Comments received on poems by Gary Edward Geraci




“To Every Human Being Whom Ever Lived Or Will Live Even If For Only A Few Seconds”
dusk arising said:

Love in the mind which strives for purity. No sin or scandal here.

October 13th, 2018 07:54


Norma (Shadorma)
orchidee said:

A lovely write Gary. Not to criticise \'modern\' worship, but one does not hear words like \'sacramental\' much in such places. Some don\'t even know what a hymn book is! It\'s a special event and gasps of surprise if an actual hymn is sung amid the \'choruses\'.
I was miffed at one harvest service - not one traditional hymn. Then at another service we got our tractor out and did ploughing of them fields!

October 10th, 2018 01:52

Norma (Shadorma)
Goldfinch60 said:

A strong write Edward and her strength built up in her younger years made her into the woman of freedom she became.

October 10th, 2018 00:20

Mattress Sale
orchidee said:

A fine write Gary.

September 29th, 2018 10:31

Blown Away
orchidee said:

Erm, I suppose some us do jump up and down, in more expressive styles of worship. I\'m of quiet personality, and my 18+ watchdog, Fido, (in a recent poem) keeps me from too much \'excitement\'! heehee.

September 23rd, 2018 01:30

This Binding Cocoon
orchidee said:

New word there? Befret? In your comment. Ooh! Sounds like a word of ye olden days. A fine write Gary.

September 21st, 2018 09:44

Silk Cocoons
orchidee said:

A fine Tanka Gary. Oh lol, I snigger. Many put \'loose\' when it should be \'lose\', e.g. when did you loose your hat?\'
Also a huge sigh by a shop says \'Stationary for sale!\' heehee.

September 20th, 2018 11:20

Large Mirror in the Hall
orchidee said:

You dropped that mirror? Seven years bad luck? Depends if we believe in \'luck\' or not. I don\'t, so I\'m going round breaking mirrors! lol.

September 16th, 2018 01:28

Large Mirror in the Hall
orchidee said:

A fine write Gary.

September 15th, 2018 13:01

Nasty Nihilism
orchidee said:

A fine write Gary. I thought I read you more than 100 times - more like 1,000?! All good stuff, of course! heehee.

September 14th, 2018 01:35

In the Beginning
Goldfinch60 said:

\'Man\' was, is and will be the problem in God\'s world, if only \'Man\' could see the light all would be well.

September 9th, 2018 01:31

In the Beginning
onepauly said:

to me,
the word subdue
feels ominous.

September 9th, 2018 00:24

In the Beginning
Crystal Hope said:

very nicely done and said.

September 8th, 2018 19:54

In the Beginning
orchidee said:

A good write Gary.
Do you know the aprocryphal story - bit spurious, written by me - of another darkness over the world? It started the day I began to sing! heehee.

September 8th, 2018 14:23

Love for Love
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

A great eloquent poem written brilliantly. I agree with the conviction here. Kudos.


So nice to read from your ink again, Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too.

September 6th, 2018 06:29

Love for Love
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Gary. Unaccustomed as I am to the Miserentissimus, being Protestant-leaning! But I don\'t insist on being known by any denomination name. In fact, I hardly bother about it.

September 2nd, 2018 01:18

Love for Love
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, He will always feel it.

September 2nd, 2018 00:53

Love for Love
Gary Edward Geraci said:

For the crimes of the clergy, bishops, priests, and lay ministers in abusing parishioners and seminarians. Lord feel our broken hearts...

September 1st, 2018 16:22

Thy Kingdom Come
orchidee said:

One way to get round saying \'oldies\'?! But a good write Gary.
of course, I\'ve maintained I\'m millions of years old, so I\'m super-glorified now! Sshh - it\'s so no-one guesses my real age. Oh vanity! lol.

August 25th, 2018 01:24

Is it I?
orchidee said:

A deep and thoughtful write Gary. And yet we\'re \'saints\' (we\'re being sanctified), forgiven sinners! Of course, no-one\'s perfect; only me (lol)! Now I\'m imperfect, having said that. Doh!


August 19th, 2018 01:32

The Ballade of Three Sisters
Gary Edward Geraci said:

Thank you Unsub for your read and comment!

August 10th, 2018 22:24

“Called to the Peripheries”
orchidee said:

Well, the rich are \'gaining the whole world but losing their own soul\'. A bit like my poem today - chosen before I read yours here!

August 10th, 2018 02:14

LUCKLESS LUCIFER LOSES THAT SEAT AT YOUR TABLE
orchidee said:

A fine write Gary. Yet I\'m on a \'hobby-horse\' with \'luck\', not really believing in it.
Ever since I heard a talk saying \'luck\' derives from \'LUCifer\'.
Of course, it doesn\'t apply to names, such as Luke!
Any connection with \'He who sits at the table with the devil should sup with a long spoon?\'


August 9th, 2018 01:43

The Ballade of Three Sisters
Gary Edward Geraci said:

Thank you Orchidee!

August 5th, 2018 14:39

The Ballade of Three Sisters
orchidee said:

A fine write Gary.

August 5th, 2018 01:28

Rusty’s Comminutor
orchidee said:

Someone\'s got to do it, I suppose. Then we may add \'Just don\'t let it be me!\'

July 28th, 2018 13:13

The Civility of Uncivil Speech
orchidee said:

A fine write Gary. Similar to centuries ago - one of the Antiochus kings persecuted the Jews. Then Hitler in 20th Century. Both came to ghastly ends.
To be \'hellfire and brimstone\' - are the fires and torments of hell stoked even hotter for some monsters? Unless they repented?

July 24th, 2018 01:31

These Names of Two (Barzelletta)
Laura🌻 said:

Gary,

A very interesting and informative BARZELLETTA!
I’m curious to know why this write is a barzelletta?

~Laura~


July 21st, 2018 15:55



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