Comments received on poems by myself and me



Mere exist
jarcher54 said:

Most of us have a wound or two like that. Quite an observant, tender little piece.

October 18th, 2020 01:45

Today
Poetic Dan said:

Bam... Love it! Thank you

May 13th, 2020 01:23

Loneliness 2
Poetic Dan said:

Like random hidden spider webs! Our thoughts keep us there!
Great write

May 13th, 2020 01:21

Blue of May
orchidee said:

Good write myself.

May 11th, 2020 01:46

Blue of May
Goldfinch60 said:

May that blossom come your way once more mandm.

Andy

May 11th, 2020 00:21

Today
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸 said:

Great poem with fine twist and wordplay ,true to life the here and now, yes we should live now.. Kudos for this fab one!

Plz Pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.

May 8th, 2020 12:22

Today
orchidee said:

Yes - what Goldfinch said.
Also - I can\'t find tomorrow. It never comes. When it gets here, it\'s today. Doh! lol.

May 8th, 2020 01:39

Today
Goldfinch60 said:

Today is the tomorrow that you worried about yesterday.

Andy

May 8th, 2020 01:06

How I wish
dusk arising said:

Initially reading this had me confused but on reflection, spot on theres little logic in how we long for what was.

May 7th, 2020 17:54

Today
dusk arising said:

This rings a bell.Nice play on words and delghtfully short. Short pieces allow so much more freedom of visualiation for the reader which gets high score in my book.

May 7th, 2020 17:11

How I wish
Goldfinch60 said:

Those open arms will bring your life back to you and will be full of love.

Andy

May 7th, 2020 00:13

Last dance
Unsub said:

M&M,

a most tranquil moment in poetry,

Unsub.

May 6th, 2020 12:03

Don\'t
Goldfinch60 said:

You are within yourself and that self will appear one day and you will find yourself.

Andy

May 6th, 2020 00:30

Loneliness
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Wow!

May 3rd, 2020 10:01

Last dance
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

The last dance is such a wonderful sentiment love the link to nature such a wonderful medium so many meaning here
Very well expressed BRAVO!

May 3rd, 2020 09:57

Last dance
Fay Slimm. said:

An absorbing personification and written with such poetic observance I could see those fluttering petals saying their soft goodbyes.

May 2nd, 2020 02:26

Last dance
Goldfinch60 said:

That last dance is always so special being left with the hope that another dance will come your way.

Andy

May 2nd, 2020 01:16

Sakura rain
Goldfinch60 said:

The rain of petals can be so wonderful and so inspiring.

Andy

May 1st, 2020 00:50

Sakura rain
Fay Slimm. said:

What a wonderful petally picture you pen of the time when pink covers the ground - -- it must be great to stand and watch that waltz in the breeze.

April 30th, 2020 16:50

Sakura rain
myself and me said:

I have one Sakura tree in my front yard. I would lost myself when watching the petals falling, Thank you.

April 30th, 2020 14:10

Sakura rain
Michael Edwards said:

At the gated entry to our local titled member of the village there is a Prunus which is shedding its petals right now. Walked past it today and despite the drizzle the scene was stunning - a gravelled roadway turned pink. Love the poem which took me right back there.

April 30th, 2020 13:44

Oness
Poetic Dan said:

If all but just for that one moment! Great stuff

April 29th, 2020 14:59

Oness
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good erotic write mandm.

Andy

April 29th, 2020 00:57

Wind
FredPeyer said:

well said m&m! Lately we had some stormy weather rather than the gentle trade winds.

March 4th, 2020 12:31

Loneliness
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸 said:

Woahh deep abstract muse in brevity. Kudos for the inking.

Pls Pleez do read and comment my newest poem too!

February 26th, 2020 01:59

Loneliness
Nemo said:

Wow 🌹

February 26th, 2020 01:35

Loneliness
Fay Slimm. said:

this tells all in such a short space. Brill.

February 21st, 2020 03:10

Loneliness
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful.

Andy

February 21st, 2020 02:13

Loneliness
Michael Edwards said:

Totally inspired - I love it and the first fave for a couple of months.

February 21st, 2020 01:13

Tonight
Barry Hodges said:

Tonight
I am sittimg on the loo
But it\'s too late
I have crapped in my pants.
Wheeeee!


February 20th, 2020 20:19

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