Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
The Green Flash
Poetic Dan said:
Great picture painted in my mind
Transforming for your rhythm
As the sun warms my face
I thank you for the lovely vision
February 9th, 2018 09:41
Poetic Dan said:
Great picture painted in my mind
Transforming for your rhythm
As the sun warms my face
I thank you for the lovely vision
February 9th, 2018 09:41
The Green Flash
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fred. I have seen many colours when the sun sets but never the green flash. Isn\'t nature wonderful.
February 9th, 2018 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fred. I have seen many colours when the sun sets but never the green flash. Isn\'t nature wonderful.
February 9th, 2018 01:25
The Green Flash
kevin browne said:
When nature starts playing and having fun it can begin to reveal some of the worlds greatest and most beautiful gifts. it appears you have found yours Fred, so I can feel from this poem. nicely done,
February 8th, 2018 22:31
kevin browne said:
When nature starts playing and having fun it can begin to reveal some of the worlds greatest and most beautiful gifts. it appears you have found yours Fred, so I can feel from this poem. nicely done,
February 8th, 2018 22:31
The Green Flash
Accidental Poet said:
Being that I\'m on the east coast I\'ll have to look for it at sunrise. I\'ve seen many sunrises, but never noticed a green flash. But now you\'ve made me curious and next time I\'m out taking morning shots with my Canon I\'ll be looking for it. Great write Fred.
February 8th, 2018 19:38
Accidental Poet said:
Being that I\'m on the east coast I\'ll have to look for it at sunrise. I\'ve seen many sunrises, but never noticed a green flash. But now you\'ve made me curious and next time I\'m out taking morning shots with my Canon I\'ll be looking for it. Great write Fred.
February 8th, 2018 19:38
The Green Flash
Louis Gibbs said:
Just curious, Fred ... what were you drinking when you saw the \'green flash\'? Nice write!
February 8th, 2018 16:52
Louis Gibbs said:
Just curious, Fred ... what were you drinking when you saw the \'green flash\'? Nice write!
February 8th, 2018 16:52
The Green Flash
Christina8 said:
A lovely write! So beautifully written. A pleasure to read.
February 8th, 2018 14:47
Christina8 said:
A lovely write! So beautifully written. A pleasure to read.
February 8th, 2018 14:47
Bad Luck
Michael J. Schaeffer said:
Wow that was well thought out & examined for the reader to basically understand a lesson of tough love & life. You should look up a punk group called Social Distortion. They have a good song called Bad Luck. Another is called Ball & Chain, I was Wrong, Machine Gun Blues.
February 7th, 2018 20:30
Michael J. Schaeffer said:
Wow that was well thought out & examined for the reader to basically understand a lesson of tough love & life. You should look up a punk group called Social Distortion. They have a good song called Bad Luck. Another is called Ball & Chain, I was Wrong, Machine Gun Blues.
February 7th, 2018 20:30
Bad Luck
dusk arising said:
Hey, if it wasn\'t for bad luck, i\'d have no luck at all.
Nice one.... we never realise how close we came.
I used to live one street away from a terrible serial murderer and his co-conspiritor wife. i got married in the same place in the same year as them. Fred and Rose West.
I shudder to think about those years.
February 6th, 2018 17:38
dusk arising said:
Hey, if it wasn\'t for bad luck, i\'d have no luck at all.
Nice one.... we never realise how close we came.
I used to live one street away from a terrible serial murderer and his co-conspiritor wife. i got married in the same place in the same year as them. Fred and Rose West.
I shudder to think about those years.
February 6th, 2018 17:38
Bad Luck
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Luck\", to me, implies randomness ... not sure if I can accept that premise, Fred. What appears as \'bad luck\' might be a good life-lesson we have chosen. You think?
February 6th, 2018 10:19
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Luck\", to me, implies randomness ... not sure if I can accept that premise, Fred. What appears as \'bad luck\' might be a good life-lesson we have chosen. You think?
February 6th, 2018 10:19
Bad Luck
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Fred, in our long lives we have seen how bad luck can be a blessing on so many occasions. Good meaningful write.
February 6th, 2018 09:25
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Fred, in our long lives we have seen how bad luck can be a blessing on so many occasions. Good meaningful write.
February 6th, 2018 09:25
Bad Luck
Lorna said:
Thank goodness we don\'t know all the near misses - life is scary enough as it is!
February 6th, 2018 05:52
Lorna said:
Thank goodness we don\'t know all the near misses - life is scary enough as it is!
February 6th, 2018 05:52
Bad Luck
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. I won\'t have any \'luck\' then, good or bad, as I don\'t believe in it! I just see it as a figure of speech. But I know what you mean here.
We could say \'There\'s always others worse off than us, but that does not mean our own troubles are any less real\'.
February 6th, 2018 05:42
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. I won\'t have any \'luck\' then, good or bad, as I don\'t believe in it! I just see it as a figure of speech. But I know what you mean here.
We could say \'There\'s always others worse off than us, but that does not mean our own troubles are any less real\'.
February 6th, 2018 05:42
Bad Luck
Accidental Poet said:
Proof bad luck isn\'t as bad as we might think. Great write Fred
February 6th, 2018 05:19
Accidental Poet said:
Proof bad luck isn\'t as bad as we might think. Great write Fred
February 6th, 2018 05:19
The Real Me
dusk arising said:
Didn\'t i see the real you on a motorbike a while back. That was before you lost yourself up-a-gum-tree.
Nice one
February 5th, 2018 13:37
dusk arising said:
Didn\'t i see the real you on a motorbike a while back. That was before you lost yourself up-a-gum-tree.
Nice one
February 5th, 2018 13:37
The Real Me
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Methinks FRED that you are having HAWALUCINATIONS ~ It sure affected me when I visited HAWAII ~ I don\'t know if it was the Garlands ~ Grass Skirts ~ Guitars ~ Singing or the Hawaiian Pina Colada ~ I sure was NOT MYSELF the week I spent there ~ and (for the record !) I\'ve never been that same since ! I wanna go back but my Alter Ego won\'t let me ! ALOHA ~ BRIAN
February 5th, 2018 09:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Methinks FRED that you are having HAWALUCINATIONS ~ It sure affected me when I visited HAWAII ~ I don\'t know if it was the Garlands ~ Grass Skirts ~ Guitars ~ Singing or the Hawaiian Pina Colada ~ I sure was NOT MYSELF the week I spent there ~ and (for the record !) I\'ve never been that same since ! I wanna go back but my Alter Ego won\'t let me ! ALOHA ~ BRIAN
February 5th, 2018 09:23
The Real Me
orchidee said:
That the real you up that tree, or is it someone else? When ya coming down?! heehee.
February 5th, 2018 06:50
orchidee said:
That the real you up that tree, or is it someone else? When ya coming down?! heehee.
February 5th, 2018 06:50
The Real Me
Fay Slimm. said:
Who you are is an internal priceless treasure dear Fred. That spirit which is not ever lost shines inside as part of the permanent and makes the real you truly beautiful.
February 5th, 2018 02:50
Fay Slimm. said:
Who you are is an internal priceless treasure dear Fred. That spirit which is not ever lost shines inside as part of the permanent and makes the real you truly beautiful.
February 5th, 2018 02:50
The Real Me
orchidee said:
Yes, the one I see up the tree is fine by me too. Meanwhile - I met myself coming back from the shops, as I was going there. Which one was the real me?! heehee.
February 5th, 2018 02:45
orchidee said:
Yes, the one I see up the tree is fine by me too. Meanwhile - I met myself coming back from the shops, as I was going there. Which one was the real me?! heehee.
February 5th, 2018 02:45
The Real Me
Goldfinch60 said:
The real you may be unseen but the one I see is fine by me.
February 5th, 2018 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
The real you may be unseen but the one I see is fine by me.
February 5th, 2018 01:55
Longing for a Change
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Fred and very true, the real world is where happiness really is - mind you I do like Opera.
February 5th, 2018 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Fred and very true, the real world is where happiness really is - mind you I do like Opera.
February 5th, 2018 01:42
Longing for a Change
FredPeyer said:
Thanks so much Cat! Maybe the time is not totally lost and wasted IF it leads to the right conclusion!
February 4th, 2018 20:48
FredPeyer said:
Thanks so much Cat! Maybe the time is not totally lost and wasted IF it leads to the right conclusion!
February 4th, 2018 20:48
Longing for a Change
FredPeyer said:
Thanks Kevin. Sometimes it seems as if the unreal is better than the real, but then we wake up to the truth.
February 4th, 2018 14:24
FredPeyer said:
Thanks Kevin. Sometimes it seems as if the unreal is better than the real, but then we wake up to the truth.
February 4th, 2018 14:24
Longing for a Change
kevin browne said:
when reality checks in you sure make it obvious what can be lost. top of the berg poem, Fred,
February 4th, 2018 12:15
kevin browne said:
when reality checks in you sure make it obvious what can be lost. top of the berg poem, Fred,
February 4th, 2018 12:15
Longing for a Change
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Maybe she\'s weary ~ Ladies do get weary
Wearin\' the same shabby dress
And when she\'s weary ~ Kiss her eyes so teary
Try a little tenderness !
Thanks FRED ~ all Housewives Daydream ~ I know my Mum does ! It always has been and always will a Man\'s World. Speaking as an Englishman where we have been ruled by a Queen for over 60 years We have our SECOND Female PM (What was wrong with Hillary ?) and Female Bishops. Thanks for making us think. If REINCARNATION is a choice when I die (2083 = 100 !) I will opt to come back as a WOMAN or a CAT (Miouwwwwww !) Yours BRIAN
February 4th, 2018 10:20
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Maybe she\'s weary ~ Ladies do get weary
Wearin\' the same shabby dress
And when she\'s weary ~ Kiss her eyes so teary
Try a little tenderness !
Thanks FRED ~ all Housewives Daydream ~ I know my Mum does ! It always has been and always will a Man\'s World. Speaking as an Englishman where we have been ruled by a Queen for over 60 years We have our SECOND Female PM (What was wrong with Hillary ?) and Female Bishops. Thanks for making us think. If REINCARNATION is a choice when I die (2083 = 100 !) I will opt to come back as a WOMAN or a CAT (Miouwwwwww !) Yours BRIAN
February 4th, 2018 10:20
Longing for a Change
Lorna said:
It\'s such a relief when one figures this message out! It reminded me that I used to watch my lovely mother staring out the window as she washed dishes or cooked meals and I knew she wanted desperately to be somewhere else...... Poor little thing.
February 4th, 2018 06:26
Lorna said:
It\'s such a relief when one figures this message out! It reminded me that I used to watch my lovely mother staring out the window as she washed dishes or cooked meals and I knew she wanted desperately to be somewhere else...... Poor little thing.
February 4th, 2018 06:26
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