Comments received on poems by The Invisible
The Unknown
Goldfinch60 said:
The way is there and that door will open into the joy of life.
June 14th, 2017 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
The way is there and that door will open into the joy of life.
June 14th, 2017 00:26
The Unknown
Bibbeck said:
Clever write and a nice \'twist\' at the end.
The unknown is a great part of life and the world, and is what keeps everything so fascinating to discover. It can be scary though, as can any experience for the first time.
June 13th, 2017 17:36
Bibbeck said:
Clever write and a nice \'twist\' at the end.
The unknown is a great part of life and the world, and is what keeps everything so fascinating to discover. It can be scary though, as can any experience for the first time.
June 13th, 2017 17:36
The Unknown
Jeff said:
This is a very well done write...i can certainly relate....great job
June 13th, 2017 14:39
Jeff said:
This is a very well done write...i can certainly relate....great job
June 13th, 2017 14:39
Forgive Me..
little lay lay said:
LITERALLY THE LAST TWO SENTENCES GIRL! I clap for you because we literally are the same person i relate to you so much!!! All the love- BG.
June 12th, 2017 18:36
little lay lay said:
LITERALLY THE LAST TWO SENTENCES GIRL! I clap for you because we literally are the same person i relate to you so much!!! All the love- BG.
June 12th, 2017 18:36
First Time
Jeff said:
Great write. And i have to say...you be you, to hell with those who have a problem with that...ALWAYS stay true to yourself...again, great write
June 12th, 2017 06:24
Jeff said:
Great write. And i have to say...you be you, to hell with those who have a problem with that...ALWAYS stay true to yourself...again, great write
June 12th, 2017 06:24
First Time
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. You are you and nobody should force you to move from your chosen path. Stay strong.
June 12th, 2017 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. You are you and nobody should force you to move from your chosen path. Stay strong.
June 12th, 2017 02:44
First Time
HeartfullyFallen said:
I like this alot, simply cause Its simple and true. I feel like a lot of people feel this way, me being one of them, and this is just amazing
June 11th, 2017 20:24
HeartfullyFallen said:
I like this alot, simply cause Its simple and true. I feel like a lot of people feel this way, me being one of them, and this is just amazing
June 11th, 2017 20:24
Thank you
Goldfinch60 said:
A smile can mean so much and it costs nothing. Good write.
June 7th, 2017 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
A smile can mean so much and it costs nothing. Good write.
June 7th, 2017 01:10
Are you right?
Saima said:
I love this, remember no one can be a better you don\'t get hard times get you down:)
June 5th, 2017 18:54
Saima said:
I love this, remember no one can be a better you don\'t get hard times get you down:)
June 5th, 2017 18:54
Little Voice
Michael Edwards said:
Glad I looked in - a great write and hope to see more.
June 3rd, 2017 06:05
Michael Edwards said:
Glad I looked in - a great write and hope to see more.
June 3rd, 2017 06:05
Little Voice
MaddieJ said:
Really loved this poem. It reminds me of a time I once had......
June 2nd, 2017 18:33
MaddieJ said:
Really loved this poem. It reminds me of a time I once had......
June 2nd, 2017 18:33
Little Voice
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for you first poem ~ full of rhyme & rhythm but a nostalgic message \"The road not taken !\" We all have regrets ~ almost each day ~ about thing we did and didn\'t do or say. But Yesterday\'s gone ~ my Friend ~ Tomorrow may never be mine ~ Help me today ~ Show me the way ~ one step at a time ! Every Blessing as you move through life ~ Thinking of you ~ Yours BRIAN (UK). Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
June 2nd, 2017 17:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for you first poem ~ full of rhyme & rhythm but a nostalgic message \"The road not taken !\" We all have regrets ~ almost each day ~ about thing we did and didn\'t do or say. But Yesterday\'s gone ~ my Friend ~ Tomorrow may never be mine ~ Help me today ~ Show me the way ~ one step at a time ! Every Blessing as you move through life ~ Thinking of you ~ Yours BRIAN (UK). Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
June 2nd, 2017 17:37
Little Voice
Bibbeck said:
Good stuff! You\'re not so \'invisible\'. Regrets are good for building your character, just don\'t keep them carried on your shoulders though. Keep being inspired to write.
June 2nd, 2017 16:10
Bibbeck said:
Good stuff! You\'re not so \'invisible\'. Regrets are good for building your character, just don\'t keep them carried on your shoulders though. Keep being inspired to write.
June 2nd, 2017 16:10
