Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
Memory
Fay Slimm. said:
You describe it all well here Fred - memory can play such tricks with age.
July 1st, 2017 04:04
Fay Slimm. said:
You describe it all well here Fred - memory can play such tricks with age.
July 1st, 2017 04:04
Waiting
poetboy123 said:
This poem is incredible, thank you for sharing it with us!
June 30th, 2017 11:53
poetboy123 said:
This poem is incredible, thank you for sharing it with us!
June 30th, 2017 11:53
Waiting
Louis Gibbs said:
Life is what happens while we wait for just the right direction to reveal itself, isn\'t it. Good poem, I enjoyed, Fred!
June 30th, 2017 09:46
Louis Gibbs said:
Life is what happens while we wait for just the right direction to reveal itself, isn\'t it. Good poem, I enjoyed, Fred!
June 30th, 2017 09:46
Today I said Goodbye
malubotelho said:
Very profound. I like that you could fit the bulls and the bears there on your goodbye. They are so annoying. I said goodbye to my unreal self so many times but it is like I can leave it but it never leave me. I have only feel holly moments with my truly self and it is only when I can quite my freaking mind.
Your poetry is very truthful. Thank you.
June 30th, 2017 08:17
malubotelho said:
Very profound. I like that you could fit the bulls and the bears there on your goodbye. They are so annoying. I said goodbye to my unreal self so many times but it is like I can leave it but it never leave me. I have only feel holly moments with my truly self and it is only when I can quite my freaking mind.
Your poetry is very truthful. Thank you.
June 30th, 2017 08:17
Waiting
malubotelho said:
I so can relate to this poem. We are always waiting for next time. For a better occasion, for better words. To someone to love. For approval, for understanding. We are like ghosts procrastinators. Waiting to the moment that we can no longer lift a finger. I loved the way you put it. So true.
June 30th, 2017 08:10
malubotelho said:
I so can relate to this poem. We are always waiting for next time. For a better occasion, for better words. To someone to love. For approval, for understanding. We are like ghosts procrastinators. Waiting to the moment that we can no longer lift a finger. I loved the way you put it. So true.
June 30th, 2017 08:10
Waiting
P.H.Rose said:
Just so bloody good
Fred... I can see
Myself in every word
You wrote.....
June 30th, 2017 04:36
P.H.Rose said:
Just so bloody good
Fred... I can see
Myself in every word
You wrote.....
June 30th, 2017 04:36
Waiting
Renzi said:
To live, not only survive. LIVE :) When you think about this life, world, yourself. You are actually capable of anything and that\'s amazing. Mindblowing. Its the hard part putting those thoughts into actions. I\'m rooting fo you :)
June 30th, 2017 04:24
Renzi said:
To live, not only survive. LIVE :) When you think about this life, world, yourself. You are actually capable of anything and that\'s amazing. Mindblowing. Its the hard part putting those thoughts into actions. I\'m rooting fo you :)
June 30th, 2017 04:24
Waiting
Fay Slimm. said:
I can relate to this verse and its lesson in the futility that sheer waiting can bring Fred - those final lines speak wisely of the freedom experienced when \"self-inflicted shackles\" are lifted.
June 30th, 2017 04:01
Fay Slimm. said:
I can relate to this verse and its lesson in the futility that sheer waiting can bring Fred - those final lines speak wisely of the freedom experienced when \"self-inflicted shackles\" are lifted.
June 30th, 2017 04:01
Today I said Goodbye
onepauly said:
I said goodbye to myself long ago
and whats left over is me.
June 29th, 2017 18:49
onepauly said:
I said goodbye to myself long ago
and whats left over is me.
June 29th, 2017 18:49
Today I said Goodbye
Augustus said:
Love the message and the presentation. Good stuff!
June 29th, 2017 16:14
Augustus said:
Love the message and the presentation. Good stuff!
June 29th, 2017 16:14
Today I said Goodbye
Heather T said:
Nothing like shaking the dust off of your soul.
June 29th, 2017 10:48
Heather T said:
Nothing like shaking the dust off of your soul.
June 29th, 2017 10:48
Today I said Goodbye
Louis Gibbs said:
A formidable and noble challenge you have given yourself, Fred! I like your poem and admire you for setting this goal.
June 29th, 2017 10:07
Louis Gibbs said:
A formidable and noble challenge you have given yourself, Fred! I like your poem and admire you for setting this goal.
June 29th, 2017 10:07
Today I said Goodbye
P.H.Rose said:
VerY good Fred...
As we say in the uk
It\'s a cracker !!!
June 29th, 2017 10:05
P.H.Rose said:
VerY good Fred...
As we say in the uk
It\'s a cracker !!!
June 29th, 2017 10:05
Today I said Goodbye
ShannonXx said:
A very uplifting poem! A great message attached to this that others should follow!
June 29th, 2017 06:51
ShannonXx said:
A very uplifting poem! A great message attached to this that others should follow!
June 29th, 2017 06:51
Today I said Goodbye
Renzi said:
Cleaning out the closest. Sometimes losing things from life is the greatest gain :) freedom, nicely penned my friend.
June 29th, 2017 03:47
Renzi said:
Cleaning out the closest. Sometimes losing things from life is the greatest gain :) freedom, nicely penned my friend.
June 29th, 2017 03:47
You will love it there
onepauly said:
I\'m 62. I don\'t want to grow old
any suggestions?
June 28th, 2017 18:31
onepauly said:
I\'m 62. I don\'t want to grow old
any suggestions?
June 28th, 2017 18:31
You will love it there
avigail said:
sad ,great write...my prayer - never be dependent ... always be creative...
June 28th, 2017 15:12
avigail said:
sad ,great write...my prayer - never be dependent ... always be creative...
June 28th, 2017 15:12
You will love it there
Michael Edwards said:
The older I get the more I fear ending up in a home - this really brings home the reality of it all.
June 28th, 2017 09:53
Michael Edwards said:
The older I get the more I fear ending up in a home - this really brings home the reality of it all.
June 28th, 2017 09:53
You will love it there
Louis Gibbs said:
Wow, a very well done commentary poem, Fred! Save the 700 bucks a day and just shoot me.
June 28th, 2017 08:28
Louis Gibbs said:
Wow, a very well done commentary poem, Fred! Save the 700 bucks a day and just shoot me.
June 28th, 2017 08:28
You will love it there
Renzi said:
This reminds me of one of my times i was sent to hospital .. although they did not tell me i would love it there! I didn\'t!! Another great write? I hope all is okay.
June 28th, 2017 04:06
Renzi said:
This reminds me of one of my times i was sent to hospital .. although they did not tell me i would love it there! I didn\'t!! Another great write? I hope all is okay.
June 28th, 2017 04:06
Symphony
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. Life\'s symphony is there for us all.
June 28th, 2017 00:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. Life\'s symphony is there for us all.
June 28th, 2017 00:42
Symphony
onepauly said:
read this one often enough
and it will grow on you.
wonderful!
June 27th, 2017 19:07
onepauly said:
read this one often enough
and it will grow on you.
wonderful!
June 27th, 2017 19:07
Symphony
Christina8 said:
Really enjoyed reading this! Wonderful rhyme and cadence. Loved the message.
June 27th, 2017 18:00
Christina8 said:
Really enjoyed reading this! Wonderful rhyme and cadence. Loved the message.
June 27th, 2017 18:00
Moon Candy
malubotelho said:
Other the from the sad part that you did not have a stick I liked it very much. I felt some innocence on it. When I was a kid I always dreamed about being left locked inside a candy store and had to spend the night there eating all those delicious candy. My first job I was only thirteen and when I\'ve got my first paycheck what was cash I run to the candy store and bought a basket full of candy. I ate so much candy that day that for a long time after I could not see candy without feeling sick. And the dream never came back.
June 27th, 2017 13:27
malubotelho said:
Other the from the sad part that you did not have a stick I liked it very much. I felt some innocence on it. When I was a kid I always dreamed about being left locked inside a candy store and had to spend the night there eating all those delicious candy. My first job I was only thirteen and when I\'ve got my first paycheck what was cash I run to the candy store and bought a basket full of candy. I ate so much candy that day that for a long time after I could not see candy without feeling sick. And the dream never came back.
June 27th, 2017 13:27
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