Comments received on poems by myself and me
You are gone
WL Schuett said:
Lovely ... be the spool or be the kite ....stand rooted to the ground safe and figure things out slowly as you wind the string back in or do you cut the string and follow the wind not knowing where you’ll land .... either way you will find yourself.... nice writing M&M
October 27th, 2017 13:44
WL Schuett said:
Lovely ... be the spool or be the kite ....stand rooted to the ground safe and figure things out slowly as you wind the string back in or do you cut the string and follow the wind not knowing where you’ll land .... either way you will find yourself.... nice writing M&M
October 27th, 2017 13:44
You are gone
orchidee said:
A sad but good write M. Meanwhile - Cooeeee I\'m still here. I hang around like a....bad smell?! lol.
October 27th, 2017 13:42
orchidee said:
A sad but good write M. Meanwhile - Cooeeee I\'m still here. I hang around like a....bad smell?! lol.
October 27th, 2017 13:42
You are gone
Fay Slimm. said:
You express that lonely feeling so well with the metaphor you used in this poignant piece.
October 27th, 2017 13:32
Fay Slimm. said:
You express that lonely feeling so well with the metaphor you used in this poignant piece.
October 27th, 2017 13:32
You are gone
lasergraph said:
I think we can all identify with that lonely empty feeling of someone who is no longer there.
October 27th, 2017 13:07
lasergraph said:
I think we can all identify with that lonely empty feeling of someone who is no longer there.
October 27th, 2017 13:07
You are gone
FredPeyer said:
M&M, you express that lonely feeling so well in just a few words. The kite metaphor is very well chosen. Holding the spool reminded me of the expression \'left holding the bag\'.
One place though you DO belong, is on MPS, we don\'t want to be holding your spool!
October 27th, 2017 12:58
FredPeyer said:
M&M, you express that lonely feeling so well in just a few words. The kite metaphor is very well chosen. Holding the spool reminded me of the expression \'left holding the bag\'.
One place though you DO belong, is on MPS, we don\'t want to be holding your spool!
October 27th, 2017 12:58
World without you
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful sadly emotive write. Inspite of the sadness a very good write.
October 27th, 2017 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful sadly emotive write. Inspite of the sadness a very good write.
October 27th, 2017 01:41
World without you
FredPeyer said:
M&M, just like all the others here on MPS I am with you and I do feel your pain. It probably doesn\'t help much, but remember, tomorrow is another day, with another sunrise, and maybe even a beautiful rainbow!
October 26th, 2017 19:37
FredPeyer said:
M&M, just like all the others here on MPS I am with you and I do feel your pain. It probably doesn\'t help much, but remember, tomorrow is another day, with another sunrise, and maybe even a beautiful rainbow!
October 26th, 2017 19:37
World without you
Christina8 said:
Oh this poem breaks my heart because of the last line but I know its your way of dealing with the pain. So just keep writing and healing! Well written!
October 26th, 2017 19:24
Christina8 said:
Oh this poem breaks my heart because of the last line but I know its your way of dealing with the pain. So just keep writing and healing! Well written!
October 26th, 2017 19:24
World without you
Simple-Man87 said:
A world without you is so dead.
That was very powerful. The one who this was about, should take note of your pain. Very well written.
October 26th, 2017 13:10
Simple-Man87 said:
A world without you is so dead.
That was very powerful. The one who this was about, should take note of your pain. Very well written.
October 26th, 2017 13:10
World without you
WL Schuett said:
Lonely , dark , sad ... hope you are finding your way ... writing helps ....
October 26th, 2017 12:37
WL Schuett said:
Lonely , dark , sad ... hope you are finding your way ... writing helps ....
October 26th, 2017 12:37
World without you
orchidee said:
I\'m sure you mean me here in this fine write M! (Delusions of grandeur Orchi. lol). But a world with me - With me as a friend, who needs enemies?! heehee.
October 26th, 2017 11:48
orchidee said:
I\'m sure you mean me here in this fine write M! (Delusions of grandeur Orchi. lol). But a world with me - With me as a friend, who needs enemies?! heehee.
October 26th, 2017 11:48
World without you
Michael Edwards said:
Strikes a sad note but such a good write.
October 26th, 2017 08:45
Michael Edwards said:
Strikes a sad note but such a good write.
October 26th, 2017 08:45
World without you
Fay Slimm. said:
A lament sad enough to touch the very core dear friend - -a last line which says it all - -- deep grief so tenderly written .
October 26th, 2017 08:43
Fay Slimm. said:
A lament sad enough to touch the very core dear friend - -a last line which says it all - -- deep grief so tenderly written .
October 26th, 2017 08:43
Waiting
Goldfinch60 said:
The \"waiting\" is over and you are back with us. Glad that you are back. May that waiting soon be over and you are together once more.
October 26th, 2017 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
The \"waiting\" is over and you are back with us. Glad that you are back. May that waiting soon be over and you are together once more.
October 26th, 2017 01:32
Waiting
Av said:
Sometimes the most effective amd touchinh poems are ones like this one...that come from the deepest and most sincere corners of the heart. A very emotive and hauting read.
October 25th, 2017 18:35
Av said:
Sometimes the most effective amd touchinh poems are ones like this one...that come from the deepest and most sincere corners of the heart. A very emotive and hauting read.
October 25th, 2017 18:35
Waiting
Michael Edwards said:
You write some great work and this is up there with them - so good to see you posting .
October 25th, 2017 15:19
Michael Edwards said:
You write some great work and this is up there with them - so good to see you posting .
October 25th, 2017 15:19
Waiting
Christina8 said:
Good to see you back m&m. A wonderful write. Waiting for love. It will come. Have faith. Excellent!
October 25th, 2017 12:11
Christina8 said:
Good to see you back m&m. A wonderful write. Waiting for love. It will come. Have faith. Excellent!
October 25th, 2017 12:11
Waiting
Fay Slimm. said:
So good to see you back posting M&M - - a poignant feel to the read about waiting - hope the wait will be over soon.
October 25th, 2017 11:34
Fay Slimm. said:
So good to see you back posting M&M - - a poignant feel to the read about waiting - hope the wait will be over soon.
October 25th, 2017 11:34
Waiting
FredPeyer said:
It is so nice to see you back, M&M! Kind of missed that sailboat picture, and of course your poems too! :-)
I don\'t know if \'Waiting\' is written from personal experience or imagination, but we all seem to be waiting for someone or something at times throughout our lives. If it is personal for you, I do hope your waiting will be rewarded!
October 25th, 2017 11:15
FredPeyer said:
It is so nice to see you back, M&M! Kind of missed that sailboat picture, and of course your poems too! :-)
I don\'t know if \'Waiting\' is written from personal experience or imagination, but we all seem to be waiting for someone or something at times throughout our lives. If it is personal for you, I do hope your waiting will be rewarded!
October 25th, 2017 11:15
Waiting
WL Schuett said:
I for one have missed you and have been “ Waiting “ ... glad to see you back writing and hope you have started to feel more vigorous... I like your new poem it is very hopeful, good writing
October 25th, 2017 10:38
WL Schuett said:
I for one have missed you and have been “ Waiting “ ... glad to see you back writing and hope you have started to feel more vigorous... I like your new poem it is very hopeful, good writing
October 25th, 2017 10:38
A day
WL Schuett said:
Very soft and inviting I\'d take this day anytime , well done
September 20th, 2017 20:25
WL Schuett said:
Very soft and inviting I\'d take this day anytime , well done
September 20th, 2017 20:25
A day
dusk arising said:
How does she feel about it? or would she rather bring someone else along?
September 20th, 2017 19:48
dusk arising said:
How does she feel about it? or would she rather bring someone else along?
September 20th, 2017 19:48
A day
Michael Edwards said:
You paint a super scene - all\'s well with the world.
September 20th, 2017 16:16
Michael Edwards said:
You paint a super scene - all\'s well with the world.
September 20th, 2017 16:16
A day
FredPeyer said:
What a nice poem, M&M! We all get so caught up in the daily grind, we tend to forget how nice it is to have a day just for the two of us. Like it a lot!
September 20th, 2017 15:32
FredPeyer said:
What a nice poem, M&M! We all get so caught up in the daily grind, we tend to forget how nice it is to have a day just for the two of us. Like it a lot!
September 20th, 2017 15:32
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