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FredPeyer said:
....and a new one starts in the first smile thereafter!
Great poem, M&M. Short, but with a lot of emotion! Well penned!
September 1st, 2017 12:54
FredPeyer said:
....and a new one starts in the first smile thereafter!
Great poem, M&M. Short, but with a lot of emotion! Well penned!
September 1st, 2017 12:54
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orchidee said:
Super! Me of short words too - makes a change for me?! heehee.
September 1st, 2017 11:48
orchidee said:
Super! Me of short words too - makes a change for me?! heehee.
September 1st, 2017 11:48
Etheree Challenge not done
Goldfinch60 said:
It seems to be \'done\' to me. Good write.
September 1st, 2017 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
It seems to be \'done\' to me. Good write.
September 1st, 2017 00:50
Etheree Challenge not done
lasergraph said:
I can identify with these types of struggles. Great piece.
August 31st, 2017 14:35
lasergraph said:
I can identify with these types of struggles. Great piece.
August 31st, 2017 14:35
Etheree Challenge not done
FredPeyer said:
Etheree or etheroo
we all know what you can do!
August 31st, 2017 14:18
FredPeyer said:
Etheree or etheroo
we all know what you can do!
August 31st, 2017 14:18
Etheree Challenge not done
Michael Edwards said:
Great effort - perhaps \'work on\' could be \'writing\' but otherwise no worries - great attempt. By coincidence I have just completed one - might post it tomorrow.
August 31st, 2017 14:02
Michael Edwards said:
Great effort - perhaps \'work on\' could be \'writing\' but otherwise no worries - great attempt. By coincidence I have just completed one - might post it tomorrow.
August 31st, 2017 14:02
Etheree Challenge not done
Christina8 said:
I agree with Santita! Perfect reversed etheree poem! You did a really good job. I think that it\'s great that you had fun doing it. You said in authors notes you are still working on your piece. I cannot wait to read!
August 31st, 2017 13:45
Christina8 said:
I agree with Santita! Perfect reversed etheree poem! You did a really good job. I think that it\'s great that you had fun doing it. You said in authors notes you are still working on your piece. I cannot wait to read!
August 31st, 2017 13:45
Want to be with you
dusk arising said:
Lifes definately incomplete without that special someone. Nice write.
August 31st, 2017 03:54
dusk arising said:
Lifes definately incomplete without that special someone. Nice write.
August 31st, 2017 03:54
Want to be with you
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, we all have those people who we want to be ith all the time.
August 31st, 2017 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, we all have those people who we want to be ith all the time.
August 31st, 2017 01:39
Want to be with you
malubotelho said:
Thanks for this lovely romantic poem. Is it my impression or people here are being mellow yellow like me?
August 30th, 2017 21:00
malubotelho said:
Thanks for this lovely romantic poem. Is it my impression or people here are being mellow yellow like me?
August 30th, 2017 21:00
Want to be with you
FredPeyer said:
I love this one M&M. Looking simple, but yet so full of love. It is the simple things that make us happy, like holding hands, watching a movie together, helping each other in the kitchen, etc.
Very well penned!
August 30th, 2017 14:09
FredPeyer said:
I love this one M&M. Looking simple, but yet so full of love. It is the simple things that make us happy, like holding hands, watching a movie together, helping each other in the kitchen, etc.
Very well penned!
August 30th, 2017 14:09
Want to be with you
WL Schuett said:
Straight forward heartfelt, easy to believe, good poem
August 30th, 2017 12:56
WL Schuett said:
Straight forward heartfelt, easy to believe, good poem
August 30th, 2017 12:56
Hope-Re: Lino Cut of Goldfinch60
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you for this m and m. I am so glad that the artwork inspired you as well.
August 30th, 2017 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you for this m and m. I am so glad that the artwork inspired you as well.
August 30th, 2017 01:46
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malubotelho said:
This is very profound and after reading Gold poem I totally understand yours. You are a very sentimental connected person. I\'m impressed. Great writing
August 29th, 2017 15:38
malubotelho said:
This is very profound and after reading Gold poem I totally understand yours. You are a very sentimental connected person. I\'m impressed. Great writing
August 29th, 2017 15:38
Hope-Re: Lino Cut of Goldfinch60
Michael Edwards said:
And you sure did it justice - great m&m
August 29th, 2017 15:34
Michael Edwards said:
And you sure did it justice - great m&m
August 29th, 2017 15:34
Hope-Re: Lino Cut of Goldfinch60
FredPeyer said:
Good poem. Agree with Jane, the last line is very powerful.
August 29th, 2017 14:08
FredPeyer said:
Good poem. Agree with Jane, the last line is very powerful.
August 29th, 2017 14:08
Hope-Re: Lino Cut of Goldfinch60
WL Schuett said:
Good inspiration to write from, well done
August 29th, 2017 12:45
WL Schuett said:
Good inspiration to write from, well done
August 29th, 2017 12:45
Tango
dusk arising said:
Tango in the wind. Lovely. Lifes entire cycle in the passing of a leaf.
August 29th, 2017 01:23
dusk arising said:
Tango in the wind. Lovely. Lifes entire cycle in the passing of a leaf.
August 29th, 2017 01:23
Tango
malubotelho said:
It is a little gem. I would love to tango. Don\'t know how to tango but can samba. Lovely writing MM
August 28th, 2017 21:00
malubotelho said:
It is a little gem. I would love to tango. Don\'t know how to tango but can samba. Lovely writing MM
August 28th, 2017 21:00
Tango
Christina8 said:
You\'ve written a beautiful poem in so few words. Absolutely wonderful!
August 28th, 2017 18:32
Christina8 said:
You\'ve written a beautiful poem in so few words. Absolutely wonderful!
August 28th, 2017 18:32
Tango
Michael Edwards said:
Love this even though I can\'t tango. Now wind is another matter :) Super little gem m&m
August 28th, 2017 14:25
Michael Edwards said:
Love this even though I can\'t tango. Now wind is another matter :) Super little gem m&m
August 28th, 2017 14:25
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