Comments received on poems by malubotelho
Insomnia
WL Schuett said:
Hope you wrote it out and now you can sleep , good poem very expressive
September 2nd, 2017 15:28
WL Schuett said:
Hope you wrote it out and now you can sleep , good poem very expressive
September 2nd, 2017 15:28
Prisoner of love 💔
WL Schuett said:
Beautifully sad but understand the suffocating love , well done
September 1st, 2017 10:07
WL Schuett said:
Beautifully sad but understand the suffocating love , well done
September 1st, 2017 10:07
Prisoner of love 💔
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good loving write until.....
Good write.
September 1st, 2017 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good loving write until.....
Good write.
September 1st, 2017 00:49
Prisoner of love 💔
dusk arising said:
Awww Malubotelho,..... youve made poetry form the story of my life. I do so devote myself to my ladies pleasure. I enjoyed reading about myself too.... thank you (wink wink)xx
August 31st, 2017 16:58
dusk arising said:
Awww Malubotelho,..... youve made poetry form the story of my life. I do so devote myself to my ladies pleasure. I enjoyed reading about myself too.... thank you (wink wink)xx
August 31st, 2017 16:58
Prisoner of love 💔
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MALU for enlarging our concept of the extent and the extinction of LOVE. Often our Ladies accuse us of doing TOO LITTLE but your excellent ode informs us we can also do TOO MUCH and the result (rejection) is the same ! ME ? I like to get the balance just right ! Brotherly Hugs ~ from Brother BRIAN Love the PICTURE we can all relate to that ~ \"Alone again naturally !\"
August 31st, 2017 16:28
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MALU for enlarging our concept of the extent and the extinction of LOVE. Often our Ladies accuse us of doing TOO LITTLE but your excellent ode informs us we can also do TOO MUCH and the result (rejection) is the same ! ME ? I like to get the balance just right ! Brotherly Hugs ~ from Brother BRIAN Love the PICTURE we can all relate to that ~ \"Alone again naturally !\"
August 31st, 2017 16:28
Prisoner of love 💔
FredPeyer said:
Sometimes love can be suffocating. Too much good is bad. We all need our personal space, no matter how much we love the other person.
Malu, you captured all this and more in your beautiful poem. I like how it starts and ends the same, as if the time in-between is only an interlude.
August 31st, 2017 14:10
FredPeyer said:
Sometimes love can be suffocating. Too much good is bad. We all need our personal space, no matter how much we love the other person.
Malu, you captured all this and more in your beautiful poem. I like how it starts and ends the same, as if the time in-between is only an interlude.
August 31st, 2017 14:10
Prisoner of love 💔
myself and me said:
This is the kind of love that hurt both side.
You write it so well.
August 31st, 2017 13:21
myself and me said:
This is the kind of love that hurt both side.
You write it so well.
August 31st, 2017 13:21
Pray for Texas
dusk arising said:
I have never visited the USA and only met US citizens online. All such different, nicer folk, than TV progs would lead us to believe here in UK. What i see in Texas is the human spirit of helping your neighbor no matter who they be. One hopes such disasters also have a positive lasting effect upon society bringing it closer to one single humanity. Worthy thought provoking writing Malu.
August 30th, 2017 17:28
dusk arising said:
I have never visited the USA and only met US citizens online. All such different, nicer folk, than TV progs would lead us to believe here in UK. What i see in Texas is the human spirit of helping your neighbor no matter who they be. One hopes such disasters also have a positive lasting effect upon society bringing it closer to one single humanity. Worthy thought provoking writing Malu.
August 30th, 2017 17:28
Pray for Texas
poetboy123 said:
We should also pray for the people (before prisoners they are people) stuck in the Houston Jail that was decided to not be evacuated despite it being mandatory on the area. We need to do more than pray, climate change enhances these storms. As I have grown, I begin to disagree with the \"just be a good person\" rhetoric. Great thought for the poem though.
August 30th, 2017 13:29
poetboy123 said:
We should also pray for the people (before prisoners they are people) stuck in the Houston Jail that was decided to not be evacuated despite it being mandatory on the area. We need to do more than pray, climate change enhances these storms. As I have grown, I begin to disagree with the \"just be a good person\" rhetoric. Great thought for the poem though.
August 30th, 2017 13:29
Pray for Texas
myself and me said:
May God soothe their pain, help them out of the suffer, give them hope and strength to rebuild their future.
Thanks. M.
August 30th, 2017 12:24
myself and me said:
May God soothe their pain, help them out of the suffer, give them hope and strength to rebuild their future.
Thanks. M.
August 30th, 2017 12:24
Little witch🕷🔮/ For Briansod and all MPS
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, see you on Halloween.
August 30th, 2017 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, see you on Halloween.
August 30th, 2017 01:54
Little witch🕷🔮/ For Briansod and all MPS
dusk arising said:
Here malubotelho - you leave my bow and arrows alone! ... i bet you could make all of us into dazed little sparrows too! Where do you get your inspiration from. Methinks you have a generous and inventive heart lovely lady. This was a joy to share, thank you.
August 29th, 2017 22:32
dusk arising said:
Here malubotelho - you leave my bow and arrows alone! ... i bet you could make all of us into dazed little sparrows too! Where do you get your inspiration from. Methinks you have a generous and inventive heart lovely lady. This was a joy to share, thank you.
August 29th, 2017 22:32
Little witch🕷🔮/ For Briansod and all MPS
FredPeyer said:
That one is real fun! Good write, Malu!
August 29th, 2017 16:37
FredPeyer said:
That one is real fun! Good write, Malu!
August 29th, 2017 16:37
Little witch🕷🔮/ For Briansod and all MPS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
OBRIGADO MALU ! Because we are Family ~ we all inspire each other with our ODD ODES ! Michael with his Limericks ~ KAT with her OMG List ! ~ SANTITA with her ETHEREES and the plethora of topics we choose for pur ODES & FUSIONS. Some of us have to work 9 to 5 and there is never enough hours left in the day to read mark learn and inwardly digest the daily output and input of MPS. WITCHES are a Universal Phenomena ~ pleased I stirred your MUSE ! Love your visual much more BRAZILLIAN than mine ~ black Hat ~ black Cat and all ! All the ladies I have ever dated have had a touch of the WITCH and you hilite some of the traits ! Moonstruck ~ Stellar kissers ~ Purple and higher than the Angels ! ~ Affinity with Venus & Unicorns ~ Cupid Olympus Apollo all under your spell ~ You are the Queen of Witches ! Now I have my check list i will be more prepared. Thanks for sharing SISTER WITCH ~ Stellar hugs ~ BROTHER BRIAN ~ Son of the Sun XOX
August 29th, 2017 16:00
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
OBRIGADO MALU ! Because we are Family ~ we all inspire each other with our ODD ODES ! Michael with his Limericks ~ KAT with her OMG List ! ~ SANTITA with her ETHEREES and the plethora of topics we choose for pur ODES & FUSIONS. Some of us have to work 9 to 5 and there is never enough hours left in the day to read mark learn and inwardly digest the daily output and input of MPS. WITCHES are a Universal Phenomena ~ pleased I stirred your MUSE ! Love your visual much more BRAZILLIAN than mine ~ black Hat ~ black Cat and all ! All the ladies I have ever dated have had a touch of the WITCH and you hilite some of the traits ! Moonstruck ~ Stellar kissers ~ Purple and higher than the Angels ! ~ Affinity with Venus & Unicorns ~ Cupid Olympus Apollo all under your spell ~ You are the Queen of Witches ! Now I have my check list i will be more prepared. Thanks for sharing SISTER WITCH ~ Stellar hugs ~ BROTHER BRIAN ~ Son of the Sun XOX
August 29th, 2017 16:00
Little witch🕷🔮/ For Briansod and all MPS
malubotelho said:
Yes, fullest fun festival for us today.
August 29th, 2017 15:56
malubotelho said:
Yes, fullest fun festival for us today.
August 29th, 2017 15:56
Little witch🕷🔮/ For Briansod and all MPS
Michael Edwards said:
Fullest funloads Malu
August 29th, 2017 15:37
Michael Edwards said:
Fullest funloads Malu
August 29th, 2017 15:37
Little witch🕷🔮/ For Briansod and all MPS
myself and me said:
I love this little witch. So naughty yet cute.
If I see a purple moon tonight, I know the reason why.
Lovely poem.
August 29th, 2017 14:22
myself and me said:
I love this little witch. So naughty yet cute.
If I see a purple moon tonight, I know the reason why.
Lovely poem.
August 29th, 2017 14:22
Heart to heart ❤️
myself and me said:
Love the poem and form it in, looks like heart.
Beautiful writing.
August 28th, 2017 15:59
myself and me said:
Love the poem and form it in, looks like heart.
Beautiful writing.
August 28th, 2017 15:59
Heart to heart ❤️
FredPeyer said:
Very nicely said, Malu. Sometimes hearts are hard to hear and hard to understand, but if you can speak through them..........
August 28th, 2017 12:16
FredPeyer said:
Very nicely said, Malu. Sometimes hearts are hard to hear and hard to understand, but if you can speak through them..........
August 28th, 2017 12:16
Heart to heart ❤️
dusk arising said:
Quite quite lovely. Sooo much love in the air. I like this, its happy and fun, and isn\'t that just how love is at its best?
August 28th, 2017 11:47
dusk arising said:
Quite quite lovely. Sooo much love in the air. I like this, its happy and fun, and isn\'t that just how love is at its best?
August 28th, 2017 11:47
Heart to heart ❤️
malubotelho said:
I had made a heart with my writing circled with hearts but something went wrong and when I published it turned to be what you can see. Still ok and cute.
August 28th, 2017 09:26
malubotelho said:
I had made a heart with my writing circled with hearts but something went wrong and when I published it turned to be what you can see. Still ok and cute.
August 28th, 2017 09:26
Heart to heart ❤️
Michael Edwards said:
Spoken from the heart Malu - Good \'un.
August 28th, 2017 09:06
Michael Edwards said:
Spoken from the heart Malu - Good \'un.
August 28th, 2017 09:06
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