Comments received on poems by FredPeyer



Dead-End Street
Michael Edwards said:

This sure conjures up an image Fred - super work

December 5th, 2017 10:53

Dead-End Street
orchidee said:

Good write Fred. You out of that street now?

December 5th, 2017 10:07

Dead-End Street
Accidental Poet said:

Think I\'ve been down this street a few times. Excellent write Fred.

December 5th, 2017 05:15

Running
myself and me said:

very creative of writing. It seems you are doing pretty well alone.

December 4th, 2017 18:58

Running
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 4th, 2017 15:22

Running
Louis Gibbs said:

It works, I like it! You\'ve come up with something here, as these comments confirm. Well done, Fred!

December 4th, 2017 09:31

Running
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, that freedom is well worth running for.

December 4th, 2017 09:01

Running
Michael Edwards said:

Interesting structure and you\'ve pulled it off Fred.

December 4th, 2017 08:46

Running
Accidental Poet said:

An experiment with great results Fred.

December 4th, 2017 05:00

Running
orchidee said:

A fine write Fred. The repetition gives a meditative style, I feel. Seems to slow the pace.

December 4th, 2017 03:28

Just a few thoughts of a busy mind
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words Fred, I like the penultimate one, it is so very true.

December 4th, 2017 01:10

Just a few thoughts of a busy mind
Accidental Poet said:

hey, lefties have rights too, right? I\'m a righty and I say let the lefties take the ball and run with it for a bit. Great write Fred.

December 3rd, 2017 22:41

Just a few thoughts of a busy mind
LaurašŸŒ» said:

RIGHT!!šŸ˜Š

December 3rd, 2017 21:08

Just a few thoughts of a busy mind
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Just noticed Fayā€™s comments. I guess
we were on the same
wavelength...quoting the same phrase!

December 3rd, 2017 15:36

Just a few thoughts of a busy mind
Michael Edwards said:

Love the \'wisdoms\' and can only repeat the comments by others above - great work Fred.

December 3rd, 2017 15:34

Just a few thoughts of a busy mind
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Nice Fred!
Platonic love!! hmmm...
Thatā€™s a difficult one...for some!

ā€œHolding on to hate is like
playing in a pool with sharksā€...

This is true, but itā€™s so hard...
so hard to forgive and even
harder to forget!

Iā€™m actually in the thinking
stage of writing a piece about
Forgiving and Forgetting!




December 3rd, 2017 15:26

Just a few thoughts of a busy mind
Fay Slimm. said:

Finding time for a little wisdom-writing has bred a really deep poem Fred - - lots of appealing phrases in this posting but my fave. has to be - --
\"Holding on to hate is like
Playing in a pool with sharks\" - - - -- great read my friend.

December 3rd, 2017 15:16

Just a few thoughts of a busy mind
Louis Gibbs said:

\"Longevity is no excuse for complacency\" ... My favorite of the bunch. Glad you could sneak in a little Bard Time, Fred! I won\'t tell your wife.

December 3rd, 2017 13:37

Message to all my Friends on MPS
KoKoRosie said:

Congrats Fred!!

December 3rd, 2017 12:15

Message to all my Friends on MPS
myself and me said:

Congratulations.

December 1st, 2017 19:42

Message to all my Friends on MPS
malubotelho said:

Congrats grandpa. Wishing all happiness.

December 1st, 2017 13:13

Message to all my Friends on MPS
Tony36 said:

Congratulations

December 1st, 2017 12:47

Message to all my Friends on MPS
WL Schuett said:

Very nice Fred congratulations!

December 1st, 2017 08:46

Message to all my Friends on MPS
Christina8 said:

Congratulations to you and your family on the addition of your grandson! You and your poetry will be missed! Looking forward to having you back!

December 1st, 2017 07:25

Message to all my Friends on MPS
orchidee said:

Best wishes to you all! Yes, more things important than poetry. Me doing singing practice for one thing. Most important. Well, you won\'t hear me for a while then! lol.

December 1st, 2017 02:52

Message to all my Friends on MPS
Goldfinch60 said:

Many congratulations, another grandchild to enjoy, love and spoil eh Fred, they are wonderful, I too have five of them with another due in May next year. There is is saying here in the UK, \"If I had known that grandchildren were so much fun I would have had them first!\"

Don\'t work too hard, save some time for yourself, it is important.

December 1st, 2017 02:19

Message to all my Friends on MPS
Michael Edwards said:

Congratulations Fred I am so pleased for you and your wife - will miss your contributions but some things in life (not many) are far more important than poetry !! :) :)

December 1st, 2017 01:05

Message to all my Friends on MPS
Louis Gibbs said:

Congratulations, my friend! You will be missed. May your wife travel safely.

December 1st, 2017 00:18

Message to all my Friends on MPS
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Fred,
Congratulations grandpa! That is such great and beautiful news! Wishing you and your family all the best on the birth of your grandson!

December 1st, 2017 00:12

While the Universe watches
Louis Gibbs said:

Yes, it\'s a hell-of-a-script, this play we have concocted. A clever but brutal way to explore and experience the spectrum of embodiment. Your poem expresses it very well, Fred. Kudos!

November 30th, 2017 10:15



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