Comments received on poems by FredPeyer



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🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸 said:

Woah cool clever poem , it\'s nice to give off warning labels, I think we all should come with one. Great idea! Kudos!
I wouldn\'t want to be incinerated though, sounds too painful and vanishing ESP for the loved ones to see you disappear like that, I couldn\'t bear to see a dead body burnt even if it may not feel the pain itself.

Plz Pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.

May 8th, 2020 09:55

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orchidee said:

Oh lol, good write Fred.
I had a label, or rather someone pinned to my back, when I started singing. it said \'Out of order!\' Doh!

April 27th, 2020 02:05

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Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write Fred, I agree.

Andy

April 27th, 2020 01:12

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Kurt Philip Behm said:

Very creative, Fred. ENJOYED !

April 26th, 2020 18:20

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Fay Slimm. said:

Ha ha - big grins after reading what would go down well in the tattoo market with some folk I know - - as for me the following phrase would be in bold letters - i.e. has tendency to explode if not handled properly’ - ha - -- - great read Fred.

April 26th, 2020 16:07

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dusk arising said:

You forget the bit \"Explodes if neglected\" and \"if seen dejected, may respond well to alcohol\"
WARNING \"Not to be unwrapped in company\"

Good fun writing mate.

April 26th, 2020 14:05

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Michael Edwards said:

Love this one Fred - original yet instantly recognisable.

April 26th, 2020 13:49

Memories
John Prophet said:

“When the bat doubles as a walking stick” I so identify, made me smile.


April 26th, 2020 06:33

Memories
Poetic Dan said:

Nothing but us can touch our memories! Great stuff my friend

April 21st, 2020 15:02

Memories
Claudelle DeLuna said:

Very nice piece, Fred
one can only hope
to age holding on to our
dignity & our well lived
memories...*C✌

April 21st, 2020 14:02

Memories
orchidee said:

Howzat!! Bit of French there from me?! lol. Good write Fred.

April 21st, 2020 02:05

Memories
Goldfinch60 said:

Being in the UK I have never played baseball but I have played many other sports but the one \'hit\' that comes to mind is when I used to play cricket. It was the last over over of the match and we needed eight to win, I hit a four then with two balls to go I hit the ball so hard that it went over the pavillion for six, we won the match and as far as I know that ball is still circling the earth.
We can remember those good times as if it were yesterday Fred.

Andy

April 21st, 2020 01:11

Memories
dusk arising said:

I laughed out loud with \"you know you are out of the game when the bat doubles as a walking stick\" ... oh so true but mentally you are still on the ball... but that\'s life... life teaches us.

I never entered the dug out but there are a good few smells and noises will goto the grave with me too.

Glad you hit a good one today. Stay safe and well sir.

April 20th, 2020 22:35

I will be back
The Uneducated O.A.P said:

Nothing wrong with venturing out side your comfort zone, nice one Fred, Bill

April 19th, 2020 09:25

I will be back
orchidee said:

When will ya be back? Where ya going?! hehee.

April 19th, 2020 02:27

I will be back
Goldfinch60 said:

Such true words Fred, we all want to do what WE want to do so that at the end we will have no regrets.

Andy

April 19th, 2020 01:07

I will be back
anonymousblue said:

The honesty and will to live expressed in this poem are refreshing. Follow your heart, I\'d say! Good one.

April 18th, 2020 16:00

I will be back
Claudelle DeLuna said:

Well penned & expressed, Fred
my inner rebel understands it,
I\'ve never been one to please
others before me, cause at the
end no one truly cares, if they
accept it or not it\'s up to them to analyze it, one of the main reasons behind it, is blind socialization, my personal motto, stay true to you...
Happy Weekend...*C✌


April 18th, 2020 14:33

I will be back
dusk arising said:

You are right, after all - it\'s human nature to want exactly as you express here so well.
I\'m frustrated in self isolation for three months here (classed as extremely vulnerable after some chemotherapy) but determined to see it through for there are many things i want to do in my later years.

As \'arnie\' said \"I\'ll be back!\"

April 18th, 2020 13:37

Because I love you so
FredPeyer said:

Thanks Neville, as I said above, a little bit mushy, but nevertheless true.

April 18th, 2020 11:20

Because I love you so
Neville said:

this is one of them love poems that would make me smile, even on the coldest, most miserable of days.. just what one needs right now...

Neville

April 18th, 2020 11:18

Stamping License Plates
Neville said:

this is so much bigger and far better than you might give yourself credit for my friend... License plate stamping nah...

gimme thighs, buttocks n breasts any day of the week... stay safe Fred.... Neville

April 16th, 2020 12:14

Stamping License Plates
rrodriguez said:

Enjoyed reading Stamping License . I thought it was a confessional poem. Nicely written.

April 16th, 2020 12:13

No Eulogy
M.E.M. said:

That’s the truth. Brutally honest, I love it.

April 16th, 2020 08:58

Stamping License Plates
orchidee said:

A fine write Fred. w may go barmy if in a factory, such as putting on bottle tops all day, and nothing more. Though a robot usually does that now.
Talking of robots, and non-living things, I felt sorry for a lamp-post out on a winter\'s night one day. They\'ll take me away soon - men in white coats! lol.

April 16th, 2020 01:56

Stamping License Plates
dusk arising said:

I sit here impressed, in my cell the sewing of tea-bags cannot compare with the macho of number plates.... envious.... maybe i should try a more serious crime next time.

April 16th, 2020 00:26

Stamping License Plates
Claudelle DeLuna said:

Fred,
This is quite interesting & fun
enjoyed through and through
you have successfully created
something better than a license
plate, & you are an artist,
thanks for sharing,
Be well, Sir...*C✌🙂

April 15th, 2020 19:48

Because I love you so
Fay Slimm. said:

Oh so moving these romantic rhymes which describe love\'s tender needs. A great read Fred.

April 14th, 2020 16:37

Because I love you so
orchidee said:

Good write Fred.

April 14th, 2020 01:41

Because I love you so
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words of love Fred.

Andy

April 14th, 2020 01:02

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