Comments received on poems by myself and me
Homeless
Alf W said:
Your poem tells a vivid story and I could see the person of whom you were writing. When we go into town we see the same, often (but not always) seeking to sell \"The Big Issue\" magazine to stay alive. Your vivid poem has brought all these images back to me. Who will help them, but us! Thank you for a very inspiring poem.
August 15th, 2017 11:20
Alf W said:
Your poem tells a vivid story and I could see the person of whom you were writing. When we go into town we see the same, often (but not always) seeking to sell \"The Big Issue\" magazine to stay alive. Your vivid poem has brought all these images back to me. Who will help them, but us! Thank you for a very inspiring poem.
August 15th, 2017 11:20
Homeless
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, there seem to be so many people in this place and those who can help just do not care.
August 15th, 2017 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, there seem to be so many people in this place and those who can help just do not care.
August 15th, 2017 00:44
Homeless
FredPeyer said:
mam, this is so well written, one can practically see that person. Homelessness is getting to be a bigger and bigger problem, and nobody seems to know how to handle it.
I did write a poem about it too back on July 11th, titled: Fuck this life, you might want to check it out.
August 14th, 2017 20:48
FredPeyer said:
mam, this is so well written, one can practically see that person. Homelessness is getting to be a bigger and bigger problem, and nobody seems to know how to handle it.
I did write a poem about it too back on July 11th, titled: Fuck this life, you might want to check it out.
August 14th, 2017 20:48
Waiting Is End
Michael Edwards said:
Yup - option 2 for me - a delightful write .
August 14th, 2017 00:38
Michael Edwards said:
Yup - option 2 for me - a delightful write .
August 14th, 2017 00:38
Paris
FredPeyer said:
Absolutely beautiful! I visited Paris several times and love the city.
Magnifique!
August 13th, 2017 21:54
FredPeyer said:
Absolutely beautiful! I visited Paris several times and love the city.
Magnifique!
August 13th, 2017 21:54
Miss you
FredPeyer said:
Good poem, mam. As far as I am concerned there are three things to say to keep the peace: Your \"I miss you\", \"I am sorry\", and \"yes, dear\"! :-)
August 13th, 2017 21:49
FredPeyer said:
Good poem, mam. As far as I am concerned there are three things to say to keep the peace: Your \"I miss you\", \"I am sorry\", and \"yes, dear\"! :-)
August 13th, 2017 21:49
Waiting Is End
FredPeyer said:
mam, I do like your poem. As for the ending, I like the one in the poem the best. Options 1 and 2 are good as well though.
August 13th, 2017 21:25
FredPeyer said:
mam, I do like your poem. As for the ending, I like the one in the poem the best. Options 1 and 2 are good as well though.
August 13th, 2017 21:25
Waiting Is End
WL Schuett said:
I would write poems for all three they could all be their own entities...nice poem
August 13th, 2017 11:56
WL Schuett said:
I would write poems for all three they could all be their own entities...nice poem
August 13th, 2017 11:56
Waiting Is End
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and yes option 2 is the better one but all are good.
August 13th, 2017 02:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and yes option 2 is the better one but all are good.
August 13th, 2017 02:09
Waiting Is End
Accidental Poet said:
I like option 2 best. Overall a great poem.
August 12th, 2017 20:49
Accidental Poet said:
I like option 2 best. Overall a great poem.
August 12th, 2017 20:49
Miss you
WL Schuett said:
Nice poem makes me want to read more of your work !
August 12th, 2017 06:34
WL Schuett said:
Nice poem makes me want to read more of your work !
August 12th, 2017 06:34
Miss you
WriteBeLight said:
It is terrible to fight. I try not to get into any arguements. But, sometimes it is unavoidable, due to hurt feelings and such. Very great job on this.
August 10th, 2017 12:27
WriteBeLight said:
It is terrible to fight. I try not to get into any arguements. But, sometimes it is unavoidable, due to hurt feelings and such. Very great job on this.
August 10th, 2017 12:27
Paris
malubotelho said:
Beautiful sensation of a tour in Paris. I\'m still dreaming of going there. Was going last year had everything settled but an accident kept me from going. Thanks for sharing.
August 8th, 2017 16:15
malubotelho said:
Beautiful sensation of a tour in Paris. I\'m still dreaming of going there. Was going last year had everything settled but an accident kept me from going. Thanks for sharing.
August 8th, 2017 16:15
Paris
rrodriguez said:
Brought back memories. I went there with my wife while stationed in Germany. Great write!
August 6th, 2017 13:56
rrodriguez said:
Brought back memories. I went there with my wife while stationed in Germany. Great write!
August 6th, 2017 13:56
Paris
Louis Gibbs said:
I share your love of this unique city, \'myself\'. Had the pleasure of a couple of visits. Thanks for this fine poetic reminder!
August 6th, 2017 11:13
Louis Gibbs said:
I share your love of this unique city, \'myself\'. Had the pleasure of a couple of visits. Thanks for this fine poetic reminder!
August 6th, 2017 11:13
Paris
Accidental Poet said:
I feel as though I\'ve just been there. Beautiful poem for such an elegant place
August 6th, 2017 09:30
Accidental Poet said:
I feel as though I\'ve just been there. Beautiful poem for such an elegant place
August 6th, 2017 09:30
Love is powerful
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is the most powerful emotion of all. Good write.
August 5th, 2017 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is the most powerful emotion of all. Good write.
August 5th, 2017 00:50
Love is powerful
Accidental Poet said:
Love is complicated, but it\'s what we all live for. Great write.
August 4th, 2017 22:05
Accidental Poet said:
Love is complicated, but it\'s what we all live for. Great write.
August 4th, 2017 22:05
Paint With Soul
Louis Gibbs said:
Art and poetry, two beautiful means of expressing, as this fine poem illustrates. Thanks for sharing, m.m.
July 26th, 2017 13:42
Louis Gibbs said:
Art and poetry, two beautiful means of expressing, as this fine poem illustrates. Thanks for sharing, m.m.
July 26th, 2017 13:42
Paint With Soul
WL Schuett said:
As an artist it is always uplifting when a painting moves somebody . Unfortunately we seldom get the feedback that compels someone to write about our work ... good expression of your feelings ,a painting in and of itself
July 26th, 2017 12:45
WL Schuett said:
As an artist it is always uplifting when a painting moves somebody . Unfortunately we seldom get the feedback that compels someone to write about our work ... good expression of your feelings ,a painting in and of itself
July 26th, 2017 12:45
Paint With Soul
willyweed said:
you paint a vivid picture with your words, much enjoyed. ww
July 26th, 2017 12:40
willyweed said:
you paint a vivid picture with your words, much enjoyed. ww
July 26th, 2017 12:40
A Day Without Blue
Stephen.Sapaugh said:
I think that you have written an upbeat poem, and done a lot of good in it. However, there might be too much good. Using imagery constantly without giving a break to the reader overwhelms us. But, I guess you need consider that when times are blue we might need something like that. This poem has brightened my Dark day, and the last six lines are done very well. I think if you wanted to write more poems with the first stanza you could get a lot of poems out of it. You use a lot of phrases in short order, and I would love to see six poems written from your first six lines. Maybe explain how each of these things make you feel better when you experience them, and contrast them with the blue feeling you have.
This was a trick of Robert Frost, and you are doing the same as him.
Keep writing, and keep lifting us out of the blue premordeal abyss.
July 21st, 2017 12:58
Stephen.Sapaugh said:
I think that you have written an upbeat poem, and done a lot of good in it. However, there might be too much good. Using imagery constantly without giving a break to the reader overwhelms us. But, I guess you need consider that when times are blue we might need something like that. This poem has brightened my Dark day, and the last six lines are done very well. I think if you wanted to write more poems with the first stanza you could get a lot of poems out of it. You use a lot of phrases in short order, and I would love to see six poems written from your first six lines. Maybe explain how each of these things make you feel better when you experience them, and contrast them with the blue feeling you have.
This was a trick of Robert Frost, and you are doing the same as him.
Keep writing, and keep lifting us out of the blue premordeal abyss.
July 21st, 2017 12:58
Black Coffee
Christina8 said:
I can\'t relate on love tasting bitter but I do enjoy coffee quite a bit. A very good poem you have here! Well done!
July 16th, 2017 17:21
Christina8 said:
I can\'t relate on love tasting bitter but I do enjoy coffee quite a bit. A very good poem you have here! Well done!
July 16th, 2017 17:21
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