Comments received on poems by myself and me
Long Night-Sedoka
FredPeyer said:
M&m, you just moved into the top echelon of writers here. Or maybe you were already there, just hiding!
September 7th, 2017 16:49
FredPeyer said:
M&m, you just moved into the top echelon of writers here. Or maybe you were already there, just hiding!
September 7th, 2017 16:49
Long Night-Sedoka
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks M & M ~ there is a lot of OVERT pathos in this excellent SEDOKA ~ but the reasons are COVERT ~ Thanks BRIAN
September 7th, 2017 11:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks M & M ~ there is a lot of OVERT pathos in this excellent SEDOKA ~ but the reasons are COVERT ~ Thanks BRIAN
September 7th, 2017 11:47
Long Night-Sedoka
Michael Edwards said:
What a great job you made of this - top notch m&m
September 7th, 2017 11:40
Michael Edwards said:
What a great job you made of this - top notch m&m
September 7th, 2017 11:40
Long Night-Sedoka
orchidee said:
Doh! What do I know about poetic styles?! I thought it was a lot of people writing about a car recently - a Skoda?! heehee. A fine write M.
September 7th, 2017 11:26
orchidee said:
Doh! What do I know about poetic styles?! I thought it was a lot of people writing about a car recently - a Skoda?! heehee. A fine write M.
September 7th, 2017 11:26
Rabbit-edone
FredPeyer said:
Another well done Christmas tree, and it is not even Thanksgiving yet!
September 5th, 2017 17:21
FredPeyer said:
Another well done Christmas tree, and it is not even Thanksgiving yet!
September 5th, 2017 17:21
Rabbit-edone
BlueDays said:
So this, just inspired this...
An
End
That
Ought
Praise
People\'s
Lifelong
Existence
Generating
Celebration
What dya think?
Awesome abstract poem MandM.
I am loving the challenges and creativity this space is sparking in me. Thanks for the inspiration, both to you and Michael Edwards \'Daffodils\'
September 5th, 2017 15:55
BlueDays said:
So this, just inspired this...
An
End
That
Ought
Praise
People\'s
Lifelong
Existence
Generating
Celebration
What dya think?
Awesome abstract poem MandM.
I am loving the challenges and creativity this space is sparking in me. Thanks for the inspiration, both to you and Michael Edwards \'Daffodils\'
September 5th, 2017 15:55
Rabbit-edone
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic! Looks like fun if my uneducated brain could keep up ;)
September 5th, 2017 15:31
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic! Looks like fun if my uneducated brain could keep up ;)
September 5th, 2017 15:31
Rabbit-edone
Michael Edwards said:
Super stuff - see I told you it was easy - love it.
September 5th, 2017 15:01
Michael Edwards said:
Super stuff - see I told you it was easy - love it.
September 5th, 2017 15:01
Exit-etheree
FredPeyer said:
The way out is through the door that opens when another closes!
Great poem, M&M, and soon the colors will return to your world!!!!
September 4th, 2017 13:57
FredPeyer said:
The way out is through the door that opens when another closes!
Great poem, M&M, and soon the colors will return to your world!!!!
September 4th, 2017 13:57
Stretch
Viv Wade said:
Short and concise, yet filled with so much meaning. Beautiful, and sad. Nice write!
September 3rd, 2017 23:58
Viv Wade said:
Short and concise, yet filled with so much meaning. Beautiful, and sad. Nice write!
September 3rd, 2017 23:58
Exit-etheree
malubotelho said:
Beautiful poem MM. You did a great job here. I was enjoying so much the form that almost did not bother me that it is sad.
September 3rd, 2017 22:42
malubotelho said:
Beautiful poem MM. You did a great job here. I was enjoying so much the form that almost did not bother me that it is sad.
September 3rd, 2017 22:42
Exit-etheree
WL Schuett said:
M&M always pushing yourself, very commendable....good poem
September 3rd, 2017 17:01
WL Schuett said:
M&M always pushing yourself, very commendable....good poem
September 3rd, 2017 17:01
Exit-etheree
sue.evans said:
Great etheree - I am really enjoying this format. Your poem really describes the struggle- lovely.
September 3rd, 2017 13:26
sue.evans said:
Great etheree - I am really enjoying this format. Your poem really describes the struggle- lovely.
September 3rd, 2017 13:26
Exit-etheree
Michael Edwards said:
Sad indeed but a brill write - congrats m&m
September 3rd, 2017 10:19
Michael Edwards said:
Sad indeed but a brill write - congrats m&m
September 3rd, 2017 10:19
Exit-etheree
myself and me said:
Thanks. O. Your poems serve as the food and cleaner for spirit. The more the better.
September 3rd, 2017 09:06
myself and me said:
Thanks. O. Your poems serve as the food and cleaner for spirit. The more the better.
September 3rd, 2017 09:06
Exit-etheree
orchidee said:
A fine write M. Would it do me good to be brief sometimes?! But I must sing, and mainly long songs/hymn-poems! lol.
September 3rd, 2017 08:38
orchidee said:
A fine write M. Would it do me good to be brief sometimes?! But I must sing, and mainly long songs/hymn-poems! lol.
September 3rd, 2017 08:38
Stretch
malubotelho said:
I like that. I would stretch the night to sleep more or to meditate on bed, or to just relax because I don\'t long for anything. So funny this came to me. No longing. Go to bed MM
September 2nd, 2017 20:31
malubotelho said:
I like that. I would stretch the night to sleep more or to meditate on bed, or to just relax because I don\'t long for anything. So funny this came to me. No longing. Go to bed MM
September 2nd, 2017 20:31
End
malubotelho said:
Very nice short piece. Clever one. I always like when I can say important things with little words. You did it.
September 2nd, 2017 18:50
malubotelho said:
Very nice short piece. Clever one. I always like when I can say important things with little words. You did it.
September 2nd, 2017 18:50
Stretch
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful choice of words with so much meaning. I can just picture somebody lying in bed alone with the longing becoming unbearable....
September 2nd, 2017 16:00
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful choice of words with so much meaning. I can just picture somebody lying in bed alone with the longing becoming unbearable....
September 2nd, 2017 16:00
Stretch
dusk arising said:
nice short and meaningful. nothing wasted. Good concise write.
September 2nd, 2017 15:56
dusk arising said:
nice short and meaningful. nothing wasted. Good concise write.
September 2nd, 2017 15:56
Stretch
WL Schuett said:
Nice I wish I could say what I have to say in one line , well done
September 2nd, 2017 15:31
WL Schuett said:
Nice I wish I could say what I have to say in one line , well done
September 2nd, 2017 15:31
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