Comments received on poems by myself and me
Tonight, I feel lonely
Christina8 said:
A very good poem, M&M! Though it\'s quite sad, know you have friends at MPS! Very well written poem.
December 7th, 2017 11:17
Christina8 said:
A very good poem, M&M! Though it\'s quite sad, know you have friends at MPS! Very well written poem.
December 7th, 2017 11:17
Tonight, I feel lonely
Michael Edwards said:
A great work - sad and poignant.
December 7th, 2017 11:07
Michael Edwards said:
A great work - sad and poignant.
December 7th, 2017 11:07
Tonight, I feel lonely
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing M & M ~ but your loneliness makes me sad. You know you are loved by all your MPS Friends so I am sending you Love ~ Hugs ~ Kisses ~ because I know they will make you feel A BIT less lonely ~ Yours as always BR IAN XOXOX
December 7th, 2017 10:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing M & M ~ but your loneliness makes me sad. You know you are loved by all your MPS Friends so I am sending you Love ~ Hugs ~ Kisses ~ because I know they will make you feel A BIT less lonely ~ Yours as always BR IAN XOXOX
December 7th, 2017 10:11
Dew
Christina8 said:
Short but I like it! Love the picture that goes with it too!
November 14th, 2017 12:56
Christina8 said:
Short but I like it! Love the picture that goes with it too!
November 14th, 2017 12:56
Lost
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write. Always remember that the light is there but sometimes it gets obscured but it is still there and will be there for you.
November 8th, 2017 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write. Always remember that the light is there but sometimes it gets obscured but it is still there and will be there for you.
November 8th, 2017 01:49
Lost
WL Schuett said:
M&M wonderful writing ,your light will shine on you without a doubt
November 7th, 2017 17:30
WL Schuett said:
M&M wonderful writing ,your light will shine on you without a doubt
November 7th, 2017 17:30
Lost
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks M & M ~ Problem is with all the \"Urban Change & Decay\" we return to our BIRTHPLACE and don\'t even recognise it and nobody recognises us any more ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
November 7th, 2017 15:35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks M & M ~ Problem is with all the \"Urban Change & Decay\" we return to our BIRTHPLACE and don\'t even recognise it and nobody recognises us any more ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
November 7th, 2017 15:35
Lost
Michael Edwards said:
Probably one of the best writes I\'ve seen for some time - it stands out from the others and so worthy of a fave spot !!
November 7th, 2017 15:06
Michael Edwards said:
Probably one of the best writes I\'ve seen for some time - it stands out from the others and so worthy of a fave spot !!
November 7th, 2017 15:06
Lost
FredPeyer said:
m&m, there is a light-house out there, waiting for you to show you the way! And before you know it, your poems will be upbeat again.
November 7th, 2017 13:49
FredPeyer said:
m&m, there is a light-house out there, waiting for you to show you the way! And before you know it, your poems will be upbeat again.
November 7th, 2017 13:49
Lost
Christina8 said:
So well written M&M! I know someday you will find your way....Hang in there! Christina
November 7th, 2017 13:18
Christina8 said:
So well written M&M! I know someday you will find your way....Hang in there! Christina
November 7th, 2017 13:18
After this moment
WL Schuett said:
A fine poem with a lot of emotions mostly sad but there is something hopeful in there also
November 2nd, 2017 19:32
WL Schuett said:
A fine poem with a lot of emotions mostly sad but there is something hopeful in there also
November 2nd, 2017 19:32
After this moment
Christina8 said:
Such a sad but well written write M&M! Very nicely done!
November 2nd, 2017 16:56
Christina8 said:
Such a sad but well written write M&M! Very nicely done!
November 2nd, 2017 16:56
After this moment
Laura🌻 said:
A beautifully write about
a sad subject! Relatable
to my mom and dad.
Her world did crush as
did ours. Thank you for
the write!
November 2nd, 2017 15:40
Laura🌻 said:
A beautifully write about
a sad subject! Relatable
to my mom and dad.
Her world did crush as
did ours. Thank you for
the write!
November 2nd, 2017 15:40
After this moment
Fay Slimm. said:
A very poetic way with sorrowful words my friend. A compelling read.
November 2nd, 2017 15:17
Fay Slimm. said:
A very poetic way with sorrowful words my friend. A compelling read.
November 2nd, 2017 15:17
After this moment
Michael Edwards said:
Great piece of structured writing - really enjoyed this one.
November 2nd, 2017 15:15
Michael Edwards said:
Great piece of structured writing - really enjoyed this one.
November 2nd, 2017 15:15
After this moment
FredPeyer said:
M&M, this is so sad, but beautifully expressed. I like the way you structured it, especially the last three lines of each stanza.
November 2nd, 2017 14:39
FredPeyer said:
M&M, this is so sad, but beautifully expressed. I like the way you structured it, especially the last three lines of each stanza.
November 2nd, 2017 14:39
After this moment
Mugsdaddy said:
Very sad kinda leaves a hole in your chest.
Mugsdaddy
November 2nd, 2017 14:34
Mugsdaddy said:
Very sad kinda leaves a hole in your chest.
Mugsdaddy
November 2nd, 2017 14:34
I no longer love you
WL Schuett said:
I feel for you M&M , glad you are writing and moving on , a tough time I’m sure
October 31st, 2017 07:51
WL Schuett said:
I feel for you M&M , glad you are writing and moving on , a tough time I’m sure
October 31st, 2017 07:51
I no longer love you
FredPeyer said:
Really letting go is hard and you expressed that beautifully, M&M! I do like the repetitions, and the ending says it all: You cannot turn off love like you turn off the light.
October 30th, 2017 11:08
FredPeyer said:
Really letting go is hard and you expressed that beautifully, M&M! I do like the repetitions, and the ending says it all: You cannot turn off love like you turn off the light.
October 30th, 2017 11:08
I no longer love you
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the conflict of being in live can be painful until the right person is found.
October 30th, 2017 09:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the conflict of being in live can be painful until the right person is found.
October 30th, 2017 09:04
I no longer love you
Christina8 said:
Very good write M&M! I have felt this way in my younger days. Conflicted. It\'s so hard.Great job!
October 30th, 2017 08:06
Christina8 said:
Very good write M&M! I have felt this way in my younger days. Conflicted. It\'s so hard.Great job!
October 30th, 2017 08:06
You are gone
Goldfinch60 said:
Super emotive write, I do hope the kite is found and the string repaired.
October 28th, 2017 00:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Super emotive write, I do hope the kite is found and the string repaired.
October 28th, 2017 00:55
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