Comments received on poems by malubotelho
The candy girl
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MALU ~ Love the poem and love all the comments and your BRAZILIAN replies ! I have noticed in Mexico & Peru and Cuba (where I have been this year) Men & Women are not afraid to flirt and as you say Brazil sounds the same ~ My current GF Angela is half Spanish so she is very flirty ! I was recently in ESTONIA (E Europe) on a CRUISE ! There were YOUNG LADIES IN Traditional Dress (long skirts !) selling Salted and also Sugared Almonds ~ They and The Ladies Selling them were all very Beautiful and discretely flirtatious in an East European Way ! In the morning I bought 20 packets and I did get five kisses (there were five Ladies) so in the cause of EAST / WEST relations I also fell in love five times c\'st la vie ! Thanks for sharing your experiences ~ beautiful ~ A Brotherly hug from BRIAN. I\'m doing a Joint Fusion with SANTITA on Games & Pastimes ~ please add a Poem ~ Thanks B.
August 24th, 2017 16:53
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MALU ~ Love the poem and love all the comments and your BRAZILIAN replies ! I have noticed in Mexico & Peru and Cuba (where I have been this year) Men & Women are not afraid to flirt and as you say Brazil sounds the same ~ My current GF Angela is half Spanish so she is very flirty ! I was recently in ESTONIA (E Europe) on a CRUISE ! There were YOUNG LADIES IN Traditional Dress (long skirts !) selling Salted and also Sugared Almonds ~ They and The Ladies Selling them were all very Beautiful and discretely flirtatious in an East European Way ! In the morning I bought 20 packets and I did get five kisses (there were five Ladies) so in the cause of EAST / WEST relations I also fell in love five times c\'st la vie ! Thanks for sharing your experiences ~ beautiful ~ A Brotherly hug from BRIAN. I\'m doing a Joint Fusion with SANTITA on Games & Pastimes ~ please add a Poem ~ Thanks B.
August 24th, 2017 16:53
The candy girl
dusk arising said:
As an old guy i have to add i certainly appreciate beauty and the beauity of a young lady is something older men get to only observe. No wonder you sold your candies so well for your beauty still radiates. Really pleasant to read. Thank you.
August 24th, 2017 16:37
dusk arising said:
As an old guy i have to add i certainly appreciate beauty and the beauity of a young lady is something older men get to only observe. No wonder you sold your candies so well for your beauty still radiates. Really pleasant to read. Thank you.
August 24th, 2017 16:37
The candy girl
WL Schuett said:
At risk of being misinterpreted love the double meaning love the candies good poem
August 24th, 2017 13:53
WL Schuett said:
At risk of being misinterpreted love the double meaning love the candies good poem
August 24th, 2017 13:53
The candy girl
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, Malu. I love it. And the \'old man\' twist at the end, though unexpected, is true. I too grew up in bpc (before politically correct). It was only fun as you say.
August 24th, 2017 13:30
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, Malu. I love it. And the \'old man\' twist at the end, though unexpected, is true. I too grew up in bpc (before politically correct). It was only fun as you say.
August 24th, 2017 13:30
The candy girl
Michael Edwards said:
One of the problems with growing older is that any interest shown can be misinterpreted - I love children but the idea of giving them a smile is something to be wary - it can be a sad world, This is a delightful read nonetheless.an
August 24th, 2017 11:51
Michael Edwards said:
One of the problems with growing older is that any interest shown can be misinterpreted - I love children but the idea of giving them a smile is something to be wary - it can be a sad world, This is a delightful read nonetheless.an
August 24th, 2017 11:51
The candy girl
malubotelho said:
That is the idea but you know it happens everyday and we can not control desire. The old guys here they were like kids two. Just want some fun. When I was the candy girl I would smile to them and sale tons of candy just because being cute and young. It was pure joy. In my country we are not so moralist. I did not mind them but I knew most of them were there to have some fun. I found them cute.
August 24th, 2017 11:32
malubotelho said:
That is the idea but you know it happens everyday and we can not control desire. The old guys here they were like kids two. Just want some fun. When I was the candy girl I would smile to them and sale tons of candy just because being cute and young. It was pure joy. In my country we are not so moralist. I did not mind them but I knew most of them were there to have some fun. I found them cute.
August 24th, 2017 11:32
The candy girl
malubotelho said:
Thanks Louis. Yes, beauty is beauty and to be appreciated. And we all love candies.
August 24th, 2017 10:27
malubotelho said:
Thanks Louis. Yes, beauty is beauty and to be appreciated. And we all love candies.
August 24th, 2017 10:27
The candy girl
Louis Gibbs said:
Old guys can innocently appreciate the brilliant beauty of a young girl child too, as your fine poem implies. Kudos, mb!
August 24th, 2017 10:19
Louis Gibbs said:
Old guys can innocently appreciate the brilliant beauty of a young girl child too, as your fine poem implies. Kudos, mb!
August 24th, 2017 10:19
The silliest
FredPeyer said:
Thank you for putting the text below the picture as well. Tried to read it on my cell phone while riding the bus. Next to impossible!
Very creative! You just gave me an idea I MUST try out. If it works I will put it on on some future date.
August 23rd, 2017 19:51
FredPeyer said:
Thank you for putting the text below the picture as well. Tried to read it on my cell phone while riding the bus. Next to impossible!
Very creative! You just gave me an idea I MUST try out. If it works I will put it on on some future date.
August 23rd, 2017 19:51
The silliest
dusk arising said:
I was tossed around like an old newspaper caught in the wind of your poem. How original
August 23rd, 2017 16:55
dusk arising said:
I was tossed around like an old newspaper caught in the wind of your poem. How original
August 23rd, 2017 16:55
The silliest
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the chase of words round the paper blowing away in your creative style. Great idea Malu.
August 23rd, 2017 15:37
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the chase of words round the paper blowing away in your creative style. Great idea Malu.
August 23rd, 2017 15:37
The silliest
Michael Edwards said:
Good on yer for tryin\' out different forms and ideas - great fun piece.
August 23rd, 2017 13:46
Michael Edwards said:
Good on yer for tryin\' out different forms and ideas - great fun piece.
August 23rd, 2017 13:46
Naked
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for caring & sharing MALU ! W can be cleansed by \"The Renewing of our Minds\" for me this is a daily thing ~ Hugs ~ Brother Brian
August 22nd, 2017 17:09
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for caring & sharing MALU ! W can be cleansed by \"The Renewing of our Minds\" for me this is a daily thing ~ Hugs ~ Brother Brian
August 22nd, 2017 17:09
Naked
lasergraph said:
We are all a work in progress, like softened clay that keeps getting remolded into what we perceive to be better. Good work.
August 22nd, 2017 16:29
lasergraph said:
We are all a work in progress, like softened clay that keeps getting remolded into what we perceive to be better. Good work.
August 22nd, 2017 16:29
Naked
Louis Gibbs said:
It is a pleasure seeing you naked, Malu! It is my favorite state of being too. Shed the ego, bare the soul! Well done!
August 22nd, 2017 16:03
Louis Gibbs said:
It is a pleasure seeing you naked, Malu! It is my favorite state of being too. Shed the ego, bare the soul! Well done!
August 22nd, 2017 16:03
Naked
WL Schuett said:
Lovely piece very personal, positive and inspiring glad you\'re happy with your On going metamorphosis
August 22nd, 2017 15:58
WL Schuett said:
Lovely piece very personal, positive and inspiring glad you\'re happy with your On going metamorphosis
August 22nd, 2017 15:58
Naked
malubotelho said:
Thanks love for your words. No concern here, I\'m happier than I ever been. Look again at my writing: I\'m happily bleeding, leaving parts of me behind
You see, I\'m blissfully happy 😊
August 22nd, 2017 15:03
malubotelho said:
Thanks love for your words. No concern here, I\'m happier than I ever been. Look again at my writing: I\'m happily bleeding, leaving parts of me behind
You see, I\'m blissfully happy 😊
August 22nd, 2017 15:03
Naked
burning-embers said:
\"Take kindly the counsel of the years,
gracefully surrendering the things of youth --- With all its sham, drudgery, and broken dreams,
it is still a beautiful world.
Be cheerful. Strive to be happy\" the words of Max Ehrmann in \'Desiderata\' a piece i find ever present in my mind. Lovely writing Malubotelho. + fav\'s
August 22nd, 2017 14:44
burning-embers said:
\"Take kindly the counsel of the years,
gracefully surrendering the things of youth --- With all its sham, drudgery, and broken dreams,
it is still a beautiful world.
Be cheerful. Strive to be happy\" the words of Max Ehrmann in \'Desiderata\' a piece i find ever present in my mind. Lovely writing Malubotelho. + fav\'s
August 22nd, 2017 14:44
Naked
FredPeyer said:
I really like this poem, Malu!
The older I get the more I realize that happiness requires letting go of everything and to concentrate on the core values of love, friendship, and self.
August 22nd, 2017 14:26
FredPeyer said:
I really like this poem, Malu!
The older I get the more I realize that happiness requires letting go of everything and to concentrate on the core values of love, friendship, and self.
August 22nd, 2017 14:26
Naked
Fay Slimm. said:
Malu this has to be one of your best - the piece gives a soul-naked view of time\'s passing and the need to loosen heavy for lighter pursuits. Excelent work - - Already in my favourite list.
August 22nd, 2017 14:21
Fay Slimm. said:
Malu this has to be one of your best - the piece gives a soul-naked view of time\'s passing and the need to loosen heavy for lighter pursuits. Excelent work - - Already in my favourite list.
August 22nd, 2017 14:21
Naked
WriteBeLight said:
I feel the struggle. Well done and I wish you success!
August 22nd, 2017 13:55
WriteBeLight said:
I feel the struggle. Well done and I wish you success!
August 22nd, 2017 13:55
Naked
Michael Edwards said:
Saw the title and just had to read it - and not disappointed - great read and write .
August 22nd, 2017 13:35
Michael Edwards said:
Saw the title and just had to read it - and not disappointed - great read and write .
August 22nd, 2017 13:35
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