Comments received on poems by FredPeyer



The Game
Fay Slimm. said:

And oh how second these word Fred - - you describe the futility of wearing different masks so expertly with this admirable rhyme. I love that final couplet which says it all.......... thanks for this needed reminder my friend.

October 3rd, 2019 23:37

The Zipless Fuck
FredPeyer said:

I came across this quote by Erica Jong and just had to write something!

September 28th, 2019 16:29

Graveyard of Dreams
Christina8 said:

A great read Fred, with a great message!

September 27th, 2019 06:29

Graveyard of Dreams
orchidee said:

A fine write Fred.

September 27th, 2019 01:41

Graveyard of Dreams
Goldfinch60 said:

Those last two lines say it all, joy is within us, show it to all.

September 27th, 2019 00:55

Graveyard of Dreams
marijoy said:

Totally agree Fred. Never stop dreaming. Every day is a new beginning. A beautiful beginning. Let’s look at life with the eyes of a child that got an unexpected gift. Love your poem. Thank you πŸ™πŸ»

September 26th, 2019 20:59

Graveyard of Dreams
Michael Edwards said:

Your pen is as sharp as ever - great read Fred.

September 26th, 2019 15:22

Graveyard of Dreams
Clara said:

Wonderful poem. Really hopeful and comforting actually, despite the title. All is not lost. Thank you for sharing.

September 26th, 2019 12:53

Colors of the Rainbow
Fay Slimm. said:

Fantastic advice Fred - - this is off to my favourites.

September 26th, 2019 12:46

Colors of the Rainbow
marijoy said:

This is very refreshing. Lovely words. I can see the images painted like in a colorful canvas.

September 25th, 2019 20:56

Colors of the Rainbow
Clara said:

Excellent.

September 25th, 2019 16:30

Colors of the Rainbow
Poetic Dan said:

Absolutely brilliant and that I am, living in a reflection of your soul!
You\'ve imprinted on me until I dream no more!

Always appreciated
Much peace and respect

September 25th, 2019 15:52

Colors of the Rainbow
Goldfinch60 said:

Those paths are there for us to explore and there is beauty and wonder along them.

September 25th, 2019 02:45

Colors of the Rainbow
orchidee said:

A fine write Fred.

September 25th, 2019 01:30

Colors of the Rainbow
dusk arising said:

Great sentiment in your word today and i am already there, cognizant of these worldly wonders. But mindful too of the daily practicalities of affording to live on this beautify but ailing planet.
Growing more aware of my responsibility to pass on an undamaged world to my grandchildren, the future of our existence.

September 24th, 2019 12:46

Clueless
dusk arising said:

I\'m sure your destiny is there Fred. It is something we all share in common and life prepares us along its way.

September 24th, 2019 02:33

Clueless
Goldfinch60 said:

Your destiny is calling and that happiness is there.

September 24th, 2019 00:48

Interlude
Fay Slimm. said:

A bitter-sweet write that reaches the heart Fred - - do hope you and your work will be back before long.

September 20th, 2019 01:47

Interlude
orchidee said:

A fine write Fred.

September 20th, 2019 01:47

Interlude
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful loving write Fred, may it go on forever.

September 20th, 2019 01:36

Interlude
Michael Edwards said:

Great tender write - a feel good piece in the very best of senses.

September 20th, 2019 01:29

Interlude
FredPeyer said:

Thanks Dusk!
Once in a while I get sentimental. This was one of these times. Thank God it is only imagination!

September 20th, 2019 00:33

Interlude
dusk arising said:

Good to see you writing again Fred.

Heartfelt piece today which speaks of love after a heartbreaking time and fear that things will never be as meaningful as before.
Surely a fear which resides within everyone in a meaningful relationship and is a great deterrent to stray.

September 20th, 2019 00:17

Waiting Game
Christina8 said:

Good to see you writing again---fine work as always Fred!!

September 19th, 2019 07:53

Waiting Game
orchidee said:

A fine write Fred. We can\'t bear it without ya! Hurry back. Ya have not gone yet though! lol.

September 19th, 2019 01:20

Waiting Game
Goldfinch60 said:

Yes that could be me, that last stanza is so true.

September 19th, 2019 00:32

Waiting Game
Michael Edwards said:

So great to see your work again - don\'t leave it too long before the next post.

September 19th, 2019 00:31

Waiting Game
dusk arising said:

Sometimes it\'s the right time to just look out from a window. Another time we will find ourselves looking into our soul. It\'s surprising what we can find when we look.

September 18th, 2019 23:43

The Polititian
Joseph M Marion said:

Love this poem and way you write

December 31st, 2018 10:29

Death is Overrated (A Humorous Short Story)
Jhe said:

this was really interesting / had some amazing facts
and was funny too β˜†
thanks for sharing / caring!

June 9th, 2018 13:56



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