Comments received on poems by FredPeyer



These two poems are DEDICATED TO ALL OF YOU!
Goldfinch60 said:

Most have been there, that empty page or blank screen can sometimes be very daunting. Good writes.

June 22nd, 2017 01:43

Memories of Last Night
The Broken Vessel said:

I\'m a very visual listener, and your words paint a perfect picture. I followed where you took me, and I giggled with her in the end. Wonderful Picture Thank you

June 21st, 2017 23:48

Memories of Last Night
onepauly said:

your description is creatively
a gem

June 21st, 2017 22:03

Abandoned
Magic Maker said:

I\'m looking forward to reading more of your work. This is incredibly moving and well thought out. Great work.

June 21st, 2017 19:53

Memories of Last Night
Louis Gibbs said:

I love poems with a punch line, such as this one. Well done, Fred!

June 21st, 2017 11:57

Memories of Last Night
FredPeyer said:

Thank you to all of you! I am glad you like it. And as far as subject matter is concerned, it is true, I am kind of all over the place. I usually write a first line and then that mysterious thing called mind simply takes over. Mahalo!

June 21st, 2017 10:02

Memories of Last Night
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write.

June 21st, 2017 01:31

Memories of Last Night
Michael Edwards said:

Well penned sir - and what a great last line - yes this really appealed to me.

June 21st, 2017 00:18

Abandoned
malubotelho said:

Yes, I really liked your poem. Hope I can read more of that. Thank you.

June 20th, 2017 23:31

Abandoned
FredPeyer said:

Thank you Jeff and Harvey! Your encouragement helps to overcome all the self doubts.

June 20th, 2017 11:31

Abandoned
HarveyDent said:

This is real and well written. Evokes so much emotion

June 20th, 2017 11:03

Abandoned
Jeff said:

If this is an example of future writes from you....then i am defintiely quitting writing lol....very well done....an excellent poem. Great job

June 20th, 2017 07:06

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