Comments received on poems by Louis Gibbs
DREAM THEATER
malubotelho said:
And here we are, doing some play. Nicely done. Short and awesome.
July 26th, 2017 14:41
malubotelho said:
And here we are, doing some play. Nicely done. Short and awesome.
July 26th, 2017 14:41
DREAM THEATER
willyweed said:
we are actors on the stage
from the cradle to the grave
July 26th, 2017 11:15
willyweed said:
we are actors on the stage
from the cradle to the grave
July 26th, 2017 11:15
DREAM THEATER
Michael Edwards said:
Just woken from a quick snooze so know it well - super piece of work.
July 26th, 2017 10:49
Michael Edwards said:
Just woken from a quick snooze so know it well - super piece of work.
July 26th, 2017 10:49
DREAM THEATER
FredPeyer said:
So true Louis, we are all actors in this great performance we call our life.
July 26th, 2017 10:32
FredPeyer said:
So true Louis, we are all actors in this great performance we call our life.
July 26th, 2017 10:32
DREAM THEATER
Azura Nightsong said:
Life is quite the stage, but we should all strive to make it the best performance daily!
Nice poem!
July 26th, 2017 08:59
Azura Nightsong said:
Life is quite the stage, but we should all strive to make it the best performance daily!
Nice poem!
July 26th, 2017 08:59
ALEXIS
malubotelho said:
So beautiful to see how much love you have on your heart. Sad but beautiful. Thanks for sharing
July 24th, 2017 22:28
malubotelho said:
So beautiful to see how much love you have on your heart. Sad but beautiful. Thanks for sharing
July 24th, 2017 22:28
ALEXIS
FredPeyer said:
Louis, your love for this baby practically leaped off the page (or screen) and the sorrow in the last stanza was palpable. Wonderfully written!
July 24th, 2017 12:13
FredPeyer said:
Louis, your love for this baby practically leaped off the page (or screen) and the sorrow in the last stanza was palpable. Wonderfully written!
July 24th, 2017 12:13
ALEXIS
Michael Edwards said:
It makes us all feel so helpless in being unable to prevent it happening - a heart telling poem.
July 24th, 2017 09:48
Michael Edwards said:
It makes us all feel so helpless in being unable to prevent it happening - a heart telling poem.
July 24th, 2017 09:48
ALEXIS
burning-embers said:
This is beautifully written. Your feelings pour out of it.
July 24th, 2017 09:09
burning-embers said:
This is beautifully written. Your feelings pour out of it.
July 24th, 2017 09:09
THE AGONY AND THE ECSTACY
Micalina said:
This is a very sad poem and the mutation of these young girls is horrible. I live in the UK and Porto too and in the UK there are parents who actually send their children back to the country where they came or try to get a doctor to do it. There are many flyers about and woman that have written books about it. It should not be practiced
July 24th, 2017 05:08
Micalina said:
This is a very sad poem and the mutation of these young girls is horrible. I live in the UK and Porto too and in the UK there are parents who actually send their children back to the country where they came or try to get a doctor to do it. There are many flyers about and woman that have written books about it. It should not be practiced
July 24th, 2017 05:08
THIS TIME AROUND
Micalina said:
Whatever we do in life is fine. As long as we try and you are an ace in my book. Great poetry. Keep writing
July 24th, 2017 05:04
Micalina said:
Whatever we do in life is fine. As long as we try and you are an ace in my book. Great poetry. Keep writing
July 24th, 2017 05:04
THE CRIPPLED
Micalina said:
Our son has adhd and other friends the same thing. Also one friend has the same condition as you. I can\'t begin to know how you are feeling. But I know when my son was growing up the struggles he went through and our friends too. The smartest people are the ones with these things. It is just so hard to focus.
I know that you are smart and a wonderful writer. It is always great to express ourselves through writing. I always feel better too. Keep on writing I enjoyed your poem very much. Hugs Micalina
July 23rd, 2017 12:16
Micalina said:
Our son has adhd and other friends the same thing. Also one friend has the same condition as you. I can\'t begin to know how you are feeling. But I know when my son was growing up the struggles he went through and our friends too. The smartest people are the ones with these things. It is just so hard to focus.
I know that you are smart and a wonderful writer. It is always great to express ourselves through writing. I always feel better too. Keep on writing I enjoyed your poem very much. Hugs Micalina
July 23rd, 2017 12:16
THE CRIPPLED
Goldfinch60 said:
Good strong write. It is such a shame that many people with unseen problems are sometimes not seen themselves. Things are slowly getting better and these illnesses are becoming more recognised and understood. When I was a Chaplain in the Sea Cadets it surprised my just how many of the youngsters had these type of problems, it really opened my eyes.
July 22nd, 2017 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Good strong write. It is such a shame that many people with unseen problems are sometimes not seen themselves. Things are slowly getting better and these illnesses are becoming more recognised and understood. When I was a Chaplain in the Sea Cadets it surprised my just how many of the youngsters had these type of problems, it really opened my eyes.
July 22nd, 2017 00:37
THE CRIPPLED
malubotelho said:
I will have to research this condition because I know someone that could be suffering from something like this. Thanks for sharing.
July 21st, 2017 21:55
malubotelho said:
I will have to research this condition because I know someone that could be suffering from something like this. Thanks for sharing.
July 21st, 2017 21:55
THE CRIPPLED
poetboy123 said:
Thank you for shedding light of this subject, as it is one I believe many tend to overlook. Always be yourself, especially if it brings works of wonder like these!
July 21st, 2017 20:01
poetboy123 said:
Thank you for shedding light of this subject, as it is one I believe many tend to overlook. Always be yourself, especially if it brings works of wonder like these!
July 21st, 2017 20:01
THE CRIPPLED
FredPeyer said:
Thank you Louis for sharing. While overall I think we have come a long way in accepting and providing for people who are different from the so-called \'norm\', I believe we still have a long way to go. Especially as far as mental differences are concerned.
July 21st, 2017 11:58
FredPeyer said:
Thank you Louis for sharing. While overall I think we have come a long way in accepting and providing for people who are different from the so-called \'norm\', I believe we still have a long way to go. Especially as far as mental differences are concerned.
July 21st, 2017 11:58
THE CRIPPLED
orchidee said:
Thoughtful write L. I suppose it\'s because we cannot \'see\' mental problems, illness, etc, so to some people it\'s sort of non-existent.
July 21st, 2017 11:37
orchidee said:
Thoughtful write L. I suppose it\'s because we cannot \'see\' mental problems, illness, etc, so to some people it\'s sort of non-existent.
July 21st, 2017 11:37
THE CRIPPLED
Michael Edwards said:
So sorry to hear you\'ve been a bit down of late but to cheer you up: you\'ve so much going for you when you can produce great thought provoking work like this - keep writing Louis.
July 21st, 2017 11:01
Michael Edwards said:
So sorry to hear you\'ve been a bit down of late but to cheer you up: you\'ve so much going for you when you can produce great thought provoking work like this - keep writing Louis.
July 21st, 2017 11:01
DON\'T LOOK BACK
Christina8 said:
I commend you for writing such a moving piece in such few words. I too believe it\'s best not to look back.
July 19th, 2017 18:43
Christina8 said:
I commend you for writing such a moving piece in such few words. I too believe it\'s best not to look back.
July 19th, 2017 18:43
THE WHO I AM
Poetic Dan said:
What a perfect last read before I dift off to see the who that is my better than yesterday who.
Fantastic! Work of art
July 19th, 2017 17:53
Poetic Dan said:
What a perfect last read before I dift off to see the who that is my better than yesterday who.
Fantastic! Work of art
July 19th, 2017 17:53
DON\'T LOOK BACK
FredPeyer said:
Louis, your four lines say a lot more than a whole novel sometimes does.
Great!
July 19th, 2017 12:17
FredPeyer said:
Louis, your four lines say a lot more than a whole novel sometimes does.
Great!
July 19th, 2017 12:17
DON\'T LOOK BACK
avigail said:
embrace love infinite energy of compassion and wisdom
July 19th, 2017 10:35
avigail said:
embrace love infinite energy of compassion and wisdom
July 19th, 2017 10:35
DON\'T LOOK BACK
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, so much said in few words. Go forward towards the light.
July 19th, 2017 08:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, so much said in few words. Go forward towards the light.
July 19th, 2017 08:29
DON\'T LOOK BACK
Michael Edwards said:
So simple, so effective. Often the hardest to write - I love it.
July 19th, 2017 08:23
Michael Edwards said:
So simple, so effective. Often the hardest to write - I love it.
July 19th, 2017 08:23
DON\'T LOOK BACK
orchidee said:
A fine write L. Erm, take a step or two forward then!
July 19th, 2017 08:00
orchidee said:
A fine write L. Erm, take a step or two forward then!
July 19th, 2017 08:00
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