Comments received on poems by malubotelho
Inner debate
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve returned to this a couple of times and it gets even better with each read - super work Malu.
September 20th, 2017 11:18
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve returned to this a couple of times and it gets even better with each read - super work Malu.
September 20th, 2017 11:18
Inner debate
Fay Slimm. said:
Malu your gift for writing comes through each line in this verse to the rose of sorrow -- an engaging read.
September 20th, 2017 10:46
Fay Slimm. said:
Malu your gift for writing comes through each line in this verse to the rose of sorrow -- an engaging read.
September 20th, 2017 10:46
Inner debate
Christina8 said:
Great write, Malu! What a beautifully written poem! It\'s sad but at the end gives way for peace. A pleasure to read!
September 20th, 2017 10:28
Christina8 said:
Great write, Malu! What a beautifully written poem! It\'s sad but at the end gives way for peace. A pleasure to read!
September 20th, 2017 10:28
Inner debate
orchidee said:
I\'m the Chairperson of: \'Nothing-too-hot-escapes-my-notice-so-I-can-avoid-swoons\' Committee! But now Brian\'s comment made me swoon! lol. A fine write Malu.
September 20th, 2017 10:18
orchidee said:
I\'m the Chairperson of: \'Nothing-too-hot-escapes-my-notice-so-I-can-avoid-swoons\' Committee! But now Brian\'s comment made me swoon! lol. A fine write Malu.
September 20th, 2017 10:18
Inner debate
FredPeyer said:
I do hope, Malu, that this wonderfully written poem exists only in your imagination! It is dark and sensuous. I like the line \'We can bleed together till one of us wins the battle\', only question is if the battle was worth it?
September 20th, 2017 09:45
FredPeyer said:
I do hope, Malu, that this wonderfully written poem exists only in your imagination! It is dark and sensuous. I like the line \'We can bleed together till one of us wins the battle\', only question is if the battle was worth it?
September 20th, 2017 09:45
Inner debate
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
OBRIGADO MALU ~ In this life the flesh (In my case nubile PINK Roses !) always wars with the Spirit ~ the trouble is (with me like you) the more I desire to kiss and lick those Pink Petals the harder it is to resist ! Thanks fo caring and sharing Abrajos e Beijos de seu Irmao BRIAN XOXOX ~ O ESPIRITO DO DEUS VIVO ~ CAI DE NOVO EM MIM !
September 20th, 2017 08:21
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
OBRIGADO MALU ~ In this life the flesh (In my case nubile PINK Roses !) always wars with the Spirit ~ the trouble is (with me like you) the more I desire to kiss and lick those Pink Petals the harder it is to resist ! Thanks fo caring and sharing Abrajos e Beijos de seu Irmao BRIAN XOXOX ~ O ESPIRITO DO DEUS VIVO ~ CAI DE NOVO EM MIM !
September 20th, 2017 08:21
Inner debate
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a super write, I do hope though that the rose blossoms into its full and wondrous beauty.
September 20th, 2017 08:04
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a super write, I do hope though that the rose blossoms into its full and wondrous beauty.
September 20th, 2017 08:04
Passion
lasergraph said:
The forbidden heat burns the hottest. Nicely expressed.
September 19th, 2017 16:35
lasergraph said:
The forbidden heat burns the hottest. Nicely expressed.
September 19th, 2017 16:35
Love for love
lasergraph said:
Great write, loving heart. Loved thge visual as well.
September 19th, 2017 07:58
lasergraph said:
Great write, loving heart. Loved thge visual as well.
September 19th, 2017 07:58
Love for love
Goldfinch60 said:
The love within you shines through the words on this page.
September 19th, 2017 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
The love within you shines through the words on this page.
September 19th, 2017 00:35
Love for love
myself and me said:
Each and every love is different, love as you could, loved as you may, collect the love and live in the love.
Beautiful view fit your beautiful writing.
September 18th, 2017 18:18
myself and me said:
Each and every love is different, love as you could, loved as you may, collect the love and live in the love.
Beautiful view fit your beautiful writing.
September 18th, 2017 18:18
Love for love
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
DEAR SISTER MALU ~ Your logo always tells me you are a very Beautiful Young Lady and I would love to walk along that broadwalk and spend time seagazing with you. You are altogether lovely and have nothing to fear in this LIVE or the NEXT ~ AMEN Hugs ~ Brother BRIAN XOX
September 18th, 2017 17:39
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
DEAR SISTER MALU ~ Your logo always tells me you are a very Beautiful Young Lady and I would love to walk along that broadwalk and spend time seagazing with you. You are altogether lovely and have nothing to fear in this LIVE or the NEXT ~ AMEN Hugs ~ Brother BRIAN XOX
September 18th, 2017 17:39
Love for love
WL Schuett said:
Malu , your journey to self discovery has I believe made you a wonderful poet may we all keep learning
September 18th, 2017 16:47
WL Schuett said:
Malu , your journey to self discovery has I believe made you a wonderful poet may we all keep learning
September 18th, 2017 16:47
Love for love
dusk arising said:
Ah Malubotelho you are indeed a beautiful soul and looks to me you are on paath to nirvana.
I am currently studying the teachings of the buddha and your words could so easily have been from a text therein.
There is so much beauty we have forgotten to see.
September 18th, 2017 16:45
dusk arising said:
Ah Malubotelho you are indeed a beautiful soul and looks to me you are on paath to nirvana.
I am currently studying the teachings of the buddha and your words could so easily have been from a text therein.
There is so much beauty we have forgotten to see.
September 18th, 2017 16:45
Love for love
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, Malu! Only after we empty our hearts and minds, get rid of all preconceived notions, can we truly love and truly see the other person for who she/he is.
September 18th, 2017 14:55
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, Malu! Only after we empty our hearts and minds, get rid of all preconceived notions, can we truly love and truly see the other person for who she/he is.
September 18th, 2017 14:55
Love for love
Fay Slimm. said:
Perfecting thoughts for love to grow is such an inspiring part of this poem Malu - -- learning how to love is a most noble wish - a truly beautiful read.
September 18th, 2017 14:45
Fay Slimm. said:
Perfecting thoughts for love to grow is such an inspiring part of this poem Malu - -- learning how to love is a most noble wish - a truly beautiful read.
September 18th, 2017 14:45
Passion
F.G. Franklin said:
Passions of youth are replaced by passions of old age...where we just want to play with our grandchildren and sip sweet tea on the porch. I think my greatest \"passion\" is for the written word. But personally I\'ve always thought having my own slice of cake was better than looking through the window at someone else\'s candy. :)
September 16th, 2017 14:04
F.G. Franklin said:
Passions of youth are replaced by passions of old age...where we just want to play with our grandchildren and sip sweet tea on the porch. I think my greatest \"passion\" is for the written word. But personally I\'ve always thought having my own slice of cake was better than looking through the window at someone else\'s candy. :)
September 16th, 2017 14:04
Passion
kevin browne said:
I guess all there is to say is your passion in this poem has also stimulated my passion for reading you poetry. brilliant effort malubotelho.
September 16th, 2017 13:41
kevin browne said:
I guess all there is to say is your passion in this poem has also stimulated my passion for reading you poetry. brilliant effort malubotelho.
September 16th, 2017 13:41
Passion
FredPeyer said:
Passion knows no borders, no restrictions, no rules.
Beautifully written, Malu!
September 15th, 2017 22:44
FredPeyer said:
Passion knows no borders, no restrictions, no rules.
Beautifully written, Malu!
September 15th, 2017 22:44
Passion
myself and me said:
\"Inhaling the sinful perfume \"
\"the dreams of a forbidden love\"
Who could resist the temptation of love? Leave the moral to fight with the immoral.
A rare piece.
September 15th, 2017 18:20
myself and me said:
\"Inhaling the sinful perfume \"
\"the dreams of a forbidden love\"
Who could resist the temptation of love? Leave the moral to fight with the immoral.
A rare piece.
September 15th, 2017 18:20
Passion
dusk arising said:
Wimmin see.... u just cant trust the buggers..... ha ha ha
oooh shocking stuff....
is this a case of ...\'what happens in the night, stays in the night\' ??
September 15th, 2017 17:49
dusk arising said:
Wimmin see.... u just cant trust the buggers..... ha ha ha
oooh shocking stuff....
is this a case of ...\'what happens in the night, stays in the night\' ??
September 15th, 2017 17:49
Passion
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MALU ~ O Yes I remember it well ~ But the choice to yield to temptation ~ is mine & mine alone ! Thanks SISTER for reminding me ! Big Hugs in the Spirit ~ Brother BRIAN
September 15th, 2017 17:21
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MALU ~ O Yes I remember it well ~ But the choice to yield to temptation ~ is mine & mine alone ! Thanks SISTER for reminding me ! Big Hugs in the Spirit ~ Brother BRIAN
September 15th, 2017 17:21
The water and the rock
Goldfinch60 said:
The never ending circle of life very well expressed.
September 15th, 2017 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
The never ending circle of life very well expressed.
September 15th, 2017 01:03
The water and the rock
WL Schuett said:
This is a wonderful poem I enjoyed the feeling of time and infinite return... did you paint this painting
September 14th, 2017 19:12
WL Schuett said:
This is a wonderful poem I enjoyed the feeling of time and infinite return... did you paint this painting
September 14th, 2017 19:12
The water and the rock
myself and me said:
A romantic moment about a lucky rock and a traveling water. The rock has embrace by a lot of water passing by, the water encounter other rocks on the way, and after a long trip, they met again.
A romantic poem with a beautiful paint.
September 14th, 2017 18:05
myself and me said:
A romantic moment about a lucky rock and a traveling water. The rock has embrace by a lot of water passing by, the water encounter other rocks on the way, and after a long trip, they met again.
A romantic poem with a beautiful paint.
September 14th, 2017 18:05
Living on a 4/6
dusk arising said:
Love it when you write about things in our everyday life we take for granted but you find a way of highlighting an individual quality. Here you show us how we all can love each other in the right circumstance. Here you make us question why can\'t we always be like that. Here you make us think of bigger issues and ask ourselves why. You really do bring out our humanity and show it to us. Thank you. Wonderful reading.
September 14th, 2017 17:26
dusk arising said:
Love it when you write about things in our everyday life we take for granted but you find a way of highlighting an individual quality. Here you show us how we all can love each other in the right circumstance. Here you make us question why can\'t we always be like that. Here you make us think of bigger issues and ask ourselves why. You really do bring out our humanity and show it to us. Thank you. Wonderful reading.
September 14th, 2017 17:26
The water and the rock
Louis Gibbs said:
I dig rocky love affairs. Enjoyed this one, Malu!
September 14th, 2017 16:08
Louis Gibbs said:
I dig rocky love affairs. Enjoyed this one, Malu!
September 14th, 2017 16:08
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