Comments received on poems by Louis Gibbs
OUR LIFE\'S MELODY
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
Great write Louis! I don\'t think you know that I was in the All Ohio State Fair Youth Choir! I sing 1st Tenor, and I really enjoyed your poem! Even though it\'s not put to music, I kind of put a melody to it for you and sang it to myself!
August 8th, 2017 11:42
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
Great write Louis! I don\'t think you know that I was in the All Ohio State Fair Youth Choir! I sing 1st Tenor, and I really enjoyed your poem! Even though it\'s not put to music, I kind of put a melody to it for you and sang it to myself!
August 8th, 2017 11:42
OUR LIFE\'S MELODY
Heather T said:
Louis, I just adore this, and it affects a deeper meaning. One of my favorites of yours.
August 7th, 2017 19:04
Heather T said:
Louis, I just adore this, and it affects a deeper meaning. One of my favorites of yours.
August 7th, 2017 19:04
OUR LIFE\'S MELODY
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
Great write Louis.. Short but very great depth to it. I Love it! Thanks for sharing it with us!
August 7th, 2017 16:18
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
Great write Louis.. Short but very great depth to it. I Love it! Thanks for sharing it with us!
August 7th, 2017 16:18
OUR LIFE\'S MELODY
malubotelho said:
They say we all have our music to play and our song to sing. Mine is quite simple. Not much fuss. Beautiful writing. Love it 😍
August 7th, 2017 15:32
malubotelho said:
They say we all have our music to play and our song to sing. Mine is quite simple. Not much fuss. Beautiful writing. Love it 😍
August 7th, 2017 15:32
OUR LIFE\'S MELODY
orchidee said:
A fine write Louis. Yes, it\'s said life can be a song, rhythm, dance, etc. Oh no, you woke up to sing now. Meeowooo! Hear me?! lol.
August 7th, 2017 09:00
orchidee said:
A fine write Louis. Yes, it\'s said life can be a song, rhythm, dance, etc. Oh no, you woke up to sing now. Meeowooo! Hear me?! lol.
August 7th, 2017 09:00
OUR LIFE\'S MELODY
Goldfinch60 said:
Minor keys produce some wondrous music but this write is not minor, it is major.
August 7th, 2017 08:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Minor keys produce some wondrous music but this write is not minor, it is major.
August 7th, 2017 08:10
OUR LIFE\'S MELODY
Michael Edwards said:
Dance? Me? I can\'t even clap in time with music. Another little beauty this one Louis
August 7th, 2017 06:37
Michael Edwards said:
Dance? Me? I can\'t even clap in time with music. Another little beauty this one Louis
August 7th, 2017 06:37
GRANDFATHERS
Night Owl said:
I\'m liking this reflective moment-- putting me right in the room with him-- Nice!
August 6th, 2017 04:29
Night Owl said:
I\'m liking this reflective moment-- putting me right in the room with him-- Nice!
August 6th, 2017 04:29
GRANDFATHERS
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. I am sure that you will be a fine Grandparent and your Grandchildren will remember you with love.
August 5th, 2017 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. I am sure that you will be a fine Grandparent and your Grandchildren will remember you with love.
August 5th, 2017 00:25
GRANDFATHERS
Christina8 said:
Really great write! I think it makes us all reflect back to our own grandpas. Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece.
August 4th, 2017 19:41
Christina8 said:
Really great write! I think it makes us all reflect back to our own grandpas. Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece.
August 4th, 2017 19:41
GRANDFATHERS
FredPeyer said:
As a grandfather of 4 1/2 (one on the way) your beautiful poem made me think. What indeed will they remember?
August 4th, 2017 13:29
FredPeyer said:
As a grandfather of 4 1/2 (one on the way) your beautiful poem made me think. What indeed will they remember?
August 4th, 2017 13:29
GRANDFATHERS
malubotelho said:
Wow! I love this Louis. Such a beautiful way of thoughtful memories. It filled my heart with love. I never got to know my grandparents.
August 4th, 2017 12:16
malubotelho said:
Wow! I love this Louis. Such a beautiful way of thoughtful memories. It filled my heart with love. I never got to know my grandparents.
August 4th, 2017 12:16
GRANDFATHERS
Michael Edwards said:
A case of ditto - my paternal grandfather was also quiet but he had a lot of time for me and at an early age introduced me to gardening - I recall him with loving memories. This is a great write Louis
August 4th, 2017 08:23
Michael Edwards said:
A case of ditto - my paternal grandfather was also quiet but he had a lot of time for me and at an early age introduced me to gardening - I recall him with loving memories. This is a great write Louis
August 4th, 2017 08:23
WE ALL ARE CAPTIVES
Alf W said:
Hi Louis.. a beautifully scribed and true state of our being you have described here in those few short words. Thank you.
August 3rd, 2017 05:33
Alf W said:
Hi Louis.. a beautifully scribed and true state of our being you have described here in those few short words. Thank you.
August 3rd, 2017 05:33
WE ALL ARE CAPTIVES
FredPeyer said:
Incredible poem Louis! And writing sets us free!
August 2nd, 2017 10:35
FredPeyer said:
Incredible poem Louis! And writing sets us free!
August 2nd, 2017 10:35
WE ALL ARE CAPTIVES
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS LOUIS ~ Our Body is temporal of the Earth ~ Our Spirit is eternal of the Spiritual Realm. I accept that for my sojourn on Planet Earth I must have a Human Shell (Body) to blend in ! To be part of a Family etc I am clothed in my Earthly Parents DNA which makes me a White (pink actually) Anglo-Saxon born & raised in Liverpool. Had i been assigned to the Planet ZOZ my Spirit would have worn a different Body ! When i move to my next Dimension ~ My Spirit will be the same but my body transformed to accommodate (fit in). I am enjoying my time on planet Earth but often I long to be extracorperial ! Yours BRIAN
August 2nd, 2017 09:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS LOUIS ~ Our Body is temporal of the Earth ~ Our Spirit is eternal of the Spiritual Realm. I accept that for my sojourn on Planet Earth I must have a Human Shell (Body) to blend in ! To be part of a Family etc I am clothed in my Earthly Parents DNA which makes me a White (pink actually) Anglo-Saxon born & raised in Liverpool. Had i been assigned to the Planet ZOZ my Spirit would have worn a different Body ! When i move to my next Dimension ~ My Spirit will be the same but my body transformed to accommodate (fit in). I am enjoying my time on planet Earth but often I long to be extracorperial ! Yours BRIAN
August 2nd, 2017 09:59
WE ALL ARE CAPTIVES
malubotelho said:
A nice reflection about life. We are not our body or our mind. Still we need to feel gratitude for our body is the vehicle that serve us porpoise here.
August 2nd, 2017 08:39
malubotelho said:
A nice reflection about life. We are not our body or our mind. Still we need to feel gratitude for our body is the vehicle that serve us porpoise here.
August 2nd, 2017 08:39
WE ALL ARE CAPTIVES
Goldfinch60 said:
Can we ever escape from consciousness? Maybe our writing is the way out. Good write.
August 2nd, 2017 08:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Can we ever escape from consciousness? Maybe our writing is the way out. Good write.
August 2nd, 2017 08:19
WE ALL ARE CAPTIVES
Fay Slimm. said:
A truth wrapped in poetry - I agree with Michael a belter for sure - - great read Louis.
August 2nd, 2017 08:17
Fay Slimm. said:
A truth wrapped in poetry - I agree with Michael a belter for sure - - great read Louis.
August 2nd, 2017 08:17
WE ALL ARE CAPTIVES
orchidee said:
Hmm, I\'ve heard it described in reverse. Our consciousness, and so our soul and spirit, \'captive\' within our human body as the \'shell\'. A fine write Louis.
August 2nd, 2017 07:28
orchidee said:
Hmm, I\'ve heard it described in reverse. Our consciousness, and so our soul and spirit, \'captive\' within our human body as the \'shell\'. A fine write Louis.
August 2nd, 2017 07:28
AUGUSTUS
Christina8 said:
Great poem. Augustus is a great man and a fine poet. Hope we hear something soon!
August 1st, 2017 18:03
Christina8 said:
Great poem. Augustus is a great man and a fine poet. Hope we hear something soon!
August 1st, 2017 18:03
AUGUSTUS
Fay Slimm. said:
Augustus and his verses have been much missed and do hope this fine poem and loving comments will be able to help him to battle on.
August 1st, 2017 16:38
Fay Slimm. said:
Augustus and his verses have been much missed and do hope this fine poem and loving comments will be able to help him to battle on.
August 1st, 2017 16:38
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