Comments received on poems by myself and me
After this moment
FredPeyer said:
M&M, this is so sad, but beautifully expressed. I like the way you structured it, especially the last three lines of each stanza.
November 2nd, 2017 14:39
FredPeyer said:
M&M, this is so sad, but beautifully expressed. I like the way you structured it, especially the last three lines of each stanza.
November 2nd, 2017 14:39
After this moment
Mugsdaddy said:
Very sad kinda leaves a hole in your chest.
Mugsdaddy
November 2nd, 2017 14:34
Mugsdaddy said:
Very sad kinda leaves a hole in your chest.
Mugsdaddy
November 2nd, 2017 14:34
I no longer love you
WL Schuett said:
I feel for you M&M , glad you are writing and moving on , a tough time I’m sure
October 31st, 2017 07:51
WL Schuett said:
I feel for you M&M , glad you are writing and moving on , a tough time I’m sure
October 31st, 2017 07:51
I no longer love you
FredPeyer said:
Really letting go is hard and you expressed that beautifully, M&M! I do like the repetitions, and the ending says it all: You cannot turn off love like you turn off the light.
October 30th, 2017 11:08
FredPeyer said:
Really letting go is hard and you expressed that beautifully, M&M! I do like the repetitions, and the ending says it all: You cannot turn off love like you turn off the light.
October 30th, 2017 11:08
I no longer love you
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the conflict of being in live can be painful until the right person is found.
October 30th, 2017 09:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the conflict of being in live can be painful until the right person is found.
October 30th, 2017 09:04
I no longer love you
Christina8 said:
Very good write M&M! I have felt this way in my younger days. Conflicted. It\'s so hard.Great job!
October 30th, 2017 08:06
Christina8 said:
Very good write M&M! I have felt this way in my younger days. Conflicted. It\'s so hard.Great job!
October 30th, 2017 08:06
You are gone
Goldfinch60 said:
Super emotive write, I do hope the kite is found and the string repaired.
October 28th, 2017 00:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Super emotive write, I do hope the kite is found and the string repaired.
October 28th, 2017 00:55
You are gone
Accidental Poet said:
A beautiful write so many can relate to m&m.
October 27th, 2017 22:07
Accidental Poet said:
A beautiful write so many can relate to m&m.
October 27th, 2017 22:07
You are gone
WL Schuett said:
Lovely ... be the spool or be the kite ....stand rooted to the ground safe and figure things out slowly as you wind the string back in or do you cut the string and follow the wind not knowing where you’ll land .... either way you will find yourself.... nice writing M&M
October 27th, 2017 13:44
WL Schuett said:
Lovely ... be the spool or be the kite ....stand rooted to the ground safe and figure things out slowly as you wind the string back in or do you cut the string and follow the wind not knowing where you’ll land .... either way you will find yourself.... nice writing M&M
October 27th, 2017 13:44
You are gone
orchidee said:
A sad but good write M. Meanwhile - Cooeeee I\'m still here. I hang around like a....bad smell?! lol.
October 27th, 2017 13:42
orchidee said:
A sad but good write M. Meanwhile - Cooeeee I\'m still here. I hang around like a....bad smell?! lol.
October 27th, 2017 13:42
You are gone
Fay Slimm. said:
You express that lonely feeling so well with the metaphor you used in this poignant piece.
October 27th, 2017 13:32
Fay Slimm. said:
You express that lonely feeling so well with the metaphor you used in this poignant piece.
October 27th, 2017 13:32
You are gone
lasergraph said:
I think we can all identify with that lonely empty feeling of someone who is no longer there.
October 27th, 2017 13:07
lasergraph said:
I think we can all identify with that lonely empty feeling of someone who is no longer there.
October 27th, 2017 13:07
You are gone
FredPeyer said:
M&M, you express that lonely feeling so well in just a few words. The kite metaphor is very well chosen. Holding the spool reminded me of the expression \'left holding the bag\'.
One place though you DO belong, is on MPS, we don\'t want to be holding your spool!
October 27th, 2017 12:58
FredPeyer said:
M&M, you express that lonely feeling so well in just a few words. The kite metaphor is very well chosen. Holding the spool reminded me of the expression \'left holding the bag\'.
One place though you DO belong, is on MPS, we don\'t want to be holding your spool!
October 27th, 2017 12:58
World without you
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful sadly emotive write. Inspite of the sadness a very good write.
October 27th, 2017 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful sadly emotive write. Inspite of the sadness a very good write.
October 27th, 2017 01:41
World without you
FredPeyer said:
M&M, just like all the others here on MPS I am with you and I do feel your pain. It probably doesn\'t help much, but remember, tomorrow is another day, with another sunrise, and maybe even a beautiful rainbow!
October 26th, 2017 19:37
FredPeyer said:
M&M, just like all the others here on MPS I am with you and I do feel your pain. It probably doesn\'t help much, but remember, tomorrow is another day, with another sunrise, and maybe even a beautiful rainbow!
October 26th, 2017 19:37
World without you
Christina8 said:
Oh this poem breaks my heart because of the last line but I know its your way of dealing with the pain. So just keep writing and healing! Well written!
October 26th, 2017 19:24
Christina8 said:
Oh this poem breaks my heart because of the last line but I know its your way of dealing with the pain. So just keep writing and healing! Well written!
October 26th, 2017 19:24
World without you
Simple-Man87 said:
A world without you is so dead.
That was very powerful. The one who this was about, should take note of your pain. Very well written.
October 26th, 2017 13:10
Simple-Man87 said:
A world without you is so dead.
That was very powerful. The one who this was about, should take note of your pain. Very well written.
October 26th, 2017 13:10
World without you
WL Schuett said:
Lonely , dark , sad ... hope you are finding your way ... writing helps ....
October 26th, 2017 12:37
WL Schuett said:
Lonely , dark , sad ... hope you are finding your way ... writing helps ....
October 26th, 2017 12:37
World without you
orchidee said:
I\'m sure you mean me here in this fine write M! (Delusions of grandeur Orchi. lol). But a world with me - With me as a friend, who needs enemies?! heehee.
October 26th, 2017 11:48
orchidee said:
I\'m sure you mean me here in this fine write M! (Delusions of grandeur Orchi. lol). But a world with me - With me as a friend, who needs enemies?! heehee.
October 26th, 2017 11:48
World without you
Michael Edwards said:
Strikes a sad note but such a good write.
October 26th, 2017 08:45
Michael Edwards said:
Strikes a sad note but such a good write.
October 26th, 2017 08:45
World without you
Fay Slimm. said:
A lament sad enough to touch the very core dear friend - -a last line which says it all - -- deep grief so tenderly written .
October 26th, 2017 08:43
Fay Slimm. said:
A lament sad enough to touch the very core dear friend - -a last line which says it all - -- deep grief so tenderly written .
October 26th, 2017 08:43
Waiting
Goldfinch60 said:
The \"waiting\" is over and you are back with us. Glad that you are back. May that waiting soon be over and you are together once more.
October 26th, 2017 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
The \"waiting\" is over and you are back with us. Glad that you are back. May that waiting soon be over and you are together once more.
October 26th, 2017 01:32
Waiting
Av said:
Sometimes the most effective amd touchinh poems are ones like this one...that come from the deepest and most sincere corners of the heart. A very emotive and hauting read.
October 25th, 2017 18:35
Av said:
Sometimes the most effective amd touchinh poems are ones like this one...that come from the deepest and most sincere corners of the heart. A very emotive and hauting read.
October 25th, 2017 18:35
Waiting
Accidental Poet said:
Sometimes the waiting is for answers to questions we don\'t know yet to ask. Been there many times myself. Hope your waiting time is short.
October 25th, 2017 18:30
Accidental Poet said:
Sometimes the waiting is for answers to questions we don\'t know yet to ask. Been there many times myself. Hope your waiting time is short.
October 25th, 2017 18:30
Waiting
Michael Edwards said:
You write some great work and this is up there with them - so good to see you posting .
October 25th, 2017 15:19
Michael Edwards said:
You write some great work and this is up there with them - so good to see you posting .
October 25th, 2017 15:19
Waiting
Christina8 said:
Good to see you back m&m. A wonderful write. Waiting for love. It will come. Have faith. Excellent!
October 25th, 2017 12:11
Christina8 said:
Good to see you back m&m. A wonderful write. Waiting for love. It will come. Have faith. Excellent!
October 25th, 2017 12:11
Waiting
Fay Slimm. said:
So good to see you back posting M&M - - a poignant feel to the read about waiting - hope the wait will be over soon.
October 25th, 2017 11:34
Fay Slimm. said:
So good to see you back posting M&M - - a poignant feel to the read about waiting - hope the wait will be over soon.
October 25th, 2017 11:34
Waiting
FredPeyer said:
It is so nice to see you back, M&M! Kind of missed that sailboat picture, and of course your poems too! :-)
I don\'t know if \'Waiting\' is written from personal experience or imagination, but we all seem to be waiting for someone or something at times throughout our lives. If it is personal for you, I do hope your waiting will be rewarded!
October 25th, 2017 11:15
FredPeyer said:
It is so nice to see you back, M&M! Kind of missed that sailboat picture, and of course your poems too! :-)
I don\'t know if \'Waiting\' is written from personal experience or imagination, but we all seem to be waiting for someone or something at times throughout our lives. If it is personal for you, I do hope your waiting will be rewarded!
October 25th, 2017 11:15
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