Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
Carousel of Life
Michael Edwards said:
Such a sad read Fred. You don\'t come across as you describe. Thankfully I\'m still full of optimism always looking forward to the next poem, the next painting, the next day. Nonetheless this is a super write.
November 16th, 2017 01:27
Michael Edwards said:
Such a sad read Fred. You don\'t come across as you describe. Thankfully I\'m still full of optimism always looking forward to the next poem, the next painting, the next day. Nonetheless this is a super write.
November 16th, 2017 01:27
Carousel of Life
Accidental Poet said:
Life is like a carousel ride Fred. We all go through it. Sometimes we get tired of it, and then we reminisce about it. And that ever elusive brass ring not always within reach. Great write Fred.
November 15th, 2017 19:25
Accidental Poet said:
Life is like a carousel ride Fred. We all go through it. Sometimes we get tired of it, and then we reminisce about it. And that ever elusive brass ring not always within reach. Great write Fred.
November 15th, 2017 19:25
Carousel of Life
Christina8 said:
This is such a well written poem, Fred, better than I\'ve seen in a while. I hope that you aren\'t as depressed as poem reflects. Awesome rhyme and cadence. I can assure you when you are on the other side, you won\'t be watching with a sad face. Again, awesome poem! Definitely a fav!
November 15th, 2017 17:49
Christina8 said:
This is such a well written poem, Fred, better than I\'ve seen in a while. I hope that you aren\'t as depressed as poem reflects. Awesome rhyme and cadence. I can assure you when you are on the other side, you won\'t be watching with a sad face. Again, awesome poem! Definitely a fav!
November 15th, 2017 17:49
I will always love you!
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong write, I too hope it will be forever.
November 14th, 2017 02:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong write, I too hope it will be forever.
November 14th, 2017 02:06
I will always love you!
WL Schuett said:
Nicely thought out piece , good poem
November 13th, 2017 23:49
WL Schuett said:
Nicely thought out piece , good poem
November 13th, 2017 23:49
I will always love you!
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. My dread has come true in me marriage to KP. lol.
November 13th, 2017 15:01
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. My dread has come true in me marriage to KP. lol.
November 13th, 2017 15:01
I will always love you!
Fay Slimm. said:
Two sides to love\'s coin given very poetically here Fred. Good read.
November 13th, 2017 12:53
Fay Slimm. said:
Two sides to love\'s coin given very poetically here Fred. Good read.
November 13th, 2017 12:53
I will always love you!
Michael Edwards said:
Super rhythm - fine write Fred
November 13th, 2017 12:36
Michael Edwards said:
Super rhythm - fine write Fred
November 13th, 2017 12:36
Cindy
myself and me said:
From this short interaction, lead our imagination to what she had been through all those years.
November 13th, 2017 09:06
myself and me said:
From this short interaction, lead our imagination to what she had been through all those years.
November 13th, 2017 09:06
Shadow
dusk arising said:
Nice one. A few months ago i woke from what i look back on as about ten years of doing/achieving nothing with my life. You can bet that i live the words of your piece here to the full. Good to read.
November 12th, 2017 21:46
dusk arising said:
Nice one. A few months ago i woke from what i look back on as about ten years of doing/achieving nothing with my life. You can bet that i live the words of your piece here to the full. Good to read.
November 12th, 2017 21:46
Shadow
skyebellasario said:
That\'s right we have to make every second count! Absolutely love the line \"oblivious to the shadow behind\"
November 12th, 2017 16:09
skyebellasario said:
That\'s right we have to make every second count! Absolutely love the line \"oblivious to the shadow behind\"
November 12th, 2017 16:09
Shadow
Christina8 said:
Just keep looking forward and as you say, stay \"oblivious to the shadow behind\'. Great poem! And awesome attitude about life.
November 12th, 2017 13:01
Christina8 said:
Just keep looking forward and as you say, stay \"oblivious to the shadow behind\'. Great poem! And awesome attitude about life.
November 12th, 2017 13:01
Shadow
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. Some \'die every day\' as it were - when they hear me sing! Well, something dies inside of them - all hope is gone that my tune will improve! lol.
November 12th, 2017 09:38
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. Some \'die every day\' as it were - when they hear me sing! Well, something dies inside of them - all hope is gone that my tune will improve! lol.
November 12th, 2017 09:38
Shadow
Accidental Poet said:
Fear not the other side my friend, but live each day to its fullest. Your presence here in the physical world is just a trial run for the real world. Great write Fred.
November 12th, 2017 09:04
Accidental Poet said:
Fear not the other side my friend, but live each day to its fullest. Your presence here in the physical world is just a trial run for the real world. Great write Fred.
November 12th, 2017 09:04
Shadow
kevin browne said:
Fred, you bring the light of death to the forefront in a manner few can do. well written with a thought provoking attitude.
November 12th, 2017 08:43
kevin browne said:
Fred, you bring the light of death to the forefront in a manner few can do. well written with a thought provoking attitude.
November 12th, 2017 08:43
Shadow
Michael Edwards said:
Yes I like this. I also never look back or regret what might have been - I just rejoice in what was and I continually look forward to what I can achieve tomorrow.
November 12th, 2017 02:58
Michael Edwards said:
Yes I like this. I also never look back or regret what might have been - I just rejoice in what was and I continually look forward to what I can achieve tomorrow.
November 12th, 2017 02:58
Life is a Mess
Poetic Dan said:
Just what I needed for my first read in a while thank you such.
November 11th, 2017 10:07
Poetic Dan said:
Just what I needed for my first read in a while thank you such.
November 11th, 2017 10:07
Cindy
Accidental Poet said:
Always true Fred, a book is not judged by it\'s cover. I\'d say your experiment turned out very well.
November 11th, 2017 09:45
Accidental Poet said:
Always true Fred, a book is not judged by it\'s cover. I\'d say your experiment turned out very well.
November 11th, 2017 09:45
Cindy
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRED for a beautifully penned Character Study ~ it did NOT needed a picture because you painted her perfectly ~ she triggered all my senses ! I saw he beauty and sadness and poverty ~ I scented her perfume her perfume & neglect and heard the sadness in her voice. I would have loved to touch her ~ to taste her ~ but perhaps that is another chapter. I am old enough (34) to have encountered Ladies of her ilk ~ but (as you indicate) their barriers are difficult to penetrate ~ BUT ~ in my experience they are always ready to accept a drink and some chat ~ BUT ~ at a distance ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
November 11th, 2017 08:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRED for a beautifully penned Character Study ~ it did NOT needed a picture because you painted her perfectly ~ she triggered all my senses ! I saw he beauty and sadness and poverty ~ I scented her perfume her perfume & neglect and heard the sadness in her voice. I would have loved to touch her ~ to taste her ~ but perhaps that is another chapter. I am old enough (34) to have encountered Ladies of her ilk ~ but (as you indicate) their barriers are difficult to penetrate ~ BUT ~ in my experience they are always ready to accept a drink and some chat ~ BUT ~ at a distance ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
November 11th, 2017 08:58
Cindy
Louis Gibbs said:
\"the slow smile ....... never reaching her eyes.\" What a great line! You portray her exquisitely, Fred. Well done character study!
November 11th, 2017 08:44
Louis Gibbs said:
\"the slow smile ....... never reaching her eyes.\" What a great line! You portray her exquisitely, Fred. Well done character study!
November 11th, 2017 08:44
Cindy
orchidee said:
Good write Fred. Did you meet her? And should I get to know her?!
November 11th, 2017 02:59
orchidee said:
Good write Fred. Did you meet her? And should I get to know her?!
November 11th, 2017 02:59
Cindy
Michael Edwards said:
More than an experiment - anyway whatever it sure paid off Fred.
November 11th, 2017 02:40
Michael Edwards said:
More than an experiment - anyway whatever it sure paid off Fred.
November 11th, 2017 02:40
Cindy
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, the goodness of people is on the inside not the image that is first seen with the eyes.
November 11th, 2017 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, the goodness of people is on the inside not the image that is first seen with the eyes.
November 11th, 2017 01:28
Cindy
kevin browne said:
brilliantly detailed of a women life in failing miserably and well expressed. your poetry is certainly growing upwards dear Fred.
November 11th, 2017 01:16
kevin browne said:
brilliantly detailed of a women life in failing miserably and well expressed. your poetry is certainly growing upwards dear Fred.
November 11th, 2017 01:16
Life is a Mess
MendedFences27 said:
Never, ever, clean up completely. Always leave some small reminder of what was.That way, you\'ll find thi/ongs later, and ask yourself, I wonder who these belong to?\"
Great poem, honest and sincere, imaginative based experience, defining the aging process, and one hell of a party. - Phil A.
November 10th, 2017 15:06
MendedFences27 said:
Never, ever, clean up completely. Always leave some small reminder of what was.That way, you\'ll find thi/ongs later, and ask yourself, I wonder who these belong to?\"
Great poem, honest and sincere, imaginative based experience, defining the aging process, and one hell of a party. - Phil A.
November 10th, 2017 15:06
Life is a Mess
Christina8 said:
You have a great imagination. I too have dabbled in \"fantasy\" poems. They are fun to do and yours was so well done! Very vivid imagery. Felt like I was watching this scene play out!
November 10th, 2017 12:52
Christina8 said:
You have a great imagination. I too have dabbled in \"fantasy\" poems. They are fun to do and yours was so well done! Very vivid imagery. Felt like I was watching this scene play out!
November 10th, 2017 12:52
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