Comments received on poems by malubotelho
Prisoner of love 💔
Mugsdaddy said:
So sad and yet so true to life. He left her no room to grow. An unblossomed flower while still beautiful can never be fully appreciated because true beauty is never revealed. Very beautiful very deep very sad. Amazing and tragic. This is a masterpiece.
September 4th, 2017 17:00
Mugsdaddy said:
So sad and yet so true to life. He left her no room to grow. An unblossomed flower while still beautiful can never be fully appreciated because true beauty is never revealed. Very beautiful very deep very sad. Amazing and tragic. This is a masterpiece.
September 4th, 2017 17:00
Insomnia
Mugsdaddy said:
Such a personal conveyance of a dark time vivid and frightening. Beautiful write.
September 4th, 2017 16:53
Mugsdaddy said:
Such a personal conveyance of a dark time vivid and frightening. Beautiful write.
September 4th, 2017 16:53
Insomnia
Goldfinch60 said:
God write and I can understand that feeling of being trapped when Morpheus ignores you.
September 3rd, 2017 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
God write and I can understand that feeling of being trapped when Morpheus ignores you.
September 3rd, 2017 01:12
Insomnia
Heather T said:
A torturous condition that you\'ve penned so well! I actually practice a grounding exercise to stop the racing thoughts. It isn\'t magic, but it helps. Love how you used long fingers scratching the mind.
September 2nd, 2017 22:34
Heather T said:
A torturous condition that you\'ve penned so well! I actually practice a grounding exercise to stop the racing thoughts. It isn\'t magic, but it helps. Love how you used long fingers scratching the mind.
September 2nd, 2017 22:34
Insomnia
Accidental Poet said:
Sometimes it\'s so hard to clear the mind of sleep robbing thoughts. And then next thing you know you\'re waking up hours later wondering how you did finally fall asleep. Great poem malu. ; )
September 2nd, 2017 17:45
Accidental Poet said:
Sometimes it\'s so hard to clear the mind of sleep robbing thoughts. And then next thing you know you\'re waking up hours later wondering how you did finally fall asleep. Great poem malu. ; )
September 2nd, 2017 17:45
Insomnia
myself and me said:
It is such a torment. \"Insomnia\" is such a dreadful word to hear, and horrible experience to bear. I wish I have the magic wand to put you into sleep.
September 2nd, 2017 16:33
myself and me said:
It is such a torment. \"Insomnia\" is such a dreadful word to hear, and horrible experience to bear. I wish I have the magic wand to put you into sleep.
September 2nd, 2017 16:33
Insomnia
Fay Slimm. said:
A scary place to be is sleepless when \"drenched in inquisition\" and your words describe the position so well dear Malu that I felt I was knocking on those same walls. A compelling read.
September 2nd, 2017 16:29
Fay Slimm. said:
A scary place to be is sleepless when \"drenched in inquisition\" and your words describe the position so well dear Malu that I felt I was knocking on those same walls. A compelling read.
September 2nd, 2017 16:29
Insomnia
FredPeyer said:
Malu, I feel for you. Not being able to fall asleep must be terrible.
Fortunately I am one these people who only have to lay down and it sleeps! Maybe there is a little switch in my head somewhere that turns sleep on as soon as I am horizontal! :-)
September 2nd, 2017 15:58
FredPeyer said:
Malu, I feel for you. Not being able to fall asleep must be terrible.
Fortunately I am one these people who only have to lay down and it sleeps! Maybe there is a little switch in my head somewhere that turns sleep on as soon as I am horizontal! :-)
September 2nd, 2017 15:58
Insomnia
dusk arising said:
Mental turmoil preventing sleep is something i have discovered over the last few years. It affects your everyday life, i now prefer to fall asleep in my chair rather than goto bed and just lay there unable to sleep. Your expression of anguish in your writing feels real and makes uncomfortable reading. Really good writing from you again my friend.
September 2nd, 2017 15:48
dusk arising said:
Mental turmoil preventing sleep is something i have discovered over the last few years. It affects your everyday life, i now prefer to fall asleep in my chair rather than goto bed and just lay there unable to sleep. Your expression of anguish in your writing feels real and makes uncomfortable reading. Really good writing from you again my friend.
September 2nd, 2017 15:48
Insomnia
WL Schuett said:
Hope you wrote it out and now you can sleep , good poem very expressive
September 2nd, 2017 15:28
WL Schuett said:
Hope you wrote it out and now you can sleep , good poem very expressive
September 2nd, 2017 15:28
Prisoner of love 💔
WL Schuett said:
Beautifully sad but understand the suffocating love , well done
September 1st, 2017 10:07
WL Schuett said:
Beautifully sad but understand the suffocating love , well done
September 1st, 2017 10:07
Prisoner of love 💔
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good loving write until.....
Good write.
September 1st, 2017 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good loving write until.....
Good write.
September 1st, 2017 00:49
Prisoner of love 💔
Accidental Poet said:
Sometimes we push away that which we really want/need. Excellent poem malu. ; )
August 31st, 2017 19:28
Accidental Poet said:
Sometimes we push away that which we really want/need. Excellent poem malu. ; )
August 31st, 2017 19:28
Prisoner of love 💔
dusk arising said:
Awww Malubotelho,..... youve made poetry form the story of my life. I do so devote myself to my ladies pleasure. I enjoyed reading about myself too.... thank you (wink wink)xx
August 31st, 2017 16:58
dusk arising said:
Awww Malubotelho,..... youve made poetry form the story of my life. I do so devote myself to my ladies pleasure. I enjoyed reading about myself too.... thank you (wink wink)xx
August 31st, 2017 16:58
Prisoner of love 💔
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MALU for enlarging our concept of the extent and the extinction of LOVE. Often our Ladies accuse us of doing TOO LITTLE but your excellent ode informs us we can also do TOO MUCH and the result (rejection) is the same ! ME ? I like to get the balance just right ! Brotherly Hugs ~ from Brother BRIAN Love the PICTURE we can all relate to that ~ \"Alone again naturally !\"
August 31st, 2017 16:28
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MALU for enlarging our concept of the extent and the extinction of LOVE. Often our Ladies accuse us of doing TOO LITTLE but your excellent ode informs us we can also do TOO MUCH and the result (rejection) is the same ! ME ? I like to get the balance just right ! Brotherly Hugs ~ from Brother BRIAN Love the PICTURE we can all relate to that ~ \"Alone again naturally !\"
August 31st, 2017 16:28
Prisoner of love 💔
FredPeyer said:
Sometimes love can be suffocating. Too much good is bad. We all need our personal space, no matter how much we love the other person.
Malu, you captured all this and more in your beautiful poem. I like how it starts and ends the same, as if the time in-between is only an interlude.
August 31st, 2017 14:10
FredPeyer said:
Sometimes love can be suffocating. Too much good is bad. We all need our personal space, no matter how much we love the other person.
Malu, you captured all this and more in your beautiful poem. I like how it starts and ends the same, as if the time in-between is only an interlude.
August 31st, 2017 14:10
Prisoner of love 💔
myself and me said:
This is the kind of love that hurt both side.
You write it so well.
August 31st, 2017 13:21
myself and me said:
This is the kind of love that hurt both side.
You write it so well.
August 31st, 2017 13:21
Pray for Texas
dusk arising said:
I have never visited the USA and only met US citizens online. All such different, nicer folk, than TV progs would lead us to believe here in UK. What i see in Texas is the human spirit of helping your neighbor no matter who they be. One hopes such disasters also have a positive lasting effect upon society bringing it closer to one single humanity. Worthy thought provoking writing Malu.
August 30th, 2017 17:28
dusk arising said:
I have never visited the USA and only met US citizens online. All such different, nicer folk, than TV progs would lead us to believe here in UK. What i see in Texas is the human spirit of helping your neighbor no matter who they be. One hopes such disasters also have a positive lasting effect upon society bringing it closer to one single humanity. Worthy thought provoking writing Malu.
August 30th, 2017 17:28
Pray for Texas
poetboy5454 said:
We should also pray for the people (before prisoners they are people) stuck in the Houston Jail that was decided to not be evacuated despite it being mandatory on the area. We need to do more than pray, climate change enhances these storms. As I have grown, I begin to disagree with the \"just be a good person\" rhetoric. Great thought for the poem though.
August 30th, 2017 13:29
poetboy5454 said:
We should also pray for the people (before prisoners they are people) stuck in the Houston Jail that was decided to not be evacuated despite it being mandatory on the area. We need to do more than pray, climate change enhances these storms. As I have grown, I begin to disagree with the \"just be a good person\" rhetoric. Great thought for the poem though.
August 30th, 2017 13:29
Pray for Texas
myself and me said:
May God soothe their pain, help them out of the suffer, give them hope and strength to rebuild their future.
Thanks. M.
August 30th, 2017 12:24
myself and me said:
May God soothe their pain, help them out of the suffer, give them hope and strength to rebuild their future.
Thanks. M.
August 30th, 2017 12:24
Little witch🕷🔮/ For Briansod and all MPS
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, see you on Halloween.
August 30th, 2017 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, see you on Halloween.
August 30th, 2017 01:54
Little witch🕷🔮/ For Briansod and all MPS
dusk arising said:
Here malubotelho - you leave my bow and arrows alone! ... i bet you could make all of us into dazed little sparrows too! Where do you get your inspiration from. Methinks you have a generous and inventive heart lovely lady. This was a joy to share, thank you.
August 29th, 2017 22:32
dusk arising said:
Here malubotelho - you leave my bow and arrows alone! ... i bet you could make all of us into dazed little sparrows too! Where do you get your inspiration from. Methinks you have a generous and inventive heart lovely lady. This was a joy to share, thank you.
August 29th, 2017 22:32
Little witch🕷🔮/ For Briansod and all MPS
Accidental Poet said:
The picture at the top reminded me of the old TV program of \"Bewithed\". I really like your poem here malu. Thanks for sharing. ; )
August 29th, 2017 18:49
Accidental Poet said:
The picture at the top reminded me of the old TV program of \"Bewithed\". I really like your poem here malu. Thanks for sharing. ; )
August 29th, 2017 18:49
Heart to heart ❤️
Accidental Poet said:
How did I miss this gem of a write? Very heartfelt and honest. Excellent malu.
August 29th, 2017 18:44
Accidental Poet said:
How did I miss this gem of a write? Very heartfelt and honest. Excellent malu.
August 29th, 2017 18:44
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