Comments received on poems by malubotelho
Mixed mind
burning-embers said:
Malu you artist. Wonderful picture. But your words - have you read my mind over the last three days ive been struggling with the essence of a poem thats part there yet i cant grasp it, is it something i\'ve written or become stuck over half way thru.... driving me nuts.
Clever you to think of writing on this subject, and so well written. You truly are an amazing lady.
August 21st, 2017 18:22
burning-embers said:
Malu you artist. Wonderful picture. But your words - have you read my mind over the last three days ive been struggling with the essence of a poem thats part there yet i cant grasp it, is it something i\'ve written or become stuck over half way thru.... driving me nuts.
Clever you to think of writing on this subject, and so well written. You truly are an amazing lady.
August 21st, 2017 18:22
Mixed mind
myself and me said:
At least, you finish a marvelous paint. The poem can wait.
August 21st, 2017 16:30
myself and me said:
At least, you finish a marvelous paint. The poem can wait.
August 21st, 2017 16:30
Mixed mind
FredPeyer said:
Good write, Malu. I think we all go through this at one time or another. And the painting is great too!
August 21st, 2017 16:27
FredPeyer said:
Good write, Malu. I think we all go through this at one time or another. And the painting is great too!
August 21st, 2017 16:27
Mixed mind
WL Schuett said:
Wow a lot of nice comments, I totally relate to the poem and I love the painting it does somehow remind me of dress patterns
August 21st, 2017 16:22
WL Schuett said:
Wow a lot of nice comments, I totally relate to the poem and I love the painting it does somehow remind me of dress patterns
August 21st, 2017 16:22
He made her
FredPeyer said:
Absolutely love this poem! Don\'t even think about your imagined \"language limitations\". Since English is not my first language either, I used to worry about that, but not anymore! You are good!
August 21st, 2017 15:42
FredPeyer said:
Absolutely love this poem! Don\'t even think about your imagined \"language limitations\". Since English is not my first language either, I used to worry about that, but not anymore! You are good!
August 21st, 2017 15:42
Mixed mind
Michael Edwards said:
Great poem and well done with the painting - touches of Dufy - great work M
August 21st, 2017 10:37
Michael Edwards said:
Great poem and well done with the painting - touches of Dufy - great work M
August 21st, 2017 10:37
Mixed mind
Goldfinch60 said:
I can see where you are coming from M but much like Louis I just sit and start writing and the words seem to flow. Good write.
August 21st, 2017 10:32
Goldfinch60 said:
I can see where you are coming from M but much like Louis I just sit and start writing and the words seem to flow. Good write.
August 21st, 2017 10:32
Mixed mind
Louis Gibbs said:
In experiencing such times, I just begin writing and let the words flow, from my muse or my mind or both. I then polish them as needed.
Your poem describes a common theme amongst poets, and quite well I must say, Malu!
August 21st, 2017 09:18
Louis Gibbs said:
In experiencing such times, I just begin writing and let the words flow, from my muse or my mind or both. I then polish them as needed.
Your poem describes a common theme amongst poets, and quite well I must say, Malu!
August 21st, 2017 09:18
He made her
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good flowing write, a life of love together beckons.
August 21st, 2017 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good flowing write, a life of love together beckons.
August 21st, 2017 01:10
He made her
Fay Slimm. said:
A sensual feel to each well written line in this piece of gently erotica dear Malu - - I love the metaphor you use to get the intimate theme across. Good read.
August 20th, 2017 09:48
Fay Slimm. said:
A sensual feel to each well written line in this piece of gently erotica dear Malu - - I love the metaphor you use to get the intimate theme across. Good read.
August 20th, 2017 09:48
He made her
rrodriguez said:
This is written so metaphorically. Has a twist of fantasy and if I may, mythological overtones. Greatly written. Don\'t worry about having a broad vocabulary, what\'s needed is a message. Lincoln\'s Gettysburg address had 272 words in simple vocabulary, but it\'s considered the greatest speech in history. Edward Everett delivered a two-hour speech at the Gettysburg National Cemetery — but most people only remember the two-minute speech given by President Abraham Lincoln. Moral of the story, keep writing and don\'t worry about the vocabulary. This will seep in your writing slowly for surely. Be blessed.
August 20th, 2017 09:40
rrodriguez said:
This is written so metaphorically. Has a twist of fantasy and if I may, mythological overtones. Greatly written. Don\'t worry about having a broad vocabulary, what\'s needed is a message. Lincoln\'s Gettysburg address had 272 words in simple vocabulary, but it\'s considered the greatest speech in history. Edward Everett delivered a two-hour speech at the Gettysburg National Cemetery — but most people only remember the two-minute speech given by President Abraham Lincoln. Moral of the story, keep writing and don\'t worry about the vocabulary. This will seep in your writing slowly for surely. Be blessed.
August 20th, 2017 09:40
He made her
burning-embers said:
You write beautifully malubotelho. What a fine lover your subject has, how could she do anything but love him. A real smoothie - class.
August 20th, 2017 09:19
burning-embers said:
You write beautifully malubotelho. What a fine lover your subject has, how could she do anything but love him. A real smoothie - class.
August 20th, 2017 09:19
He made her
malubotelho said:
Wow! Thanks brother Brian. I\'m getting ready to go reading my friends poems that includes yours. A lovely Sunday for you.
August 20th, 2017 09:16
malubotelho said:
Wow! Thanks brother Brian. I\'m getting ready to go reading my friends poems that includes yours. A lovely Sunday for you.
August 20th, 2017 09:16
He made her
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Wonderful MALU ~ Sometimes we mere men can lift a Lady onto Higher Ground. This poem is a Sonnet to that ~ thank you ! By linguistic skill and metaphor it is Sensual but NOT erotic ~ titillating but NOT pornographic ~ experiential but NOT clinical ~ BEAUTIFUL ! Love the visual it is a perfect compliment to a perfect poem ! Sunday Hugs ~ BRIAN
August 20th, 2017 09:06
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Wonderful MALU ~ Sometimes we mere men can lift a Lady onto Higher Ground. This poem is a Sonnet to that ~ thank you ! By linguistic skill and metaphor it is Sensual but NOT erotic ~ titillating but NOT pornographic ~ experiential but NOT clinical ~ BEAUTIFUL ! Love the visual it is a perfect compliment to a perfect poem ! Sunday Hugs ~ BRIAN
August 20th, 2017 09:06
Thirst
burning-embers said:
I know that feeling, you could have written this just for me right now..... oh how i need that clear bottle. Teaser!
August 18th, 2017 13:53
burning-embers said:
I know that feeling, you could have written this just for me right now..... oh how i need that clear bottle. Teaser!
August 18th, 2017 13:53
Thirst
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MALU ~ God has promised to supply all our needs ~ but not our greeds ! Love the PIC & POEM ~ Brotherly Hugs ~ BRIAN Please check my new FUSION on Animals ~ Thank B.
August 18th, 2017 11:16
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MALU ~ God has promised to supply all our needs ~ but not our greeds ! Love the PIC & POEM ~ Brotherly Hugs ~ BRIAN Please check my new FUSION on Animals ~ Thank B.
August 18th, 2017 11:16
Crystal
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MALU ~ It\'s not the value of the Gift that counts ~ but WHO gave it to you ~ and the amount of LOVE it was given with ~ AMEN ~ Thanks for caring ~ Brotherly Hugs ~ BRIAN
August 17th, 2017 17:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MALU ~ It\'s not the value of the Gift that counts ~ but WHO gave it to you ~ and the amount of LOVE it was given with ~ AMEN ~ Thanks for caring ~ Brotherly Hugs ~ BRIAN
August 17th, 2017 17:27
Crystal
FredPeyer said:
Malu, this one-liner is excellent!
You might have added \'because I am worth it!\'
August 17th, 2017 17:14
FredPeyer said:
Malu, this one-liner is excellent!
You might have added \'because I am worth it!\'
August 17th, 2017 17:14
Crystal
Nicholas Browning said:
That picture is stunning.
The write is also outstanding.
August 17th, 2017 10:11
Nicholas Browning said:
That picture is stunning.
The write is also outstanding.
August 17th, 2017 10:11
Rising tides
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow fabulous.! But poignant end all so poetic. I admire how much u can say in brevity. Intense apt imagery painted in words. Kudos.
Do have a look at my writings too, But comment only on the one u like best. I write on many sites and they do enjoy my poetry or get Sth from it.
August 17th, 2017 00:32
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow fabulous.! But poignant end all so poetic. I admire how much u can say in brevity. Intense apt imagery painted in words. Kudos.
Do have a look at my writings too, But comment only on the one u like best. I write on many sites and they do enjoy my poetry or get Sth from it.
August 17th, 2017 00:32
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