Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
Life is a Mess
Accidental Poet said:
Fred, it\'s a scenario that anyone could be portrayed in. Power to your imagination!
November 10th, 2017 05:30
Accidental Poet said:
Fred, it\'s a scenario that anyone could be portrayed in. Power to your imagination!
November 10th, 2017 05:30
Life is a Mess
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. Would I get past \'fumbling\' without swooning?! heehee.
November 10th, 2017 02:52
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. Would I get past \'fumbling\' without swooning?! heehee.
November 10th, 2017 02:52
Life is a Mess
Michael Edwards said:
I can see the scene (and wonder what you did with those under pants) - so descriptive - great write.
November 10th, 2017 02:50
Michael Edwards said:
I can see the scene (and wonder what you did with those under pants) - so descriptive - great write.
November 10th, 2017 02:50
Life is a Mess
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, your imagination seems to have given you a great party.
November 10th, 2017 02:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, your imagination seems to have given you a great party.
November 10th, 2017 02:33
Life is a Mess
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds like a hell-of-a party! Clever write, Fred. hope your hang-over isn\'t too severe.
November 10th, 2017 00:46
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds like a hell-of-a party! Clever write, Fred. hope your hang-over isn\'t too severe.
November 10th, 2017 00:46
Glorious Sunshine
lasergraph said:
I enjoyed reading this warm expression, especially since I started my day below freezing. Thanks for the warm up.
November 9th, 2017 16:47
lasergraph said:
I enjoyed reading this warm expression, especially since I started my day below freezing. Thanks for the warm up.
November 9th, 2017 16:47
Glorious Sunshine
Fay Slimm. said:
Love these informing two liners Fred - - sunshine written like this feels so warm and inviting. Great read.
November 9th, 2017 14:08
Fay Slimm. said:
Love these informing two liners Fred - - sunshine written like this feels so warm and inviting. Great read.
November 9th, 2017 14:08
Glorious Sunshine
Louis Gibbs said:
Five uplifting short poems I see here, Fred. Can\'t connect them in my mind too well, but enjoyed them just the same. Interesting experimentation you are doing! Congratulations for roaming outside the box.
November 9th, 2017 10:50
Louis Gibbs said:
Five uplifting short poems I see here, Fred. Can\'t connect them in my mind too well, but enjoyed them just the same. Interesting experimentation you are doing! Congratulations for roaming outside the box.
November 9th, 2017 10:50
Glorious Sunshine
myself and me said:
A beautiful day to enjoy. Simply love this short form.
November 9th, 2017 08:52
myself and me said:
A beautiful day to enjoy. Simply love this short form.
November 9th, 2017 08:52
Glorious Sunshine
WL Schuett said:
Fun juxtaposition from yesterday’s poem ,Fred ,equally as good
November 9th, 2017 08:41
WL Schuett said:
Fun juxtaposition from yesterday’s poem ,Fred ,equally as good
November 9th, 2017 08:41
Glorious Sunshine
Christina8 said:
A beautiful poem, Fred! Not just the style, which I like, but the happy content and the ending \"elated to be alive\". Great message as I start my day!
November 9th, 2017 07:29
Christina8 said:
A beautiful poem, Fred! Not just the style, which I like, but the happy content and the ending \"elated to be alive\". Great message as I start my day!
November 9th, 2017 07:29
Glorious Sunshine
Accidental Poet said:
A great write comes from you Fred no matter how the style you write.
November 9th, 2017 04:57
Accidental Poet said:
A great write comes from you Fred no matter how the style you write.
November 9th, 2017 04:57
Glorious Sunshine
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. And then it rained.... that put the tin hat on it! lol.
I suppose it\'s easier sometimes to be long. One can just waffle on (no change there then for me?).
November 9th, 2017 02:22
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. And then it rained.... that put the tin hat on it! lol.
I suppose it\'s easier sometimes to be long. One can just waffle on (no change there then for me?).
November 9th, 2017 02:22
Glorious Sunshine
Michael Edwards said:
Just great - it works so well - more?
November 9th, 2017 02:07
Michael Edwards said:
Just great - it works so well - more?
November 9th, 2017 02:07
Glorious Sunshine
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful positive write, the wonder that sunshine can bring to us is always good.
Good style of writing as well Fred.
November 9th, 2017 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful positive write, the wonder that sunshine can bring to us is always good.
Good style of writing as well Fred.
November 9th, 2017 00:51
Cold Rain
Simple-Man87 said:
I love the \"identical twins of misery.\" Amazing, sir. Well done.
November 8th, 2017 18:20
Simple-Man87 said:
I love the \"identical twins of misery.\" Amazing, sir. Well done.
November 8th, 2017 18:20
Cold Rain
Louis Gibbs said:
A strong series of couplets here, Fred. I like this new form you experiment with. It is fun working with form and shape in our poems, isn\'t it. Well done!
November 8th, 2017 10:27
Louis Gibbs said:
A strong series of couplets here, Fred. I like this new form you experiment with. It is fun working with form and shape in our poems, isn\'t it. Well done!
November 8th, 2017 10:27
Cold Rain
WL Schuett said:
Good work Fred I always like to see someone pushing themselves to get beyond their comfort zones
November 8th, 2017 10:17
WL Schuett said:
Good work Fred I always like to see someone pushing themselves to get beyond their comfort zones
November 8th, 2017 10:17
Cold Rain
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. Maybe it\'s called \'staccato\' or could be. Short and sweet - and can be sharp sometimes too.
You gonna be long-winded tomorrow instead?! heehee. Oh, you mean the subject matter will be opposite, not the actual length of the poem.
November 8th, 2017 02:38
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. Maybe it\'s called \'staccato\' or could be. Short and sweet - and can be sharp sometimes too.
You gonna be long-winded tomorrow instead?! heehee. Oh, you mean the subject matter will be opposite, not the actual length of the poem.
November 8th, 2017 02:38
Cold Rain
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, hopefully the one you write tomorrow will be warmer.
November 8th, 2017 02:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, hopefully the one you write tomorrow will be warmer.
November 8th, 2017 02:32
Cold Rain
Michael Edwards said:
Don\'t know of a name for it but very effective - great stuff Fred
November 8th, 2017 01:07
Michael Edwards said:
Don\'t know of a name for it but very effective - great stuff Fred
November 8th, 2017 01:07
The Actor
MendedFences27 said:
Minimal wording, maximum effect. Sometimes less is more. I believe for this poem it works to bring an air of honesty and true emotion. More descriptions would make it seem less true, as though something was being disguised in the verbiage. Loved this one. Felt the pain. - Phil A..
November 7th, 2017 20:34
MendedFences27 said:
Minimal wording, maximum effect. Sometimes less is more. I believe for this poem it works to bring an air of honesty and true emotion. More descriptions would make it seem less true, as though something was being disguised in the verbiage. Loved this one. Felt the pain. - Phil A..
November 7th, 2017 20:34
The Actor
skyebellasario said:
A beautiful write Fred! So simple yet complex at the same time
November 7th, 2017 16:00
skyebellasario said:
A beautiful write Fred! So simple yet complex at the same time
November 7th, 2017 16:00
The Actor
myself and me said:
Simple yet wonderful writing. How about a one-man show?
November 7th, 2017 11:47
myself and me said:
Simple yet wonderful writing. How about a one-man show?
November 7th, 2017 11:47
The Actor
Louis Gibbs said:
\"An actor without a play\" ... what a great line! More meaningful to me as I\'m currently taking an acting class, just for fun. the poem is beautiful, and I like the consistent three-line-per-phrase structure. Well organized! Kudos, Fred!
November 7th, 2017 09:17
Louis Gibbs said:
\"An actor without a play\" ... what a great line! More meaningful to me as I\'m currently taking an acting class, just for fun. the poem is beautiful, and I like the consistent three-line-per-phrase structure. Well organized! Kudos, Fred!
November 7th, 2017 09:17
The Actor
WL Schuett said:
I like this Fred simple yet you got across the feeling of a lost love ....
November 7th, 2017 08:33
WL Schuett said:
I like this Fred simple yet you got across the feeling of a lost love ....
November 7th, 2017 08:33
The Actor
Christina8 said:
This is a great poem, Fred! Very descriptive and to the point! Awesome!
November 7th, 2017 08:22
Christina8 said:
This is a great poem, Fred! Very descriptive and to the point! Awesome!
November 7th, 2017 08:22
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