Comments received on poems by malubotelho
He played as a monster
dusk arising said:
I know you are strong Malu and i know you have a wonderful faith and spread love wherever you can. In writing this, in reading this, i can see where some of the metal of your spirit was born. You\'re amazing. You certainly have lived!
September 24th, 2017 17:19
dusk arising said:
I know you are strong Malu and i know you have a wonderful faith and spread love wherever you can. In writing this, in reading this, i can see where some of the metal of your spirit was born. You\'re amazing. You certainly have lived!
September 24th, 2017 17:19
He played as a monster
Christina8 said:
Thank you for sharing such a deeply personal story. It\'s amazing how many of us have similar stories with alcoholic fathers. You are a very strong woman, Malu, and you have perservered! Your write gave me courage, so thank you! When I was reading, I got the chills. *Hugs* Christina
September 24th, 2017 12:57
Christina8 said:
Thank you for sharing such a deeply personal story. It\'s amazing how many of us have similar stories with alcoholic fathers. You are a very strong woman, Malu, and you have perservered! Your write gave me courage, so thank you! When I was reading, I got the chills. *Hugs* Christina
September 24th, 2017 12:57
He played as a monster
Michael Edwards said:
A brave write indeed and all credit to you for facing it full square on .
September 24th, 2017 11:04
Michael Edwards said:
A brave write indeed and all credit to you for facing it full square on .
September 24th, 2017 11:04
He played as a monster
Louis Gibbs said:
What a beautiful, heart-rendering reflection on a terrifying childhood! Made sadder by the fact that it is such a common experience for children. Your poem, in its brutal honesty, touched me deeply, Malu. Congratulations!
September 24th, 2017 09:42
Louis Gibbs said:
What a beautiful, heart-rendering reflection on a terrifying childhood! Made sadder by the fact that it is such a common experience for children. Your poem, in its brutal honesty, touched me deeply, Malu. Congratulations!
September 24th, 2017 09:42
About sex and orgasm
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. I agree with what Fred has said, it is making love that is the important thing, showing th love you have for each other in a physical way to augment the combing of souls in a wonderfully loving relationship.
September 24th, 2017 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. I agree with what Fred has said, it is making love that is the important thing, showing th love you have for each other in a physical way to augment the combing of souls in a wonderfully loving relationship.
September 24th, 2017 00:40
About sex and orgasm
FredPeyer said:
There is a big difference between \'having sex\' and \'making love\'. What you are writing about is \'making love\' where the physical is only one aspect of the whole and where the mental, the feelings, and the soul are actually much more important, making orgasm seem rather like an after-thought. I am not talking about platonic love, but love-making where each partner is more concerned with pleasing the other partner than pleasing him/herself. Great writing and great contribution to an interesting discussion, Malu!
September 23rd, 2017 18:59
FredPeyer said:
There is a big difference between \'having sex\' and \'making love\'. What you are writing about is \'making love\' where the physical is only one aspect of the whole and where the mental, the feelings, and the soul are actually much more important, making orgasm seem rather like an after-thought. I am not talking about platonic love, but love-making where each partner is more concerned with pleasing the other partner than pleasing him/herself. Great writing and great contribution to an interesting discussion, Malu!
September 23rd, 2017 18:59
About sex and orgasm
malubotelho said:
Brian my brother, what I\'m talking about here and seems like no one understood because maybe I did not explain enough. It is all about not having an orgasm and staying connected as much as possible. When I say connected I mean the penis inside the vagina without too much moviment. But accoplad. It is all about the. Transmutation of the sexual energy building it day after day having sex without a orgasm. Without losing your sexual energy. There are some mantras involved in this practice. It is called tantric sex. Seems like no one ever heard about this. That is fine though because it is not common. Thanks my younger brother. You are very young. To tell you the truth, you could be my son. I think I\'m going to begin calling you baby Brian.
September 23rd, 2017 17:11
malubotelho said:
Brian my brother, what I\'m talking about here and seems like no one understood because maybe I did not explain enough. It is all about not having an orgasm and staying connected as much as possible. When I say connected I mean the penis inside the vagina without too much moviment. But accoplad. It is all about the. Transmutation of the sexual energy building it day after day having sex without a orgasm. Without losing your sexual energy. There are some mantras involved in this practice. It is called tantric sex. Seems like no one ever heard about this. That is fine though because it is not common. Thanks my younger brother. You are very young. To tell you the truth, you could be my son. I think I\'m going to begin calling you baby Brian.
September 23rd, 2017 17:11
About sex and orgasm
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
OBRIGADO ALMA MALU ~ You have opened a Pandora\'s Box here ! One thing I learned as Teenager (from older GIRLS) was that Ladies like to cum before coitus ~ to lubricate their petals and vagina. I learned this was called foreplay ~ some Men want to jump right in before the Lady is ready ! Also Ladies can cum several times during coitus ~ if the Man is gentle and loving. When Man comes it is the END ~ for a period of time and some Man just want to \"cum & go\" which leaves the Lady dissatisfied ~ which is sad. For a LADY ~ AFTERGLOW is just as important as FOREPLAY. Many MEN seem ignorant of this factor After this you should shower together to complete the Cycle of Intercourse which takes about 2 hours (or more !) In my opinion A QUICKIE really degrades a LADY and demesnes a MAN. Beacuse I am only 34 ~ i can \"make love\" for a long time without coming ~ hours in fact. Young Men often cum too quickly and then stop and miss out on the Spiritual Enlightenment and also make love in inappropriate places ! I agree with all you say INTERCOURSE is often unsatisfying for both sexes (especilly Females) because it is in the wrong place at the wrong time and much too quick ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ much food for thought ! Your Loving Brother BRIAN XOXOX
September 23rd, 2017 15:50
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
OBRIGADO ALMA MALU ~ You have opened a Pandora\'s Box here ! One thing I learned as Teenager (from older GIRLS) was that Ladies like to cum before coitus ~ to lubricate their petals and vagina. I learned this was called foreplay ~ some Men want to jump right in before the Lady is ready ! Also Ladies can cum several times during coitus ~ if the Man is gentle and loving. When Man comes it is the END ~ for a period of time and some Man just want to \"cum & go\" which leaves the Lady dissatisfied ~ which is sad. For a LADY ~ AFTERGLOW is just as important as FOREPLAY. Many MEN seem ignorant of this factor After this you should shower together to complete the Cycle of Intercourse which takes about 2 hours (or more !) In my opinion A QUICKIE really degrades a LADY and demesnes a MAN. Beacuse I am only 34 ~ i can \"make love\" for a long time without coming ~ hours in fact. Young Men often cum too quickly and then stop and miss out on the Spiritual Enlightenment and also make love in inappropriate places ! I agree with all you say INTERCOURSE is often unsatisfying for both sexes (especilly Females) because it is in the wrong place at the wrong time and much too quick ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ much food for thought ! Your Loving Brother BRIAN XOXOX
September 23rd, 2017 15:50
About sex and orgasm
Michael Edwards said:
This was such a great read and I love both Maria and Lucia but I shall always know you as dear Malu
September 23rd, 2017 13:22
Michael Edwards said:
This was such a great read and I love both Maria and Lucia but I shall always know you as dear Malu
September 23rd, 2017 13:22
About sex and orgasm
Christina8 said:
This is a wonderful expression of what sex should be for both partners and the love that the two share. This kind of connection I think, is the \"superglue\" of a longlasting relationship. This is tastefully written and I thank you for sharing, Malu!
September 23rd, 2017 10:41
Christina8 said:
This is a wonderful expression of what sex should be for both partners and the love that the two share. This kind of connection I think, is the \"superglue\" of a longlasting relationship. This is tastefully written and I thank you for sharing, Malu!
September 23rd, 2017 10:41
About sex and orgasm
dusk arising said:
Beautifully and openly worded Malu. Surprises me how awful some peoples description of their physical love-life has been. It\'s such an important part of loving and so pleasureable for both partners. If one believes in sin then it\'s a sin not to explore and educate yourselves about mutual pleasures and fulflling your partners desires and fantasies. Pleasure is a good thing. My comments here are applicable to within a loving relationship and not encouraging anyone to anything for purely physical reasons outside such circumstance.
September 23rd, 2017 09:09
dusk arising said:
Beautifully and openly worded Malu. Surprises me how awful some peoples description of their physical love-life has been. It\'s such an important part of loving and so pleasureable for both partners. If one believes in sin then it\'s a sin not to explore and educate yourselves about mutual pleasures and fulflling your partners desires and fantasies. Pleasure is a good thing. My comments here are applicable to within a loving relationship and not encouraging anyone to anything for purely physical reasons outside such circumstance.
September 23rd, 2017 09:09
About sex and orgasm
Louis Gibbs said:
Who is Lucia? This is a well done introspection of the deeper level of sex ... appreciated and understood mostly by women. Any man who aspires to being a \'great lover\' should pay attention.
Well done, Malu!
September 23rd, 2017 08:35
Louis Gibbs said:
Who is Lucia? This is a well done introspection of the deeper level of sex ... appreciated and understood mostly by women. Any man who aspires to being a \'great lover\' should pay attention.
Well done, Malu!
September 23rd, 2017 08:35
Just memories 📌
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write. They are just memories and you can gain strength from them.
September 23rd, 2017 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write. They are just memories and you can gain strength from them.
September 23rd, 2017 00:26
Just memories 📌
Accidental Poet said:
Very beautiful and honest malu. This write shows that you\'ve learned much from your past and can except it as the past. It doesn\'t control you. Let your past inspire your future accomplishments. You\'re a survivor. ; )
September 22nd, 2017 17:18
Accidental Poet said:
Very beautiful and honest malu. This write shows that you\'ve learned much from your past and can except it as the past. It doesn\'t control you. Let your past inspire your future accomplishments. You\'re a survivor. ; )
September 22nd, 2017 17:18
Just memories 📌
dusk arising said:
And you are a wonderful warm and loving person because of your gallery Malu. Every picture tells a story, each a footstep or so along your path through this existence, each a nugget of wisdom gained and somewhere in that gallery the prize of unconditional love was revealed. Lovely writing Malu.
September 22nd, 2017 16:03
dusk arising said:
And you are a wonderful warm and loving person because of your gallery Malu. Every picture tells a story, each a footstep or so along your path through this existence, each a nugget of wisdom gained and somewhere in that gallery the prize of unconditional love was revealed. Lovely writing Malu.
September 22nd, 2017 16:03
Just memories 📌
Michael Edwards said:
Love this especially the idea of watercolour memories - a great write Malu.
September 22nd, 2017 14:39
Michael Edwards said:
Love this especially the idea of watercolour memories - a great write Malu.
September 22nd, 2017 14:39
Just memories 📌
Fay Slimm. said:
This read had me near tears dear friend - some of the expressions you use go right down to the depth of dealing with past pain. A favourite with me for sure.
September 22nd, 2017 11:41
Fay Slimm. said:
This read had me near tears dear friend - some of the expressions you use go right down to the depth of dealing with past pain. A favourite with me for sure.
September 22nd, 2017 11:41
Just memories 📌
WL Schuett said:
Good for you Malu it\'s terrible to be haunted by the past . This is a nice piece very personal and up lifting, I love the art references
September 22nd, 2017 10:17
WL Schuett said:
Good for you Malu it\'s terrible to be haunted by the past . This is a nice piece very personal and up lifting, I love the art references
September 22nd, 2017 10:17
Just memories 📌
Louis Gibbs said:
I do so admire you for this victory, Yumna. Congratulations! You are an inspiration, and you poem is so exquisitely expressed.
September 22nd, 2017 10:09
Louis Gibbs said:
I do so admire you for this victory, Yumna. Congratulations! You are an inspiration, and you poem is so exquisitely expressed.
September 22nd, 2017 10:09
Just memories 📌
malubotelho said:
Thank you Christina. Yes, I\'m cleaning the house but decided to keep the pictures. Evaluating 🤔
September 22nd, 2017 09:49
malubotelho said:
Thank you Christina. Yes, I\'m cleaning the house but decided to keep the pictures. Evaluating 🤔
September 22nd, 2017 09:49
Just memories 📌
Christina8 said:
A great write, Malu! I liked how you wrote about your tears washing the pain away. A beautiful write all the way around. I like the idea of memories being pictures and not being associated with pain. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem!
September 22nd, 2017 09:40
Christina8 said:
A great write, Malu! I liked how you wrote about your tears washing the pain away. A beautiful write all the way around. I like the idea of memories being pictures and not being associated with pain. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem!
September 22nd, 2017 09:40
For those who love ❤️
malubotelho said:
Thank you. Well, what we are today is what we are. The future is behind closed doors. Right today I was revising my life and I\'m discovering feelings from my past that I might begin to write about. I\'m like this today but I was not always the same. I truly appreciate your comments.
September 21st, 2017 20:15
malubotelho said:
Thank you. Well, what we are today is what we are. The future is behind closed doors. Right today I was revising my life and I\'m discovering feelings from my past that I might begin to write about. I\'m like this today but I was not always the same. I truly appreciate your comments.
September 21st, 2017 20:15
For those who love ❤️
dusk arising said:
Yes Malubotelho, love is everything and is the acceptance of everything, the good the bad and the suffering. For humanity love is most of all \'The Teacher\'.
A beautiful response to doubt, thank you so much. Very levelling.
September 21st, 2017 16:48
dusk arising said:
Yes Malubotelho, love is everything and is the acceptance of everything, the good the bad and the suffering. For humanity love is most of all \'The Teacher\'.
A beautiful response to doubt, thank you so much. Very levelling.
September 21st, 2017 16:48
For those who love ❤️
myself and me said:
Your description of love is so lovely and beautiful.
September 21st, 2017 15:05
myself and me said:
Your description of love is so lovely and beautiful.
September 21st, 2017 15:05
For those who love ❤️
FredPeyer said:
Great writing, Malu. I just love the last line. It perfectly sums up all the different kinds of love there are, just like a unifying theory of what love is. Maybe we can even compare love to duct tape: It has a dark side and a light side, and holds the universe together! :-)
September 21st, 2017 14:23
FredPeyer said:
Great writing, Malu. I just love the last line. It perfectly sums up all the different kinds of love there are, just like a unifying theory of what love is. Maybe we can even compare love to duct tape: It has a dark side and a light side, and holds the universe together! :-)
September 21st, 2017 14:23
For those who love ❤️
Michael Edwards said:
Great messages and - yes - love is what holds us together if only everyone would recognise that. great work Malu
September 21st, 2017 12:32
Michael Edwards said:
Great messages and - yes - love is what holds us together if only everyone would recognise that. great work Malu
September 21st, 2017 12:32
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