Comments received on poems by myself and me
The shape of loneliness
Accidental Poet said:
Loneliness wears many hats and shows itself in many ways. And it touches everyone sooner or later in one way or another. Better days are coming m&m. Great write.
February 6th, 2018 19:31
Accidental Poet said:
Loneliness wears many hats and shows itself in many ways. And it touches everyone sooner or later in one way or another. Better days are coming m&m. Great write.
February 6th, 2018 19:31
The shape of loneliness
Christina8 said:
This was a great poem, M&M! I hope you find the love that\'s right for you soon, but as for this poem, it was awesome!
February 6th, 2018 19:16
Christina8 said:
This was a great poem, M&M! I hope you find the love that\'s right for you soon, but as for this poem, it was awesome!
February 6th, 2018 19:16
The shape of loneliness
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
\"Me and my Shadow ~ walking down the avenue
Me and my Shadow ~ All alone and feelin\' blue
And when it\'s twelve o\'clock ~ we climb the stair
We never knock \'cos nobodies there .......
Thanks for sharing M & M ~ why such a melancholy POEM ? You write such sad poems ~ it made me sad for you ! Not cold or hot ~ the temperature of loneliness UNDETECTABLE ~ The color of loneliness ~ UNDEFINABLE ~ The shape of loneliness ~ UNDRAWABLE ~ OMG M & M you really must be lonely ~ no state for a lovely Lady ~ like YOU ! I\'m thinkin\' of you ~ hope that helps ~ Yours as ever ~ Your MPS Friend BRIAN (UK)
February 6th, 2018 16:44
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
\"Me and my Shadow ~ walking down the avenue
Me and my Shadow ~ All alone and feelin\' blue
And when it\'s twelve o\'clock ~ we climb the stair
We never knock \'cos nobodies there .......
Thanks for sharing M & M ~ why such a melancholy POEM ? You write such sad poems ~ it made me sad for you ! Not cold or hot ~ the temperature of loneliness UNDETECTABLE ~ The color of loneliness ~ UNDEFINABLE ~ The shape of loneliness ~ UNDRAWABLE ~ OMG M & M you really must be lonely ~ no state for a lovely Lady ~ like YOU ! I\'m thinkin\' of you ~ hope that helps ~ Yours as ever ~ Your MPS Friend BRIAN (UK)
February 6th, 2018 16:44
Tonight, I feel lonely
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write, may that loneliness soon be abated.
December 8th, 2017 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write, may that loneliness soon be abated.
December 8th, 2017 01:25
Tonight, I feel lonely
FredPeyer said:
Before you can build new, you have to destroy the old. And that is a sad and lonely business. Well written, m&m! While the song is sad tonight, tomorrow morning listen to the birds and do the same: Start the day with a wonderful song!
December 7th, 2017 20:18
FredPeyer said:
Before you can build new, you have to destroy the old. And that is a sad and lonely business. Well written, m&m! While the song is sad tonight, tomorrow morning listen to the birds and do the same: Start the day with a wonderful song!
December 7th, 2017 20:18
Tonight, I feel lonely
WL Schuett said:
Tonight the song is sad .... that has so much feeling , this poem just drips sadness... tugged my heart ...beautifully done M&M
December 7th, 2017 15:27
WL Schuett said:
Tonight the song is sad .... that has so much feeling , this poem just drips sadness... tugged my heart ...beautifully done M&M
December 7th, 2017 15:27
Tonight, I feel lonely
Fay Slimm. said:
Such pathos in these well written lines M&M - - loneliness described in a heart-touching piece of fine poetry..
December 7th, 2017 13:23
Fay Slimm. said:
Such pathos in these well written lines M&M - - loneliness described in a heart-touching piece of fine poetry..
December 7th, 2017 13:23
Tonight, I feel lonely
Christina8 said:
A very good poem, M&M! Though it\'s quite sad, know you have friends at MPS! Very well written poem.
December 7th, 2017 11:17
Christina8 said:
A very good poem, M&M! Though it\'s quite sad, know you have friends at MPS! Very well written poem.
December 7th, 2017 11:17
Tonight, I feel lonely
Michael Edwards said:
A great work - sad and poignant.
December 7th, 2017 11:07
Michael Edwards said:
A great work - sad and poignant.
December 7th, 2017 11:07
Tonight, I feel lonely
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing M & M ~ but your loneliness makes me sad. You know you are loved by all your MPS Friends so I am sending you Love ~ Hugs ~ Kisses ~ because I know they will make you feel A BIT less lonely ~ Yours as always BR IAN XOXOX
December 7th, 2017 10:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing M & M ~ but your loneliness makes me sad. You know you are loved by all your MPS Friends so I am sending you Love ~ Hugs ~ Kisses ~ because I know they will make you feel A BIT less lonely ~ Yours as always BR IAN XOXOX
December 7th, 2017 10:11
Dew
Christina8 said:
Short but I like it! Love the picture that goes with it too!
November 14th, 2017 12:56
Christina8 said:
Short but I like it! Love the picture that goes with it too!
November 14th, 2017 12:56
Lost
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write. Always remember that the light is there but sometimes it gets obscured but it is still there and will be there for you.
November 8th, 2017 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write. Always remember that the light is there but sometimes it gets obscured but it is still there and will be there for you.
November 8th, 2017 01:49
Lost
Accidental Poet said:
It\'s interesting how what we once recognized can look different when we look back at it from a different point of view m&m. But rest assured, you\'ll pull through and be stronger for it. Excellent write.
November 7th, 2017 19:57
Accidental Poet said:
It\'s interesting how what we once recognized can look different when we look back at it from a different point of view m&m. But rest assured, you\'ll pull through and be stronger for it. Excellent write.
November 7th, 2017 19:57
Lost
WL Schuett said:
M&M wonderful writing ,your light will shine on you without a doubt
November 7th, 2017 17:30
WL Schuett said:
M&M wonderful writing ,your light will shine on you without a doubt
November 7th, 2017 17:30
Lost
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks M & M ~ Problem is with all the \"Urban Change & Decay\" we return to our BIRTHPLACE and don\'t even recognise it and nobody recognises us any more ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
November 7th, 2017 15:35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks M & M ~ Problem is with all the \"Urban Change & Decay\" we return to our BIRTHPLACE and don\'t even recognise it and nobody recognises us any more ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
November 7th, 2017 15:35
Lost
Michael Edwards said:
Probably one of the best writes I\'ve seen for some time - it stands out from the others and so worthy of a fave spot !!
November 7th, 2017 15:06
Michael Edwards said:
Probably one of the best writes I\'ve seen for some time - it stands out from the others and so worthy of a fave spot !!
November 7th, 2017 15:06
Lost
FredPeyer said:
m&m, there is a light-house out there, waiting for you to show you the way! And before you know it, your poems will be upbeat again.
November 7th, 2017 13:49
FredPeyer said:
m&m, there is a light-house out there, waiting for you to show you the way! And before you know it, your poems will be upbeat again.
November 7th, 2017 13:49
Lost
Christina8 said:
So well written M&M! I know someday you will find your way....Hang in there! Christina
November 7th, 2017 13:18
Christina8 said:
So well written M&M! I know someday you will find your way....Hang in there! Christina
November 7th, 2017 13:18
After this moment
WL Schuett said:
A fine poem with a lot of emotions mostly sad but there is something hopeful in there also
November 2nd, 2017 19:32
WL Schuett said:
A fine poem with a lot of emotions mostly sad but there is something hopeful in there also
November 2nd, 2017 19:32
After this moment
Accidental Poet said:
So very expressive of your emotions. Well written m&m.
November 2nd, 2017 19:13
Accidental Poet said:
So very expressive of your emotions. Well written m&m.
November 2nd, 2017 19:13
After this moment
Christina8 said:
Such a sad but well written write M&M! Very nicely done!
November 2nd, 2017 16:56
Christina8 said:
Such a sad but well written write M&M! Very nicely done!
November 2nd, 2017 16:56
After this moment
Laura🌻 said:
A beautifully write about
a sad subject! Relatable
to my mom and dad.
Her world did crush as
did ours. Thank you for
the write!
November 2nd, 2017 15:40
Laura🌻 said:
A beautifully write about
a sad subject! Relatable
to my mom and dad.
Her world did crush as
did ours. Thank you for
the write!
November 2nd, 2017 15:40
After this moment
Fay Slimm. said:
A very poetic way with sorrowful words my friend. A compelling read.
November 2nd, 2017 15:17
Fay Slimm. said:
A very poetic way with sorrowful words my friend. A compelling read.
November 2nd, 2017 15:17
After this moment
Michael Edwards said:
Great piece of structured writing - really enjoyed this one.
November 2nd, 2017 15:15
Michael Edwards said:
Great piece of structured writing - really enjoyed this one.
November 2nd, 2017 15:15
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