Comments received on poems by Louis Gibbs
WE ALL ARE CAPTIVES
FredPeyer said:
Incredible poem Louis! And writing sets us free!
August 2nd, 2017 10:35
FredPeyer said:
Incredible poem Louis! And writing sets us free!
August 2nd, 2017 10:35
WE ALL ARE CAPTIVES
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS LOUIS ~ Our Body is temporal of the Earth ~ Our Spirit is eternal of the Spiritual Realm. I accept that for my sojourn on Planet Earth I must have a Human Shell (Body) to blend in ! To be part of a Family etc I am clothed in my Earthly Parents DNA which makes me a White (pink actually) Anglo-Saxon born & raised in Liverpool. Had i been assigned to the Planet ZOZ my Spirit would have worn a different Body ! When i move to my next Dimension ~ My Spirit will be the same but my body transformed to accommodate (fit in). I am enjoying my time on planet Earth but often I long to be extracorperial ! Yours BRIAN
August 2nd, 2017 09:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS LOUIS ~ Our Body is temporal of the Earth ~ Our Spirit is eternal of the Spiritual Realm. I accept that for my sojourn on Planet Earth I must have a Human Shell (Body) to blend in ! To be part of a Family etc I am clothed in my Earthly Parents DNA which makes me a White (pink actually) Anglo-Saxon born & raised in Liverpool. Had i been assigned to the Planet ZOZ my Spirit would have worn a different Body ! When i move to my next Dimension ~ My Spirit will be the same but my body transformed to accommodate (fit in). I am enjoying my time on planet Earth but often I long to be extracorperial ! Yours BRIAN
August 2nd, 2017 09:59
WE ALL ARE CAPTIVES
malubotelho said:
A nice reflection about life. We are not our body or our mind. Still we need to feel gratitude for our body is the vehicle that serve us porpoise here.
August 2nd, 2017 08:39
malubotelho said:
A nice reflection about life. We are not our body or our mind. Still we need to feel gratitude for our body is the vehicle that serve us porpoise here.
August 2nd, 2017 08:39
WE ALL ARE CAPTIVES
Goldfinch60 said:
Can we ever escape from consciousness? Maybe our writing is the way out. Good write.
August 2nd, 2017 08:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Can we ever escape from consciousness? Maybe our writing is the way out. Good write.
August 2nd, 2017 08:19
WE ALL ARE CAPTIVES
Fay Slimm. said:
A truth wrapped in poetry - I agree with Michael a belter for sure - - great read Louis.
August 2nd, 2017 08:17
Fay Slimm. said:
A truth wrapped in poetry - I agree with Michael a belter for sure - - great read Louis.
August 2nd, 2017 08:17
WE ALL ARE CAPTIVES
orchidee said:
Hmm, I\'ve heard it described in reverse. Our consciousness, and so our soul and spirit, \'captive\' within our human body as the \'shell\'. A fine write Louis.
August 2nd, 2017 07:28
orchidee said:
Hmm, I\'ve heard it described in reverse. Our consciousness, and so our soul and spirit, \'captive\' within our human body as the \'shell\'. A fine write Louis.
August 2nd, 2017 07:28
AUGUSTUS
Christina8 said:
Great poem. Augustus is a great man and a fine poet. Hope we hear something soon!
August 1st, 2017 18:03
Christina8 said:
Great poem. Augustus is a great man and a fine poet. Hope we hear something soon!
August 1st, 2017 18:03
AUGUSTUS
Fay Slimm. said:
Augustus and his verses have been much missed and do hope this fine poem and loving comments will be able to help him to battle on.
August 1st, 2017 16:38
Fay Slimm. said:
Augustus and his verses have been much missed and do hope this fine poem and loving comments will be able to help him to battle on.
August 1st, 2017 16:38
AUGUSTUS
FredPeyer said:
Don\'t know. And yes, you could replace the word \'soldier\' with the word \'bard\'.
August 1st, 2017 11:24
FredPeyer said:
Don\'t know. And yes, you could replace the word \'soldier\' with the word \'bard\'.
August 1st, 2017 11:24
AUGUSTUS
Heather T said:
Hoping everyone will hear something soon. Holding him in my thoughts.
August 1st, 2017 08:12
Heather T said:
Hoping everyone will hear something soon. Holding him in my thoughts.
August 1st, 2017 08:12
AUGUSTUS
Goldfinch60 said:
He does on occasion miss a few days but I do hope he is ok.
August 1st, 2017 07:58
Goldfinch60 said:
He does on occasion miss a few days but I do hope he is ok.
August 1st, 2017 07:58
AUGUSTUS
WriteBeLight said:
I do not know. He is a tough one. I think of him always. Thanks for posting this :)
August 1st, 2017 07:56
WriteBeLight said:
I do not know. He is a tough one. I think of him always. Thanks for posting this :)
August 1st, 2017 07:56
POISON FRUIT
FredPeyer said:
You hit the nail on the head with this beautifully written poem.
July 31st, 2017 12:39
FredPeyer said:
You hit the nail on the head with this beautifully written poem.
July 31st, 2017 12:39
POISON FRUIT
malubotelho said:
I too, believe in reincarnation and wonder and get sad thinking how stupid we are not to use our time now to make the planet better and not worse. The subject is too long to speak of here but I believe the only way to change the planet is changing the humanity. The change needs to begin inside each one of us. One first organize inside the house and after the land that surrounds it. How can we change the world if we can not change ourselves? Very sad beautiful poem.
July 31st, 2017 11:59
malubotelho said:
I too, believe in reincarnation and wonder and get sad thinking how stupid we are not to use our time now to make the planet better and not worse. The subject is too long to speak of here but I believe the only way to change the planet is changing the humanity. The change needs to begin inside each one of us. One first organize inside the house and after the land that surrounds it. How can we change the world if we can not change ourselves? Very sad beautiful poem.
July 31st, 2017 11:59
POISON FRUIT
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s scary - in a way I\'m grateful I belong to my current generation.
July 31st, 2017 10:23
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s scary - in a way I\'m grateful I belong to my current generation.
July 31st, 2017 10:23
POISON FRUIT
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Louis, we are destroying our planet and nobody who has the power to do anything about it listens.
July 31st, 2017 08:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Louis, we are destroying our planet and nobody who has the power to do anything about it listens.
July 31st, 2017 08:27
FINAL CURTAIN
Poetic Dan said:
I repeat to my self to be brave it all but a stage and try to remember that I can change at any point. Just that changes can sometimes mean letting go on people who think it\'s impossible, once they are gone the new costume can be put on in the blink if an eye!
Brilliant work
July 28th, 2017 16:27
Poetic Dan said:
I repeat to my self to be brave it all but a stage and try to remember that I can change at any point. Just that changes can sometimes mean letting go on people who think it\'s impossible, once they are gone the new costume can be put on in the blink if an eye!
Brilliant work
July 28th, 2017 16:27
FINAL CURTAIN
Fay Slimm. said:
The ongoing saga of continuation wrapped in a poetic nutshell - love this one Louis.
July 28th, 2017 16:21
Fay Slimm. said:
The ongoing saga of continuation wrapped in a poetic nutshell - love this one Louis.
July 28th, 2017 16:21
FINAL CURTAIN
FredPeyer said:
Your poem blew me away. You say so much with so few words. The last stanza is what life is all about, what we unconsciously, unknowingly do all the time. Love it!
July 28th, 2017 13:25
FredPeyer said:
Your poem blew me away. You say so much with so few words. The last stanza is what life is all about, what we unconsciously, unknowingly do all the time. Love it!
July 28th, 2017 13:25
FINAL CURTAIN
orchidee said:
Erm, yes - like Outback says. Erm, maybe. I\'m bamboozled by it! I blow a fuse in me brain-box trying to understand!
A fine write, though I don\'t subscribe to the world-stage thingy much myself.
July 28th, 2017 08:30
orchidee said:
Erm, yes - like Outback says. Erm, maybe. I\'m bamboozled by it! I blow a fuse in me brain-box trying to understand!
A fine write, though I don\'t subscribe to the world-stage thingy much myself.
July 28th, 2017 08:30
FINAL CURTAIN
Goldfinch60 said:
We are all actors in the play of life and we wear different make up for different situations. Good write.
July 28th, 2017 08:19
Goldfinch60 said:
We are all actors in the play of life and we wear different make up for different situations. Good write.
July 28th, 2017 08:19
DREAM THEATER
Goldfinch60 said:
All the world is certainly a stage and this write should be shouted from it.
July 27th, 2017 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
All the world is certainly a stage and this write should be shouted from it.
July 27th, 2017 01:26
DREAM THEATER
Poetic Dan said:
O That it is and I\'m playing at my best. I changed my environment(stage) away from drama. It\'s just a musical filled with the magic of nature.
Great work
July 26th, 2017 18:10
Poetic Dan said:
O That it is and I\'m playing at my best. I changed my environment(stage) away from drama. It\'s just a musical filled with the magic of nature.
Great work
July 26th, 2017 18:10
DREAM THEATER
Heather T said:
It is a grand production, but I hope I am living my most authentic self as best I can. Great poem, Louis. I think I\'m just a pilgrim passing through.
July 26th, 2017 15:28
Heather T said:
It is a grand production, but I hope I am living my most authentic self as best I can. Great poem, Louis. I think I\'m just a pilgrim passing through.
July 26th, 2017 15:28
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