Comments received on poems by Louis Gibbs
DEAFENING SILENCE
myself and me said:
\"Deafening \", A word I have been searching for so long. Thank you.
It is such a precise expression of the moment.
August 16th, 2017 23:10
myself and me said:
\"Deafening \", A word I have been searching for so long. Thank you.
It is such a precise expression of the moment.
August 16th, 2017 23:10
DEAFENING SILENCE
FredPeyer said:
You found the words, very eloquently, I might add, to say that sometimes there are no words. Very true and well written.
August 16th, 2017 10:13
FredPeyer said:
You found the words, very eloquently, I might add, to say that sometimes there are no words. Very true and well written.
August 16th, 2017 10:13
DEAFENING SILENCE
malubotelho said:
In the silence I can find myself. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.
August 16th, 2017 08:41
malubotelho said:
In the silence I can find myself. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.
August 16th, 2017 08:41
DEAFENING SILENCE
orchidee said:
Good write L. Sometimes, or often, just \'being there\' helps. But meanwhile - I comes along and shatters the silence, with a loud \'Cooeeee\'. Then I \'goes back to sleep\'. lol.
August 16th, 2017 08:25
orchidee said:
Good write L. Sometimes, or often, just \'being there\' helps. But meanwhile - I comes along and shatters the silence, with a loud \'Cooeeee\'. Then I \'goes back to sleep\'. lol.
August 16th, 2017 08:25
DEAFENING SILENCE
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, sometimes the noise silences drowns all other sounds.
August 16th, 2017 07:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, sometimes the noise silences drowns all other sounds.
August 16th, 2017 07:55
THE ENDING - A BEDTIME STORY
FredPeyer said:
Sweet Dreams, indeed! More like a nightmare, but a really well written one! Chapeau, Louis, dream on....
August 15th, 2017 11:57
FredPeyer said:
Sweet Dreams, indeed! More like a nightmare, but a really well written one! Chapeau, Louis, dream on....
August 15th, 2017 11:57
THE ENDING - A BEDTIME STORY
malubotelho said:
This is the time when you try to have a restful mind but something keeps dripping there and won\'t let you rest. The thought. The bad thought.
August 15th, 2017 11:09
malubotelho said:
This is the time when you try to have a restful mind but something keeps dripping there and won\'t let you rest. The thought. The bad thought.
August 15th, 2017 11:09
THE ENDING - A BEDTIME STORY
private poet said:
There is an awful lot to worry about in this situation.
August 15th, 2017 10:51
private poet said:
There is an awful lot to worry about in this situation.
August 15th, 2017 10:51
THE ENDING - A BEDTIME STORY
orchidee said:
I was about to post a poem including \'a time for everything\'. It includes \'war\' and a couple of other things - maybe Old Testament thinking? Yet it\'s not my poem for today.
August 15th, 2017 08:39
orchidee said:
I was about to post a poem including \'a time for everything\'. It includes \'war\' and a couple of other things - maybe Old Testament thinking? Yet it\'s not my poem for today.
August 15th, 2017 08:39
THE ENDING - A BEDTIME STORY
orchidee said:
Good write. Let\'s hope and pray it will be frustrated. In the past it\'s gone wrong, in that things \'backfired\' or something. I\'ve not kept up-to-date with it much though.
August 15th, 2017 08:37
orchidee said:
Good write. Let\'s hope and pray it will be frustrated. In the past it\'s gone wrong, in that things \'backfired\' or something. I\'ve not kept up-to-date with it much though.
August 15th, 2017 08:37
THE ENDING - A BEDTIME STORY
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the horror of war must be stopped.
August 15th, 2017 08:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the horror of war must be stopped.
August 15th, 2017 08:00
THE ENDING - A BEDTIME STORY
Michael Edwards said:
Sweet dreams indeed - a terrifying thought - great poem though.
August 15th, 2017 07:56
Michael Edwards said:
Sweet dreams indeed - a terrifying thought - great poem though.
August 15th, 2017 07:56
THE ENDING - A BEDTIME STORY
Nicholas Browning said:
Nice poem. Food for thought is a good thing.
August 15th, 2017 07:34
Nicholas Browning said:
Nice poem. Food for thought is a good thing.
August 15th, 2017 07:34
THE CYCLE REPLAYED
WriteBeLight said:
Interesting poetry here Louis. Makes one think.
August 14th, 2017 12:19
WriteBeLight said:
Interesting poetry here Louis. Makes one think.
August 14th, 2017 12:19
THE CYCLE REPLAYED
FredPeyer said:
Thank you Louis for this very well written poem! With Guam being mentioned as a possible target, and us in Hawaii not living that far away and potentially being a target also, your poem did hit a nerve! And living on a little island, there is no place to hide or run to!
August 14th, 2017 11:52
FredPeyer said:
Thank you Louis for this very well written poem! With Guam being mentioned as a possible target, and us in Hawaii not living that far away and potentially being a target also, your poem did hit a nerve! And living on a little island, there is no place to hide or run to!
August 14th, 2017 11:52
GRANDFATHERS
Alf W said:
Being a grandfather, I can empathise with your poem. So well written and caring.
August 14th, 2017 11:15
Alf W said:
Being a grandfather, I can empathise with your poem. So well written and caring.
August 14th, 2017 11:15
THE CYCLE REPLAYED
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write about our possible end in this world, see you in the next.
August 14th, 2017 08:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write about our possible end in this world, see you in the next.
August 14th, 2017 08:08
THE CYCLE REPLAYED
Michael Edwards said:
I always love Outbacks comments - anyway back to your post - super short piece about the madness of our race .
August 14th, 2017 08:02
Michael Edwards said:
I always love Outbacks comments - anyway back to your post - super short piece about the madness of our race .
August 14th, 2017 08:02
IMAGINE
Michael Edwards said:
The masks are the same - the difference lies behind them - I am now beginning to wonder what I am talking about - heigh ho - love the poem nevertheless.
August 11th, 2017 14:30
Michael Edwards said:
The masks are the same - the difference lies behind them - I am now beginning to wonder what I am talking about - heigh ho - love the poem nevertheless.
August 11th, 2017 14:30
IMAGINE
FredPeyer said:
A very apt title to a very intriguing poem! Maybe the world would be a better place if your last stanza would be true.
August 11th, 2017 12:11
FredPeyer said:
A very apt title to a very intriguing poem! Maybe the world would be a better place if your last stanza would be true.
August 11th, 2017 12:11
IMAGINE
Fay Slimm. said:
We all overlap in many respects - -love the wit in your imaginings Louis.
August 11th, 2017 10:56
Fay Slimm. said:
We all overlap in many respects - -love the wit in your imaginings Louis.
August 11th, 2017 10:56
IMAGINE
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, do we know who we are, we all put on different masks depending on the situation.
August 11th, 2017 08:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, do we know who we are, we all put on different masks depending on the situation.
August 11th, 2017 08:01
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