Comments received on poems by myself and me
Rainy day
Bobby O said:
The progression adds a knowing frame and the weather, well who doesn’t talk about the weather but this time instead of it being default chit chat it definitely defines my favorite word, these words of climate now trace important events ,, a true juxtaposition as former syllables of discard now chronicle events of import. That was freakin clever and planning that deserves much credito. Nice
May 22nd, 2023 18:01
Bobby O said:
The progression adds a knowing frame and the weather, well who doesn’t talk about the weather but this time instead of it being default chit chat it definitely defines my favorite word, these words of climate now trace important events ,, a true juxtaposition as former syllables of discard now chronicle events of import. That was freakin clever and planning that deserves much credito. Nice
May 22nd, 2023 18:01
Hope-Re: Lino Cut of Goldfinch60
Bobby O said:
I dedicated a piece to you
Titled
The Voices that you feed
May 9th, 2023 21:34
Bobby O said:
I dedicated a piece to you
Titled
The Voices that you feed
May 9th, 2023 21:34
Yellow card (soccer game)
Neville said:
made me chuckle m&m ... I used to play in goal and my son is a great Liverpool fan ...........................N :)
March 17th, 2022 02:18
Neville said:
made me chuckle m&m ... I used to play in goal and my son is a great Liverpool fan ...........................N :)
March 17th, 2022 02:18
Rainy day
L. B. Mek said:
I second everything Neville said
especially liked the pacing
incorporating a narrative thread
to an emotive love poem,
impressively executed
thanks for sharing, dear poet
March 14th, 2022 05:28
L. B. Mek said:
I second everything Neville said
especially liked the pacing
incorporating a narrative thread
to an emotive love poem,
impressively executed
thanks for sharing, dear poet
March 14th, 2022 05:28
Rainy day
Goldfinch60 said:
Reading can have this profound effect on us all mandm.
Andy
March 14th, 2022 02:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Reading can have this profound effect on us all mandm.
Andy
March 14th, 2022 02:34
Rainy day
Neville said:
I like the way you have linked each stanza and which additionally helped the story you tell flow smoothly .. and whilst the ending was not unexpected, it being a poem and all, it rounded the whole thing of perfectly in my book .. most enjoyable m&m .......... Neville
March 14th, 2022 00:47
Neville said:
I like the way you have linked each stanza and which additionally helped the story you tell flow smoothly .. and whilst the ending was not unexpected, it being a poem and all, it rounded the whole thing of perfectly in my book .. most enjoyable m&m .......... Neville
March 14th, 2022 00:47
Frozen heart
Neville said:
it took a while to get here .. but I got here ..
and boy was it worth the wait ...... :)
March 12th, 2022 14:12
Neville said:
it took a while to get here .. but I got here ..
and boy was it worth the wait ...... :)
March 12th, 2022 14:12
Love is powerful
Neville said:
well that\'s love all sewn up for ya folks .... now where do we all go from here .............................................. Lust maybe ........................................... :)
December 11th, 2021 15:37
Neville said:
well that\'s love all sewn up for ya folks .... now where do we all go from here .............................................. Lust maybe ........................................... :)
December 11th, 2021 15:37
A Summer Afternoon
Neville said:
another good reason to smile methinks ... actually I couldn\'t stop myself ... thank you for posting ... N
December 11th, 2021 15:33
Neville said:
another good reason to smile methinks ... actually I couldn\'t stop myself ... thank you for posting ... N
December 11th, 2021 15:33
Miss you
Neville said:
my guess is that this was written after the event .. when a period of reflection had taken place but when emotions were still kinda brittle ........ N
December 11th, 2021 15:30
Neville said:
my guess is that this was written after the event .. when a period of reflection had taken place but when emotions were still kinda brittle ........ N
December 11th, 2021 15:30
Trace of Time
Neville said:
there is something very nice about these few words, almost zen like .. N
December 11th, 2021 15:26
Neville said:
there is something very nice about these few words, almost zen like .. N
December 11th, 2021 15:26
Nail without head
Neville said:
the dumb end must surely be the one at the other end to the pointy or sharp end ........................................... maybe :)
December 11th, 2021 15:23
Neville said:
the dumb end must surely be the one at the other end to the pointy or sharp end ........................................... maybe :)
December 11th, 2021 15:23
Song of Goodbye
Neville said:
Still on display and perfectly nailed I see.. N
November 20th, 2021 02:14
Neville said:
Still on display and perfectly nailed I see.. N
November 20th, 2021 02:14
Waiting Is End
Neville said:
its just my opinion, but you left me with no option, its just gotta be option two ........... Neville
November 17th, 2021 00:33
Neville said:
its just my opinion, but you left me with no option, its just gotta be option two ........... Neville
November 17th, 2021 00:33
Song of Goodbye
Neville said:
You just nailed autumn for me ... thanks my friend ..................... N
November 16th, 2021 03:54
Neville said:
You just nailed autumn for me ... thanks my friend ..................... N
November 16th, 2021 03:54
Song of Goodbye
orchidee said:
Good write Myself.
Aww, they wish I would sing a song of goodbye. I never do. I keep on singing/screeching! lol.
November 16th, 2021 02:39
orchidee said:
Good write Myself.
Aww, they wish I would sing a song of goodbye. I never do. I keep on singing/screeching! lol.
November 16th, 2021 02:39
Song of Goodbye
Goldfinch60 said:
The beauty and wonder of Autumn is now with us.
Andy
November 16th, 2021 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
The beauty and wonder of Autumn is now with us.
Andy
November 16th, 2021 01:48
Song of Goodbye
spilleronsheet said:
A two liners spoke a lot
Depiction of waving autumn
Winters kicking in
November 16th, 2021 01:28
spilleronsheet said:
A two liners spoke a lot
Depiction of waving autumn
Winters kicking in
November 16th, 2021 01:28
mix
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow yeah true and this is a fine allegorical muse hinting to sth elss perhaps abstractly. Kudos for the poem!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too
October 12th, 2021 23:46
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow yeah true and this is a fine allegorical muse hinting to sth elss perhaps abstractly. Kudos for the poem!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too
October 12th, 2021 23:46
May I
dusk arising said:
REminded me of the rewards of talking with people of many years life who have so much living under their belt.
September 11th, 2021 19:03
dusk arising said:
REminded me of the rewards of talking with people of many years life who have so much living under their belt.
September 11th, 2021 19:03
May I
Fay Slimm. said:
Simply riveting these few loaded words. Into my list of faves goes this clever couplet - thanks a load.
September 11th, 2021 13:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Simply riveting these few loaded words. Into my list of faves goes this clever couplet - thanks a load.
September 11th, 2021 13:01
May I
Neville said:
this is so lovely I wanna nick it and post it to all my doubters ............ :)
September 11th, 2021 12:25
Neville said:
this is so lovely I wanna nick it and post it to all my doubters ............ :)
September 11th, 2021 12:25
Perfectly stitched
Neville said:
I just popped back to see if I could beat it ............. and I just couldn\'t ................................ Neville ..
September 2nd, 2021 01:03
Neville said:
I just popped back to see if I could beat it ............. and I just couldn\'t ................................ Neville ..
September 2nd, 2021 01:03
Paint With Soul
Neville said:
make no mistake .. I am now a fan of Norton Wisdom .. but Norman made me laugh more :)
August 29th, 2021 02:33
Neville said:
make no mistake .. I am now a fan of Norton Wisdom .. but Norman made me laugh more :)
August 29th, 2021 02:33
Perfectly stitched
Quijote said:
Yet stitches help the wound to heal with less scaring in heart and mind.
August 28th, 2021 09:32
Quijote said:
Yet stitches help the wound to heal with less scaring in heart and mind.
August 28th, 2021 09:32
Perfectly stitched
Neville said:
Aww.. this is such a sad little nugget .. but enjoyed immensely ................... N
August 27th, 2021 16:00
Neville said:
Aww.. this is such a sad little nugget .. but enjoyed immensely ................... N
August 27th, 2021 16:00
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