Comments received on poems by malubotelho



For those who love ❤️
orchidee said:

A fine write Malu. As long as no-one calls me \'luvvy\'! lol.

September 21st, 2017 10:06

For those who love ❤️
Christina8 said:

What a great poem! I love that you wrote (love) \"in perfect doses; cure, in massive doses; harms. I have been on the receiving end of both. I think we all need it to sustain us. I LOVE this poem!

September 21st, 2017 09:32

For those who love ❤️
Louis Gibbs said:

Love is all there is. Love these expressions, Malu!

September 21st, 2017 08:35

Inner debate
WL Schuett said:

Love the writing I could feel the struggle , great write ,very introspective

September 20th, 2017 20:47

Inner debate
dusk arising said:

oooh such pain and anguish ! where is the love ? love doesn\'t dance upon the dead remnants of another...
ouch...... what a week this is turning out to be......
upside down world - am i hopping about on my head - no wonder nothing makes sense.

September 20th, 2017 18:12

Inner debate
malubotelho said:

Sorry dear. It is going to be sad now. Just a bit.

September 20th, 2017 13:02

Inner debate
myself and me said:

This one got me. I don\'t think anybody going to win the battle, but rather both bleed to die. So painful.

September 20th, 2017 12:41

Inner debate
lasergraph said:

Sometimes we have to get right with our past to move forward into the future. Great piece and the graphic is incredible.

September 20th, 2017 11:56

Inner debate
Michael Edwards said:

I\'ve returned to this a couple of times and it gets even better with each read - super work Malu.

September 20th, 2017 11:18

Inner debate
Fay Slimm. said:

Malu your gift for writing comes through each line in this verse to the rose of sorrow -- an engaging read.

September 20th, 2017 10:46

Inner debate
Christina8 said:

Great write, Malu! What a beautifully written poem! It\'s sad but at the end gives way for peace. A pleasure to read!

September 20th, 2017 10:28

Inner debate
orchidee said:

I\'m the Chairperson of: \'Nothing-too-hot-escapes-my-notice-so-I-can-avoid-swoons\' Committee! But now Brian\'s comment made me swoon! lol. A fine write Malu.

September 20th, 2017 10:18

Inner debate
FredPeyer said:

I do hope, Malu, that this wonderfully written poem exists only in your imagination! It is dark and sensuous. I like the line \'We can bleed together till one of us wins the battle\', only question is if the battle was worth it?

September 20th, 2017 09:45

Inner debate
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

OBRIGADO MALU ~ In this life the flesh (In my case nubile PINK Roses !) always wars with the Spirit ~ the trouble is (with me like you) the more I desire to kiss and lick those Pink Petals the harder it is to resist ! Thanks fo caring and sharing Abrajos e Beijos de seu Irmao BRIAN XOXOX ~ O ESPIRITO DO DEUS VIVO ~ CAI DE NOVO EM MIM !

September 20th, 2017 08:21

Inner debate
Goldfinch60 said:

This is a super write, I do hope though that the rose blossoms into its full and wondrous beauty.

September 20th, 2017 08:04

Passion
lasergraph said:

The forbidden heat burns the hottest. Nicely expressed.

September 19th, 2017 16:35

Love for love
lasergraph said:

Great write, loving heart. Loved thge visual as well.

September 19th, 2017 07:58

Love for love
Goldfinch60 said:

The love within you shines through the words on this page.

September 19th, 2017 00:35

Love for love
Accidental Poet said:

Love is a rocky road with twists and turns and dead ends too. But learning to love is a class in the school of life that we all must learn from. You\'re on the right path. Follow that path with an open heart. ; )

September 18th, 2017 19:00

Love for love
myself and me said:

Each and every love is different, love as you could, loved as you may, collect the love and live in the love.
Beautiful view fit your beautiful writing.

September 18th, 2017 18:18

Love for love
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

DEAR SISTER MALU ~ Your logo always tells me you are a very Beautiful Young Lady and I would love to walk along that broadwalk and spend time seagazing with you. You are altogether lovely and have nothing to fear in this LIVE or the NEXT ~ AMEN Hugs ~ Brother BRIAN XOX

September 18th, 2017 17:39

Love for love
WL Schuett said:

Malu , your journey to self discovery has I believe made you a wonderful poet may we all keep learning

September 18th, 2017 16:47

Love for love
dusk arising said:

Ah Malubotelho you are indeed a beautiful soul and looks to me you are on paath to nirvana.
I am currently studying the teachings of the buddha and your words could so easily have been from a text therein.
There is so much beauty we have forgotten to see.

September 18th, 2017 16:45

Love for love
Michael Edwards said:

Super read Malu

September 18th, 2017 15:55

Love for love
FredPeyer said:

Great poem, Malu! Only after we empty our hearts and minds, get rid of all preconceived notions, can we truly love and truly see the other person for who she/he is.

September 18th, 2017 14:55

Love for love
Fay Slimm. said:

Perfecting thoughts for love to grow is such an inspiring part of this poem Malu - -- learning how to love is a most noble wish - a truly beautiful read.

September 18th, 2017 14:45

Passion
F.G. Franklin said:

Passions of youth are replaced by passions of old age...where we just want to play with our grandchildren and sip sweet tea on the porch. I think my greatest \"passion\" is for the written word. But personally I\'ve always thought having my own slice of cake was better than looking through the window at someone else\'s candy. :)

September 16th, 2017 14:04

Passion
kevin browne said:

I guess all there is to say is your passion in this poem has also stimulated my passion for reading you poetry. brilliant effort malubotelho.

September 16th, 2017 13:41

Passion
Goldfinch60 said:

A very good passionate write Mal.

September 16th, 2017 00:51

Passion
Michael Edwards said:

Great work Malu

September 15th, 2017 23:38

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