Comments received on poems by Nicholas Browning
Someday
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing , hopefully you will meet the right person one day ,
I really like this poem of yours š
November 30th, 2021 01:58
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing , hopefully you will meet the right person one day ,
I really like this poem of yours š
November 30th, 2021 01:58
Dreams of Life Unlived
Garth Rakumakoe said:
The windmills of the mind, so perfectly articulated. It\'s a beautiful piece sir. Bravo.
November 24th, 2021 06:07
Garth Rakumakoe said:
The windmills of the mind, so perfectly articulated. It\'s a beautiful piece sir. Bravo.
November 24th, 2021 06:07
Dreams of Life Unlived
spilleronsheet said:
The words so pure
Yet people taint them as rebel
I donāt know how find them liberal
They questions my thoughts
They question my dreams
Maybe the failures should stop me
Yet my heart isnāt willing to give up
I donāt know why but your lines made more a rebel
I wish to be more and more committed to the dreams that keep me awake
November 23rd, 2021 15:17
spilleronsheet said:
The words so pure
Yet people taint them as rebel
I donāt know how find them liberal
They questions my thoughts
They question my dreams
Maybe the failures should stop me
Yet my heart isnāt willing to give up
I donāt know why but your lines made more a rebel
I wish to be more and more committed to the dreams that keep me awake
November 23rd, 2021 15:17
Dreams of Life Unlived
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes goals just present themselves without actually having to achieve them. Must admit, I never set goals, they just lead to disappointment.
November 23rd, 2021 12:19
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes goals just present themselves without actually having to achieve them. Must admit, I never set goals, they just lead to disappointment.
November 23rd, 2021 12:19
Dreams of Life Unlived
Caring dove said:
Iām sorry you feel scared . I understand what itās like to feel scared ā¦ and to want something different but to fear making change
This a good poem and you have expressed yourself very well
Maybe one day you can move past the fear ?
Writing can be a nice escape
November 23rd, 2021 11:19
Caring dove said:
Iām sorry you feel scared . I understand what itās like to feel scared ā¦ and to want something different but to fear making change
This a good poem and you have expressed yourself very well
Maybe one day you can move past the fear ?
Writing can be a nice escape
November 23rd, 2021 11:19
Cherry-Blossom Suicide
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Striking originality. A story hardly ever told as well, told so vividly in this case. I love it!
November 15th, 2021 06:48
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Striking originality. A story hardly ever told as well, told so vividly in this case. I love it!
November 15th, 2021 06:48
Cherry-Blossom Suicide
melellendixon said:
This is insanely beautiful. I keep rereading it and rolling the words around in my mind. It\'s truly magnificent. Props to you, fellow Iowa writer!!
November 15th, 2021 00:41
melellendixon said:
This is insanely beautiful. I keep rereading it and rolling the words around in my mind. It\'s truly magnificent. Props to you, fellow Iowa writer!!
November 15th, 2021 00:41
Cherry-Blossom Suicide
dusk arising said:
Reads like the return of the leper knight. The reticent hero seeking his own solace.
November 14th, 2021 14:38
dusk arising said:
Reads like the return of the leper knight. The reticent hero seeking his own solace.
November 14th, 2021 14:38
Cherry-Blossom Suicide
spilleronsheet said:
At times we stand against the tides.. people may call us fools, a rebel sometimes but i think its courage to stand for passionā¦and one should do all so that later we can live with no regretsā¦a very beautiful piece dear poet and i could truly resonate with itā¦thank you for sharing dear poet
November 14th, 2021 12:41
spilleronsheet said:
At times we stand against the tides.. people may call us fools, a rebel sometimes but i think its courage to stand for passionā¦and one should do all so that later we can live with no regretsā¦a very beautiful piece dear poet and i could truly resonate with itā¦thank you for sharing dear poet
November 14th, 2021 12:41
Cherry-Blossom Suicide
James Alexander said:
Interesting read. Good visual quality. A glimpse into a life.
November 14th, 2021 08:37
James Alexander said:
Interesting read. Good visual quality. A glimpse into a life.
November 14th, 2021 08:37
Cherry-Blossom Suicide
Paul Bell said:
The path through life can be a troubled one, but the path through no life is definitely doomed to failure.
November 14th, 2021 08:15
Paul Bell said:
The path through life can be a troubled one, but the path through no life is definitely doomed to failure.
November 14th, 2021 08:15
A Lonely Thread
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliance, like this poem
needs no explanation,
it can only detract from its natural impact,
let people read and interpret it in their own way,
Trust, in your capacity to convey your meaning
in short: Trust your poetic talent!
thankyou for choosing to share your wonderful gift,
it was a privilege to read your work, sincerely
October 18th, 2021 05:10
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliance, like this poem
needs no explanation,
it can only detract from its natural impact,
let people read and interpret it in their own way,
Trust, in your capacity to convey your meaning
in short: Trust your poetic talent!
thankyou for choosing to share your wonderful gift,
it was a privilege to read your work, sincerely
October 18th, 2021 05:10
A Lonely Thread
orchidee said:
Good write N.
What you doing going round roundabouts in November? Why not in October? Heehee (Do shut up Orchi. lol).
October 18th, 2021 02:08
orchidee said:
Good write N.
What you doing going round roundabouts in November? Why not in October? Heehee (Do shut up Orchi. lol).
October 18th, 2021 02:08
Shadow In The Shade
Goldfinch60 said:
That light is always there for us but some do not want to see it.
Andy
April 14th, 2021 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
That light is always there for us but some do not want to see it.
Andy
April 14th, 2021 00:37
Soft Be The Echo
Gary Edward Geraci said:
I appreciate your four syllabic stanzas (I counted roughly 8-6-8-6 in the first two), with a contraction and then expansion of syllables in your third and last stanza respectively (with end rhymes in the last one) - perhaps subconsciously (or purposefully) accentuating the confusion in the human personās universal ālongingā (though it only appears to be āone-sidedā) and continuous quest for communion and recognition. Excellent writing and diction my friend.
January 23rd, 2020 12:24
Gary Edward Geraci said:
I appreciate your four syllabic stanzas (I counted roughly 8-6-8-6 in the first two), with a contraction and then expansion of syllables in your third and last stanza respectively (with end rhymes in the last one) - perhaps subconsciously (or purposefully) accentuating the confusion in the human personās universal ālongingā (though it only appears to be āone-sidedā) and continuous quest for communion and recognition. Excellent writing and diction my friend.
January 23rd, 2020 12:24
Soft Be The Echo
Fay Slimm. said:
A delightfully arranged dish of imagery that your eloquent poetry offers today Nicholas - -- I liked the intriguing title which opened the subject of trying yet often hiding behind negative emotions which lose us the fight.......... I can relate very well with the longing to break down self-made barriers to know someone better. A stirring read.
January 19th, 2020 09:19
Fay Slimm. said:
A delightfully arranged dish of imagery that your eloquent poetry offers today Nicholas - -- I liked the intriguing title which opened the subject of trying yet often hiding behind negative emotions which lose us the fight.......... I can relate very well with the longing to break down self-made barriers to know someone better. A stirring read.
January 19th, 2020 09:19
Soft Be The Echo
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Meanwhile - I worry about my failure to connect with others. Why they all run away? I only say \'I\'m gonna sing now!\' and I don\'t see them for dust - the dust cloud they kick up as they run away so fast. heehee.
Just gimme a call if anyone truly upsets ya. I\'ll pop round to them and sing to \'em! lol.
January 19th, 2020 03:45
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
Meanwhile - I worry about my failure to connect with others. Why they all run away? I only say \'I\'m gonna sing now!\' and I don\'t see them for dust - the dust cloud they kick up as they run away so fast. heehee.
Just gimme a call if anyone truly upsets ya. I\'ll pop round to them and sing to \'em! lol.
January 19th, 2020 03:45
Soft Be The Echo
Nemo said:
Well God daum, described so well, I also go through this constant struggle in my day to day life, fear of being judged or thing might not come out the way you want them to.all I can say is the struggle is real, social anxiety is a bitch š
But a great write as always š¹
January 19th, 2020 03:33
Nemo said:
Well God daum, described so well, I also go through this constant struggle in my day to day life, fear of being judged or thing might not come out the way you want them to.all I can say is the struggle is real, social anxiety is a bitch š
But a great write as always š¹
January 19th, 2020 03:33
Light of a Dying Star
orchidee said:
I\'ll pop round and sing to ya at night then! That\'ll wake ya up to write more fine poems like this. Mind ya, me singing will wake even the dead! lol.
December 5th, 2019 02:52
orchidee said:
I\'ll pop round and sing to ya at night then! That\'ll wake ya up to write more fine poems like this. Mind ya, me singing will wake even the dead! lol.
December 5th, 2019 02:52
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