Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
I will always love you!
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong write, I too hope it will be forever.
November 14th, 2017 02:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong write, I too hope it will be forever.
November 14th, 2017 02:06
I will always love you!
WL Schuett said:
Nicely thought out piece , good poem
November 13th, 2017 23:49
WL Schuett said:
Nicely thought out piece , good poem
November 13th, 2017 23:49
I will always love you!
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. My dread has come true in me marriage to KP. lol.
November 13th, 2017 15:01
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. My dread has come true in me marriage to KP. lol.
November 13th, 2017 15:01
I will always love you!
Fay Slimm. said:
Two sides to love\'s coin given very poetically here Fred. Good read.
November 13th, 2017 12:53
Fay Slimm. said:
Two sides to love\'s coin given very poetically here Fred. Good read.
November 13th, 2017 12:53
I will always love you!
Michael Edwards said:
Super rhythm - fine write Fred
November 13th, 2017 12:36
Michael Edwards said:
Super rhythm - fine write Fred
November 13th, 2017 12:36
Cindy
myself and me said:
From this short interaction, lead our imagination to what she had been through all those years.
November 13th, 2017 09:06
myself and me said:
From this short interaction, lead our imagination to what she had been through all those years.
November 13th, 2017 09:06
Shadow
dusk arising said:
Nice one. A few months ago i woke from what i look back on as about ten years of doing/achieving nothing with my life. You can bet that i live the words of your piece here to the full. Good to read.
November 12th, 2017 21:46
dusk arising said:
Nice one. A few months ago i woke from what i look back on as about ten years of doing/achieving nothing with my life. You can bet that i live the words of your piece here to the full. Good to read.
November 12th, 2017 21:46
Shadow
skyebellasario said:
That\'s right we have to make every second count! Absolutely love the line \"oblivious to the shadow behind\"
November 12th, 2017 16:09
skyebellasario said:
That\'s right we have to make every second count! Absolutely love the line \"oblivious to the shadow behind\"
November 12th, 2017 16:09
Shadow
Christina8 said:
Just keep looking forward and as you say, stay \"oblivious to the shadow behind\'. Great poem! And awesome attitude about life.
November 12th, 2017 13:01
Christina8 said:
Just keep looking forward and as you say, stay \"oblivious to the shadow behind\'. Great poem! And awesome attitude about life.
November 12th, 2017 13:01
Shadow
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. Some \'die every day\' as it were - when they hear me sing! Well, something dies inside of them - all hope is gone that my tune will improve! lol.
November 12th, 2017 09:38
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. Some \'die every day\' as it were - when they hear me sing! Well, something dies inside of them - all hope is gone that my tune will improve! lol.
November 12th, 2017 09:38
Shadow
Accidental Poet said:
Fear not the other side my friend, but live each day to its fullest. Your presence here in the physical world is just a trial run for the real world. Great write Fred.
November 12th, 2017 09:04
Accidental Poet said:
Fear not the other side my friend, but live each day to its fullest. Your presence here in the physical world is just a trial run for the real world. Great write Fred.
November 12th, 2017 09:04
Shadow
kevin browne said:
Fred, you bring the light of death to the forefront in a manner few can do. well written with a thought provoking attitude.
November 12th, 2017 08:43
kevin browne said:
Fred, you bring the light of death to the forefront in a manner few can do. well written with a thought provoking attitude.
November 12th, 2017 08:43
Shadow
Michael Edwards said:
Yes I like this. I also never look back or regret what might have been - I just rejoice in what was and I continually look forward to what I can achieve tomorrow.
November 12th, 2017 02:58
Michael Edwards said:
Yes I like this. I also never look back or regret what might have been - I just rejoice in what was and I continually look forward to what I can achieve tomorrow.
November 12th, 2017 02:58
Life is a Mess
Poetic Dan said:
Just what I needed for my first read in a while thank you such.
November 11th, 2017 10:07
Poetic Dan said:
Just what I needed for my first read in a while thank you such.
November 11th, 2017 10:07
Cindy
Accidental Poet said:
Always true Fred, a book is not judged by it\'s cover. I\'d say your experiment turned out very well.
November 11th, 2017 09:45
Accidental Poet said:
Always true Fred, a book is not judged by it\'s cover. I\'d say your experiment turned out very well.
November 11th, 2017 09:45
Cindy
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRED for a beautifully penned Character Study ~ it did NOT needed a picture because you painted her perfectly ~ she triggered all my senses ! I saw he beauty and sadness and poverty ~ I scented her perfume her perfume & neglect and heard the sadness in her voice. I would have loved to touch her ~ to taste her ~ but perhaps that is another chapter. I am old enough (34) to have encountered Ladies of her ilk ~ but (as you indicate) their barriers are difficult to penetrate ~ BUT ~ in my experience they are always ready to accept a drink and some chat ~ BUT ~ at a distance ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
November 11th, 2017 08:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRED for a beautifully penned Character Study ~ it did NOT needed a picture because you painted her perfectly ~ she triggered all my senses ! I saw he beauty and sadness and poverty ~ I scented her perfume her perfume & neglect and heard the sadness in her voice. I would have loved to touch her ~ to taste her ~ but perhaps that is another chapter. I am old enough (34) to have encountered Ladies of her ilk ~ but (as you indicate) their barriers are difficult to penetrate ~ BUT ~ in my experience they are always ready to accept a drink and some chat ~ BUT ~ at a distance ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
November 11th, 2017 08:58
Cindy
Louis Gibbs said:
\"the slow smile ....... never reaching her eyes.\" What a great line! You portray her exquisitely, Fred. Well done character study!
November 11th, 2017 08:44
Louis Gibbs said:
\"the slow smile ....... never reaching her eyes.\" What a great line! You portray her exquisitely, Fred. Well done character study!
November 11th, 2017 08:44
Cindy
orchidee said:
Good write Fred. Did you meet her? And should I get to know her?!
November 11th, 2017 02:59
orchidee said:
Good write Fred. Did you meet her? And should I get to know her?!
November 11th, 2017 02:59
Cindy
Michael Edwards said:
More than an experiment - anyway whatever it sure paid off Fred.
November 11th, 2017 02:40
Michael Edwards said:
More than an experiment - anyway whatever it sure paid off Fred.
November 11th, 2017 02:40
Cindy
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, the goodness of people is on the inside not the image that is first seen with the eyes.
November 11th, 2017 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, the goodness of people is on the inside not the image that is first seen with the eyes.
November 11th, 2017 01:28
Cindy
kevin browne said:
brilliantly detailed of a women life in failing miserably and well expressed. your poetry is certainly growing upwards dear Fred.
November 11th, 2017 01:16
kevin browne said:
brilliantly detailed of a women life in failing miserably and well expressed. your poetry is certainly growing upwards dear Fred.
November 11th, 2017 01:16
Life is a Mess
MendedFences27 said:
Never, ever, clean up completely. Always leave some small reminder of what was.That way, you\'ll find thi/ongs later, and ask yourself, I wonder who these belong to?\"
Great poem, honest and sincere, imaginative based experience, defining the aging process, and one hell of a party. - Phil A.
November 10th, 2017 15:06
MendedFences27 said:
Never, ever, clean up completely. Always leave some small reminder of what was.That way, you\'ll find thi/ongs later, and ask yourself, I wonder who these belong to?\"
Great poem, honest and sincere, imaginative based experience, defining the aging process, and one hell of a party. - Phil A.
November 10th, 2017 15:06
Life is a Mess
Christina8 said:
You have a great imagination. I too have dabbled in \"fantasy\" poems. They are fun to do and yours was so well done! Very vivid imagery. Felt like I was watching this scene play out!
November 10th, 2017 12:52
Christina8 said:
You have a great imagination. I too have dabbled in \"fantasy\" poems. They are fun to do and yours was so well done! Very vivid imagery. Felt like I was watching this scene play out!
November 10th, 2017 12:52
Life is a Mess
Simple-Man87 said:
Wow. I loved this. Incredibly realistic, so vivid. Well done. Thank you.
November 10th, 2017 11:47
Simple-Man87 said:
Wow. I loved this. Incredibly realistic, so vivid. Well done. Thank you.
November 10th, 2017 11:47
Life is a Mess
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
wow SOME PARTY ! I\'m much too young for such shenanigans ! Thanks for baring (your soul !) ~ Yours BRIAN !
November 10th, 2017 10:29
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
wow SOME PARTY ! I\'m much too young for such shenanigans ! Thanks for baring (your soul !) ~ Yours BRIAN !
November 10th, 2017 10:29
Life is a Mess
Fay Slimm. said:
Your mind thinks in lateral style like all good poets Fred - -could really feel the sad realization of that sobering morning-after.
November 10th, 2017 10:18
Fay Slimm. said:
Your mind thinks in lateral style like all good poets Fred - -could really feel the sad realization of that sobering morning-after.
November 10th, 2017 10:18
Life is a Mess
myself and me said:
What a wild life to clean up, hope the underwear could be cleaned properly. :)
November 10th, 2017 09:34
myself and me said:
What a wild life to clean up, hope the underwear could be cleaned properly. :)
November 10th, 2017 09:34
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