Comments received on poems by myself and me
You are
dusk arising said:
Very much reminded me of a Lionel Ritchie song i used to sing to my lover long ago:-
You are the sun
You are the rain
That makes my life this foolish game
You need to know
I love you so
And I\'d do it all again and again
Yours is a lovely love poem.
September 15th, 2017 17:52
dusk arising said:
Very much reminded me of a Lionel Ritchie song i used to sing to my lover long ago:-
You are the sun
You are the rain
That makes my life this foolish game
You need to know
I love you so
And I\'d do it all again and again
Yours is a lovely love poem.
September 15th, 2017 17:52
You are
Christina8 said:
Very well done M&M! Very loving poem and I enjoyed reading it!
September 15th, 2017 15:20
Christina8 said:
Very well done M&M! Very loving poem and I enjoyed reading it!
September 15th, 2017 15:20
You are
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW M& M ~ Your poem (for me) defines TRUE LOVE which is something we ALL search for ~ BUT not ALL find. Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN
September 15th, 2017 15:17
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW M& M ~ Your poem (for me) defines TRUE LOVE which is something we ALL search for ~ BUT not ALL find. Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN
September 15th, 2017 15:17
Lake
malubotelho said:
Wow! So poetic. I love that image of water lily sleeping on her chest. Beautiful metaphor.
September 14th, 2017 23:13
malubotelho said:
Wow! So poetic. I love that image of water lily sleeping on her chest. Beautiful metaphor.
September 14th, 2017 23:13
Lake
WL Schuett said:
Great lyrical imagery took me right to what you were seeing and made me feel the Lake ... well done
September 14th, 2017 19:18
WL Schuett said:
Great lyrical imagery took me right to what you were seeing and made me feel the Lake ... well done
September 14th, 2017 19:18
Lake
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing M & M ~ Lakes are so so soothing ! Because the Lakes in England are so small (lees than 15 miles long or two miles wide wide) that one always feels safe ~ swimming ~ sailing ~ canoeing ~ fishing etc. To live near a Lake is always a Blessing. We should all protect our Lakes from pollution and misuse. Yours BRIAN
September 14th, 2017 17:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing M & M ~ Lakes are so so soothing ! Because the Lakes in England are so small (lees than 15 miles long or two miles wide wide) that one always feels safe ~ swimming ~ sailing ~ canoeing ~ fishing etc. To live near a Lake is always a Blessing. We should all protect our Lakes from pollution and misuse. Yours BRIAN
September 14th, 2017 17:42
Lake
lasergraph said:
Almost felt myself there. Great imagery. I may drop a line in the water since I am here anyway.
September 14th, 2017 13:50
lasergraph said:
Almost felt myself there. Great imagery. I may drop a line in the water since I am here anyway.
September 14th, 2017 13:50
Lake
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully written, M&M! That picture really inspired you!
But why \'she\'? Why not \'He\', or maybe \'It\'? Just kidding! Trying to be PC!
September 14th, 2017 13:33
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully written, M&M! That picture really inspired you!
But why \'she\'? Why not \'He\', or maybe \'It\'? Just kidding! Trying to be PC!
September 14th, 2017 13:33
Deep in my heart
malubotelho said:
Lovely poem. Great way of writing. Romantic feelings. Enjoyed reading.
September 13th, 2017 23:17
malubotelho said:
Lovely poem. Great way of writing. Romantic feelings. Enjoyed reading.
September 13th, 2017 23:17
Deep in my heart
Samreen Chowdhury said:
This saddened my heart for a moment as I had a connection with your beautiful content! Great write and thankyou!
September 13th, 2017 18:33
Samreen Chowdhury said:
This saddened my heart for a moment as I had a connection with your beautiful content! Great write and thankyou!
September 13th, 2017 18:33
Deep in my heart
FredPeyer said:
M&M, deep in my heart I know this is one of your best poems!
September 13th, 2017 11:37
FredPeyer said:
M&M, deep in my heart I know this is one of your best poems!
September 13th, 2017 11:37
Deep in my heart
WL Schuett said:
Good idea nicely executed, well done M&M
September 13th, 2017 10:53
WL Schuett said:
Good idea nicely executed, well done M&M
September 13th, 2017 10:53
Deep in my heart
Mugsdaddy said:
Nice piece. I like the way you structured it and made it flow so easily.
Mugsdaddy
September 13th, 2017 07:59
Mugsdaddy said:
Nice piece. I like the way you structured it and made it flow so easily.
Mugsdaddy
September 13th, 2017 07:59
Deep in my heart
orchidee said:
From my heart - a good write M. Now who\'s writing this one? Me, Myself, or I?
September 13th, 2017 07:57
orchidee said:
From my heart - a good write M. Now who\'s writing this one? Me, Myself, or I?
September 13th, 2017 07:57
Myself and Me
FredPeyer said:
Myself and me by Myself and me! Now who is talking? Somehow I picture the two of you as twins, or maybe one of you standing in front of a mirror, yelling, screaming, or smiling at the other one.
If your \'fillers\' are that good, can\'t wait to see the non-fillers!
September 12th, 2017 11:47
FredPeyer said:
Myself and me by Myself and me! Now who is talking? Somehow I picture the two of you as twins, or maybe one of you standing in front of a mirror, yelling, screaming, or smiling at the other one.
If your \'fillers\' are that good, can\'t wait to see the non-fillers!
September 12th, 2017 11:47
Myself and Me
Christina8 said:
Interesting poem. The struggle we face between heart and mind can be difficult. But necessary if we are to grow.
September 12th, 2017 11:41
Christina8 said:
Interesting poem. The struggle we face between heart and mind can be difficult. But necessary if we are to grow.
September 12th, 2017 11:41
Myself and Me
lasergraph said:
Our hardest battles are most often internal. I love the write.
September 12th, 2017 11:05
lasergraph said:
Our hardest battles are most often internal. I love the write.
September 12th, 2017 11:05
Myself and Me
WL Schuett said:
I enjoyed this in my own struggles I try to let my heart win ... can\'t always do what\'s correct when I can do what\'s right
September 12th, 2017 10:27
WL Schuett said:
I enjoyed this in my own struggles I try to let my heart win ... can\'t always do what\'s correct when I can do what\'s right
September 12th, 2017 10:27
Myself and Me
Poetic Dan said:
What a blank that is my friend!
Sometimes the most enlightening thoughts come from nothing at all.
September 12th, 2017 08:53
Poetic Dan said:
What a blank that is my friend!
Sometimes the most enlightening thoughts come from nothing at all.
September 12th, 2017 08:53
Myself and Me
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, we are all several people within our minds and we show different ones depending on what we are doing.
September 12th, 2017 08:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, we are all several people within our minds and we show different ones depending on what we are doing.
September 12th, 2017 08:13
Myself and Me
orchidee said:
A fine poem (by the two of you??!). Did M or M write this one? lol.
September 12th, 2017 08:08
orchidee said:
A fine poem (by the two of you??!). Did M or M write this one? lol.
September 12th, 2017 08:08
Myself and Me
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
-Thanks M & M ~ Interesting take on the inner conflict we all have between our emotional thought (HEART) and rational thought (HEAD) ! Being a Scientist (and a Virgo) I tend to be rational and in any situation look for concrete proof. However sometimes (as my poems will testify) I some times throw caution to the winds and Leap before Look ! My current GF Angela (who is very perceptive) tells me I am 75% MIND and only 25% HEART whereas she being 50% SPANISH is the converse 25% MIND & 75% HEART ! Because f this we are very very compatible ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN The Cautious !
September 12th, 2017 08:01
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
-Thanks M & M ~ Interesting take on the inner conflict we all have between our emotional thought (HEART) and rational thought (HEAD) ! Being a Scientist (and a Virgo) I tend to be rational and in any situation look for concrete proof. However sometimes (as my poems will testify) I some times throw caution to the winds and Leap before Look ! My current GF Angela (who is very perceptive) tells me I am 75% MIND and only 25% HEART whereas she being 50% SPANISH is the converse 25% MIND & 75% HEART ! Because f this we are very very compatible ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN The Cautious !
September 12th, 2017 08:01
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