Comments received on poems by myself and me
Yellow card (soccer game)
dusk arising said:
This brings out the nippon in your grammar. Loved it!
August 28th, 2017 03:40
dusk arising said:
This brings out the nippon in your grammar. Loved it!
August 28th, 2017 03:40
Yellow card (soccer game)
Michael Edwards said:
Played when younger until my team got kicked out of the league for \'misdemeanors\' - but boy we did have fun !! love the write it brings back memories.
August 27th, 2017 23:41
Michael Edwards said:
Played when younger until my team got kicked out of the league for \'misdemeanors\' - but boy we did have fun !! love the write it brings back memories.
August 27th, 2017 23:41
Yellow card (soccer game)
WL Schuett said:
Made me smile , I like to watch also
August 27th, 2017 22:17
WL Schuett said:
Made me smile , I like to watch also
August 27th, 2017 22:17
Yellow card (soccer game)
malubotelho said:
Yes, cute. I\'ve been a lot to soccer games. My ex husband was a professional player in Brazil and after he stoped playing he had a soccer school for kids. My older son plays really good but never became professional. Even me played sometimes. Thanks for sharing this. I believe you like to play?
August 27th, 2017 17:43
malubotelho said:
Yes, cute. I\'ve been a lot to soccer games. My ex husband was a professional player in Brazil and after he stoped playing he had a soccer school for kids. My older son plays really good but never became professional. Even me played sometimes. Thanks for sharing this. I believe you like to play?
August 27th, 2017 17:43
Farewell -cinquain
dusk arising said:
OMG i just had deja vu with this. Nice bit of writing.
August 27th, 2017 07:53
dusk arising said:
OMG i just had deja vu with this. Nice bit of writing.
August 27th, 2017 07:53
Farewell -cinquain
Michael Edwards said:
so well thought out and written - love it and I am sure Santita will as well.
August 27th, 2017 00:25
Michael Edwards said:
so well thought out and written - love it and I am sure Santita will as well.
August 27th, 2017 00:25
Farewell -cinquain
FredPeyer said:
Farewells are always difficult, and you said it so well, M&M, from both sides.
August 26th, 2017 20:15
FredPeyer said:
Farewells are always difficult, and you said it so well, M&M, from both sides.
August 26th, 2017 20:15
Longing
dusk arising said:
Such romantic visions youve created here. What a wonderful idea.
August 26th, 2017 13:25
dusk arising said:
Such romantic visions youve created here. What a wonderful idea.
August 26th, 2017 13:25
Longing
Michael Edwards said:
Just perfect -
can\'t get more minimalist than this and I love it.
August 25th, 2017 10:41
Michael Edwards said:
Just perfect -
can\'t get more minimalist than this and I love it.
August 25th, 2017 10:41
Ring In The Sand
FredPeyer said:
If found objects could only talk!
I love your poem, M&M.
August 24th, 2017 18:17
FredPeyer said:
If found objects could only talk!
I love your poem, M&M.
August 24th, 2017 18:17
Ring In The Sand
malubotelho said:
Yes, Santita is right. What an incredible write. I enjoyed reading very much.
August 24th, 2017 13:29
malubotelho said:
Yes, Santita is right. What an incredible write. I enjoyed reading very much.
August 24th, 2017 13:29
Ring In The Sand
Christina8 said:
Beautiful poem! You captured a story well here. Enjoyed reading!
August 24th, 2017 11:09
Christina8 said:
Beautiful poem! You captured a story well here. Enjoyed reading!
August 24th, 2017 11:09
Ring In The Sand
WL Schuett said:
Beautifully expressed to Wonder what became of the love that gave the ring to begin with
August 24th, 2017 09:49
WL Schuett said:
Beautifully expressed to Wonder what became of the love that gave the ring to begin with
August 24th, 2017 09:49
Ring for Santita
Goldfinch60 said:
Very clever write. May the keys hung on it open the right locks.
August 24th, 2017 00:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Very clever write. May the keys hung on it open the right locks.
August 24th, 2017 00:42
A Summer Afternoon
malubotelho said:
Such a lovely write. Smart one. Enjoyed reading a lot.
August 23rd, 2017 23:50
malubotelho said:
Such a lovely write. Smart one. Enjoyed reading a lot.
August 23rd, 2017 23:50
Diamond for Santita
malubotelho said:
Like very much the ring too. And this diamond is awesome.
August 23rd, 2017 23:44
malubotelho said:
Like very much the ring too. And this diamond is awesome.
August 23rd, 2017 23:44
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