Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
Cut three times and still too short
kevin browne said:
Oh dear, it looks as though I have to stay on the straight and narrow with no mistakes other a boot will be up my backside. nice write, however, Fred.
November 18th, 2017 02:02
kevin browne said:
Oh dear, it looks as though I have to stay on the straight and narrow with no mistakes other a boot will be up my backside. nice write, however, Fred.
November 18th, 2017 02:02
Tired
w c said:
Thanks Fred. I admire your direction and willingness to find your own path.
November 17th, 2017 12:10
w c said:
Thanks Fred. I admire your direction and willingness to find your own path.
November 17th, 2017 12:10
Tired
Accidental Poet said:
Yes Fred, follow your own path
sing your own tune
you\'re your own boss
not someone else\'s bafoon
Awesome write!
November 17th, 2017 09:47
Accidental Poet said:
Yes Fred, follow your own path
sing your own tune
you\'re your own boss
not someone else\'s bafoon
Awesome write!
November 17th, 2017 09:47
Tired
Louis Gibbs said:
Congratulations on coming into your own, Fred... the reward after having lived a full life of experiencing the \"beaten path\". Well written piece, my friend!
November 17th, 2017 09:42
Louis Gibbs said:
Congratulations on coming into your own, Fred... the reward after having lived a full life of experiencing the \"beaten path\". Well written piece, my friend!
November 17th, 2017 09:42
The Inventor
myself and me said:
Re-invention, a brilliant way to live our life. Thank you for the wisdom.
November 17th, 2017 08:53
myself and me said:
Re-invention, a brilliant way to live our life. Thank you for the wisdom.
November 17th, 2017 08:53
Tired
Christina8 said:
This is brilliant! As I look at the last stanza, I see such empowerment! If we could all march to our own song, what would the world be like? You are a strong poet to come up with writes like this! The poem as a whole is so well written!
November 17th, 2017 07:35
Christina8 said:
This is brilliant! As I look at the last stanza, I see such empowerment! If we could all march to our own song, what would the world be like? You are a strong poet to come up with writes like this! The poem as a whole is so well written!
November 17th, 2017 07:35
Tired
Poetic Dan said:
Thank you, I have to many words and feeling from this. Strength, pain and self worth in a mixed up pile I can\'t sort through.
November 17th, 2017 03:03
Poetic Dan said:
Thank you, I have to many words and feeling from this. Strength, pain and self worth in a mixed up pile I can\'t sort through.
November 17th, 2017 03:03
Tired
orchidee said:
You changed that gramophone record yet Fred? But how do you change someone else\'s record? Tell them to play the other side of the record. Then we might all \'sing from the same sheet\'!
But not a \'round\' that goes wrong. There\'s nothing much worse than that in singing.
November 17th, 2017 02:54
orchidee said:
You changed that gramophone record yet Fred? But how do you change someone else\'s record? Tell them to play the other side of the record. Then we might all \'sing from the same sheet\'!
But not a \'round\' that goes wrong. There\'s nothing much worse than that in singing.
November 17th, 2017 02:54
Tired
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRED for a very elegantly Poem ~ replete with Rhyme ~ Rhythm & Reason. We are all special and individualistic ~ Take MPS as an example ~ every Poem is unique in Structure & Subject. It\'s the same in Life & Love. We have to be ourselves and assert own authority and ideas ~ when appropriate ! Yours BRIAN
November 17th, 2017 02:41
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRED for a very elegantly Poem ~ replete with Rhyme ~ Rhythm & Reason. We are all special and individualistic ~ Take MPS as an example ~ every Poem is unique in Structure & Subject. It\'s the same in Life & Love. We have to be ourselves and assert own authority and ideas ~ when appropriate ! Yours BRIAN
November 17th, 2017 02:41
Tired
Michael Edwards said:
That\'s the beauty of retirement: no targets to meet, no reports to write. just do whatever I please whenever I please. Err but there\'s always the wife to bring me back down to earth. Really enjoyed this read Fred.
November 17th, 2017 02:12
Michael Edwards said:
That\'s the beauty of retirement: no targets to meet, no reports to write. just do whatever I please whenever I please. Err but there\'s always the wife to bring me back down to earth. Really enjoyed this read Fred.
November 17th, 2017 02:12
Tired
Goldfinch60 said:
It is always worth taking \'the road less travelled\' to increase our experience of life.
November 17th, 2017 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
It is always worth taking \'the road less travelled\' to increase our experience of life.
November 17th, 2017 01:11
Tired
kevin browne said:
you\'re making a statement her in this Poem, Fred, and I think it\'s saying something along the the of, well, the letter is a big \'F\' and the other word begins with an \'O\'. However, on the up side to your statement it says you are a fantastic writer and poet which you have your own stance for. ignore the devils and sing with along with the melody of your own existence. allow light to shine you so it brightens up your life. there are so many beautiful things to attract away from the rubbish. a good solid intentional poem. stay safe.
November 17th, 2017 01:10
kevin browne said:
you\'re making a statement her in this Poem, Fred, and I think it\'s saying something along the the of, well, the letter is a big \'F\' and the other word begins with an \'O\'. However, on the up side to your statement it says you are a fantastic writer and poet which you have your own stance for. ignore the devils and sing with along with the melody of your own existence. allow light to shine you so it brightens up your life. there are so many beautiful things to attract away from the rubbish. a good solid intentional poem. stay safe.
November 17th, 2017 01:10
The Inventor
Goldfinch60 said:
It is the way of life that if things go wrong it needs to be changed, that step into a new world can be hard but in most cases it is always worthwhile, you and I have probably done it so many times in our lives and we are still here Fred.
November 17th, 2017 01:04
Goldfinch60 said:
It is the way of life that if things go wrong it needs to be changed, that step into a new world can be hard but in most cases it is always worthwhile, you and I have probably done it so many times in our lives and we are still here Fred.
November 17th, 2017 01:04
The Inventor
Accidental Poet said:
This write carries some very heavy weight Fred. Hits home with me.
November 16th, 2017 20:09
Accidental Poet said:
This write carries some very heavy weight Fred. Hits home with me.
November 16th, 2017 20:09
The Inventor
dusk arising said:
This is great! It reads like something i put myself through recently.... certainly changed many facets of life but my poetry has suffered.
November 16th, 2017 19:46
dusk arising said:
This is great! It reads like something i put myself through recently.... certainly changed many facets of life but my poetry has suffered.
November 16th, 2017 19:46
The Inventor
Laura🌻 said:
My mom...
95 years old...says
to re-invent ourselves before we’re 80 years old! According to her, it’s downhill after 80!
So we still have time! Let’s
make the best of it!
Enjoyed the read!
November 16th, 2017 18:10
Laura🌻 said:
My mom...
95 years old...says
to re-invent ourselves before we’re 80 years old! According to her, it’s downhill after 80!
So we still have time! Let’s
make the best of it!
Enjoyed the read!
November 16th, 2017 18:10
The Inventor
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Never again will I be a slave to limitations of my own\" ... Love this line Fred! Such great advice to one\'s self. You describe the inventor\'s process well in these words.
November 16th, 2017 17:13
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Never again will I be a slave to limitations of my own\" ... Love this line Fred! Such great advice to one\'s self. You describe the inventor\'s process well in these words.
November 16th, 2017 17:13
The Inventor
Fay Slimm. said:
Your rhyming in this wise piece of advice is outstanding Fred - - making moves to renew and recharge is all we need. Great read my friend.
November 16th, 2017 16:18
Fay Slimm. said:
Your rhyming in this wise piece of advice is outstanding Fred - - making moves to renew and recharge is all we need. Great read my friend.
November 16th, 2017 16:18
The Inventor
Michael Edwards said:
Great work Fred - there\'s always a way.
November 16th, 2017 15:59
Michael Edwards said:
Great work Fred - there\'s always a way.
November 16th, 2017 15:59
The Inventor
orchidee said:
Did you fall to pieces? Did the wheels fall off, as they say? You all re-assembled now?! heehee.
November 16th, 2017 15:45
orchidee said:
Did you fall to pieces? Did the wheels fall off, as they say? You all re-assembled now?! heehee.
November 16th, 2017 15:45
Carousel of Life
myself and me said:
This is so not you. How is the weather there? Cloudy?
November 16th, 2017 09:06
myself and me said:
This is so not you. How is the weather there? Cloudy?
November 16th, 2017 09:06
Carousel of Life
kevin browne said:
ah. riding high on the merry-go-round of life whopping and screaming as you watch the people look up in disarray at you because you\'re having so much fun. hold on you\'re hat Fred, it looks as though you may be having the time of you\'re life. good on you brother.
November 16th, 2017 04:07
kevin browne said:
ah. riding high on the merry-go-round of life whopping and screaming as you watch the people look up in disarray at you because you\'re having so much fun. hold on you\'re hat Fred, it looks as though you may be having the time of you\'re life. good on you brother.
November 16th, 2017 04:07
Carousel of Life
orchidee said:
You getting anywhere, or you going round in circles?! Good write Fred.
November 16th, 2017 02:57
orchidee said:
You getting anywhere, or you going round in circles?! Good write Fred.
November 16th, 2017 02:57
Carousel of Life
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Fred, we have both been on that carousel for a long time but I believe that the highs on the ride always outweigh the lows.
November 16th, 2017 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Fred, we have both been on that carousel for a long time but I believe that the highs on the ride always outweigh the lows.
November 16th, 2017 01:54
Carousel of Life
Michael Edwards said:
Such a sad read Fred. You don\'t come across as you describe. Thankfully I\'m still full of optimism always looking forward to the next poem, the next painting, the next day. Nonetheless this is a super write.
November 16th, 2017 01:27
Michael Edwards said:
Such a sad read Fred. You don\'t come across as you describe. Thankfully I\'m still full of optimism always looking forward to the next poem, the next painting, the next day. Nonetheless this is a super write.
November 16th, 2017 01:27
Carousel of Life
Accidental Poet said:
Life is like a carousel ride Fred. We all go through it. Sometimes we get tired of it, and then we reminisce about it. And that ever elusive brass ring not always within reach. Great write Fred.
November 15th, 2017 19:25
Accidental Poet said:
Life is like a carousel ride Fred. We all go through it. Sometimes we get tired of it, and then we reminisce about it. And that ever elusive brass ring not always within reach. Great write Fred.
November 15th, 2017 19:25
Carousel of Life
Christina8 said:
This is such a well written poem, Fred, better than I\'ve seen in a while. I hope that you aren\'t as depressed as poem reflects. Awesome rhyme and cadence. I can assure you when you are on the other side, you won\'t be watching with a sad face. Again, awesome poem! Definitely a fav!
November 15th, 2017 17:49
Christina8 said:
This is such a well written poem, Fred, better than I\'ve seen in a while. I hope that you aren\'t as depressed as poem reflects. Awesome rhyme and cadence. I can assure you when you are on the other side, you won\'t be watching with a sad face. Again, awesome poem! Definitely a fav!
November 15th, 2017 17:49
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