Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
Law of my Mind
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s how my mind works at times as well - the number of times something flashes across it and whilst thinking about what comes next I have lost the last thought. Fine work Fred.
January 7th, 2018 04:34
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s how my mind works at times as well - the number of times something flashes across it and whilst thinking about what comes next I have lost the last thought. Fine work Fred.
January 7th, 2018 04:34
Law of my Mind
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. Ahh, you are thinking. That\'s more than some of us do! heehee.
January 7th, 2018 02:58
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. Ahh, you are thinking. That\'s more than some of us do! heehee.
January 7th, 2018 02:58
Law of my Mind
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fred. \"To trust without fear\" is the way that life should always be.
January 7th, 2018 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Fred. \"To trust without fear\" is the way that life should always be.
January 7th, 2018 02:16
Out of Body
Elsie said:
it reminds me of an OBE I experienced some years ago. Definitely \'freed of earthly limitation\'. What an interesting subject. Got me thinking about things I could write about.
January 6th, 2018 21:50
Elsie said:
it reminds me of an OBE I experienced some years ago. Definitely \'freed of earthly limitation\'. What an interesting subject. Got me thinking about things I could write about.
January 6th, 2018 21:50
I am
Elsie said:
I am glad orchidee told me what a saguaro is. I am definitely a tree. Love the different powers of each one .
January 6th, 2018 21:42
Elsie said:
I am glad orchidee told me what a saguaro is. I am definitely a tree. Love the different powers of each one .
January 6th, 2018 21:42
The last Day of the Year
Elsie said:
I wish to feel more optimistic - I am sure it will come in time. But lovely writing as always, it seems, from you Fred!
January 6th, 2018 21:38
Elsie said:
I wish to feel more optimistic - I am sure it will come in time. But lovely writing as always, it seems, from you Fred!
January 6th, 2018 21:38
You wanna f**k Tonight?
Elsie said:
ha ha ha, so funny, love the fact that you weren\'t sure about posting it; I would be the same, and then what did you think? F%!k it? I love the hopeful anticipation and then comical let-down - awesome. There is a word for this - can\'t remember; it\'s very very late here and I should be in bed. (On my own!!!)
January 6th, 2018 21:25
Elsie said:
ha ha ha, so funny, love the fact that you weren\'t sure about posting it; I would be the same, and then what did you think? F%!k it? I love the hopeful anticipation and then comical let-down - awesome. There is a word for this - can\'t remember; it\'s very very late here and I should be in bed. (On my own!!!)
January 6th, 2018 21:25
Unfulfilled Dreams
Elsie said:
Oh my, I am actually crying. I have held myself back for so long yearning to be \'freed from chains of regret\'! I would love to \'shed my cloak of fear and worry\' Very thought provoking. Beautifully crafted words.
January 6th, 2018 21:08
Elsie said:
Oh my, I am actually crying. I have held myself back for so long yearning to be \'freed from chains of regret\'! I would love to \'shed my cloak of fear and worry\' Very thought provoking. Beautifully crafted words.
January 6th, 2018 21:08
On the Bus
Elsie said:
This is such an evocative story. Powerful in its simplicity. I am finding myself wondering about his life and what brought him here.
January 6th, 2018 21:02
Elsie said:
This is such an evocative story. Powerful in its simplicity. I am finding myself wondering about his life and what brought him here.
January 6th, 2018 21:02
I am
Christina8 said:
I think it\'s all been said, but it\'s a beautifully written poem, Fred!
January 6th, 2018 20:25
Christina8 said:
I think it\'s all been said, but it\'s a beautifully written poem, Fred!
January 6th, 2018 20:25
I am
Laura🌻 said:
Fred...
A resilient man you are!
Bravo! Loved reading
your poem! The metaphors
are exquisite! Awesome!
~Laura~
January 6th, 2018 13:04
Laura🌻 said:
Fred...
A resilient man you are!
Bravo! Loved reading
your poem! The metaphors
are exquisite! Awesome!
~Laura~
January 6th, 2018 13:04
I am
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine metaphor of mankind\'s resilience. Well penned, Fred!
January 6th, 2018 10:00
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine metaphor of mankind\'s resilience. Well penned, Fred!
January 6th, 2018 10:00
I am
Fay Slimm. said:
Survival is all around it we but look at these great examples Fred - thank s for this fine reminder.
January 6th, 2018 04:30
Fay Slimm. said:
Survival is all around it we but look at these great examples Fred - thank s for this fine reminder.
January 6th, 2018 04:30
I am
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. Ahh, saguaro, those big cactus things. Don\'t seem \'em in UK!
January 6th, 2018 02:42
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. Ahh, saguaro, those big cactus things. Don\'t seem \'em in UK!
January 6th, 2018 02:42
You wanna f**k Tonight?
alisha said:
it\'s been 10 minutes and i\'m still laughing LMAOO
January 5th, 2018 13:29
alisha said:
it\'s been 10 minutes and i\'m still laughing LMAOO
January 5th, 2018 13:29
You wanna f**k Tonight?
orchidee said:
Have to come along with buckets of cold water there to chuck over ya both. Swoon! heehee.
January 5th, 2018 02:59
orchidee said:
Have to come along with buckets of cold water there to chuck over ya both. Swoon! heehee.
January 5th, 2018 02:59
You wanna f**k Tonight?
Goldfinch60 said:
My first laugh of the day Fred, for that I am truly grateful.
I do know where you are coming from as well.
January 5th, 2018 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
My first laugh of the day Fred, for that I am truly grateful.
I do know where you are coming from as well.
January 5th, 2018 01:52
You wanna f**k Tonight?
Michael Edwards said:
Just hilarious - I\'ll keep returning to this to brighten my day - you sure did the right thing publishing and here\'s me thinking muffin the mule was a bit racy. Great one Fred.
January 5th, 2018 00:59
Michael Edwards said:
Just hilarious - I\'ll keep returning to this to brighten my day - you sure did the right thing publishing and here\'s me thinking muffin the mule was a bit racy. Great one Fred.
January 5th, 2018 00:59
You wanna f**k Tonight?
ForeverJesus7 said:
Hahahahaha! That is freaking hilarious.
Your a real comedian. Do your thing, but not if it is getting dentures.
January 5th, 2018 00:47
ForeverJesus7 said:
Hahahahaha! That is freaking hilarious.
Your a real comedian. Do your thing, but not if it is getting dentures.
January 5th, 2018 00:47
Backwards / Forward
Louis Gibbs said:
A brilliantly done rhyme poem, Fred! It flows quite nicely, and speaks to truths.
January 4th, 2018 10:31
Louis Gibbs said:
A brilliantly done rhyme poem, Fred! It flows quite nicely, and speaks to truths.
January 4th, 2018 10:31
Backwards / Forward
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true that knowledge from the past has given us the experience to move forward with less and less trepidation.
January 4th, 2018 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true that knowledge from the past has given us the experience to move forward with less and less trepidation.
January 4th, 2018 01:19
Unfulfilled Dreams
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRED ~ I love the optimism in this philosophical poem ! I have a big list of unfulfilled dreams (at my AGE) but your final doublet assures me that \"They will all ~ finally metamorphose ~ into glorious reality ~ AMEN !\" Yours BRIAN
January 3rd, 2018 15:38
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRED ~ I love the optimism in this philosophical poem ! I have a big list of unfulfilled dreams (at my AGE) but your final doublet assures me that \"They will all ~ finally metamorphose ~ into glorious reality ~ AMEN !\" Yours BRIAN
January 3rd, 2018 15:38
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