Comments received on poems by malubotelho
The silliest
Michael Edwards said:
Good on yer for tryin\' out different forms and ideas - great fun piece.
August 23rd, 2017 13:46
Michael Edwards said:
Good on yer for tryin\' out different forms and ideas - great fun piece.
August 23rd, 2017 13:46
Naked
Accidental Poet said:
Re-inventing oneself by shedding the old skin to expose the new and bare skin underneath is a optimistic endeavor making for a bright new you. Wonderfully thoughtful and beautiful write. malu. ; )
August 22nd, 2017 19:10
Accidental Poet said:
Re-inventing oneself by shedding the old skin to expose the new and bare skin underneath is a optimistic endeavor making for a bright new you. Wonderfully thoughtful and beautiful write. malu. ; )
August 22nd, 2017 19:10
Naked
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for caring & sharing MALU ! W can be cleansed by \"The Renewing of our Minds\" for me this is a daily thing ~ Hugs ~ Brother Brian
August 22nd, 2017 17:09
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for caring & sharing MALU ! W can be cleansed by \"The Renewing of our Minds\" for me this is a daily thing ~ Hugs ~ Brother Brian
August 22nd, 2017 17:09
Naked
lasergraph said:
We are all a work in progress, like softened clay that keeps getting remolded into what we perceive to be better. Good work.
August 22nd, 2017 16:29
lasergraph said:
We are all a work in progress, like softened clay that keeps getting remolded into what we perceive to be better. Good work.
August 22nd, 2017 16:29
Naked
Louis Gibbs said:
It is a pleasure seeing you naked, Malu! It is my favorite state of being too. Shed the ego, bare the soul! Well done!
August 22nd, 2017 16:03
Louis Gibbs said:
It is a pleasure seeing you naked, Malu! It is my favorite state of being too. Shed the ego, bare the soul! Well done!
August 22nd, 2017 16:03
Naked
WL Schuett said:
Lovely piece very personal, positive and inspiring glad you\'re happy with your On going metamorphosis
August 22nd, 2017 15:58
WL Schuett said:
Lovely piece very personal, positive and inspiring glad you\'re happy with your On going metamorphosis
August 22nd, 2017 15:58
Naked
malubotelho said:
Thanks love for your words. No concern here, I\'m happier than I ever been. Look again at my writing: I\'m happily bleeding, leaving parts of me behind
You see, I\'m blissfully happy 😊
August 22nd, 2017 15:03
malubotelho said:
Thanks love for your words. No concern here, I\'m happier than I ever been. Look again at my writing: I\'m happily bleeding, leaving parts of me behind
You see, I\'m blissfully happy 😊
August 22nd, 2017 15:03
Naked
burning-embers said:
\"Take kindly the counsel of the years,
gracefully surrendering the things of youth --- With all its sham, drudgery, and broken dreams,
it is still a beautiful world.
Be cheerful. Strive to be happy\" the words of Max Ehrmann in \'Desiderata\' a piece i find ever present in my mind. Lovely writing Malubotelho. + fav\'s
August 22nd, 2017 14:44
burning-embers said:
\"Take kindly the counsel of the years,
gracefully surrendering the things of youth --- With all its sham, drudgery, and broken dreams,
it is still a beautiful world.
Be cheerful. Strive to be happy\" the words of Max Ehrmann in \'Desiderata\' a piece i find ever present in my mind. Lovely writing Malubotelho. + fav\'s
August 22nd, 2017 14:44
Naked
FredPeyer said:
I really like this poem, Malu!
The older I get the more I realize that happiness requires letting go of everything and to concentrate on the core values of love, friendship, and self.
August 22nd, 2017 14:26
FredPeyer said:
I really like this poem, Malu!
The older I get the more I realize that happiness requires letting go of everything and to concentrate on the core values of love, friendship, and self.
August 22nd, 2017 14:26
Naked
Fay Slimm. said:
Malu this has to be one of your best - the piece gives a soul-naked view of time\'s passing and the need to loosen heavy for lighter pursuits. Excelent work - - Already in my favourite list.
August 22nd, 2017 14:21
Fay Slimm. said:
Malu this has to be one of your best - the piece gives a soul-naked view of time\'s passing and the need to loosen heavy for lighter pursuits. Excelent work - - Already in my favourite list.
August 22nd, 2017 14:21
Naked
WriteBeLight said:
I feel the struggle. Well done and I wish you success!
August 22nd, 2017 13:55
WriteBeLight said:
I feel the struggle. Well done and I wish you success!
August 22nd, 2017 13:55
Naked
Michael Edwards said:
Saw the title and just had to read it - and not disappointed - great read and write .
August 22nd, 2017 13:35
Michael Edwards said:
Saw the title and just had to read it - and not disappointed - great read and write .
August 22nd, 2017 13:35
Mixed mind
Accidental Poet said:
The elusive poem might be your next poem just waiting for you to bring it into existence. Your muse is speaking to you.
August 21st, 2017 18:53
Accidental Poet said:
The elusive poem might be your next poem just waiting for you to bring it into existence. Your muse is speaking to you.
August 21st, 2017 18:53
Mixed mind
burning-embers said:
Malu you artist. Wonderful picture. But your words - have you read my mind over the last three days ive been struggling with the essence of a poem thats part there yet i cant grasp it, is it something i\'ve written or become stuck over half way thru.... driving me nuts.
Clever you to think of writing on this subject, and so well written. You truly are an amazing lady.
August 21st, 2017 18:22
burning-embers said:
Malu you artist. Wonderful picture. But your words - have you read my mind over the last three days ive been struggling with the essence of a poem thats part there yet i cant grasp it, is it something i\'ve written or become stuck over half way thru.... driving me nuts.
Clever you to think of writing on this subject, and so well written. You truly are an amazing lady.
August 21st, 2017 18:22
Mixed mind
myself and me said:
At least, you finish a marvelous paint. The poem can wait.
August 21st, 2017 16:30
myself and me said:
At least, you finish a marvelous paint. The poem can wait.
August 21st, 2017 16:30
Mixed mind
FredPeyer said:
Good write, Malu. I think we all go through this at one time or another. And the painting is great too!
August 21st, 2017 16:27
FredPeyer said:
Good write, Malu. I think we all go through this at one time or another. And the painting is great too!
August 21st, 2017 16:27
Mixed mind
WL Schuett said:
Wow a lot of nice comments, I totally relate to the poem and I love the painting it does somehow remind me of dress patterns
August 21st, 2017 16:22
WL Schuett said:
Wow a lot of nice comments, I totally relate to the poem and I love the painting it does somehow remind me of dress patterns
August 21st, 2017 16:22
He made her
FredPeyer said:
Absolutely love this poem! Don\'t even think about your imagined \"language limitations\". Since English is not my first language either, I used to worry about that, but not anymore! You are good!
August 21st, 2017 15:42
FredPeyer said:
Absolutely love this poem! Don\'t even think about your imagined \"language limitations\". Since English is not my first language either, I used to worry about that, but not anymore! You are good!
August 21st, 2017 15:42
Mixed mind
Michael Edwards said:
Great poem and well done with the painting - touches of Dufy - great work M
August 21st, 2017 10:37
Michael Edwards said:
Great poem and well done with the painting - touches of Dufy - great work M
August 21st, 2017 10:37
Mixed mind
Goldfinch60 said:
I can see where you are coming from M but much like Louis I just sit and start writing and the words seem to flow. Good write.
August 21st, 2017 10:32
Goldfinch60 said:
I can see where you are coming from M but much like Louis I just sit and start writing and the words seem to flow. Good write.
August 21st, 2017 10:32
Mixed mind
Louis Gibbs said:
In experiencing such times, I just begin writing and let the words flow, from my muse or my mind or both. I then polish them as needed.
Your poem describes a common theme amongst poets, and quite well I must say, Malu!
August 21st, 2017 09:18
Louis Gibbs said:
In experiencing such times, I just begin writing and let the words flow, from my muse or my mind or both. I then polish them as needed.
Your poem describes a common theme amongst poets, and quite well I must say, Malu!
August 21st, 2017 09:18
He made her
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good flowing write, a life of love together beckons.
August 21st, 2017 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good flowing write, a life of love together beckons.
August 21st, 2017 01:10
He made her
Fay Slimm. said:
A sensual feel to each well written line in this piece of gently erotica dear Malu - - I love the metaphor you use to get the intimate theme across. Good read.
August 20th, 2017 09:48
Fay Slimm. said:
A sensual feel to each well written line in this piece of gently erotica dear Malu - - I love the metaphor you use to get the intimate theme across. Good read.
August 20th, 2017 09:48
He made her
rrodriguez said:
This is written so metaphorically. Has a twist of fantasy and if I may, mythological overtones. Greatly written. Don\'t worry about having a broad vocabulary, what\'s needed is a message. Lincoln\'s Gettysburg address had 272 words in simple vocabulary, but it\'s considered the greatest speech in history. Edward Everett delivered a two-hour speech at the Gettysburg National Cemetery — but most people only remember the two-minute speech given by President Abraham Lincoln. Moral of the story, keep writing and don\'t worry about the vocabulary. This will seep in your writing slowly for surely. Be blessed.
August 20th, 2017 09:40
rrodriguez said:
This is written so metaphorically. Has a twist of fantasy and if I may, mythological overtones. Greatly written. Don\'t worry about having a broad vocabulary, what\'s needed is a message. Lincoln\'s Gettysburg address had 272 words in simple vocabulary, but it\'s considered the greatest speech in history. Edward Everett delivered a two-hour speech at the Gettysburg National Cemetery — but most people only remember the two-minute speech given by President Abraham Lincoln. Moral of the story, keep writing and don\'t worry about the vocabulary. This will seep in your writing slowly for surely. Be blessed.
August 20th, 2017 09:40
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