Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
In the Air between LA and Honolulu
Goldfinch60 said:
Welcome to the modern world where trust no longer exists and everyone is perceived as a rebel or activist.
What ever happened to make love not war?
January 2nd, 2018 06:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Welcome to the modern world where trust no longer exists and everyone is perceived as a rebel or activist.
What ever happened to make love not war?
January 2nd, 2018 06:31
In the Air between LA and Honolulu
Michael Edwards said:
It will be ingested bombs soon if they don\'t already exist. I can remember way back when ladies used to dress up to go to the airport and sashay around - now they are all scruffs - where on earth do they buy their clothes? Like you I find no fun in travel any more and we are spending more time travelling around the UK. Mind you the idea of travelling naked has a sort of naughty appeal.
January 2nd, 2018 05:50
Michael Edwards said:
It will be ingested bombs soon if they don\'t already exist. I can remember way back when ladies used to dress up to go to the airport and sashay around - now they are all scruffs - where on earth do they buy their clothes? Like you I find no fun in travel any more and we are spending more time travelling around the UK. Mind you the idea of travelling naked has a sort of naughty appeal.
January 2nd, 2018 05:50
The last Day of the Year
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes, enjoy and treasure the last day of the year, another year completed the New Year ahead with its wonder to come.
January 2nd, 2018 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes, enjoy and treasure the last day of the year, another year completed the New Year ahead with its wonder to come.
January 2nd, 2018 01:36
The last Day of the Year
Clarita said:
Thank you for sharing Fred. I have come to the conclusion that welcoming the new year with a clear and positive mindset will bring major blessings. It isn\'t about destroying your old self but welcoming a new chapter and the closing of another.
January 2nd, 2018 00:06
Clarita said:
Thank you for sharing Fred. I have come to the conclusion that welcoming the new year with a clear and positive mindset will bring major blessings. It isn\'t about destroying your old self but welcoming a new chapter and the closing of another.
January 2nd, 2018 00:06
The last Day of the Year
Michael Edwards said:
Great positivity - great read - all the best Fred.
January 1st, 2018 12:52
Michael Edwards said:
Great positivity - great read - all the best Fred.
January 1st, 2018 12:52
The last Day of the Year
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
A great poem FRED in anticipation of 2018 ! Love the repetition in the first line of each verse \"The last day of year\" 2017 is OVER we have to let it go ~ and hope and pray that 2018 will be (even) BETTER !
For ME 2018 has been great so far ~ nice weather ~ nice Friends ~ Holiday (\'til Monday) and it\'s 4 pm here ~ so I have enjoyed my FIRST 16 hours of 2018 ~ long may it stay that way ! Thanks for caring BRIAN ! Please check my REVOLUTIONS for 2018 ~ thanks B.
January 1st, 2018 11:12
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
A great poem FRED in anticipation of 2018 ! Love the repetition in the first line of each verse \"The last day of year\" 2017 is OVER we have to let it go ~ and hope and pray that 2018 will be (even) BETTER !
For ME 2018 has been great so far ~ nice weather ~ nice Friends ~ Holiday (\'til Monday) and it\'s 4 pm here ~ so I have enjoyed my FIRST 16 hours of 2018 ~ long may it stay that way ! Thanks for caring BRIAN ! Please check my REVOLUTIONS for 2018 ~ thanks B.
January 1st, 2018 11:12
The last Day of the Year
WL Schuett said:
A Happy New Year to you Fred hope it is a very creative one , I enjoy reading your poems and look forward to a new year !
January 1st, 2018 10:58
WL Schuett said:
A Happy New Year to you Fred hope it is a very creative one , I enjoy reading your poems and look forward to a new year !
January 1st, 2018 10:58
The last Day of the Year
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine tribute to the symbolic point in the progress of conceived time, Fred. May you continue on enjoying the journey!
January 1st, 2018 09:55
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine tribute to the symbolic point in the progress of conceived time, Fred. May you continue on enjoying the journey!
January 1st, 2018 09:55
Out of Body
Renzi said:
I got a little lost in it all.. it a wonderful way. Weldone my friend x
December 26th, 2017 10:03
Renzi said:
I got a little lost in it all.. it a wonderful way. Weldone my friend x
December 26th, 2017 10:03
Out of Body
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds like an OBE to me. Enjoyed this thought stimulating poem, Fred!
December 23rd, 2017 09:02
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds like an OBE to me. Enjoyed this thought stimulating poem, Fred!
December 23rd, 2017 09:02
Out of Body
Michael Edwards said:
No name that I\'m aware of but it works really well - could be a new form - It\'s by Fred and it rhymes so why not call it a Fredime ?
December 23rd, 2017 07:09
Michael Edwards said:
No name that I\'m aware of but it works really well - could be a new form - It\'s by Fred and it rhymes so why not call it a Fredime ?
December 23rd, 2017 07:09
Out of Body
orchidee said:
You had an OBE there? That could be:
A) Order of the British Empire Medal
B) Out of Body Experience
or (C) Other B*****\'s Efforts! oohh.
(C) is the alternative to (A). lol.
December 23rd, 2017 03:10
orchidee said:
You had an OBE there? That could be:
A) Order of the British Empire Medal
B) Out of Body Experience
or (C) Other B*****\'s Efforts! oohh.
(C) is the alternative to (A). lol.
December 23rd, 2017 03:10
Out of Body
orchidee said:
I dunno about technical names, but it looks jolly difficult. I choose \'easier\' AABB type things usually - first and second lines rhyme; then third and fourth lines rhyme. A fine write Fred.
December 23rd, 2017 03:08
orchidee said:
I dunno about technical names, but it looks jolly difficult. I choose \'easier\' AABB type things usually - first and second lines rhyme; then third and fourth lines rhyme. A fine write Fred.
December 23rd, 2017 03:08
Dear Santa!
skyebellasario said:
Beautiful poem Fred! Reminds me of the Band Aid song \"Do They Know It\'s Christmas\"
December 22nd, 2017 17:24
skyebellasario said:
Beautiful poem Fred! Reminds me of the Band Aid song \"Do They Know It\'s Christmas\"
December 22nd, 2017 17:24
Dear Santa!
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write Fred, I think we all wish this.
December 22nd, 2017 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write Fred, I think we all wish this.
December 22nd, 2017 01:58
Dear Santa!
Christina8 said:
So well written. Wouldn\'t that be wonderful? A Christmas miracle indeed if that could happen! This is fantastic!
December 21st, 2017 19:32
Christina8 said:
So well written. Wouldn\'t that be wonderful? A Christmas miracle indeed if that could happen! This is fantastic!
December 21st, 2017 19:32
Dear Santa!
Michael Edwards said:
If only he did and if only he could - lovely write Fred.
December 21st, 2017 19:18
Michael Edwards said:
If only he did and if only he could - lovely write Fred.
December 21st, 2017 19:18
Dear Santa!
kevin browne said:
your poignant poem exists in homes in every country across the globe. this touched me as indeed it would touch millions of others. I love your sentiment, Fred.
December 21st, 2017 18:59
kevin browne said:
your poignant poem exists in homes in every country across the globe. this touched me as indeed it would touch millions of others. I love your sentiment, Fred.
December 21st, 2017 18:59
Dear Santa!
Laura🌻 said:
Beautiful, caring, loving, and heartfelt sentiments for all the innocent children in the world who are suffering! Thank you Fred for this awesome write!
December 21st, 2017 17:50
Laura🌻 said:
Beautiful, caring, loving, and heartfelt sentiments for all the innocent children in the world who are suffering! Thank you Fred for this awesome write!
December 21st, 2017 17:50
Dear Santa!
Louis Gibbs said:
Would that it could be, Fred! Blessings on the children of the world who struggle this Christmas.
December 21st, 2017 17:06
Louis Gibbs said:
Would that it could be, Fred! Blessings on the children of the world who struggle this Christmas.
December 21st, 2017 17:06
Part of Me
entangledheart said:
This is quite good. I feel i can relate and it makes me think. I appreciate you writing something I personal could never put into words.
December 21st, 2017 05:18
entangledheart said:
This is quite good. I feel i can relate and it makes me think. I appreciate you writing something I personal could never put into words.
December 21st, 2017 05:18
Part of Me
Poetic Dan said:
To early in the morning to find words to say but what a great writing my friend
December 21st, 2017 04:28
Poetic Dan said:
To early in the morning to find words to say but what a great writing my friend
December 21st, 2017 04:28
Part of Me
Michael Edwards said:
Yes I guess we all have hidden depths - so well described Fred.
December 21st, 2017 01:52
Michael Edwards said:
Yes I guess we all have hidden depths - so well described Fred.
December 21st, 2017 01:52
Part of Me
Goldfinch60 said:
This is true of all of us, we wear masks in different situations and even with our most treasured loved one there is still something hidden. This is a very good write Fred.
December 21st, 2017 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
This is true of all of us, we wear masks in different situations and even with our most treasured loved one there is still something hidden. This is a very good write Fred.
December 21st, 2017 01:09
Drummer Boy
Louis Gibbs said:
A good drummer can tap into the heart-beat of the universe. Your poem describes it well, Fred!
December 18th, 2017 11:01
Louis Gibbs said:
A good drummer can tap into the heart-beat of the universe. Your poem describes it well, Fred!
December 18th, 2017 11:01
Drummer Boy
Christina8 said:
A great write for your friend Fred! Could feel the drums as I read.
December 18th, 2017 07:13
Christina8 said:
A great write for your friend Fred! Could feel the drums as I read.
December 18th, 2017 07:13
Drummer Boy
Michael Edwards said:
I can hear the beat - a real good un Fred.
December 18th, 2017 02:37
Michael Edwards said:
I can hear the beat - a real good un Fred.
December 18th, 2017 02:37
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