Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
I will never be ready
a__pott said:
Don\'t pack yet Fred, let the trip be impromptu! Happy late birthday! missed ya
August 2nd, 2022 09:50
a__pott said:
Don\'t pack yet Fred, let the trip be impromptu! Happy late birthday! missed ya
August 2nd, 2022 09:50
New Year\'s Resolutions
M.E.M. said:
This poem encapsulates the feeling everyone who’s ever forgotten New Years Resolutions. I love it, and I love the ending!
May 6th, 2021 19:10
M.E.M. said:
This poem encapsulates the feeling everyone who’s ever forgotten New Years Resolutions. I love it, and I love the ending!
May 6th, 2021 19:10
I will never be ready
Poetic Dan said:
Punched my ticket long ago, I\'ve been living on free time ever since. One day my soul will be off those two wheels and back into my wings!
In not I\'m just go on the track to start again because I was never ready when life turned into a beautiful game!
Great stuff as my friend
March 23rd, 2021 16:11
Poetic Dan said:
Punched my ticket long ago, I\'ve been living on free time ever since. One day my soul will be off those two wheels and back into my wings!
In not I\'m just go on the track to start again because I was never ready when life turned into a beautiful game!
Great stuff as my friend
March 23rd, 2021 16:11
I will never be ready
L. B. Mek said:
\'there are still some wines to be drunk
some milestones to be celebrated
some forbidden fruits to be tasted
some adventures to be lived\'..
what a delectable offering of sobering truth\'s you\'ve penned dear poet..
\'life\'s capacity
for inquisitive appetites
and humanity\'s inability
to cultivate, a taste
for the inevitability
of our finite fates\'..
a great read, with some truly insightful lines of wisdom you\'ve shared with us in this write, and thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply
March 23rd, 2021 04:23
L. B. Mek said:
\'there are still some wines to be drunk
some milestones to be celebrated
some forbidden fruits to be tasted
some adventures to be lived\'..
what a delectable offering of sobering truth\'s you\'ve penned dear poet..
\'life\'s capacity
for inquisitive appetites
and humanity\'s inability
to cultivate, a taste
for the inevitability
of our finite fates\'..
a great read, with some truly insightful lines of wisdom you\'ve shared with us in this write, and thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply
March 23rd, 2021 04:23
I will never be ready
Goldfinch60 said:
Such very true words Fred, I will be 73 in October and as I tell people I cannot go yet I still have too many people to upset!. LOL
Andy
March 23rd, 2021 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Such very true words Fred, I will be 73 in October and as I tell people I cannot go yet I still have too many people to upset!. LOL
Andy
March 23rd, 2021 01:22
I will never be ready
Doggerel Dave said:
Don’t know if I’m ahead or behind you in the queue Fred, but I’ll willingly let you have my place if I’m ahead – I know I’ll get my turn, I’m not worried.
But should you still get on first, just leave the wines and forbidden fruits to me – I’ll finish them off for you….
Another good ’un from your pen (sorry - keyboard).
March 22nd, 2021 17:57
Doggerel Dave said:
Don’t know if I’m ahead or behind you in the queue Fred, but I’ll willingly let you have my place if I’m ahead – I know I’ll get my turn, I’m not worried.
But should you still get on first, just leave the wines and forbidden fruits to me – I’ll finish them off for you….
Another good ’un from your pen (sorry - keyboard).
March 22nd, 2021 17:57
Miracle
L. B. Mek said:
\'assuming that we deserve this world
or even worse, that we own it
when in reality we are only guests
uninvited and barely tolerated\'..
well: there\'s definitely nothing insignificant about the choice words you shared with us in this write dear poet,
life-affirmingly wonderful!
March 22nd, 2021 05:21
L. B. Mek said:
\'assuming that we deserve this world
or even worse, that we own it
when in reality we are only guests
uninvited and barely tolerated\'..
well: there\'s definitely nothing insignificant about the choice words you shared with us in this write dear poet,
life-affirmingly wonderful!
March 22nd, 2021 05:21
Miracle
Fay Slimm. said:
Wholeheartedly agree with your stand on why we benefit from seeing ourselves as part of totality Fred - - I second the thought that miracles are everywhere on this wondrous planet and am danding now to the sound of the wind and feeling its power..... great read.
March 21st, 2021 14:45
Fay Slimm. said:
Wholeheartedly agree with your stand on why we benefit from seeing ourselves as part of totality Fred - - I second the thought that miracles are everywhere on this wondrous planet and am danding now to the sound of the wind and feeling its power..... great read.
March 21st, 2021 14:45
Miracle
orchidee said:
Good write Fred.
You won that lottery? More chance of seeing pigs fly?! heehee.
March 21st, 2021 03:21
orchidee said:
Good write Fred.
You won that lottery? More chance of seeing pigs fly?! heehee.
March 21st, 2021 03:21
Miracle
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Fred, we live in the miracle of life and you and I have both lived it for quite a long time and still savour it.
Andy
March 21st, 2021 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Fred, we live in the miracle of life and you and I have both lived it for quite a long time and still savour it.
Andy
March 21st, 2021 01:53
Miracle
Doggerel Dave said:
Hey Fred – you come down on the side of Albert’s second supposition in a well argued fine-looking poetic construction. And I got into that and really wanted to believe.
However I must vote for his first proposition, basically because we don’t know. That’s why it’s easier to take the miracle approach – but for me not necessarily the one I’d choose. It might well be that life forms are universal across the universe (to use a clunky phrase) and further are not about to completely stuff up their lovely Earths like this, the one you so revere.
Enjoyable read, though.
March 20th, 2021 23:41
Doggerel Dave said:
Hey Fred – you come down on the side of Albert’s second supposition in a well argued fine-looking poetic construction. And I got into that and really wanted to believe.
However I must vote for his first proposition, basically because we don’t know. That’s why it’s easier to take the miracle approach – but for me not necessarily the one I’d choose. It might well be that life forms are universal across the universe (to use a clunky phrase) and further are not about to completely stuff up their lovely Earths like this, the one you so revere.
Enjoyable read, though.
March 20th, 2021 23:41
Still Frames
FredPeyer said:
Thanks, Neville,
Maybe my crazy verse will one day collide with your loony verse to create a crazy loony black hole.
March 20th, 2021 21:44
FredPeyer said:
Thanks, Neville,
Maybe my crazy verse will one day collide with your loony verse to create a crazy loony black hole.
March 20th, 2021 21:44
Still Frames
Neville said:
Hey Fred, it seems to me we could very well be living in a parallel loony verse ...
Neville :)
March 13th, 2021 12:15
Neville said:
Hey Fred, it seems to me we could very well be living in a parallel loony verse ...
Neville :)
March 13th, 2021 12:15
Knowledge
Michael Edwards said:
Great write and I also like the quote. great stuff Fred.
March 10th, 2021 16:33
Michael Edwards said:
Great write and I also like the quote. great stuff Fred.
March 10th, 2021 16:33
Knowledge
dusk arising said:
knowledge... the base for wisdom.
Well thought out post Fred.
March 10th, 2021 04:32
dusk arising said:
knowledge... the base for wisdom.
Well thought out post Fred.
March 10th, 2021 04:32
Knowledge
Neville said:
it may be little known now .. but in time you will have just proved yourself write ......... U cleva fella U ...
March 10th, 2021 03:57
Neville said:
it may be little known now .. but in time you will have just proved yourself write ......... U cleva fella U ...
March 10th, 2021 03:57
Knowledge
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Fred, that knowledge can be with us all but we need to use the good bits of it to move forward into a good life for all.
Andy
March 10th, 2021 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Fred, that knowledge can be with us all but we need to use the good bits of it to move forward into a good life for all.
Andy
March 10th, 2021 01:32
Knowledge
FredPeyer said:
Thanks so much Dave. You can pick and choose anytime and anywhere! The initial writing was fast, but then I spent some time thinking and tinkering.
March 9th, 2021 18:10
FredPeyer said:
Thanks so much Dave. You can pick and choose anytime and anywhere! The initial writing was fast, but then I spent some time thinking and tinkering.
March 9th, 2021 18:10
Knowledge
Doggerel Dave said:
Can I pick and choose, Fred?
Well I will anyway: \'the opposite of ignorance the enemy of tyranny\'.
Beautifully constructed (that didn\'t take 5 - 10 mins, did it?)
Thanks also for the quote at the top - very apt.
March 9th, 2021 17:56
Doggerel Dave said:
Can I pick and choose, Fred?
Well I will anyway: \'the opposite of ignorance the enemy of tyranny\'.
Beautifully constructed (that didn\'t take 5 - 10 mins, did it?)
Thanks also for the quote at the top - very apt.
March 9th, 2021 17:56
Bad Advise
mrbleasdale said:
This is so true and resonates so much with me. People with no understanding of you or what you’re going through, feel like they’re giving ‘superior advice’ that you should listen to without an understanding
March 9th, 2021 04:51
mrbleasdale said:
This is so true and resonates so much with me. People with no understanding of you or what you’re going through, feel like they’re giving ‘superior advice’ that you should listen to without an understanding
March 9th, 2021 04:51
Still Frames
Doggerel Dave said:
On a very mundane level, I, the Dave tonight am constantly writing notes to be read by the Dave which will arise tomorrow. Such is memory now. I Don\'t mind too much - it\'s interesting....
March 8th, 2021 06:58
Doggerel Dave said:
On a very mundane level, I, the Dave tonight am constantly writing notes to be read by the Dave which will arise tomorrow. Such is memory now. I Don\'t mind too much - it\'s interesting....
March 8th, 2021 06:58
Still Frames
L. B. Mek said:
recently in one of my scribbled comments, I coined a phrase \'Memory Vocabulary\'
and here, in these words you\'ve painstakingly sculpted a perfect representation of what that term translates to me..
a conversation between you and the who you aspire to be, spoken in the language of poetic ink..
another great write Fred, like how you flowed straight into that stream of consciousness format you\'ve woven seamlessly within your style,
really well executed
March 8th, 2021 06:02
L. B. Mek said:
recently in one of my scribbled comments, I coined a phrase \'Memory Vocabulary\'
and here, in these words you\'ve painstakingly sculpted a perfect representation of what that term translates to me..
a conversation between you and the who you aspire to be, spoken in the language of poetic ink..
another great write Fred, like how you flowed straight into that stream of consciousness format you\'ve woven seamlessly within your style,
really well executed
March 8th, 2021 06:02
Still Frames
orchidee said:
Good write Fred.
I\'m all of a muddle! Am I in the past, present, or future? Am I me, myself, or I? That\'s three people!
And furthermore, why am I talking rubbish?! lol.
March 8th, 2021 02:54
orchidee said:
Good write Fred.
I\'m all of a muddle! Am I in the past, present, or future? Am I me, myself, or I? That\'s three people!
And furthermore, why am I talking rubbish?! lol.
March 8th, 2021 02:54
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