Comments received on poems by Tia Davis/テイア
Pain In Her Eyes
Accidental Poet said:
All too often this scenario plays out with very sad results. A sad but caring write.
August 8th, 2017 19:48
Accidental Poet said:
All too often this scenario plays out with very sad results. A sad but caring write.
August 8th, 2017 19:48
Pain In Her Eyes
WL Schuett said:
Heartfelt ,nice writing, thanks . a story needing to be told .
August 8th, 2017 17:02
WL Schuett said:
Heartfelt ,nice writing, thanks . a story needing to be told .
August 8th, 2017 17:02
In A Story There Is A Time
Unique said:
This poem really hit me hard, it has such a powerful message.
August 7th, 2017 13:02
Unique said:
This poem really hit me hard, it has such a powerful message.
August 7th, 2017 13:02
There Was A Girl
Accidental Poet said:
Sad for everyone, even those who didn\'t know her. Written very well though.
August 7th, 2017 05:20
Accidental Poet said:
Sad for everyone, even those who didn\'t know her. Written very well though.
August 7th, 2017 05:20
It
Louis Gibbs said:
A cleverly constructed poem using receding lines to emphasize diminishing activity and occurrences! Well done, Tia.
August 3rd, 2017 09:38
Louis Gibbs said:
A cleverly constructed poem using receding lines to emphasize diminishing activity and occurrences! Well done, Tia.
August 3rd, 2017 09:38
Stay Just Stay
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good loving write. She will always be with you.
August 2nd, 2017 02:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good loving write. She will always be with you.
August 2nd, 2017 02:35
Stay Just Stay
Michael Edwards said:
What a beautiful write - she must be a very special lady.
August 2nd, 2017 02:31
Michael Edwards said:
What a beautiful write - she must be a very special lady.
August 2nd, 2017 02:31
There Was A Girl
jenny.g said:
This made me cry Tia, having been through a similar experience myself. Thank you for sharing your heartfelt words. Keep writing and expressing!
August 1st, 2017 14:50
jenny.g said:
This made me cry Tia, having been through a similar experience myself. Thank you for sharing your heartfelt words. Keep writing and expressing!
August 1st, 2017 14:50
There Was A Girl
FredPeyer said:
Tia, you wrote a beautiful poem with a strong message.
August 1st, 2017 11:59
FredPeyer said:
Tia, you wrote a beautiful poem with a strong message.
August 1st, 2017 11:59
There Was A Girl
Its Raskolnikov said:
So beautiful, so sad, so well put. I\'m sorry if this was a personal experience. Suicide is painful for all those involved in any way.
August 1st, 2017 11:33
Its Raskolnikov said:
So beautiful, so sad, so well put. I\'m sorry if this was a personal experience. Suicide is painful for all those involved in any way.
August 1st, 2017 11:33
I Saw It
FredPeyer said:
I know what I see, I saw it right here: A beautiful poem!
July 24th, 2017 16:27
FredPeyer said:
I know what I see, I saw it right here: A beautiful poem!
July 24th, 2017 16:27
My Motions
burning-embers said:
Did anyone tell u that \'motions\' are what comes out of your anus. Perhaps rather than \'motions\' you meant to entitle this piece \'Emotions\'
July 23rd, 2017 14:08
burning-embers said:
Did anyone tell u that \'motions\' are what comes out of your anus. Perhaps rather than \'motions\' you meant to entitle this piece \'Emotions\'
July 23rd, 2017 14:08
Don\'t Look At Me
burning-embers said:
I like this a lot but you\'ve confused me. Lines 3, 4 and 5 imply you dont want to see into the other person whereas the ensuing lines imply you dont want yourself seen into. Nonetheless this is a powerful piece and of ideal size/length to do the job. Nice one.
July 13th, 2017 01:42
burning-embers said:
I like this a lot but you\'ve confused me. Lines 3, 4 and 5 imply you dont want to see into the other person whereas the ensuing lines imply you dont want yourself seen into. Nonetheless this is a powerful piece and of ideal size/length to do the job. Nice one.
July 13th, 2017 01:42
Felt
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW TIA WELCOME ~ Thanks for sharing such an epic and frank poem ! When I was TEEN I felt just like you do ~ trapped in adolescence and wanting to grow up and be somebody ~ Thank GOD we all do grow up. The FEELINGS we have are very real (and the PAIN) but nobody seems to notice ! Thanks for sharing & caring ~ you are talented and have a great future ! Thinking of you and Praying for you ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B
July 12th, 2017 03:14
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW TIA WELCOME ~ Thanks for sharing such an epic and frank poem ! When I was TEEN I felt just like you do ~ trapped in adolescence and wanting to grow up and be somebody ~ Thank GOD we all do grow up. The FEELINGS we have are very real (and the PAIN) but nobody seems to notice ! Thanks for sharing & caring ~ you are talented and have a great future ! Thinking of you and Praying for you ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B
July 12th, 2017 03:14
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