Comments received on poems by queer-with-a-pen
a time to play
Bella.26 said:
This is a very good poem and I enjoyed it very much so.
May 5th, 2023 22:01
Bella.26 said:
This is a very good poem and I enjoyed it very much so.
May 5th, 2023 22:01
rage
James Michael said:
Driven to tears by that song. Carry on my friend!
Time for another pint!
May 5th, 2023 19:59
James Michael said:
Driven to tears by that song. Carry on my friend!
Time for another pint!
May 5th, 2023 19:59
rage
Emily Bradshaw said:
This piece shows your rage as well as your pride and I hope you hold onto that pride forever. This is beautifully written and as a member of the LGBTQ community myself I hope everyone will continue to fight for you as will as the rest of our trans brothers, sisters, and siblings. I hope your fire never dims:)
April 22nd, 2023 17:31
Emily Bradshaw said:
This piece shows your rage as well as your pride and I hope you hold onto that pride forever. This is beautifully written and as a member of the LGBTQ community myself I hope everyone will continue to fight for you as will as the rest of our trans brothers, sisters, and siblings. I hope your fire never dims:)
April 22nd, 2023 17:31
for my maiden fair
James Michael said:
Heart pounding reassurance in the most beautiful of all things. Enjoy every morsel of this poem continuously!
April 17th, 2023 16:32
James Michael said:
Heart pounding reassurance in the most beautiful of all things. Enjoy every morsel of this poem continuously!
April 17th, 2023 16:32
rage
L. B. Mek said:
more power to you! dear Poet kin
stay true to yourself
and eventually those genuine people
by your side
will witness your indomitable worth!
stay strong, walk proud and shine bright
April 17th, 2023 03:45
L. B. Mek said:
more power to you! dear Poet kin
stay true to yourself
and eventually those genuine people
by your side
will witness your indomitable worth!
stay strong, walk proud and shine bright
April 17th, 2023 03:45
for my maiden fair
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(love your flow and pacing, dear Poet)
April 17th, 2023 03:40
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(love your flow and pacing, dear Poet)
April 17th, 2023 03:40
rage
Rocky Lagou said:
Literally, this poem is a wake-up call to all those who oppress trans people. You\'re voice will never be silenced, continue to write these marvelous poems! Embrace your true identity, and know that there will always be those who will embrace it with you as well. You are loved
April 6th, 2023 08:22
Rocky Lagou said:
Literally, this poem is a wake-up call to all those who oppress trans people. You\'re voice will never be silenced, continue to write these marvelous poems! Embrace your true identity, and know that there will always be those who will embrace it with you as well. You are loved
April 6th, 2023 08:22
two spoons, please
James Michael said:
Reaching a new exquisite level of your craft, I see. Your poem gave me comfort in the hope for what matters!
March 23rd, 2023 21:42
James Michael said:
Reaching a new exquisite level of your craft, I see. Your poem gave me comfort in the hope for what matters!
March 23rd, 2023 21:42
two spoons, please
jewelwrites55 said:
Beautifully written, thank you for sharing such an intimate and touching piece
March 16th, 2023 19:55
jewelwrites55 said:
Beautifully written, thank you for sharing such an intimate and touching piece
March 16th, 2023 19:55
metaphor in dusty boots
Goddess of the Mist said:
Beautiful! I can feel and taste the stew!
March 4th, 2023 02:45
Goddess of the Mist said:
Beautiful! I can feel and taste the stew!
March 4th, 2023 02:45
metaphor in dusty boots
Lauraš» said:
Dear Boaz,
A sensitive and expressive poem.
Very well written!
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
February 25th, 2023 20:25
Lauraš» said:
Dear Boaz,
A sensitive and expressive poem.
Very well written!
Thank you for sharing.
Lauraš»
February 25th, 2023 20:25
why so lonesome, cowboy?
jarcher54 said:
This piece is lovely and tender and fiercely moving... your details are spot on... so real! This cowboy reminded me of me...Thank you. PS
February 8th, 2023 20:45
jarcher54 said:
This piece is lovely and tender and fiercely moving... your details are spot on... so real! This cowboy reminded me of me...Thank you. PS
February 8th, 2023 20:45
why so lonesome, cowboy?
James Michael said:
Not really in the mindset for anything other than simplicity. Winter stagnation has set in.
A fine write for someone with clarity, Iām certain.
February 8th, 2023 19:27
James Michael said:
Not really in the mindset for anything other than simplicity. Winter stagnation has set in.
A fine write for someone with clarity, Iām certain.
February 8th, 2023 19:27
grief in my bones
Jane Frye said:
ā¤ļø I lost my best friend in a car accident when we were 16. I\'ve learned to live with it, but I never got over it. I was very moved by your words.
January 12th, 2023 05:07
Jane Frye said:
ā¤ļø I lost my best friend in a car accident when we were 16. I\'ve learned to live with it, but I never got over it. I was very moved by your words.
January 12th, 2023 05:07
in the wilds
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'and while these hands
of mine are not steady
enough for daisy chains,
iād like to think that youād
let me tuck one behind
your ear, anyway\'
January 6th, 2023 06:44
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'and while these hands
of mine are not steady
enough for daisy chains,
iād like to think that youād
let me tuck one behind
your ear, anyway\'
January 6th, 2023 06:44
for you
L. B. Mek said:
\'a sky choked with storm clouds,
like the way your name stuck
in my throat\'
what a treat, to be greeted by your brilliant
poetic talent
so early in the year, thank you!
and Happy New Year
dear cherished Poet
January 6th, 2023 06:42
L. B. Mek said:
\'a sky choked with storm clouds,
like the way your name stuck
in my throat\'
what a treat, to be greeted by your brilliant
poetic talent
so early in the year, thank you!
and Happy New Year
dear cherished Poet
January 6th, 2023 06:42
in the wilds
James Michael said:
Poetry is pouring out your pen these days, my friend! Yet another beautifully written love poem!
December 29th, 2022 12:00
James Michael said:
Poetry is pouring out your pen these days, my friend! Yet another beautifully written love poem!
December 29th, 2022 12:00
a matter of \'just\'
Goddess of the Mist said:
Hahaha! And if you are in love, then you are surely slightly insane!
Really nice job!
December 22nd, 2022 22:00
Goddess of the Mist said:
Hahaha! And if you are in love, then you are surely slightly insane!
Really nice job!
December 22nd, 2022 22:00
this body/my body
Dead!CLATTER said:
This poem really spoke to me, as someone who has been absolutely pummeled by dysphoria and internalized transphobia and transphobia from others. It\'s frustrating. I hope you have a fantastic day/night (along with anyone else who reads this)
December 21st, 2022 23:51
Dead!CLATTER said:
This poem really spoke to me, as someone who has been absolutely pummeled by dysphoria and internalized transphobia and transphobia from others. It\'s frustrating. I hope you have a fantastic day/night (along with anyone else who reads this)
December 21st, 2022 23:51
a matter of \'just\'
James Michael said:
Beautifully written with your extraordinary style. The fourth stanza really strikes a cord. āeven with loveā from a yearning heart. A soothing reminder of what really matters.
A few pints with my love at the pub, humor me.
Take care, and be well!
December 14th, 2022 20:17
James Michael said:
Beautifully written with your extraordinary style. The fourth stanza really strikes a cord. āeven with loveā from a yearning heart. A soothing reminder of what really matters.
A few pints with my love at the pub, humor me.
Take care, and be well!
December 14th, 2022 20:17
holding pattern
James Michael said:
Another cracker of a love poem, as the Brits might say. Youāre on quite a roll. May Christmas treat you well my friend!
December 10th, 2022 18:52
James Michael said:
Another cracker of a love poem, as the Brits might say. Youāre on quite a roll. May Christmas treat you well my friend!
December 10th, 2022 18:52
holding pattern
jarcher54 said:
Your first two lines are truly inspired! What a felicitous way to say that thing we feel when we feel weak and foolish.
December 4th, 2022 02:41
jarcher54 said:
Your first two lines are truly inspired! What a felicitous way to say that thing we feel when we feel weak and foolish.
December 4th, 2022 02:41
so what if i do?
James Michael said:
One of your best. The heart is where you project your feelings soā¦soā¦ very well.
December 2nd, 2022 20:55
James Michael said:
One of your best. The heart is where you project your feelings soā¦soā¦ very well.
December 2nd, 2022 20:55
just the same
James Michael said:
Keep that light of love burning! Always a pleasure to read your writing.
December 2nd, 2022 20:48
James Michael said:
Keep that light of love burning! Always a pleasure to read your writing.
December 2nd, 2022 20:48
so what if i do?
Rocky Lagou said:
As a homosexual, this poem infatuates by my nightstand daily. Preach.
November 29th, 2022 10:21
Rocky Lagou said:
As a homosexual, this poem infatuates by my nightstand daily. Preach.
November 29th, 2022 10:21
a metaphor for love and other things
James Michael said:
Beautifully and slightly starkly written, metaphorically so much like love, it seems. A patient lover is the best kind!
November 10th, 2022 18:03
James Michael said:
Beautifully and slightly starkly written, metaphorically so much like love, it seems. A patient lover is the best kind!
November 10th, 2022 18:03
love comes a callin\'
James Michael said:
Outstanding! We all must keep love alive!
October 7th, 2022 16:45
James Michael said:
Outstanding! We all must keep love alive!
October 7th, 2022 16:45
love comes a callin\'
Goddess of the Mist said:
Love it! It gave me a little shiver - that\'s how I know it\'s good šš
September 24th, 2022 20:47
Goddess of the Mist said:
Love it! It gave me a little shiver - that\'s how I know it\'s good šš
September 24th, 2022 20:47
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