Comments received on poems by Louis Gibbs
THE GRAND ILLUSION
myself and me said:
We can fool around, but can not fool within. How painful could that be.
Very deep indeed.
August 21st, 2017 15:11
myself and me said:
We can fool around, but can not fool within. How painful could that be.
Very deep indeed.
August 21st, 2017 15:11
THE GRAND ILLUSION
Diane said:
It is within our own selves that we may find the scariest of answers :-) Muchly enjoyed.
August 21st, 2017 14:19
Diane said:
It is within our own selves that we may find the scariest of answers :-) Muchly enjoyed.
August 21st, 2017 14:19
THE GRAND ILLUSION
malubotelho said:
A fine write Louis. Intriguing subject. It is very profound the way you stated here about our inner feeling and the big illusion that is how we perceive the world outside and inside. Enjoyed reading.
August 21st, 2017 10:03
malubotelho said:
A fine write Louis. Intriguing subject. It is very profound the way you stated here about our inner feeling and the big illusion that is how we perceive the world outside and inside. Enjoyed reading.
August 21st, 2017 10:03
THE GRAND ILLUSION
Goldfinch60 said:
That observer within us always finds us out. Good write Louis.
August 21st, 2017 08:02
Goldfinch60 said:
That observer within us always finds us out. Good write Louis.
August 21st, 2017 08:02
THE ULTIMATE SCHEME
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. The differences are there to test us, it is a pit that so many use those differences as a way to hatred.
August 19th, 2017 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. The differences are there to test us, it is a pit that so many use those differences as a way to hatred.
August 19th, 2017 00:26
THE ULTIMATE SCHEME
malubotelho said:
I\'m still question sometimes. Why? But then I think that we are not here to question but to accept. Nice writing.
August 18th, 2017 20:26
malubotelho said:
I\'m still question sometimes. Why? But then I think that we are not here to question but to accept. Nice writing.
August 18th, 2017 20:26
THE ULTIMATE SCHEME
John Prophet said:
Very well done my friend, yes you are correct there are no coincidence.
August 18th, 2017 15:29
John Prophet said:
Very well done my friend, yes you are correct there are no coincidence.
August 18th, 2017 15:29
THE ULTIMATE SCHEME
orchidee said:
Well, it\'s a good write as a poem. But I don\'t go along with all the content of it. I can\'t deny the Tower of Babel though. \'Handicaps\' is hideous word (my own view). It\'s \'special needs\' these days.
August 18th, 2017 10:30
orchidee said:
Well, it\'s a good write as a poem. But I don\'t go along with all the content of it. I can\'t deny the Tower of Babel though. \'Handicaps\' is hideous word (my own view). It\'s \'special needs\' these days.
August 18th, 2017 10:30
IT BREAKS MY HEART
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good and very true write. So many people have the ability to help others but only want to help themselves as they see themselves better than everyone else.
August 18th, 2017 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good and very true write. So many people have the ability to help others but only want to help themselves as they see themselves better than everyone else.
August 18th, 2017 00:48
IT BREAKS MY HEART
sue.evans said:
Sad but true - but I believe these people get where they are by not what they know but who they know - a closed club of back slappers looking out for each other rather than the majority. We have become a selfish world😢
August 17th, 2017 18:21
sue.evans said:
Sad but true - but I believe these people get where they are by not what they know but who they know - a closed club of back slappers looking out for each other rather than the majority. We have become a selfish world😢
August 17th, 2017 18:21
IT BREAKS MY HEART
FredPeyer said:
Your excellent and to the point poem reminded me of an interview I heard yesterday on Public Radio (while driving) between the interviewer and a republican congressman. The questions were good and demanded precise answers. The congressman did not answer the specific questions once, but kept talking around the bush, repeating himself. Does he think we are all morons?
No wonder the expression \'intelligent politician\' is an oxymoron!
August 17th, 2017 17:07
FredPeyer said:
Your excellent and to the point poem reminded me of an interview I heard yesterday on Public Radio (while driving) between the interviewer and a republican congressman. The questions were good and demanded precise answers. The congressman did not answer the specific questions once, but kept talking around the bush, repeating himself. Does he think we are all morons?
No wonder the expression \'intelligent politician\' is an oxymoron!
August 17th, 2017 17:07
IT BREAKS MY HEART
Poetic Dan said:
I feel these words so strongly
I\'m also grateful for a place like this
There are more of us everyday
Choosing to make a change
There\'s an Infinite amount of ways
We just got to keep saying what we say
The most important of all
Is to change the reflection of ourselves
Thanks for helping get this out, carry on carrying on ;)
August 17th, 2017 08:31
Poetic Dan said:
I feel these words so strongly
I\'m also grateful for a place like this
There are more of us everyday
Choosing to make a change
There\'s an Infinite amount of ways
We just got to keep saying what we say
The most important of all
Is to change the reflection of ourselves
Thanks for helping get this out, carry on carrying on ;)
August 17th, 2017 08:31
IT BREAKS MY HEART
orchidee said:
Sounds like me on a sherry day?! Does it?! heehee.
August 17th, 2017 08:25
orchidee said:
Sounds like me on a sherry day?! Does it?! heehee.
August 17th, 2017 08:25
IT BREAKS MY HEART
Michael Edwards said:
Narrow mindedness, arrogance, self aggrandizement , name them all but my favourite is selfishness - I see them all on the pavements , in the shops, on the road etc. They all take on worse turn when they are displayed by certain politicians. And this is a grand write Louis.
August 17th, 2017 08:10
Michael Edwards said:
Narrow mindedness, arrogance, self aggrandizement , name them all but my favourite is selfishness - I see them all on the pavements , in the shops, on the road etc. They all take on worse turn when they are displayed by certain politicians. And this is a grand write Louis.
August 17th, 2017 08:10
IT BREAKS MY HEART
Nicholas Browning said:
It\'s sad. Really sad. I could elaborate, but you\'ve said enough. Thank you for this.
August 17th, 2017 08:01
Nicholas Browning said:
It\'s sad. Really sad. I could elaborate, but you\'ve said enough. Thank you for this.
August 17th, 2017 08:01
DEAFENING SILENCE
myself and me said:
\"Deafening \", A word I have been searching for so long. Thank you.
It is such a precise expression of the moment.
August 16th, 2017 23:10
myself and me said:
\"Deafening \", A word I have been searching for so long. Thank you.
It is such a precise expression of the moment.
August 16th, 2017 23:10
DEAFENING SILENCE
FredPeyer said:
You found the words, very eloquently, I might add, to say that sometimes there are no words. Very true and well written.
August 16th, 2017 10:13
FredPeyer said:
You found the words, very eloquently, I might add, to say that sometimes there are no words. Very true and well written.
August 16th, 2017 10:13
DEAFENING SILENCE
malubotelho said:
In the silence I can find myself. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.
August 16th, 2017 08:41
malubotelho said:
In the silence I can find myself. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.
August 16th, 2017 08:41
DEAFENING SILENCE
orchidee said:
Good write L. Sometimes, or often, just \'being there\' helps. But meanwhile - I comes along and shatters the silence, with a loud \'Cooeeee\'. Then I \'goes back to sleep\'. lol.
August 16th, 2017 08:25
orchidee said:
Good write L. Sometimes, or often, just \'being there\' helps. But meanwhile - I comes along and shatters the silence, with a loud \'Cooeeee\'. Then I \'goes back to sleep\'. lol.
August 16th, 2017 08:25
DEAFENING SILENCE
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, sometimes the noise silences drowns all other sounds.
August 16th, 2017 07:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, sometimes the noise silences drowns all other sounds.
August 16th, 2017 07:55
THE ENDING - A BEDTIME STORY
FredPeyer said:
Sweet Dreams, indeed! More like a nightmare, but a really well written one! Chapeau, Louis, dream on....
August 15th, 2017 11:57
FredPeyer said:
Sweet Dreams, indeed! More like a nightmare, but a really well written one! Chapeau, Louis, dream on....
August 15th, 2017 11:57
THE ENDING - A BEDTIME STORY
malubotelho said:
This is the time when you try to have a restful mind but something keeps dripping there and won\'t let you rest. The thought. The bad thought.
August 15th, 2017 11:09
malubotelho said:
This is the time when you try to have a restful mind but something keeps dripping there and won\'t let you rest. The thought. The bad thought.
August 15th, 2017 11:09
THE ENDING - A BEDTIME STORY
private poet said:
There is an awful lot to worry about in this situation.
August 15th, 2017 10:51
private poet said:
There is an awful lot to worry about in this situation.
August 15th, 2017 10:51
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