Comments received on poems by Louis Gibbs



AUGUSTUS
FredPeyer said:

Don\'t know. And yes, you could replace the word \'soldier\' with the word \'bard\'.

August 1st, 2017 11:24

AUGUSTUS
Heather T said:

Hoping everyone will hear something soon. Holding him in my thoughts.

August 1st, 2017 08:12

AUGUSTUS
Goldfinch60 said:

He does on occasion miss a few days but I do hope he is ok.

August 1st, 2017 07:58

AUGUSTUS
WriteBeLight said:

I do not know. He is a tough one. I think of him always. Thanks for posting this :)

August 1st, 2017 07:56

POISON FRUIT
Heather T said:

A spill to give us all pause. Good work, Louis.

July 31st, 2017 20:28

POISON FRUIT
FredPeyer said:

You hit the nail on the head with this beautifully written poem.

July 31st, 2017 12:39

POISON FRUIT
malubotelho said:

I too, believe in reincarnation and wonder and get sad thinking how stupid we are not to use our time now to make the planet better and not worse. The subject is too long to speak of here but I believe the only way to change the planet is changing the humanity. The change needs to begin inside each one of us. One first organize inside the house and after the land that surrounds it. How can we change the world if we can not change ourselves? Very sad beautiful poem.

July 31st, 2017 11:59

POISON FRUIT
Michael Edwards said:

It\'s scary - in a way I\'m grateful I belong to my current generation.

July 31st, 2017 10:23

POISON FRUIT
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true Louis, we are destroying our planet and nobody who has the power to do anything about it listens.

July 31st, 2017 08:27

FINAL CURTAIN
P.H.Rose said:

Love this Louis

July 28th, 2017 16:57

FINAL CURTAIN
Poetic Dan said:

I repeat to my self to be brave it all but a stage and try to remember that I can change at any point. Just that changes can sometimes mean letting go on people who think it\'s impossible, once they are gone the new costume can be put on in the blink if an eye!

Brilliant work

July 28th, 2017 16:27

FINAL CURTAIN
Fay Slimm. said:

The ongoing saga of continuation wrapped in a poetic nutshell - love this one Louis.

July 28th, 2017 16:21

FINAL CURTAIN
FredPeyer said:

Your poem blew me away. You say so much with so few words. The last stanza is what life is all about, what we unconsciously, unknowingly do all the time. Love it!

July 28th, 2017 13:25

FINAL CURTAIN
Michael Edwards said:

Beautiful rounded piece - great work.

July 28th, 2017 11:53

FINAL CURTAIN
orchidee said:

Erm, yes - like Outback says. Erm, maybe. I\'m bamboozled by it! I blow a fuse in me brain-box trying to understand!
A fine write, though I don\'t subscribe to the world-stage thingy much myself.

July 28th, 2017 08:30

FINAL CURTAIN
Goldfinch60 said:

We are all actors in the play of life and we wear different make up for different situations. Good write.

July 28th, 2017 08:19

DREAM THEATER
Goldfinch60 said:

All the world is certainly a stage and this write should be shouted from it.

July 27th, 2017 01:26

DREAM THEATER
Poetic Dan said:

O That it is and I\'m playing at my best. I changed my environment(stage) away from drama. It\'s just a musical filled with the magic of nature.

Great work

July 26th, 2017 18:10

DREAM THEATER
Heather T said:

It is a grand production, but I hope I am living my most authentic self as best I can. Great poem, Louis. I think I\'m just a pilgrim passing through.

July 26th, 2017 15:28

DREAM THEATER
malubotelho said:

And here we are, doing some play. Nicely done. Short and awesome.

July 26th, 2017 14:41

DREAM THEATER
willyweed said:

we are actors on the stage
from the cradle to the grave

July 26th, 2017 11:15

DREAM THEATER
Michael Edwards said:

Just woken from a quick snooze so know it well - super piece of work.

July 26th, 2017 10:49

DREAM THEATER
FredPeyer said:

So true Louis, we are all actors in this great performance we call our life.

July 26th, 2017 10:32

DREAM THEATER
lastbadbrad6 said:

nice write,hope this not your reality

July 26th, 2017 10:28

DREAM THEATER
Azura Nightsong said:

Life is quite the stage, but we should all strive to make it the best performance daily!
Nice poem!

July 26th, 2017 08:59

ALEXIS
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful emotive write.

July 25th, 2017 00:40

ALEXIS
malubotelho said:

So beautiful to see how much love you have on your heart. Sad but beautiful. Thanks for sharing

July 24th, 2017 22:28

ALEXIS
sue.evans said:

Such a sad poem - such a tragic tale😢

July 24th, 2017 19:05

ALEXIS
Micalina said:

That was so sad and touching. Brilliant

July 24th, 2017 12:59

ALEXIS
FredPeyer said:

Louis, your love for this baby practically leaped off the page (or screen) and the sorrow in the last stanza was palpable. Wonderfully written!

July 24th, 2017 12:13



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