Comments received on poems by malubotelho
Love theatre 🎭
Louis Gibbs said:
Love the essence of this one ... the theater of love, actors engaging. Well done , Malu!
September 29th, 2017 10:35
Louis Gibbs said:
Love the essence of this one ... the theater of love, actors engaging. Well done , Malu!
September 29th, 2017 10:35
A bird told me 🐦
dusk arising said:
We seek comfort in closeness and harmony with a friendly soul when our hearts are tormented.
September 28th, 2017 18:33
dusk arising said:
We seek comfort in closeness and harmony with a friendly soul when our hearts are tormented.
September 28th, 2017 18:33
A bird told me 🐦
Michael Edwards said:
I have similar experiences to Martina so really appreciate this fine write
September 28th, 2017 15:18
Michael Edwards said:
I have similar experiences to Martina so really appreciate this fine write
September 28th, 2017 15:18
A bird told me 🐦
FredPeyer said:
A very nice and tender poem, Malu! Not far from my house there is this HUGE tree and every evening there seems to be a bird convention going on with each bird seeming to sing at the same time. I guess it is a bit like us humans, everybody talks and nobody listens!
I recently took a picture of birds and after reading your poem think that maybe I should write something for that picture! Thanks!
September 28th, 2017 14:13
FredPeyer said:
A very nice and tender poem, Malu! Not far from my house there is this HUGE tree and every evening there seems to be a bird convention going on with each bird seeming to sing at the same time. I guess it is a bit like us humans, everybody talks and nobody listens!
I recently took a picture of birds and after reading your poem think that maybe I should write something for that picture! Thanks!
September 28th, 2017 14:13
A bird told me 🐦
WL Schuett said:
I relate to your poem and to birds good write Malu love the picture
September 28th, 2017 09:34
WL Schuett said:
I relate to your poem and to birds good write Malu love the picture
September 28th, 2017 09:34
A bird told me 🐦
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, I feed the birds and occasionally they eat from my hand, but more often than not we converse though our eyes as we stand each side of the bird table, trust is always there.
September 28th, 2017 08:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, I feed the birds and occasionally they eat from my hand, but more often than not we converse though our eyes as we stand each side of the bird table, trust is always there.
September 28th, 2017 08:28
A bird told me 🐦
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhh MAMA ~ You look so so cute and hugable in your lovey picture ! I talk to the birds too MAMA must be in the genes ! MAMA BIRD is so so cruel ~ flying South and leaving DADA BIRD crying ! Love the poem and you too MAMA ~ BEBE BRIAN XOXOX
September 28th, 2017 08:25
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhh MAMA ~ You look so so cute and hugable in your lovey picture ! I talk to the birds too MAMA must be in the genes ! MAMA BIRD is so so cruel ~ flying South and leaving DADA BIRD crying ! Love the poem and you too MAMA ~ BEBE BRIAN XOXOX
September 28th, 2017 08:25
Thirsty 💉
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a very good write, your son is a poet, he may deny it but things and ideas change. Tell him that back in the time when opera was emerging it was the rap of the day.
September 27th, 2017 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a very good write, your son is a poet, he may deny it but things and ideas change. Tell him that back in the time when opera was emerging it was the rap of the day.
September 27th, 2017 00:57
Thirsty 💉
malubotelho said:
Thanks Fred. Yes, writing is very personal and I respect his boundaries. I\'m never pushy but I just give them ideas or comment about something I find interesting. He came back living with me after two years by himself. He is better living with me. We are closer. Thanks for your comments. I appreciate it.
September 26th, 2017 17:47
malubotelho said:
Thanks Fred. Yes, writing is very personal and I respect his boundaries. I\'m never pushy but I just give them ideas or comment about something I find interesting. He came back living with me after two years by himself. He is better living with me. We are closer. Thanks for your comments. I appreciate it.
September 26th, 2017 17:47
Thirsty 💉
FredPeyer said:
Dear Malu, this collaboration poem between you and your son is just great! I wish my kids could write, or have an interest in poetry. You are very lucky!
As a father, while I certainly am not trying to tell you anything, I would do what you do, do not push. Let him come on his own. Writing is very personal and younger people especially are hesitant to open themselves up to other people. It does not matter whether or not he posts anything here, he is a good writer!
September 26th, 2017 17:14
FredPeyer said:
Dear Malu, this collaboration poem between you and your son is just great! I wish my kids could write, or have an interest in poetry. You are very lucky!
As a father, while I certainly am not trying to tell you anything, I would do what you do, do not push. Let him come on his own. Writing is very personal and younger people especially are hesitant to open themselves up to other people. It does not matter whether or not he posts anything here, he is a good writer!
September 26th, 2017 17:14
Thirsty 💉
Michael Edwards said:
You must have a fabulous relationship to produce work of this quality - keep working together.
September 26th, 2017 15:52
Michael Edwards said:
You must have a fabulous relationship to produce work of this quality - keep working together.
September 26th, 2017 15:52
Thirsty 💉
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow a vivid portrayal of desire at its fiercest - -such a good combination of talent for word.
September 26th, 2017 14:42
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow a vivid portrayal of desire at its fiercest - -such a good combination of talent for word.
September 26th, 2017 14:42
Thirsty 💉
WL Schuett said:
He\'s a poet just like his Mom , this is fun I painted a few paintings with my daughter and they are the ones I hold most special and I bet this is special also ,even though he will probably say you\'re a rapper not a poet
September 26th, 2017 14:35
WL Schuett said:
He\'s a poet just like his Mom , this is fun I painted a few paintings with my daughter and they are the ones I hold most special and I bet this is special also ,even though he will probably say you\'re a rapper not a poet
September 26th, 2017 14:35
Life is rhythm
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, yes we do need to keep going but time for ourselves is always important as well.
September 26th, 2017 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, yes we do need to keep going but time for ourselves is always important as well.
September 26th, 2017 00:50
Life is rhythm
dusk arising said:
I printed it off and put it under my pillow. Now when that alarm clock goes off i shall not linger in my bed trying to pull together the remnants of a lost dream. No. I shall promptly read your instructive poem and rush into my day with a smiling rhythm in my step.
Do you believe me?
September 25th, 2017 18:04
dusk arising said:
I printed it off and put it under my pillow. Now when that alarm clock goes off i shall not linger in my bed trying to pull together the remnants of a lost dream. No. I shall promptly read your instructive poem and rush into my day with a smiling rhythm in my step.
Do you believe me?
September 25th, 2017 18:04
Life is rhythm
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, Malu. The first thing that came to my mind was the Energizer Bunny!
September 25th, 2017 17:24
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, Malu. The first thing that came to my mind was the Energizer Bunny!
September 25th, 2017 17:24
He played as a monster
FredPeyer said:
A very strong and personal account, Malu! A lot of times adults don\'t know how much their actions influence the children. A small child especially takes words at face value and can easily be traumatized by them. I admire you for having overcome a difficult childhood to be the beautiful and strong person you are today!
September 25th, 2017 12:17
FredPeyer said:
A very strong and personal account, Malu! A lot of times adults don\'t know how much their actions influence the children. A small child especially takes words at face value and can easily be traumatized by them. I admire you for having overcome a difficult childhood to be the beautiful and strong person you are today!
September 25th, 2017 12:17
Life is rhythm
Michael Edwards said:
And never time to contemplate - I\'m exhausted reading it Malu great write though it is to be sure :)
September 25th, 2017 09:56
Michael Edwards said:
And never time to contemplate - I\'m exhausted reading it Malu great write though it is to be sure :)
September 25th, 2017 09:56
He played as a monster
Goldfinch60 said:
Out of this trauma has risen an extremely strong lady who can face the world with absolute self reliance.
Good strong write Malu.
September 25th, 2017 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Out of this trauma has risen an extremely strong lady who can face the world with absolute self reliance.
Good strong write Malu.
September 25th, 2017 00:31
He played as a monster
dusk arising said:
I know you are strong Malu and i know you have a wonderful faith and spread love wherever you can. In writing this, in reading this, i can see where some of the metal of your spirit was born. You\'re amazing. You certainly have lived!
September 24th, 2017 17:19
dusk arising said:
I know you are strong Malu and i know you have a wonderful faith and spread love wherever you can. In writing this, in reading this, i can see where some of the metal of your spirit was born. You\'re amazing. You certainly have lived!
September 24th, 2017 17:19
He played as a monster
Christina8 said:
Thank you for sharing such a deeply personal story. It\'s amazing how many of us have similar stories with alcoholic fathers. You are a very strong woman, Malu, and you have perservered! Your write gave me courage, so thank you! When I was reading, I got the chills. *Hugs* Christina
September 24th, 2017 12:57
Christina8 said:
Thank you for sharing such a deeply personal story. It\'s amazing how many of us have similar stories with alcoholic fathers. You are a very strong woman, Malu, and you have perservered! Your write gave me courage, so thank you! When I was reading, I got the chills. *Hugs* Christina
September 24th, 2017 12:57
He played as a monster
Michael Edwards said:
A brave write indeed and all credit to you for facing it full square on .
September 24th, 2017 11:04
Michael Edwards said:
A brave write indeed and all credit to you for facing it full square on .
September 24th, 2017 11:04
He played as a monster
Louis Gibbs said:
What a beautiful, heart-rendering reflection on a terrifying childhood! Made sadder by the fact that it is such a common experience for children. Your poem, in its brutal honesty, touched me deeply, Malu. Congratulations!
September 24th, 2017 09:42
Louis Gibbs said:
What a beautiful, heart-rendering reflection on a terrifying childhood! Made sadder by the fact that it is such a common experience for children. Your poem, in its brutal honesty, touched me deeply, Malu. Congratulations!
September 24th, 2017 09:42
About sex and orgasm
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. I agree with what Fred has said, it is making love that is the important thing, showing th love you have for each other in a physical way to augment the combing of souls in a wonderfully loving relationship.
September 24th, 2017 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. I agree with what Fred has said, it is making love that is the important thing, showing th love you have for each other in a physical way to augment the combing of souls in a wonderfully loving relationship.
September 24th, 2017 00:40
About sex and orgasm
FredPeyer said:
There is a big difference between \'having sex\' and \'making love\'. What you are writing about is \'making love\' where the physical is only one aspect of the whole and where the mental, the feelings, and the soul are actually much more important, making orgasm seem rather like an after-thought. I am not talking about platonic love, but love-making where each partner is more concerned with pleasing the other partner than pleasing him/herself. Great writing and great contribution to an interesting discussion, Malu!
September 23rd, 2017 18:59
FredPeyer said:
There is a big difference between \'having sex\' and \'making love\'. What you are writing about is \'making love\' where the physical is only one aspect of the whole and where the mental, the feelings, and the soul are actually much more important, making orgasm seem rather like an after-thought. I am not talking about platonic love, but love-making where each partner is more concerned with pleasing the other partner than pleasing him/herself. Great writing and great contribution to an interesting discussion, Malu!
September 23rd, 2017 18:59
About sex and orgasm
malubotelho said:
Brian my brother, what I\'m talking about here and seems like no one understood because maybe I did not explain enough. It is all about not having an orgasm and staying connected as much as possible. When I say connected I mean the penis inside the vagina without too much moviment. But accoplad. It is all about the. Transmutation of the sexual energy building it day after day having sex without a orgasm. Without losing your sexual energy. There are some mantras involved in this practice. It is called tantric sex. Seems like no one ever heard about this. That is fine though because it is not common. Thanks my younger brother. You are very young. To tell you the truth, you could be my son. I think I\'m going to begin calling you baby Brian.
September 23rd, 2017 17:11
malubotelho said:
Brian my brother, what I\'m talking about here and seems like no one understood because maybe I did not explain enough. It is all about not having an orgasm and staying connected as much as possible. When I say connected I mean the penis inside the vagina without too much moviment. But accoplad. It is all about the. Transmutation of the sexual energy building it day after day having sex without a orgasm. Without losing your sexual energy. There are some mantras involved in this practice. It is called tantric sex. Seems like no one ever heard about this. That is fine though because it is not common. Thanks my younger brother. You are very young. To tell you the truth, you could be my son. I think I\'m going to begin calling you baby Brian.
September 23rd, 2017 17:11
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