Comments received on poems by myself and me
Want to be with you
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, we all have those people who we want to be ith all the time.
August 31st, 2017 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, we all have those people who we want to be ith all the time.
August 31st, 2017 01:39
Want to be with you
malubotelho said:
Thanks for this lovely romantic poem. Is it my impression or people here are being mellow yellow like me?
August 30th, 2017 21:00
malubotelho said:
Thanks for this lovely romantic poem. Is it my impression or people here are being mellow yellow like me?
August 30th, 2017 21:00
Want to be with you
FredPeyer said:
I love this one M&M. Looking simple, but yet so full of love. It is the simple things that make us happy, like holding hands, watching a movie together, helping each other in the kitchen, etc.
Very well penned!
August 30th, 2017 14:09
FredPeyer said:
I love this one M&M. Looking simple, but yet so full of love. It is the simple things that make us happy, like holding hands, watching a movie together, helping each other in the kitchen, etc.
Very well penned!
August 30th, 2017 14:09
Want to be with you
WL Schuett said:
Straight forward heartfelt, easy to believe, good poem
August 30th, 2017 12:56
WL Schuett said:
Straight forward heartfelt, easy to believe, good poem
August 30th, 2017 12:56
Hope-Re: Lino Cut of Goldfinch60
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you for this m and m. I am so glad that the artwork inspired you as well.
August 30th, 2017 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you for this m and m. I am so glad that the artwork inspired you as well.
August 30th, 2017 01:46
Hope-Re: Lino Cut of Goldfinch60
malubotelho said:
This is very profound and after reading Gold poem I totally understand yours. You are a very sentimental connected person. I\'m impressed. Great writing
August 29th, 2017 15:38
malubotelho said:
This is very profound and after reading Gold poem I totally understand yours. You are a very sentimental connected person. I\'m impressed. Great writing
August 29th, 2017 15:38
Hope-Re: Lino Cut of Goldfinch60
Michael Edwards said:
And you sure did it justice - great m&m
August 29th, 2017 15:34
Michael Edwards said:
And you sure did it justice - great m&m
August 29th, 2017 15:34
Hope-Re: Lino Cut of Goldfinch60
FredPeyer said:
Good poem. Agree with Jane, the last line is very powerful.
August 29th, 2017 14:08
FredPeyer said:
Good poem. Agree with Jane, the last line is very powerful.
August 29th, 2017 14:08
Hope-Re: Lino Cut of Goldfinch60
WL Schuett said:
Good inspiration to write from, well done
August 29th, 2017 12:45
WL Schuett said:
Good inspiration to write from, well done
August 29th, 2017 12:45
Tango
dusk arising said:
Tango in the wind. Lovely. Lifes entire cycle in the passing of a leaf.
August 29th, 2017 01:23
dusk arising said:
Tango in the wind. Lovely. Lifes entire cycle in the passing of a leaf.
August 29th, 2017 01:23
Tango
malubotelho said:
It is a little gem. I would love to tango. Don\'t know how to tango but can samba. Lovely writing MM
August 28th, 2017 21:00
malubotelho said:
It is a little gem. I would love to tango. Don\'t know how to tango but can samba. Lovely writing MM
August 28th, 2017 21:00
Tango
Christina8 said:
You\'ve written a beautiful poem in so few words. Absolutely wonderful!
August 28th, 2017 18:32
Christina8 said:
You\'ve written a beautiful poem in so few words. Absolutely wonderful!
August 28th, 2017 18:32
Tango
Michael Edwards said:
Love this even though I can\'t tango. Now wind is another matter :) Super little gem m&m
August 28th, 2017 14:25
Michael Edwards said:
Love this even though I can\'t tango. Now wind is another matter :) Super little gem m&m
August 28th, 2017 14:25
Yellow card (soccer game)
dusk arising said:
This brings out the nippon in your grammar. Loved it!
August 28th, 2017 03:40
dusk arising said:
This brings out the nippon in your grammar. Loved it!
August 28th, 2017 03:40
Yellow card (soccer game)
Michael Edwards said:
Played when younger until my team got kicked out of the league for \'misdemeanors\' - but boy we did have fun !! love the write it brings back memories.
August 27th, 2017 23:41
Michael Edwards said:
Played when younger until my team got kicked out of the league for \'misdemeanors\' - but boy we did have fun !! love the write it brings back memories.
August 27th, 2017 23:41
Yellow card (soccer game)
WL Schuett said:
Made me smile , I like to watch also
August 27th, 2017 22:17
WL Schuett said:
Made me smile , I like to watch also
August 27th, 2017 22:17
Yellow card (soccer game)
malubotelho said:
Yes, cute. I\'ve been a lot to soccer games. My ex husband was a professional player in Brazil and after he stoped playing he had a soccer school for kids. My older son plays really good but never became professional. Even me played sometimes. Thanks for sharing this. I believe you like to play?
August 27th, 2017 17:43
malubotelho said:
Yes, cute. I\'ve been a lot to soccer games. My ex husband was a professional player in Brazil and after he stoped playing he had a soccer school for kids. My older son plays really good but never became professional. Even me played sometimes. Thanks for sharing this. I believe you like to play?
August 27th, 2017 17:43
Farewell -cinquain
dusk arising said:
OMG i just had deja vu with this. Nice bit of writing.
August 27th, 2017 07:53
dusk arising said:
OMG i just had deja vu with this. Nice bit of writing.
August 27th, 2017 07:53
Farewell -cinquain
Michael Edwards said:
so well thought out and written - love it and I am sure Santita will as well.
August 27th, 2017 00:25
Michael Edwards said:
so well thought out and written - love it and I am sure Santita will as well.
August 27th, 2017 00:25
Farewell -cinquain
FredPeyer said:
Farewells are always difficult, and you said it so well, M&M, from both sides.
August 26th, 2017 20:15
FredPeyer said:
Farewells are always difficult, and you said it so well, M&M, from both sides.
August 26th, 2017 20:15
Farewell -cinquain
Accidental Poet said:
Both are very heartfelt. Excellent writing. ; )
August 26th, 2017 19:37
Accidental Poet said:
Both are very heartfelt. Excellent writing. ; )
August 26th, 2017 19:37
Longing
dusk arising said:
Such romantic visions youve created here. What a wonderful idea.
August 26th, 2017 13:25
dusk arising said:
Such romantic visions youve created here. What a wonderful idea.
August 26th, 2017 13:25
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