Comments received on poems by myself and me
Stretch
Viv Wade said:
Short and concise, yet filled with so much meaning. Beautiful, and sad. Nice write!
September 3rd, 2017 23:58
Viv Wade said:
Short and concise, yet filled with so much meaning. Beautiful, and sad. Nice write!
September 3rd, 2017 23:58
Exit-etheree
malubotelho said:
Beautiful poem MM. You did a great job here. I was enjoying so much the form that almost did not bother me that it is sad.
September 3rd, 2017 22:42
malubotelho said:
Beautiful poem MM. You did a great job here. I was enjoying so much the form that almost did not bother me that it is sad.
September 3rd, 2017 22:42
Exit-etheree
WL Schuett said:
M&M always pushing yourself, very commendable....good poem
September 3rd, 2017 17:01
WL Schuett said:
M&M always pushing yourself, very commendable....good poem
September 3rd, 2017 17:01
Exit-etheree
sue.evans said:
Great etheree - I am really enjoying this format. Your poem really describes the struggle- lovely.
September 3rd, 2017 13:26
sue.evans said:
Great etheree - I am really enjoying this format. Your poem really describes the struggle- lovely.
September 3rd, 2017 13:26
Exit-etheree
Michael Edwards said:
Sad indeed but a brill write - congrats m&m
September 3rd, 2017 10:19
Michael Edwards said:
Sad indeed but a brill write - congrats m&m
September 3rd, 2017 10:19
Exit-etheree
myself and me said:
Thanks. O. Your poems serve as the food and cleaner for spirit. The more the better.
September 3rd, 2017 09:06
myself and me said:
Thanks. O. Your poems serve as the food and cleaner for spirit. The more the better.
September 3rd, 2017 09:06
Exit-etheree
orchidee said:
A fine write M. Would it do me good to be brief sometimes?! But I must sing, and mainly long songs/hymn-poems! lol.
September 3rd, 2017 08:38
orchidee said:
A fine write M. Would it do me good to be brief sometimes?! But I must sing, and mainly long songs/hymn-poems! lol.
September 3rd, 2017 08:38
Stretch
malubotelho said:
I like that. I would stretch the night to sleep more or to meditate on bed, or to just relax because I don\'t long for anything. So funny this came to me. No longing. Go to bed MM
September 2nd, 2017 20:31
malubotelho said:
I like that. I would stretch the night to sleep more or to meditate on bed, or to just relax because I don\'t long for anything. So funny this came to me. No longing. Go to bed MM
September 2nd, 2017 20:31
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malubotelho said:
Very nice short piece. Clever one. I always like when I can say important things with little words. You did it.
September 2nd, 2017 18:50
malubotelho said:
Very nice short piece. Clever one. I always like when I can say important things with little words. You did it.
September 2nd, 2017 18:50
Stretch
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful choice of words with so much meaning. I can just picture somebody lying in bed alone with the longing becoming unbearable....
September 2nd, 2017 16:00
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful choice of words with so much meaning. I can just picture somebody lying in bed alone with the longing becoming unbearable....
September 2nd, 2017 16:00
Stretch
dusk arising said:
nice short and meaningful. nothing wasted. Good concise write.
September 2nd, 2017 15:56
dusk arising said:
nice short and meaningful. nothing wasted. Good concise write.
September 2nd, 2017 15:56
Stretch
WL Schuett said:
Nice I wish I could say what I have to say in one line , well done
September 2nd, 2017 15:31
WL Schuett said:
Nice I wish I could say what I have to say in one line , well done
September 2nd, 2017 15:31
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FredPeyer said:
....and a new one starts in the first smile thereafter!
Great poem, M&M. Short, but with a lot of emotion! Well penned!
September 1st, 2017 12:54
FredPeyer said:
....and a new one starts in the first smile thereafter!
Great poem, M&M. Short, but with a lot of emotion! Well penned!
September 1st, 2017 12:54
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orchidee said:
Super! Me of short words too - makes a change for me?! heehee.
September 1st, 2017 11:48
orchidee said:
Super! Me of short words too - makes a change for me?! heehee.
September 1st, 2017 11:48
Etheree Challenge not done
Goldfinch60 said:
It seems to be \'done\' to me. Good write.
September 1st, 2017 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
It seems to be \'done\' to me. Good write.
September 1st, 2017 00:50
Etheree Challenge not done
Accidental Poet said:
aah yes, a poet\'s work, is it ever really done? ; )
August 31st, 2017 19:56
Accidental Poet said:
aah yes, a poet\'s work, is it ever really done? ; )
August 31st, 2017 19:56
Etheree Challenge not done
lasergraph said:
I can identify with these types of struggles. Great piece.
August 31st, 2017 14:35
lasergraph said:
I can identify with these types of struggles. Great piece.
August 31st, 2017 14:35
Etheree Challenge not done
FredPeyer said:
Etheree or etheroo
we all know what you can do!
August 31st, 2017 14:18
FredPeyer said:
Etheree or etheroo
we all know what you can do!
August 31st, 2017 14:18
Etheree Challenge not done
Michael Edwards said:
Great effort - perhaps \'work on\' could be \'writing\' but otherwise no worries - great attempt. By coincidence I have just completed one - might post it tomorrow.
August 31st, 2017 14:02
Michael Edwards said:
Great effort - perhaps \'work on\' could be \'writing\' but otherwise no worries - great attempt. By coincidence I have just completed one - might post it tomorrow.
August 31st, 2017 14:02
Etheree Challenge not done
Christina8 said:
I agree with Santita! Perfect reversed etheree poem! You did a really good job. I think that it\'s great that you had fun doing it. You said in authors notes you are still working on your piece. I cannot wait to read!
August 31st, 2017 13:45
Christina8 said:
I agree with Santita! Perfect reversed etheree poem! You did a really good job. I think that it\'s great that you had fun doing it. You said in authors notes you are still working on your piece. I cannot wait to read!
August 31st, 2017 13:45
Want to be with you
dusk arising said:
Lifes definately incomplete without that special someone. Nice write.
August 31st, 2017 03:54
dusk arising said:
Lifes definately incomplete without that special someone. Nice write.
August 31st, 2017 03:54
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