Comments received on poems by malubotelho
Life
dusk arising said:
Wonderful words. I came online today and straight to your poem. What wonderful words to open my visit. Wisdom in their beauty. They go straight into my favourites.
August 26th, 2017 11:28
dusk arising said:
Wonderful words. I came online today and straight to your poem. What wonderful words to open my visit. Wisdom in their beauty. They go straight into my favourites.
August 26th, 2017 11:28
Enamored
dusk arising said:
\"Beauty, drawn by gods hand to fulfill my time\"....... beautiful line fills me with nostalgia of younger days. \"till our breathing has conquered the night\".... you are a cauldron of passionate phrase and nuance malubotelho. Lovely writing.
August 25th, 2017 18:51
dusk arising said:
\"Beauty, drawn by gods hand to fulfill my time\"....... beautiful line fills me with nostalgia of younger days. \"till our breathing has conquered the night\".... you are a cauldron of passionate phrase and nuance malubotelho. Lovely writing.
August 25th, 2017 18:51
Enamored
WL Schuett said:
Very romantic and visual... nicely done this would be a nice spoken word piece
August 25th, 2017 15:04
WL Schuett said:
Very romantic and visual... nicely done this would be a nice spoken word piece
August 25th, 2017 15:04
Enamored
FredPeyer said:
Romance of the first degree!
You are giving Harlequin a run for their money here.
Nice!
August 25th, 2017 13:37
FredPeyer said:
Romance of the first degree!
You are giving Harlequin a run for their money here.
Nice!
August 25th, 2017 13:37
Enamored
myself and me said:
\"we together have created a world\"
A world fill with love, powerful love.
I shall create myself such a world.
Wonderful piece.
August 25th, 2017 12:53
myself and me said:
\"we together have created a world\"
A world fill with love, powerful love.
I shall create myself such a world.
Wonderful piece.
August 25th, 2017 12:53
Enamored
Louis Gibbs said:
Phew! Who needs porn with poetry like this? So well done, Malu.
August 25th, 2017 11:21
Louis Gibbs said:
Phew! Who needs porn with poetry like this? So well done, Malu.
August 25th, 2017 11:21
Enamored
Michael Edwards said:
Great words superbly assembled - and a great read.
August 25th, 2017 10:44
Michael Edwards said:
Great words superbly assembled - and a great read.
August 25th, 2017 10:44
Enamored
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a romantic write and the picture adds to the feel of togetherness - a gem of a read Malu.
August 25th, 2017 10:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a romantic write and the picture adds to the feel of togetherness - a gem of a read Malu.
August 25th, 2017 10:39
The candy girl
myself and me said:
Lemon is my favorite.
Love candy and candy girl.
August 24th, 2017 21:00
myself and me said:
Lemon is my favorite.
Love candy and candy girl.
August 24th, 2017 21:00
The candy girl
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MALU ~ Love the poem and love all the comments and your BRAZILIAN replies ! I have noticed in Mexico & Peru and Cuba (where I have been this year) Men & Women are not afraid to flirt and as you say Brazil sounds the same ~ My current GF Angela is half Spanish so she is very flirty ! I was recently in ESTONIA (E Europe) on a CRUISE ! There were YOUNG LADIES IN Traditional Dress (long skirts !) selling Salted and also Sugared Almonds ~ They and The Ladies Selling them were all very Beautiful and discretely flirtatious in an East European Way ! In the morning I bought 20 packets and I did get five kisses (there were five Ladies) so in the cause of EAST / WEST relations I also fell in love five times c\'st la vie ! Thanks for sharing your experiences ~ beautiful ~ A Brotherly hug from BRIAN. I\'m doing a Joint Fusion with SANTITA on Games & Pastimes ~ please add a Poem ~ Thanks B.
August 24th, 2017 16:53
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MALU ~ Love the poem and love all the comments and your BRAZILIAN replies ! I have noticed in Mexico & Peru and Cuba (where I have been this year) Men & Women are not afraid to flirt and as you say Brazil sounds the same ~ My current GF Angela is half Spanish so she is very flirty ! I was recently in ESTONIA (E Europe) on a CRUISE ! There were YOUNG LADIES IN Traditional Dress (long skirts !) selling Salted and also Sugared Almonds ~ They and The Ladies Selling them were all very Beautiful and discretely flirtatious in an East European Way ! In the morning I bought 20 packets and I did get five kisses (there were five Ladies) so in the cause of EAST / WEST relations I also fell in love five times c\'st la vie ! Thanks for sharing your experiences ~ beautiful ~ A Brotherly hug from BRIAN. I\'m doing a Joint Fusion with SANTITA on Games & Pastimes ~ please add a Poem ~ Thanks B.
August 24th, 2017 16:53
The candy girl
dusk arising said:
As an old guy i have to add i certainly appreciate beauty and the beauity of a young lady is something older men get to only observe. No wonder you sold your candies so well for your beauty still radiates. Really pleasant to read. Thank you.
August 24th, 2017 16:37
dusk arising said:
As an old guy i have to add i certainly appreciate beauty and the beauity of a young lady is something older men get to only observe. No wonder you sold your candies so well for your beauty still radiates. Really pleasant to read. Thank you.
August 24th, 2017 16:37
The candy girl
WL Schuett said:
At risk of being misinterpreted love the double meaning love the candies good poem
August 24th, 2017 13:53
WL Schuett said:
At risk of being misinterpreted love the double meaning love the candies good poem
August 24th, 2017 13:53
The candy girl
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, Malu. I love it. And the \'old man\' twist at the end, though unexpected, is true. I too grew up in bpc (before politically correct). It was only fun as you say.
August 24th, 2017 13:30
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, Malu. I love it. And the \'old man\' twist at the end, though unexpected, is true. I too grew up in bpc (before politically correct). It was only fun as you say.
August 24th, 2017 13:30
The candy girl
Michael Edwards said:
One of the problems with growing older is that any interest shown can be misinterpreted - I love children but the idea of giving them a smile is something to be wary - it can be a sad world, This is a delightful read nonetheless.an
August 24th, 2017 11:51
Michael Edwards said:
One of the problems with growing older is that any interest shown can be misinterpreted - I love children but the idea of giving them a smile is something to be wary - it can be a sad world, This is a delightful read nonetheless.an
August 24th, 2017 11:51
The candy girl
malubotelho said:
That is the idea but you know it happens everyday and we can not control desire. The old guys here they were like kids two. Just want some fun. When I was the candy girl I would smile to them and sale tons of candy just because being cute and young. It was pure joy. In my country we are not so moralist. I did not mind them but I knew most of them were there to have some fun. I found them cute.
August 24th, 2017 11:32
malubotelho said:
That is the idea but you know it happens everyday and we can not control desire. The old guys here they were like kids two. Just want some fun. When I was the candy girl I would smile to them and sale tons of candy just because being cute and young. It was pure joy. In my country we are not so moralist. I did not mind them but I knew most of them were there to have some fun. I found them cute.
August 24th, 2017 11:32
The candy girl
malubotelho said:
Thanks Louis. Yes, beauty is beauty and to be appreciated. And we all love candies.
August 24th, 2017 10:27
malubotelho said:
Thanks Louis. Yes, beauty is beauty and to be appreciated. And we all love candies.
August 24th, 2017 10:27
The candy girl
Louis Gibbs said:
Old guys can innocently appreciate the brilliant beauty of a young girl child too, as your fine poem implies. Kudos, mb!
August 24th, 2017 10:19
Louis Gibbs said:
Old guys can innocently appreciate the brilliant beauty of a young girl child too, as your fine poem implies. Kudos, mb!
August 24th, 2017 10:19
The silliest
FredPeyer said:
Thank you for putting the text below the picture as well. Tried to read it on my cell phone while riding the bus. Next to impossible!
Very creative! You just gave me an idea I MUST try out. If it works I will put it on on some future date.
August 23rd, 2017 19:51
FredPeyer said:
Thank you for putting the text below the picture as well. Tried to read it on my cell phone while riding the bus. Next to impossible!
Very creative! You just gave me an idea I MUST try out. If it works I will put it on on some future date.
August 23rd, 2017 19:51
The silliest
dusk arising said:
I was tossed around like an old newspaper caught in the wind of your poem. How original
August 23rd, 2017 16:55
dusk arising said:
I was tossed around like an old newspaper caught in the wind of your poem. How original
August 23rd, 2017 16:55
The silliest
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the chase of words round the paper blowing away in your creative style. Great idea Malu.
August 23rd, 2017 15:37
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the chase of words round the paper blowing away in your creative style. Great idea Malu.
August 23rd, 2017 15:37
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