Comments received on poems by queer-with-a-pen



u&i
Seek said:

How well put QWAP! Snoring turns from a nuisance to sweet music when sleeping with the beloved. This is reminiscent of my own romantic poem (August 2019) called \"Asleep) on a similar theme. I invite you to take a look and comment. Amazing read!

January 8th, 2020 22:34

u&i
LAWLESS said:

I’ve been with my wife for 32 years, and I believe being able to sleep well together is a key ingredient to a long term relationship. I do enjoy her snoring too.

I love your love poems!

January 3rd, 2020 10:29

homecoming
LAWLESS said:

An awakening or self-realization could describe this one. You are one of the few poets who can put into words your own personal experiences with raw emotions expressed incredibly well.

December 23rd, 2019 10:00

longing
myself and me said:

Fully understand the feeling. like the mirage, you could never reach and touch. Beautifully expressed.

December 16th, 2019 18:20

longing
LAWLESS said:

The imagery you convey is incredible, I felt as if I was there in your thoughts. Remarkable poetry.

December 16th, 2019 14:23

call me maybe
LAWLESS said:

Absolutely wonderful poetry! Sorry it took me a while to comment. I’ve been busy with a lot of complexities.

December 2nd, 2019 00:35

after hours
yellowrose said:

The personification of sorrow ... Being like a monster . Very good ! Sometimes pain can make us lash out and hurt others and sometimes that can feel out of our control ... \" these claws only know how to rend and tear \" pain can affect how we sometimes are with other people ... Sometimes .



November 24th, 2019 01:52

almosts
yellowrose said:

I\'m sorry . It\'s so sad . But you expressed yourself well here

November 24th, 2019 01:39

call me maybe
yellowrose said:

I really like this . I like how you compare her to the call of the sea , and your fall onto the concrete hurts ... Just like wanting her hurts you . I can sense the seperation between the call of the sea ( this girl ) and you as if there is a pull between both of you but there is a distance there ... A distance which simply hurts

November 24th, 2019 01:32

almosts
LAWLESS said:

Nick is living for the future now; he has an art studio in our old office. We all need to find our own direction, he’s getting there. There’s always light behind his eyes.

Thanks again for being you.

November 16th, 2019 20:34

almosts
LAWLESS said:

A genuinely sad, heartfelt write. Suicide has deep effects on so many people that are left in its aftermath.

November 16th, 2019 20:24

borrowed
LAWLESS said:

A great and honest love poem. Your style of writing is always extraordinary.

I’ve been taking a break from this site due to a difficult time with my son. I borrowed the form that you use for one of my poems, I hope that you don’t mind. I never ask you to read my crap, but this time I’m asking for your help. The poem is “IOU”, I wrote it quickly from my emotions. I would appreciate any suggestions you have in editing it. My son is going through an extremely dark time.

October 25th, 2019 15:13

is it, though?
Jamie said:

“so much it left a mark” love that

October 17th, 2019 12:59

love love love
LAWLESS said:

love love love this

September 20th, 2019 20:43

ballad of a foolish man
LAWLESS said:

So many great lines. It’s a realistic love poem expressing hope so well.

I hope that vodka didn’t make you hurl!

September 10th, 2019 09:36

after hours
LAWLESS said:

I wish I could give this one an eternity of stars. The sorry you have felt and seemingly come to terms with, is so genuine and real. Your poetry always astounds me. You are a true talent.

September 5th, 2019 19:56

oh, father (or: what i would say at my father\'s funeral)
LAWLESS said:

Painfully written. As a father and grandfather, I take your words to heart. Thank you for your raw emotions.

Have you tried Natty Daddy, it’s an excellent shitty beer!

August 18th, 2019 23:18

oh, father (or: what i would say at my father\'s funeral)
dusk arising said:

These feelings are out and good for you for saying it BLUNT cos its so hurtful for you. He damaged you.

But you are not beyond recovery. The very fact that you are poetic shows you are evacuating the damage from your soul. It will take time and you should be gentle with the process.

MPS is a very theraputic place where goodwill exists in bucket loads.

Publishing what you write when drunk really gets it off your chest. I hope your head feels ok - hangover wise.

August 12th, 2019 00:27

lover boy
dusk arising said:

When a love is special poetry is in the air. When a poet finds that love, then poetry fills the air and powers the hand to write.
A lovely love poem today.

August 5th, 2019 12:57

old wounds
Christina8 said:

This is a heartwrenching write but very well done! I hope you have found the peace you so richly deserve.---Christina

July 28th, 2019 12:03

to: you
Neville said:

Well writ and a real delight to read.....

Neville

July 10th, 2019 03:05

a love letter to my body pt.1 & pt.2
LAWLESS said:

Your letters are very important for you to keep. I know you will look back at them and be proud.

June 27th, 2019 22:37

secrets
Suresh said:

As the old saying goes \" you wear your heart on your sleeves\", but you know what, it\'s the cuffs that truly show the wear.

June 22nd, 2019 18:36

ballad of a selfish man
LAWLESS said:

Bittersweet and honest. The things you yearn for are beautiful. I always enjoy love poems that leave lust out; it’s overrated. Tenderness is best.

Your poetry is always outstanding, and I hope you realize that.


June 7th, 2019 09:53

this body/my body
LAWLESS said:

Vividly written.

Finding peace with your body does make it feel like home. It is still just a body, what is within is the real you (cliche).

I’m glad you are accepting your outward appearance. Being who you want to be is invigorating.

May 29th, 2019 21:34

this body/my body
Goddess of the Mist said:

Beautiful! Very honest, and you did a wonderful job of expressing something that is hard to say.

May 22nd, 2019 20:58

this body/my body
dusk arising said:

Great finale there. Your words made me think of your mind and its struggle with your body while i was making a comparison. You see some people who ARE their bodies - the architypical \'dumb blonde\' - who are apparently of little mind.

May 22nd, 2019 01:57

alone together
LAWLESS said:

I wasn’t able to read this one properly earlier, well..., I’m drunk now; I love it! We all should take time to be all right with who we are.

May 19th, 2019 23:42

who are you (to me)?
LAWLESS said:

Also, a great song!

May 9th, 2019 11:26

who are you (to me)?
LAWLESS said:

This one brought tears to my eyes. I hope it has helped you to write it.

Live for the future; leave the past behind. It’s very difficult; I’m trying really hard to do the same. A five ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ poem!

May 9th, 2019 11:25

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