Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
A Happy Life
Goldfinch60 said:
I agree with every word Fred and feel very lucky that in my life, a life as long as yours, I have been able to be part of that wonderful life.
Andy
April 6th, 2020 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
I agree with every word Fred and feel very lucky that in my life, a life as long as yours, I have been able to be part of that wonderful life.
Andy
April 6th, 2020 00:29
A Happy Life
FredPeyer said:
Thanks Dove,
after the last two lines it\'s not problem anymore to believe in miracles! :-)
April 5th, 2020 13:51
FredPeyer said:
Thanks Dove,
after the last two lines it\'s not problem anymore to believe in miracles! :-)
April 5th, 2020 13:51
A Happy Life
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred.
Could ya add: \'All ya need too; Is for Orchi to stop singing?!\' heehee. Best to warn them of it!
April 5th, 2020 13:13
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred.
Could ya add: \'All ya need too; Is for Orchi to stop singing?!\' heehee. Best to warn them of it!
April 5th, 2020 13:13
A Happy Life
FredPeyer said:
Thanks so much Claudelle. And I pray you will be healthy and safe as well!!!
April 5th, 2020 12:57
FredPeyer said:
Thanks so much Claudelle. And I pray you will be healthy and safe as well!!!
April 5th, 2020 12:57
To Him who carries the Cross
orchidee said:
A poignant write Fred. In Christianity, though, yes, it is a \'religion\', there is the theme of us needing be to saved from our sins.
Then Jesus says to His disciples (Christian believers) \'IF any one will follow me, let him/her take up their cross daily\'. So there\'s no forcing in it, with that \'if\'.
From a non-religious view, we could call the current situations \'our heavy cross to bear\', though not with the same meaning as in a religious sense - if you see what I mean.
March 21st, 2020 03:01
orchidee said:
A poignant write Fred. In Christianity, though, yes, it is a \'religion\', there is the theme of us needing be to saved from our sins.
Then Jesus says to His disciples (Christian believers) \'IF any one will follow me, let him/her take up their cross daily\'. So there\'s no forcing in it, with that \'if\'.
From a non-religious view, we could call the current situations \'our heavy cross to bear\', though not with the same meaning as in a religious sense - if you see what I mean.
March 21st, 2020 03:01
Getting Older
FredPeyer said:
Mahalo for your comment! Yes it is nice here, especially if you enjoy looking at the ladies in shorts, or bikinis. I do not consider myself a dirty old man, I just enjoy beauty, be it in nature, a painting, or a beautiful woman.
March 6th, 2020 15:44
FredPeyer said:
Mahalo for your comment! Yes it is nice here, especially if you enjoy looking at the ladies in shorts, or bikinis. I do not consider myself a dirty old man, I just enjoy beauty, be it in nature, a painting, or a beautiful woman.
March 6th, 2020 15:44
No Eulogy
tundrol said:
Kinda cruel but witty, and wit is remembered long after the truth is forgotten. Keep up the good work, mon général!
March 6th, 2020 13:42
tundrol said:
Kinda cruel but witty, and wit is remembered long after the truth is forgotten. Keep up the good work, mon général!
March 6th, 2020 13:42
No Eulogy
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong write and so true, mind you saying that I have recently written and said a eulogy for my loving wife who passed recently.
Andy
March 6th, 2020 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong write and so true, mind you saying that I have recently written and said a eulogy for my loving wife who passed recently.
Andy
March 6th, 2020 01:44
No Eulogy
Fay Slimm. said:
Powerful message here Fred and one which makes lots of sense - - when no longer around let people make what they may of our life but may they not feel the need to expound a lie.
March 5th, 2020 17:28
Fay Slimm. said:
Powerful message here Fred and one which makes lots of sense - - when no longer around let people make what they may of our life but may they not feel the need to expound a lie.
March 5th, 2020 17:28
No Eulogy
Saxon Crow said:
Couldnt agree me. Chop my carcass up and feed it to the crows. Let people grieve in their own way if they want ill have none of that nonsense. No way. Not over my dead body.
March 5th, 2020 15:10
Saxon Crow said:
Couldnt agree me. Chop my carcass up and feed it to the crows. Let people grieve in their own way if they want ill have none of that nonsense. No way. Not over my dead body.
March 5th, 2020 15:10
No Eulogy
orchidee said:
You reminded me of what they will say at my eulogy, re: my singing: \'Goodbye, and good riddance; Now, silence is golden!\' (heehee).
March 5th, 2020 14:57
orchidee said:
You reminded me of what they will say at my eulogy, re: my singing: \'Goodbye, and good riddance; Now, silence is golden!\' (heehee).
March 5th, 2020 14:57
No Eulogy
Clara said:
Oh, this sends quite a powerful message. Sometimes I think those sort of things are more for the comfort of those left behind than an actual reflection of the person who passed away. Well expressed nonetheless!
March 5th, 2020 14:39
Clara said:
Oh, this sends quite a powerful message. Sometimes I think those sort of things are more for the comfort of those left behind than an actual reflection of the person who passed away. Well expressed nonetheless!
March 5th, 2020 14:39
No Eulogy
dusk arising said:
Don\'t go running off anywhere soon Fred. We need ya here mate.
March 5th, 2020 13:19
dusk arising said:
Don\'t go running off anywhere soon Fred. We need ya here mate.
March 5th, 2020 13:19
TODAY
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred.
I keep meaning to do all these things \'today\', but when I get round to them, it\'s \'tomorrow\'. Strange that! lol.
March 5th, 2020 02:39
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred.
I keep meaning to do all these things \'today\', but when I get round to them, it\'s \'tomorrow\'. Strange that! lol.
March 5th, 2020 02:39
TODAY
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful dichotomy of the two stanzas Fred. Great write.
Andy
March 5th, 2020 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful dichotomy of the two stanzas Fred. Great write.
Andy
March 5th, 2020 01:54
TODAY
Saxon Crow said:
I enjoyed this very much and like Fay i loved the lines fear is for the fearless and hope is for the hopeless.
March 4th, 2020 15:38
Saxon Crow said:
I enjoyed this very much and like Fay i loved the lines fear is for the fearless and hope is for the hopeless.
March 4th, 2020 15:38
TODAY
Fay Slimm. said:
A fantastic orchestration of words here Fred - - loved the arrangementt with repeat of mantras like Fear is only for the fearless \" and \"Hope is only for the hopeless\"- - shall remember them both and ponder their truth. Great read on Today.
March 4th, 2020 14:34
Fay Slimm. said:
A fantastic orchestration of words here Fred - - loved the arrangementt with repeat of mantras like Fear is only for the fearless \" and \"Hope is only for the hopeless\"- - shall remember them both and ponder their truth. Great read on Today.
March 4th, 2020 14:34
TODAY
TWENTY3 said:
today is a day to read quality poetry so im glad i came across this one. im still learning my craft and this was a good read for the imagery and subject matter so thank you
March 4th, 2020 13:56
TWENTY3 said:
today is a day to read quality poetry so im glad i came across this one. im still learning my craft and this was a good read for the imagery and subject matter so thank you
March 4th, 2020 13:56
TODAY
dusk arising said:
It\'s all in ones outlook and mood i guess because both of these opposing days have their place in my life. Though i\'m pleased to relate to the positive more readily.
Nicely written opposites. Both could be applicable to the same day or event.
Your last line begs my response. I\'m passionate but revelling in love unfortunately evades me currently so i revel in the occasional outpouring of poetry.
March 4th, 2020 13:55
dusk arising said:
It\'s all in ones outlook and mood i guess because both of these opposing days have their place in my life. Though i\'m pleased to relate to the positive more readily.
Nicely written opposites. Both could be applicable to the same day or event.
Your last line begs my response. I\'m passionate but revelling in love unfortunately evades me currently so i revel in the occasional outpouring of poetry.
March 4th, 2020 13:55
What Poetry is All About
Goldfinch60 said:
Indeed Fred, what is poetry about. Yes there are rules for specific types of poetry but all poetry comes from the heart and the heart does not follow any rules. Our words are feelings onto paper and rules are not necessary.
Good thoughtful write.
Andy
March 4th, 2020 02:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Indeed Fred, what is poetry about. Yes there are rules for specific types of poetry but all poetry comes from the heart and the heart does not follow any rules. Our words are feelings onto paper and rules are not necessary.
Good thoughtful write.
Andy
March 4th, 2020 02:12
What Poetry is All About
dusk arising said:
Wow Fred, there\'s a lot in there of my spilled emotion whilst i write.
Recently i was told by a young man what poetry was all about because he had been taught the facts he recounted by a published poet.
Oh go away with your lecturing script i thought for my poetry is whatever pours out from my soul.
One day i may publish online and be damned if i care what you think yet another day dawns to find me trying to sculpt a finery of words seeking praise from those i respect.
Do I understand what is poetry about... i don\'t know if i do.... i\'m just caught up in it\'s spell.
March 3rd, 2020 16:53
dusk arising said:
Wow Fred, there\'s a lot in there of my spilled emotion whilst i write.
Recently i was told by a young man what poetry was all about because he had been taught the facts he recounted by a published poet.
Oh go away with your lecturing script i thought for my poetry is whatever pours out from my soul.
One day i may publish online and be damned if i care what you think yet another day dawns to find me trying to sculpt a finery of words seeking praise from those i respect.
Do I understand what is poetry about... i don\'t know if i do.... i\'m just caught up in it\'s spell.
March 3rd, 2020 16:53
What Poetry is All About
Michael Edwards said:
Great wite - good to your name again Fred.
March 3rd, 2020 16:38
Michael Edwards said:
Great wite - good to your name again Fred.
March 3rd, 2020 16:38
What Poetry is All About
Clara said:
Very true. But in order to live, one must be set free to face the world. You never know, what you might see. It may be beautiful afterall. Great work.
March 3rd, 2020 15:51
Clara said:
Very true. But in order to live, one must be set free to face the world. You never know, what you might see. It may be beautiful afterall. Great work.
March 3rd, 2020 15:51
What Poetry is All About
myself and me said:
sorry, I have no answer for your tough question, but glad to see you back.
March 3rd, 2020 14:07
myself and me said:
sorry, I have no answer for your tough question, but glad to see you back.
March 3rd, 2020 14:07
The Lights are on, but Nobody Home
Saxon Crow said:
I am there as well. Well at least I think I am. What was the question?!
February 13th, 2020 05:29
Saxon Crow said:
I am there as well. Well at least I think I am. What was the question?!
February 13th, 2020 05:29
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