless the communicants. Very interesting Gary Edward Geraci. Took me some working out, but I think I arrived, A rare bit of knowledge to me. I have now learnt my blessing too. love the word and meaning of Anaphora now that I understand. Usd in poetry quite a lot apparently.

January 22nd, 2019 23:22

Anaphora
psychofemale said:

interesting haiku :)

January 22nd, 2019 23:11

Stable City Skylines
Gary Edward Geraci said:

Thanks Orchidee! We’re old only in body correct? Spiritually - we’re just boys - children looking for ever new experiences with all the rest of our mates (other boys and girls).

January 19th, 2019 22:19

Would They Lock Me Up?
Gary Edward Geraci said:

😂😂😂😂 Thanks for that Orchidee!

January 19th, 2019 22:14

Bearded Gospel Men
Gary Edward Geraci said:

Thank you Orchidee and Psychofemale for your read and comments.

January 19th, 2019 22:08

Towel Boy
Gary Edward Geraci said:

Thanks Neville for your read and perspective.

January 19th, 2019 22:06

Stable City Skylines
orchidee said:

A fine write Gary.
You very old too, like I am?
The answer to the Bible verse is: \'I woz there with you\' (improbably! lol).

January 19th, 2019 13:23

Would They Lock Me Up?
orchidee said:

A fine write Gary. I was going to do a poem of similar title, relating to me singing (was I? lol). Erm, the answer would be \'Yes\'. Aww, why they lock me up in a sound-proof room? I was only trying to sing! lol

January 19th, 2019 03:11

Immaculate Heart of Mary
orchidee said:

A fine write Gary. I suppose I differ somewhat with my Protestant background.
I\'m uneasy about \'Prayers to Mary\' tacked on to the end of some High-Church Anglo-Catholic services.

January 16th, 2019 03:07

Bearded Gospel Men
psychofemale said:

nice haiku :)

January 14th, 2019 21:48

Bearded Gospel Men
orchidee said:

A fine write Gary.

January 14th, 2019 13:29

Towel Boy
Neville said:

restraining someone else is rarely justifiable .. restraining oneself, is often so.. .. I like crimson but only when it\'s justified... an intriguing write and certainly enjoyed... N

January 14th, 2019 00:16

Their Witness His
Gary Edward Geraci said:

Thank you Orchidee!

January 13th, 2019 18:02

Their Witness His
orchidee said:

Ooh mentations. Ahh, mental thoughts. No wonder I don\'t have many - me head\'s empty! heehee.
Yes, a fine write Gary.

January 13th, 2019 13:28

if you but take a bite of this forbidden fruit...
Neville said:

shh say it quietly, or the disciples shall hear....

tis a fact, I kinda liked this tho.... N

January 13th, 2019 05:37

if you but take a bite of this forbidden fruit...
orchidee said:

A fine write Gary. We don\'t know if it was an apple. Many say it was!

January 13th, 2019 03:25

Towel Boy
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

What a great reply from a son who experienced the torment. Sometimes it is necessary to enlighten relatives, as to the pain we suffered, because of their thoughtless actions.

Great job!

January 10th, 2019 12:29

World Religions
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

A great haiku, Gary and it definitely trumpets the truth.

Thanks for posting! :-)

January 10th, 2019 12:23

World Religions
orchidee said:

A fine write Gary. Though I could get controversial. By \'religion\' I don\'t mean Catholic, Protestant, or other Christian \'branches\' or denominations.
But then again, \'religion\' is often the problem, even the cause of some wars and other troubles.

January 9th, 2019 15:15

World Religions
Aislinn Wilson said:

So very true. Wonderful


January 9th, 2019 13:40

Towel Boy
orchidee said:

Wrapped in cotton wool, as they say? \'Smothered\'? Not literally!

January 8th, 2019 08:48

Kerygma
orchidee said:

A fine and true write Gary. I spent ages, as one author\'s favourite word, it seemed, was kerygma. Had to look it up. Shall we kerygmatise instead of evangelise? Or is kerygma specifically related to PREACHING the Gospel?
A joke says - Who is Kerygma? I don\'t know the guy - or gal! I\'ll shut up now. lol.

January 7th, 2019 07:51

The Scandal of the Lights
orchidee said:

A fine write Gary. Yes, \'ordinary\' time now, aptly named. Yet the star-light shone at the Epiphany for the wise men/Magi.
Are we wise men/women?! heehee.

January 6th, 2019 03:09

The Scandal of the Lights
psychofemale said:

This was beautiful :)

January 5th, 2019 13:39

“Nuclear Cell of Society”
orchidee said:

A fine write Gary.

January 4th, 2019 02:38



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