Comments received on poems by FredPeyer
Reality?
Poetic Dan said:
I like the reality we are on, has its ups and downs. But then so does our pulse ;)
November 23rd, 2017 19:21
Poetic Dan said:
I like the reality we are on, has its ups and downs. But then so does our pulse ;)
November 23rd, 2017 19:21
Reality?
Louis Gibbs said:
If this were a \'Fusioned\' poem, I would add a last line; \'In fact but a dream\'. It is a fine, insightful poem as it stands, Fred!
November 23rd, 2017 09:28
Louis Gibbs said:
If this were a \'Fusioned\' poem, I would add a last line; \'In fact but a dream\'. It is a fine, insightful poem as it stands, Fred!
November 23rd, 2017 09:28
Reality?
Accidental Poet said:
LOL, laughing with orchi\'s question.
Happy Thanksgiving Fred
November 23rd, 2017 09:11
Accidental Poet said:
LOL, laughing with orchi\'s question.
Happy Thanksgiving Fred
November 23rd, 2017 09:11
Reality?
Goldfinch60 said:
One persons reality is another ones dream. Good write.
November 23rd, 2017 06:30
Goldfinch60 said:
One persons reality is another ones dream. Good write.
November 23rd, 2017 06:30
Reality?
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. A real turkey or an imagined one there?!
November 23rd, 2017 06:16
orchidee said:
A fine write Fred. A real turkey or an imagined one there?!
November 23rd, 2017 06:16
Reality?
Michael Edwards said:
A little gem Fred - I really enjoyed reading it
November 23rd, 2017 03:30
Michael Edwards said:
A little gem Fred - I really enjoyed reading it
November 23rd, 2017 03:30
Night Sky
skyebellasario said:
Beautiful write Fred! You captured the night sky wonderfully
November 22nd, 2017 16:25
skyebellasario said:
Beautiful write Fred! You captured the night sky wonderfully
November 22nd, 2017 16:25
Night Sky
WL Schuett said:
Always wanted to live in a dark sky area where you can see the Milky Way everyday I have a pretty dark sky where I live but not dark enough ! Like your poem
November 22nd, 2017 16:16
WL Schuett said:
Always wanted to live in a dark sky area where you can see the Milky Way everyday I have a pretty dark sky where I live but not dark enough ! Like your poem
November 22nd, 2017 16:16
Night Sky
poetboy123 said:
A very beautiful write with brilliant imagery and message, nice one Fred!
November 22nd, 2017 15:30
poetboy123 said:
A very beautiful write with brilliant imagery and message, nice one Fred!
November 22nd, 2017 15:30
Night Sky
myself and me said:
Reading your poem under the night sky, fell asleep with star sparkle above.
November 22nd, 2017 11:05
myself and me said:
Reading your poem under the night sky, fell asleep with star sparkle above.
November 22nd, 2017 11:05
Night Sky
Louis Gibbs said:
I\'m afraid I\'m one of the few who do not see the \"Star spangled night sky\". Damn night-blindness! But hey, I\'m blessed to have the vision I have!
I like the lead-in lines of each phrase repeating as the poem progresses. Nice effect, good write, Fred!
November 22nd, 2017 09:42
Louis Gibbs said:
I\'m afraid I\'m one of the few who do not see the \"Star spangled night sky\". Damn night-blindness! But hey, I\'m blessed to have the vision I have!
I like the lead-in lines of each phrase repeating as the poem progresses. Nice effect, good write, Fred!
November 22nd, 2017 09:42
Night Sky
Fay Slimm. said:
Night sky so appealingly described in this perceptive write Fred - true it\'s majesty is \"there for all to see - but received only by the few\"
November 22nd, 2017 08:47
Fay Slimm. said:
Night sky so appealingly described in this perceptive write Fred - true it\'s majesty is \"there for all to see - but received only by the few\"
November 22nd, 2017 08:47
Night Sky
Accidental Poet said:
By inspired poets such as you and I. This write is as beautiful as the night sky. One of my most favorite past times is star gazing. Thanks for posting Fred.
November 22nd, 2017 04:39
Accidental Poet said:
By inspired poets such as you and I. This write is as beautiful as the night sky. One of my most favorite past times is star gazing. Thanks for posting Fred.
November 22nd, 2017 04:39
Cut three times and still too short
myself and me said:
It took a lot of courage and consistency to make the same mistake again and again, I guess.
November 20th, 2017 09:57
myself and me said:
It took a lot of courage and consistency to make the same mistake again and again, I guess.
November 20th, 2017 09:57
Sleeping Shadows
Michael Edwards said:
You sure can read into this - great write Fred.
November 19th, 2017 14:15
Michael Edwards said:
You sure can read into this - great write Fred.
November 19th, 2017 14:15
Sleeping Shadows
dusk arising said:
You are so right, your words can conjure up allsorts of images and in my crazy poetic mind they certainly do. I really like this because it digs out thought trails i wouldn\'t associate with one another and becomes really entertaining even if dark corners of my mind are tweeked here and there. It\'s going into my favourites and i\'d encourage you to do more of this ilk.
November 19th, 2017 13:37
dusk arising said:
You are so right, your words can conjure up allsorts of images and in my crazy poetic mind they certainly do. I really like this because it digs out thought trails i wouldn\'t associate with one another and becomes really entertaining even if dark corners of my mind are tweeked here and there. It\'s going into my favourites and i\'d encourage you to do more of this ilk.
November 19th, 2017 13:37
Cut three times and still too short
JLL517 said:
Excellent poem,its speaks volumes to a situation i just went thru
November 19th, 2017 10:44
JLL517 said:
Excellent poem,its speaks volumes to a situation i just went thru
November 19th, 2017 10:44
Sleeping Shadows
orchidee said:
Good write Fred. Don\'t know what comes to my mind yet. Too \'deep\' for this time of morning in the UK? I shall get a headache with thinking too much! lol.
November 19th, 2017 03:02
orchidee said:
Good write Fred. Don\'t know what comes to my mind yet. Too \'deep\' for this time of morning in the UK? I shall get a headache with thinking too much! lol.
November 19th, 2017 03:02
Sleeping Shadows
Will Shootman said:
filled my head with an idea of old Persia. love it.
November 19th, 2017 02:02
Will Shootman said:
filled my head with an idea of old Persia. love it.
November 19th, 2017 02:02
Cut three times and still too short
dusk arising said:
Alternatively, making the same mistake three or more times and realising it shows it to be one huge hurdle a soul must be continually struggling to overcome. Finally conquering the issue will be a much higher degree of achievement than that of the one mistake never repeated ilk.
Let not a man be judged by his achievements but rather - by the obstacles he overcame in his achievements.
November 18th, 2017 18:00
dusk arising said:
Alternatively, making the same mistake three or more times and realising it shows it to be one huge hurdle a soul must be continually struggling to overcome. Finally conquering the issue will be a much higher degree of achievement than that of the one mistake never repeated ilk.
Let not a man be judged by his achievements but rather - by the obstacles he overcame in his achievements.
November 18th, 2017 18:00
Cut three times and still too short
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRED ~ The Moral here surely is \"We only learn by our OWN mistakes but some people NEVER learn ! BRIAN ~ Please check my ZIMBABWE ~ Thanks B.
November 18th, 2017 08:03
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRED ~ The Moral here surely is \"We only learn by our OWN mistakes but some people NEVER learn ! BRIAN ~ Please check my ZIMBABWE ~ Thanks B.
November 18th, 2017 08:03
Cut three times and still too short
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true Fred, we must learn from our mistakes.
November 18th, 2017 02:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and very true Fred, we must learn from our mistakes.
November 18th, 2017 02:18
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