Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
Unfulfilled Dreams
Michael J. Schaeffer said:
Great Poem. The Topics are Nice to live in.
January 3rd, 2018 12:35
Michael J. Schaeffer said:
Great Poem. The Topics are Nice to live in.
January 3rd, 2018 12:35
Unfulfilled Dreams
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Unfulfilled dreams\" ... that phrase triggered one I wrote a while back, Fred. I shall post it tomorrow. You have penned a beauty here, my friend! Kudos.
January 3rd, 2018 10:17
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Unfulfilled dreams\" ... that phrase triggered one I wrote a while back, Fred. I shall post it tomorrow. You have penned a beauty here, my friend! Kudos.
January 3rd, 2018 10:17
Unfulfilled Dreams
Michael Edwards said:
Love the premise on which this is built - super work Fred
January 3rd, 2018 03:23
Michael Edwards said:
Love the premise on which this is built - super work Fred
January 3rd, 2018 03:23
Unfulfilled Dreams
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, those dreams are there and if they are not to what do you aim in life.
January 3rd, 2018 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, those dreams are there and if they are not to what do you aim in life.
January 3rd, 2018 01:53
Unfulfilled Dreams
SorrowfullyHappy said:
But to do so one must risk it all and come out on top
January 3rd, 2018 00:46
SorrowfullyHappy said:
But to do so one must risk it all and come out on top
January 3rd, 2018 00:46
In the Air between LA and Honolulu
kevin browne said:
trying to fly somewhere nice and a bloody bomb goes off. just typical. well said though, Fred,
January 2nd, 2018 20:50
kevin browne said:
trying to fly somewhere nice and a bloody bomb goes off. just typical. well said though, Fred,
January 2nd, 2018 20:50
In the Air between LA and Honolulu
Fay Slimm. said:
You sum it all up well here Fred - we have no inkling of what respect really means. But naked - - - ooooh no !!!
January 2nd, 2018 10:36
Fay Slimm. said:
You sum it all up well here Fred - we have no inkling of what respect really means. But naked - - - ooooh no !!!
January 2nd, 2018 10:36
In the Air between LA and Honolulu
Louis Gibbs said:
Glad I got my traveling in before all this madness. I find it no longer worth the hassle. You capture it well in this one, Fred! The terrorists have won.
January 2nd, 2018 09:53
Louis Gibbs said:
Glad I got my traveling in before all this madness. I find it no longer worth the hassle. You capture it well in this one, Fred! The terrorists have won.
January 2nd, 2018 09:53
In the Air between LA and Honolulu
orchidee said:
Oh dear, having fun there?!
January 2nd, 2018 09:12
orchidee said:
Oh dear, having fun there?!
January 2nd, 2018 09:12
In the Air between LA and Honolulu
WL Schuett said:
I feel your frustrations Fred , but if we have to travel that’s how it is
January 2nd, 2018 08:44
WL Schuett said:
I feel your frustrations Fred , but if we have to travel that’s how it is
January 2nd, 2018 08:44
In the Air between LA and Honolulu
Goldfinch60 said:
Welcome to the modern world where trust no longer exists and everyone is perceived as a rebel or activist.
What ever happened to make love not war?
January 2nd, 2018 06:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Welcome to the modern world where trust no longer exists and everyone is perceived as a rebel or activist.
What ever happened to make love not war?
January 2nd, 2018 06:31
In the Air between LA and Honolulu
Michael Edwards said:
It will be ingested bombs soon if they don\'t already exist. I can remember way back when ladies used to dress up to go to the airport and sashay around - now they are all scruffs - where on earth do they buy their clothes? Like you I find no fun in travel any more and we are spending more time travelling around the UK. Mind you the idea of travelling naked has a sort of naughty appeal.
January 2nd, 2018 05:50
Michael Edwards said:
It will be ingested bombs soon if they don\'t already exist. I can remember way back when ladies used to dress up to go to the airport and sashay around - now they are all scruffs - where on earth do they buy their clothes? Like you I find no fun in travel any more and we are spending more time travelling around the UK. Mind you the idea of travelling naked has a sort of naughty appeal.
January 2nd, 2018 05:50
The last Day of the Year
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes, enjoy and treasure the last day of the year, another year completed the New Year ahead with its wonder to come.
January 2nd, 2018 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes, enjoy and treasure the last day of the year, another year completed the New Year ahead with its wonder to come.
January 2nd, 2018 01:36
The last Day of the Year
Clarita said:
Thank you for sharing Fred. I have come to the conclusion that welcoming the new year with a clear and positive mindset will bring major blessings. It isn\'t about destroying your old self but welcoming a new chapter and the closing of another.
January 2nd, 2018 00:06
Clarita said:
Thank you for sharing Fred. I have come to the conclusion that welcoming the new year with a clear and positive mindset will bring major blessings. It isn\'t about destroying your old self but welcoming a new chapter and the closing of another.
January 2nd, 2018 00:06
The last Day of the Year
Michael Edwards said:
Great positivity - great read - all the best Fred.
January 1st, 2018 12:52
Michael Edwards said:
Great positivity - great read - all the best Fred.
January 1st, 2018 12:52
The last Day of the Year
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
A great poem FRED in anticipation of 2018 ! Love the repetition in the first line of each verse \"The last day of year\" 2017 is OVER we have to let it go ~ and hope and pray that 2018 will be (even) BETTER !
For ME 2018 has been great so far ~ nice weather ~ nice Friends ~ Holiday (\'til Monday) and it\'s 4 pm here ~ so I have enjoyed my FIRST 16 hours of 2018 ~ long may it stay that way ! Thanks for caring BRIAN ! Please check my REVOLUTIONS for 2018 ~ thanks B.
January 1st, 2018 11:12
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
A great poem FRED in anticipation of 2018 ! Love the repetition in the first line of each verse \"The last day of year\" 2017 is OVER we have to let it go ~ and hope and pray that 2018 will be (even) BETTER !
For ME 2018 has been great so far ~ nice weather ~ nice Friends ~ Holiday (\'til Monday) and it\'s 4 pm here ~ so I have enjoyed my FIRST 16 hours of 2018 ~ long may it stay that way ! Thanks for caring BRIAN ! Please check my REVOLUTIONS for 2018 ~ thanks B.
January 1st, 2018 11:12
The last Day of the Year
WL Schuett said:
A Happy New Year to you Fred hope it is a very creative one , I enjoy reading your poems and look forward to a new year !
January 1st, 2018 10:58
WL Schuett said:
A Happy New Year to you Fred hope it is a very creative one , I enjoy reading your poems and look forward to a new year !
January 1st, 2018 10:58
The last Day of the Year
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine tribute to the symbolic point in the progress of conceived time, Fred. May you continue on enjoying the journey!
January 1st, 2018 09:55
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine tribute to the symbolic point in the progress of conceived time, Fred. May you continue on enjoying the journey!
January 1st, 2018 09:55
Out of Body
Renzi said:
I got a little lost in it all.. it a wonderful way. Weldone my friend x
December 26th, 2017 10:03
Renzi said:
I got a little lost in it all.. it a wonderful way. Weldone my friend x
December 26th, 2017 10:03
Out of Body
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds like an OBE to me. Enjoyed this thought stimulating poem, Fred!
December 23rd, 2017 09:02
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds like an OBE to me. Enjoyed this thought stimulating poem, Fred!
December 23rd, 2017 09:02
Out of Body
Michael Edwards said:
No name that I\'m aware of but it works really well - could be a new form - It\'s by Fred and it rhymes so why not call it a Fredime ?
December 23rd, 2017 07:09
Michael Edwards said:
No name that I\'m aware of but it works really well - could be a new form - It\'s by Fred and it rhymes so why not call it a Fredime ?
December 23rd, 2017 07:09
Out of Body
orchidee said:
You had an OBE there? That could be:
A) Order of the British Empire Medal
B) Out of Body Experience
or (C) Other B*****\'s Efforts! oohh.
(C) is the alternative to (A). lol.
December 23rd, 2017 03:10
orchidee said:
You had an OBE there? That could be:
A) Order of the British Empire Medal
B) Out of Body Experience
or (C) Other B*****\'s Efforts! oohh.
(C) is the alternative to (A). lol.
December 23rd, 2017 03:10
Out of Body
orchidee said:
I dunno about technical names, but it looks jolly difficult. I choose \'easier\' AABB type things usually - first and second lines rhyme; then third and fourth lines rhyme. A fine write Fred.
December 23rd, 2017 03:08
orchidee said:
I dunno about technical names, but it looks jolly difficult. I choose \'easier\' AABB type things usually - first and second lines rhyme; then third and fourth lines rhyme. A fine write Fred.
December 23rd, 2017 03:08
Dear Santa!
skyebellasario said:
Beautiful poem Fred! Reminds me of the Band Aid song \"Do They Know It\'s Christmas\"
December 22nd, 2017 17:24
skyebellasario said:
Beautiful poem Fred! Reminds me of the Band Aid song \"Do They Know It\'s Christmas\"
December 22nd, 2017 17:24
Dear Santa!
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write Fred, I think we all wish this.
December 22nd, 2017 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write Fred, I think we all wish this.
December 22nd, 2017 01:58
Dear Santa!
Accidental Poet said:
If only the Santas in all of humanity could all work together for one common goal of healing the world of the cancer that affects us all. Great write Fred.
December 21st, 2017 19:38
Accidental Poet said:
If only the Santas in all of humanity could all work together for one common goal of healing the world of the cancer that affects us all. Great write Fred.
December 21st, 2017 19:38
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