Comments received on poems by Tia Davis/テイア
Understanding
asmita said:
I loved the comment from the author. This is something we all should understand. You are completely wise dear :) Keep it up
August 15th, 2021 00:03
asmita said:
I loved the comment from the author. This is something we all should understand. You are completely wise dear :) Keep it up
August 15th, 2021 00:03
Cotton Candy Skies
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderfully fun dedication
thanks for sharing
June 7th, 2021 07:19
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderfully fun dedication
thanks for sharing
June 7th, 2021 07:19
Lately
L. B. Mek said:
bravely unfiltered and rustic..
if only we could all face that reflection in the mirror and distil a war cry of such purposed diligence to truth\'s validation of self,
behold: a phoenix, wording humanity\'s manifestation of worth,
celebrate, this achievement of suffering\'s wisdom, as an excavation of our choices and those pathways they can help cultivate...
March 25th, 2021 06:18
L. B. Mek said:
bravely unfiltered and rustic..
if only we could all face that reflection in the mirror and distil a war cry of such purposed diligence to truth\'s validation of self,
behold: a phoenix, wording humanity\'s manifestation of worth,
celebrate, this achievement of suffering\'s wisdom, as an excavation of our choices and those pathways they can help cultivate...
March 25th, 2021 06:18
Lately
AlitaOpal said:
Wow! Amazing write 🎈 life can seem like a set up at times till we realize we are in control.. only until you go through the fire will you ever know anything about yourself 🙌 🌹
March 25th, 2021 00:19
AlitaOpal said:
Wow! Amazing write 🎈 life can seem like a set up at times till we realize we are in control.. only until you go through the fire will you ever know anything about yourself 🙌 🌹
March 25th, 2021 00:19
Akuryō(Demon)
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
What a jagged read of versed introspection you\'ve painted, how prickly you distil your truth dear Poet,
keep singing: as proud as that capitalised YOU in your last line!
We must first face - with bravery, whatever we need to defeat, accepting however alien, it\'s what we \'Allow\' it to implant within, that threatens to chain us indefinitely...
\'The thoughts that invade the mind
Boils your blood
Yet makes you feel so cold
Makes you scream and cry in agony
It hurts
Being eaten alive
It\'s draining
You feel like your fighting a battle
Yet your the first to die
And you don\'t even know it\'
January 4th, 2021 05:41
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
What a jagged read of versed introspection you\'ve painted, how prickly you distil your truth dear Poet,
keep singing: as proud as that capitalised YOU in your last line!
We must first face - with bravery, whatever we need to defeat, accepting however alien, it\'s what we \'Allow\' it to implant within, that threatens to chain us indefinitely...
\'The thoughts that invade the mind
Boils your blood
Yet makes you feel so cold
Makes you scream and cry in agony
It hurts
Being eaten alive
It\'s draining
You feel like your fighting a battle
Yet your the first to die
And you don\'t even know it\'
January 4th, 2021 05:41
Body
jarcher54 said:
Tia, this piece is haunting. First I see the photo of you, making a strong impression of one who is both physically handsome and very savvy. As I experience the poem, the product of your mind acting though your body, I am caught flat-footed by your plea for us to know you first by your brain. By the end of the poem I feel I have in fact been introduced to Tia the brain. Thank you.
May 17th, 2020 01:08
jarcher54 said:
Tia, this piece is haunting. First I see the photo of you, making a strong impression of one who is both physically handsome and very savvy. As I experience the poem, the product of your mind acting though your body, I am caught flat-footed by your plea for us to know you first by your brain. By the end of the poem I feel I have in fact been introduced to Tia the brain. Thank you.
May 17th, 2020 01:08
My Wish For You
Amon said:
I almost couldn\'t stop my tears, you sounded so much like *im at Calvary. Similar words, he silently uttered giving His life and left me happy.
Sounds emotional a write - I love this Tia
March 24th, 2020 08:40
Amon said:
I almost couldn\'t stop my tears, you sounded so much like *im at Calvary. Similar words, he silently uttered giving His life and left me happy.
Sounds emotional a write - I love this Tia
March 24th, 2020 08:40
The End Of Your World
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow such creatively expressed muse, imaginative and brill! Life is a sample of heaven and hell I guess yeah. Kudos for this poem.!
Pls Pleez do read my newest poem too!
February 26th, 2020 01:14
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow such creatively expressed muse, imaginative and brill! Life is a sample of heaven and hell I guess yeah. Kudos for this poem.!
Pls Pleez do read my newest poem too!
February 26th, 2020 01:14
Negativity
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
You must ~ ACCENTUATE the POSITIVE
ELIMINATE the NEGATIVE ~ And
Dont do the Mister In-between !
Thanks for sharing TIA - very sound advice !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💚🧡💚🧡
December 18th, 2019 19:49
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
You must ~ ACCENTUATE the POSITIVE
ELIMINATE the NEGATIVE ~ And
Dont do the Mister In-between !
Thanks for sharing TIA - very sound advice !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💚🧡💚🧡
December 18th, 2019 19:49
The mind
Goldfinch60 said:
That strength is within you Tia and once it is seen you can move on into the glory and wonder of life - it is waiting for you.
November 20th, 2019 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
That strength is within you Tia and once it is seen you can move on into the glory and wonder of life - it is waiting for you.
November 20th, 2019 01:40
Burden
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Aw this is so moving and touching and expressed in a powerful appealing awesome way indeed. Mothers never give up so kids too should not lose hope too and must strive and hold on, for mothers need a reward for their efforts. Kudos for this great poem.
Pls pleez do comment/ write your thoughts under my newest poem too.
October 22nd, 2019 07:16
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Aw this is so moving and touching and expressed in a powerful appealing awesome way indeed. Mothers never give up so kids too should not lose hope too and must strive and hold on, for mothers need a reward for their efforts. Kudos for this great poem.
Pls pleez do comment/ write your thoughts under my newest poem too.
October 22nd, 2019 07:16
Holding On By A Thread
kevin browne said:
I have mutli-personalities which means I translate or communicate on different types of lives I\'m endured to live through. I attempt just one, but that to me is just a misery in it\'s own right. I get the beating of my heart in many different types of emotional ways which, therfore leaves me unattended to live a normal heart-beating rythem to my life. Yours appears to be in contrast with mine. Very thought provoking though, indeed I say...
September 25th, 2019 22:15
kevin browne said:
I have mutli-personalities which means I translate or communicate on different types of lives I\'m endured to live through. I attempt just one, but that to me is just a misery in it\'s own right. I get the beating of my heart in many different types of emotional ways which, therfore leaves me unattended to live a normal heart-beating rythem to my life. Yours appears to be in contrast with mine. Very thought provoking though, indeed I say...
September 25th, 2019 22:15
Thoughts
dusk arising said:
And somebody wakes up wondering about her beautiful poetic daughter and her needs.
And one day you will wake with your world full of love for the noisey infant nearby.
Life places demands upon our soul. Destiny awaits.
August 11th, 2019 05:27
dusk arising said:
And somebody wakes up wondering about her beautiful poetic daughter and her needs.
And one day you will wake with your world full of love for the noisey infant nearby.
Life places demands upon our soul. Destiny awaits.
August 11th, 2019 05:27
Bright Side
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
This is a great poem, how it is musing and expressing in a fine poetic articulate way. Kudos.
Plz Pleez do comment on my newest poem too ok.
May 4th, 2019 09:36
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
This is a great poem, how it is musing and expressing in a fine poetic articulate way. Kudos.
Plz Pleez do comment on my newest poem too ok.
May 4th, 2019 09:36
What Can I Do
Simple-Man87 said:
Great message. I love how you express how much you care. Your words are sharp, but sweet. Very well done.
October 26th, 2017 13:39
Simple-Man87 said:
Great message. I love how you express how much you care. Your words are sharp, but sweet. Very well done.
October 26th, 2017 13:39
Stand
Goldfinch60 said:
Stand tall Tia your life ahead will be filled with wonder.
October 17th, 2017 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Stand tall Tia your life ahead will be filled with wonder.
October 17th, 2017 00:36
Stand
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful poem, Tia! You stand tall, girl, and watch how much good will be coming your way.
Well penned!
October 16th, 2017 16:22
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful poem, Tia! You stand tall, girl, and watch how much good will be coming your way.
Well penned!
October 16th, 2017 16:22
I Envy The Moon
Seek said:
There is a calming effect about the moon that you capture well Tia.
September 8th, 2017 22:55
Seek said:
There is a calming effect about the moon that you capture well Tia.
September 8th, 2017 22:55
Smile
Accidental Poet said:
One good smile deserves another. Wounderful write Tia. ; )
August 26th, 2017 19:41
Accidental Poet said:
One good smile deserves another. Wounderful write Tia. ; )
August 26th, 2017 19:41
Smile
Bellediva32 said:
Nice poem 👍 👍 it feels good to be happy....a smile goes a long way!!
August 26th, 2017 19:36
Bellediva32 said:
Nice poem 👍 👍 it feels good to be happy....a smile goes a long way!!
August 26th, 2017 19:36
Pain In Her Eyes
malubotelho said:
Oh! Sorry about that. Nice writing here. Sad but nice.
August 8th, 2017 21:36
malubotelho said:
Oh! Sorry about that. Nice writing here. Sad but nice.
August 8th, 2017 21:36
Pain In Her Eyes
Tris Eaton said:
Oh wow... this is a very good peice. Very deep too.
August 8th, 2017 20:12
Tris Eaton said:
Oh wow... this is a very good peice. Very deep too.
August 8th, 2017 20:12
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