Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
The Actor
Michael Edwards said:
Simple straight and punchy - a superb work Fred
November 7th, 2017 01:14
Michael Edwards said:
Simple straight and punchy - a superb work Fred
November 7th, 2017 01:14
Realization
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna clear off and leave KP to it! lol. In my case \'Better not to have loved (?) KP at all\'. doh! lol.
November 6th, 2017 12:37
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna clear off and leave KP to it! lol. In my case \'Better not to have loved (?) KP at all\'. doh! lol.
November 6th, 2017 12:37
Realization
Louis Gibbs said:
So much truth about us all in this fine poem, Fred.. Being thrust out of a relationship can result in an empowering spurt of growth. Painful, but often productive.
Good and insightful write here!
November 6th, 2017 09:47
Louis Gibbs said:
So much truth about us all in this fine poem, Fred.. Being thrust out of a relationship can result in an empowering spurt of growth. Painful, but often productive.
Good and insightful write here!
November 6th, 2017 09:47
Roses
myself and me said:
Sex and love, he and she, simple, straight and fun. Roses, the compromise.
November 6th, 2017 09:42
myself and me said:
Sex and love, he and she, simple, straight and fun. Roses, the compromise.
November 6th, 2017 09:42
Realization
myself and me said:
\"Though sad and hurt she realized
She was now free to live HER life \"
This is wonderful, free again.
November 6th, 2017 09:06
myself and me said:
\"Though sad and hurt she realized
She was now free to live HER life \"
This is wonderful, free again.
November 6th, 2017 09:06
Realization
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fred, living your own life is a dream to which we must all aspire.
November 6th, 2017 09:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fred, living your own life is a dream to which we must all aspire.
November 6th, 2017 09:00
Realization
Christina8 said:
This is such a fabulous write. So many poets on MPS and just folks in real life ought to see this poem! It\'s empowering! Great job!
November 6th, 2017 07:20
Christina8 said:
This is such a fabulous write. So many poets on MPS and just folks in real life ought to see this poem! It\'s empowering! Great job!
November 6th, 2017 07:20
Realization
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FRED ~ Your excellent Poem mirrors my MANTRA ~ \"Better to have Loved and lost ~ than never to have Love at all\" I am an optimist ~ so I consider all LOSS as RELEASE to enable me too \"To be free to live MY life again ! Yours BRIAN
November 6th, 2017 04:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FRED ~ Your excellent Poem mirrors my MANTRA ~ \"Better to have Loved and lost ~ than never to have Love at all\" I am an optimist ~ so I consider all LOSS as RELEASE to enable me too \"To be free to live MY life again ! Yours BRIAN
November 6th, 2017 04:51
Roses
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Fred, the stereotypical male it may be but as you and I know when love happens it has nothing to do with sex.
November 6th, 2017 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Fred, the stereotypical male it may be but as you and I know when love happens it has nothing to do with sex.
November 6th, 2017 01:45
Roses
WL Schuett said:
Fun poem , can I just get some roses ... that’s hilarious
November 5th, 2017 18:58
WL Schuett said:
Fun poem , can I just get some roses ... that’s hilarious
November 5th, 2017 18:58
Roses
Christina8 said:
A very good lighthearted write, Fred! I enjoyed it very much. Sounds like a conversation between a couple that just met. Nevertheless, a great write!
November 5th, 2017 11:28
Christina8 said:
A very good lighthearted write, Fred! I enjoyed it very much. Sounds like a conversation between a couple that just met. Nevertheless, a great write!
November 5th, 2017 11:28
Roses
Louis Gibbs said:
This one captures the stereotypical male quite well, Fred ... sadly. But then, offsetting that stereotype, there are male poets who can think beyond the animal instincts we all are born with. Such is nature\'s design.
Well written piece, my friend.
November 5th, 2017 11:04
Louis Gibbs said:
This one captures the stereotypical male quite well, Fred ... sadly. But then, offsetting that stereotype, there are male poets who can think beyond the animal instincts we all are born with. Such is nature\'s design.
Well written piece, my friend.
November 5th, 2017 11:04
Roses
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. Slap and tickle? A bit of the \'other\'? Too swoony for me, I bet! heehee.
November 5th, 2017 09:21
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. Slap and tickle? A bit of the \'other\'? Too swoony for me, I bet! heehee.
November 5th, 2017 09:21
Innocence Lost
WL Schuett said:
Nice Fred , I think everyone could relate to this poem .....
November 4th, 2017 08:39
WL Schuett said:
Nice Fred , I think everyone could relate to this poem .....
November 4th, 2017 08:39
Innocence Lost
Louis Gibbs said:
Ah, the power of an alluring woman to destroy a good man. Well portrayed here, Fred! Good write.
November 4th, 2017 08:13
Louis Gibbs said:
Ah, the power of an alluring woman to destroy a good man. Well portrayed here, Fred! Good write.
November 4th, 2017 08:13
Innocence Lost
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. I wish she (KP) would go from my life. No chance! lol.
November 4th, 2017 02:45
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. I wish she (KP) would go from my life. No chance! lol.
November 4th, 2017 02:45
Innocence Lost
Mugsdaddy said:
thought you were writing about your first time.great write
November 4th, 2017 01:22
Mugsdaddy said:
thought you were writing about your first time.great write
November 4th, 2017 01:22
Innocence Lost
Goldfinch60 said:
What a very good write Fred, did she ever come back?
November 4th, 2017 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
What a very good write Fred, did she ever come back?
November 4th, 2017 00:59
The Holy Church of Matrimonial Bliss
rrodriguez said:
Fred, this is indeed a well and thoughtful poem. Enjoyed it. I had a smile as I read it.
November 3rd, 2017 17:23
rrodriguez said:
Fred, this is indeed a well and thoughtful poem. Enjoyed it. I had a smile as I read it.
November 3rd, 2017 17:23
The Holy Church of Matrimonial Bliss
lasergraph said:
Great write and I could identify with a lot of this in my own worship routine.
November 3rd, 2017 14:08
lasergraph said:
Great write and I could identify with a lot of this in my own worship routine.
November 3rd, 2017 14:08
Aftermath
Anna Marg said:
That was a great poem! It rhymed perfectly and had a great message in it!
November 3rd, 2017 10:02
Anna Marg said:
That was a great poem! It rhymed perfectly and had a great message in it!
November 3rd, 2017 10:02
The Holy Church of Matrimonial Bliss
Louis Gibbs said:
Yes, I used to belong to that church, and remember those services well. Cute poem on a fine marriage, Fred! You are a fortunate man.
November 3rd, 2017 08:48
Louis Gibbs said:
Yes, I used to belong to that church, and remember those services well. Cute poem on a fine marriage, Fred! You are a fortunate man.
November 3rd, 2017 08:48
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